[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
One day at a time, a good place to start. This will be really hard on Bella, starting from scratch when only a few days ago she thought she'd be going back to her 18 year old life in Phoenix.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
Yep, you made your bed now lie in it, lol. Renee was so quick to tell Edward Bella would be going home with him and she'd send her things, I couldn't stop laughing even though Bella feels she's been sold for two sheep, hahahaha!! Oh God.......breathe.
They have a steep learning curve in front of them. I'm now imagining Edward introducing his wife and telling everyone she's in high school. Bwahahahaha!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
Wow! I love that ring. I want one, lol. Awww, they're both sad at the thought of not being together, I hope one of them speaks up soon. Will Renee give them a mouthful? Will she be of the opinion, you made your bed now lie in it?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
'Let's get married.' 'Okay.' Bwahahahahaha!! Oh my God, Renee's going to have a shit fit, lol.
I love these two, they're so much fun. I love that dress it's so cute.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
Oooooh a date. I love their banter and when Bella remarked that he'd be able to do all sorts of sordid things to her, well lets just say I was mopping the keyboard after spitting my drink on it, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Hmmm, interesting. I'm looking forward to reading the rest and catching up.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Another amazing chapter. This is a great story and I'll keep reading it.
I'm sos sorry for your loss, it takes time but everything gets better. Promise.
Good luck with your original!
Date: 30 Jul 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Love the chapter, sorry to hear abt ur grandma
Date: 30 Jul 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
write more!!
Date: 30 Jul 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
I love that they are being cheezy and romantic... but they really do need to get to know each other a little better. As for Jasper interrupting his day off... out of the question... he should not allow it.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
:)
Date: 30 Jul 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
So sorry for your loss. Family should always be first. Prayers to you & your family during this difficult time.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Aww loved the chapter!!! Their so cute together!!! :D can't wait for the next update!! :D
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Thanks good chapter
Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Loved it x
Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
SWEET GREAT CHAPTER. IT'S FUN HOW YOU CAN WIN A MAN WITH COOKIES
Date: 30 Jul 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Good luck to you on the Maserpiece.
Sorry about your grandmother. I know loosing close family is difficult. Just keep being their for your mother too she will need it. Even though she had a long time with her mother you are never really ready to loose them
Date: 30 Jul 2012 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Im sorry to hear about ur grandmother i know how hard that is, i lost mine on Mothers day last year, take ur time doing what u need to do for u, we all understand and those that read ur storys that dont they can kiss ur ass u know what i mean? on a better note congradulations on the contest and another great chapter and i cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Please tack all the time you need. We will be here waiting Impatiantly but still waiting. Loving your story so far.
Charlie
Date: 30 Jul 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
I'M SO SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS. TIME HEALS ALL PAIN AND REMEMBERING TO LIVE WILL MAKE THE TIME GO FASTER. UPDATE SOON WE'LL BE WAITING
Date: 30 Jul 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Thanks for the update. so sorry about your grandmother, my condolences. I love the way you write the sexy times. they come in all sizes, shapes, and moods. Pun intended. so glad we got to meet Emmett. Good luck in the contest! see you next time!
Date: 30 Jul 2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Thank you! Welcome back!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
these boys do like messing with Edward, don't they...lol. I'm so sorry about you're grandmother, please accept my condolences.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
I am very sorry to hear about your Grandmother, please accept my condolences to you and your family.
On a lighter note, great chapter! The part with Emmett had me in stitches!
Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Oh! Good luck with the contest!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
so sorry for your loss.... Best Wishes in the contest!!!!
Date: 30 Jul 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
AWESOME chapter
Sorry to hear about your Grandmother I lost mine on Mother's Day of this year
just take one day at time
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Wow I'm really sorry to hear about your grandmother and congradulations on Making of a Materpiece contest hope you do well. God I was sooooooo happy to see that this story had been updated I literally started to sqeal i was sooo happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really hope it gets updated soon cause god this story is soooo frickin good!!!!!!!!!!!!! and not to mention super as fuck hot!!!!!!!!! hope you update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Jul 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
This is a fantastic chapter! I love the introduction of Emmett! lol :)
Date: 30 Jul 2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
I'm so so sorry for your loss. Welcome back..
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
You gotta love Emmett and Jasper. They sure like getting to Edward especially through Bella. LOL
Date: 30 Jul 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
I am so sorry to hear about your grandmother, I too would be devasted. I will of course take anything you can give as far as updates for this incredible story.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
So sorry about your grandma. It is so tough losing someone you love.
Fabulous chapter! I've missed these two. Loved the intro of Em. Too funny!
Love Kismet! Hope it does well!
Date: 29 Jul 2012 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
i can't wait for the next chapter. update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Jul 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage
I'M GLAD SHE ISN'T PREGNANT. LET'S SEE HOW SCHOOL GOES FOR BELLA
Date: 28 Jul 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
POOTR ERIC LOOSING HIS BEST FRIEND AND APARENTLY HIS BOYFRIEND
Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
I HOPE CARLISLE GIVES BELLA A CHA G CHANCE. DAMN CELL PHONE MAKES ME MISPELLED WORDS
Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
NICE TO KNOW SOME BACKGROUND, I LOVE THAT EMMET HAS HIS STUNT COMPANY.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
I'M GLAD BELLA IS MAKING AN EFFORT. EDWARD IS REALLY SWEET
Date: 28 Jul 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
BELLA NEEDS TO RELAX, AND TAKE ONE DAYAT THE TIME
Date: 28 Jul 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
HOW COULD BELLA BE SO COLD? AT LEAST EDWSRD WAS SAD
Date: 28 Jul 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
WHICH WILL BE WORST, THE HANGOVER OR FINDING THEY ARE MARRIED?
Date: 28 Jul 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
LOVE THIS CHAPTER CAN'T WAIT TO READ THEIR DATE
Date: 28 Jul 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
BVC HE WAS A LITTLE STIFF AND CRYPTIC, BELLA MADE MOST OF THE CONVERSATION. AS FOR RENEE THE SAME HAPPENED TO ME, MY MOM LOVES TO GAMBLE, ME NOT SO MUCH
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
where are you???
Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
Great chapter, that was some steamy lovin'. I think Edward has earned the title of McLovin'.
Great picture of them.
Im glad she has a confidant in Charlotte.
Cant wait for the next update!
Date: 25 Jul 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion
Wow, that was some hot lemonade.
Oh no, I'm almost caught up. I'm really enjoying reading your writing. Good writing, thanks for writing.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
Married on a drunk splurge slightly reckless but no birth control seems beyond reckless, IMO. But maybe they're more ready than they realize.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
Awe, the pleasures of matrimony:-)
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
Love that pix of Alice, she is so beautiful.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
Virgin no more;-D). I thought it was very well done.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
Wow, their going to do it. Haha
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Great story! Please, Update soon!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
Please Please Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
So good!! Can't wait for more!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion
Well, I knew he'd flip...I need a cigarette now...
Date: 17 Jul 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 14 - My First Day
I think Edward's gonna flip when he gets a load of her in that getup!!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage
God, I want that car! Good choice.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
I wanna move in!!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
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Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
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Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
Very sweet. Makes me wanna hop a plane!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
I love this story!!!! also wanted to say how much I love the pics added with the story, I think it makes for a better story with visuals as you read. Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!
Pam
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
i wonder how long till the press finds out?
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion
whew *fans self* very hot!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 14 - My First Day
very sneaky Esme!! you better hide from Bella!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage
beautiful car! how's she gonna be treated in school??
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
is she??? Carlisle will really have a field day with that one....
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
how long will Carlisle stay away for???
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
damn, Carlisle, that was harsh, wasn't it???
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
dinner with Carlisle....*gulp*
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
guess they won't be needing that 2nd bedroom after all;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
wow, beautiful house. i'm sure Carlisle will be over tomorrow to interrogate
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
ok, so now it's decided that they are giving it a go, so she's gotta drop the negativity....
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
Renee is a trip...lol i hope they do give it an honest try :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
jeez that's gorgeous! why aren't they discussing this more????
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
love the dress! omg, how drunk are they????
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
he's so sweet! it'll be hard to end the night....
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
good beginning, he must be kicking himself since she's 18
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
Oh god... this is going to kill me...
Mr. Cullen... why, you're a kinky bastard. And I love it!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
SO HOW LONG UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER I REALLY WANT TO READ MORE OF ( ME AND MR. CULLEN )
Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion
WOW I GUESS WHEN YOUR 18 AND HAVING SEX LIKE THAT YOU CAN TAKE IT PUT AT 67 I THINK IT WOULD KILL ME. BUT WHAT A WAY TO GO. LOL
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 14 - My First Day
WELL CARLISLE TRYED TO MAKE BELLA LOOK BAD ON HER FIRST DAY AND HE WAS THE ONE EATTING SHIT NOT HER GOOD FOR BELLA.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage
AW NO BABY HOW SAD
Date: 07 Jul 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
WELL I KIND OF WANT HER TO HAVE A BABY AND SO DOES EDWARD.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
I DIDN'T LIKE THE WAY CARLISLE WAS TO BELLA HE WAS A REAL ASS
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
I THINK EDWARD SHOULD BE EXPLANING THING MORE TO BELLA WITH HER NOT HAVING TO ASK SMALL AND BIG THINGS IMPORTANT THINGS LIKE EX'S ALSO THEY SHOULD TALK ABOUT CHILDREN IF THEY WANT THEM AND IS BELLA ON THE PILL OR SHOT BECAUSE I DIDN'T READ ANYTHING ABOUT EDWARD USEING A CONDOM.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL HER FIRST TIME HE MADE SURE SHE HAD A BIG O BEFOREHE TOOK HER I GUESS HE KNEW SHE WOULDN'T HER FIRST TIME WITH HIM INSIDE HER. SHE IS HIS NOW AND SOME HOW I KNOW THAT MEANS A LOT TO HIM KNOWING SHE WAS UNTOUCHED HE HAD HER FIRST. I DO LOVE THIS STORY I KNOW I DON'T REVIEW MUCH AND I'M SORRY I WILL TRY TO DO BETTER.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
IT GOOD SO FAR
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
DAMN THIS STORY IS SOOOOOOOOOO FRICKIN HOT TOTALLY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOD UPDATE SOON WANT MORE SOOOO BAD AND NEED IT LIKE A DRUG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
Hot cant wait till the anal edwards funny lol
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
I hope she gets a real wedding ring instead of just a engagement ring i cant wait toread more
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
I love this story. Very different.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Very beautiful house. Love the fact that Renee was ok with the marriage. What will Charlie think? Im guessing not so favorable.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
I think I'm going to need a little recovery time myself! Way to go Mr. Cullen!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
i found your story and read all posted chapters straight through. i'm really enjoying it and can't wait for updates.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
This is so good. I'm hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
Whoa buddy that was super hot. More soon please!!!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
As always a fabulous chapter !!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for more! Love this story!
-Amanda*