[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thanks for another great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
So hot! Fanning myself over here!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was one hot chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
"Someone who, if they disobeyed me, I could punish in any way I saw fit. But most of all, I wanted someone who would writhe and scream out when I fucked them, someone who would beg for me to put my cock in their mouth and would let me fuck them everywhere and anywhere I pleased. Was that really so wrong?"
So not wrong Edward!!! Go for it!!
"It was just me and her, tangled in dirty sheets, completely sated, happy and naked.Now who the fuck would want to give up something like that?"
Hell no! No sane person would give that up! ;) Love your Fic!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start!
I've read this before but lost it when i was in the middle of it!
So glad i found it tonight, i've looked for a long time!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, loved the mirror scene.... :-)
Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you for this story, it's your best so far. I devoured it, can't wait for your new one to be completed.
Date: 08 Oct 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 32
really good very hot.....
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 32
What an awesome story! I usually don't read stuf on twcs because it is difficult to read on my phone, but I am really glad I found this one!
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 32
absolutely loved this story! would love to read more of these characters, maybe outtakes or futuretakes. great writing!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 31
i love them! they complete each other!
charlies wife is too sweet! how she opened up is endearing and tells bella, it truly doesnt matter what you did in your past!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 28
that was beautiful! i love how he did it and the little notes as it went! perfect!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
i really enjoyed this story. my favorite part was probably edward's proposal. that was such a great way to ask a woman to share the rest of her life with you. i'll miss papi and bellezza.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good story. Leila continue reading.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 32
what a great ending
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 27
i frraking love them and their sexually deviant ways!
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 26
im sooo glad i found your story again!
i missed papi! im glad that they came to the agreement of misunderstandings and neglect!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love it. I noticed this is completed. Hope you continue writing. You have now been put on my radar as favorite arthur :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've just found this story and I have to say it's effin hot. Lol, it sounds as though Bella's good at her job and the Senator enjoyed himself, bwahahaha!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
I had to review. Your detailed descriptions are too good :) luv luv this story but more so your writing.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 26
you did a great job!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fun sweet start.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 32
I can't believe it's over..I really love this story and that was an amazing ending for this two..thank you so much.. I can't wait to read the outtakes ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 32
I'll miss this story. Write something new soon.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 32
Loved this story so much & will be so sad to not have any more updates! I look forward to any & all outtakes you decide to write:)
Date: 25 Aug 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
Truly beautiful.
Thank-you for writing and sharing your work
Date: 25 Aug 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 32
Oh how I will miss these two!!
Date: 25 Aug 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 32
So good. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 32
What a wonderful end to a fantastic story..I have enjoyed reading every chapter...
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 32
Great story! Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 32
*sniff* soo sad to see this end.. I loved it.. every step of the way!! GREAT JOB!!!
Date: 25 Aug 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 32
im sad to see this story to end. i loved it but look forward to anything else u write:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 32
OMG ITS OVER ITS ACTUALLY OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOD I LOVED THIS STORY SINCE I FIRST READ IT AND OMG TO SEE IT COMPLETE AND OVER MAKES ME WANT TO CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Aug 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 32
Loved this story so much. thank you. looking forward to the outtakes
Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 32
I loved this story!! It was really good. I love that they were able to find each other. And build a relationship on that love!! Its really a great story.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 32
Beautiful conclusion for Papi and Bellezza!
Look forward to any out-takes you wish to grant us.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 32
Hate to see this end. But very grateful for their HEA. Beautiful story. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 32
So sad this is over great ending
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you for sharing your awesome story :)
Date: 25 Aug 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 32
Awww cant believe its finished we need a sequel pleaseeeeeeee loved this story xx
Date: 25 Aug 2012 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 32
Oh how I will miss this story I have loved every chapter. xx
Date: 25 Aug 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 32
Beautiful,beautiful,beautiful ending.. Awesome job!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 32
I'll miss this story. I look forward to any out takes you may write in the future.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 32
OH WOW...SO amazing! I really loved it! This was the perfect ending for them! I am so happy for them. I think some outtakes should include their honeymoon, the birth of Tony or the girls (or maybe even both), their first time after the birth of Tony, maybe one where Edward wonders what breastmilk tastes like? Just curious. Let me see...any other ideas? How about when Bella found out she was pregnant? I think that is enough, for now :D
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 31
Hey,
how sweet...what a wonderful end although I'm also sad that it's nearly over now...
Date: 20 Aug 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 31
always so sad to see a good story end, but it has to end somewhere... at least still have an epilogue to read ;) thank you for sharing this great story .
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 27
hot from start to finish!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 26
well they both needed that! and i think eddie is going shopping for rings soon....
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
oh they both likedit! always better when both agree...
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 24
wow these two always have so much fun!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
aww so sweet but with a kick! thinking of kids..... big step
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
she's gonna meet her dad! love how eddie was all over protective and hard ass with charlie.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
she has a real dad, totallymessed up!
glad to see eddie work her through her issues when she couldn't do it herself.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 20
that was intence. the joy and love and refuge found in eachother...
Date: 18 Aug 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
uhoh time for the shit to hit the fan....
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
cute to see them go from ed and bella to little girl and papi.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
worry is a horrible thing. but ithink she learned her lesson
Date: 17 Aug 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
finally got the i love yous taken care of!
Date: 17 Aug 2012 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
you never have to ask.... awwwwwww
Date: 17 Aug 2012 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
bathtub sex is messy but worth the clean up....
Date: 17 Aug 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
well at least she finally admitted it to herself at least. was he awake....?
Date: 17 Aug 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
aww emmie you can play with me....
ed is falling wonder how bella is doing?
Date: 17 Aug 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
wow hate to see you go but love to welcome you home!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
first time apart is always hard. kinda cute how ed offered up a surprise to take her mind off of it.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
liking tanya right now. and eddie! oh my that was sexy.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
learning a little more about eachother. and a little show of bella's neediness for him.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
poor bella but papi is gonna be there to make it all better....
Date: 16 Aug 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
poor eddie! stupid carl being a dick, but tanya made it all better by sending bella.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
superman jammies watching loonie toons!?! picture is too cute!
but she was a bad girl and got a spank. now she has to work her way back to being a good girl...
Date: 16 Aug 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow in the limo watching traffic drive by?!? read this on the bus home and i'm pretty sure the guy next to me was reading over my shoulder.... lol
Date: 16 Aug 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
good thing i'm a smoker i needed one after this...
Date: 16 Aug 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
so hot i remember thinking this might not be the story to read at work and on the bus... but hot damn can't stop now!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
ok so here's the deal my stupid phone won't let me review! so i read the first 4 chapters at work today (wow) and now i have to drop you a line
so hot!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 31
Waaaaaaaahhh I can't believe it's over (except for the epilogue)!!!!! Gonna go have a small cry in a corner now *pouts*
Date: 14 Aug 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 31
Way to go! Enjoyed it all the way.
As for suggestions for outtakes...I would have thought they would have run into an ex-customer of Bella's?
Date: 14 Aug 2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 31
I really enjoyed this story!!! I've always liked reading the "Daddy" themed fan fiction that's floating around out there and yours was really, really good! Keep up the writing *sending fluffy, fat plot-bunnies your way*! I can't wait to read what you come up with next!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
I really like your Sue. So neat that you gave her and Bella similar occupations to bond over the changed their men brought to their lives.
I'm with you, sad to see this story wrap up.
I will enjoy any fun it you wish to share in the form of out-takes.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 31
Wonderful, just wonderful! Thank you - Cheri
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 30
And I am going to miss reading this wonderful story. Still, tho, looking forward to the next chapter!! Thank you - Cheri
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 31
You are amazing! I really loved the last little bit, amazing! I cannot wait to see how it all ends in the epilogue! I think I will wait to see what is in the epilogue before I suggest an outtake, just to make sure it isn't already covered in the epilogue.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the epilogue! :)
Date: 12 Aug 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 31
have really enjoyed reading this. Unconventional relationship with a happier ever after. Lemons were hot,hot,hot. Thanks for sharing it.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 31
*cries* I'm sad that it's ending!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 31
So sad to see this go. Loved the characters, the plot, and the writing. You have done such a wonderful job with story and are truly a treasure.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 31
i'm going to miss them!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great story! I loved it. If it is not in the epilogue I would like to read if she ever got pregnant. Either when they first find out and their reactions or a couple of years later when the baby is born. How they adjust to it. Again thanks for writing a great story. Really enjoyed reading it.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 31
Will be sorry to see this story end also. Maybe you could do an outtake of Chapter 17 when Bella comes home late and Edward is waiting for her and it's her first punishment. Maybe an outtake in Edwards point of view waiting for Bella to get home and planning the scene out for her punishment. Also in his pov when he's giving her the punishment and his thoughts and feelings during the entire scene...
Author's Response:
That is a very interesting idea!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 31
What an awesome journey sad to see it ending!
Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 31
aww that was a cute ending! i like how everyting it's in place :)
thanks for the wonderfull fic!
till soon
Malu D.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 31
great job with the loose ends. cant wait for the epi
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it sad it's coming to an end! Hope the epi is in EPOV
Date: 12 Aug 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
Awww cant believe its finally the end sad 2 see this story go xxx
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 31
I have loved this story, from begining to end! I am truly sorry to see it has ended, but you sure as hell put a smile in my lips mentioning those outtakes still coming.........very excited about that!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING THIS STORY. Really, I love all of your stories.
P.S., and yeah, Nocturnal Emissions' stories are pretty HOT too!!! :-)
Date: 10 Aug 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
wait. what? END?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 29
Worth the wait!
Such an all encompassing love!
Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 30
great chapter, enjoyed the charles/edward interaction.