Date: 05 Jan 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
awww they are too cute together. Love Eric and Phil giving E the "talks". So happy they are talking openly about things. Cant wait to see whomever is helping Maggie get sacked too.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
yes thank god she decided to take him back!!!!!!!!!!! im so happy!!!!!!!!!!!! so when will the next update be??? cause the smexiness is about to be started and of course maggie needs to get her ass kicked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Jan 2013 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
renee is certifiable.
Date: 03 Jan 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
LOL...NICEEEE
Date: 24 Dec 2012 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Whew! So let's get on with getting rid of Maggie...
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Loved it... Read it all in one day... Could not stop reading it...
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Well thank God for that, I don't think I could've stood much more of them both acting emo all over the place, lol. I'm so glad they talked and that Bella's not just throwing her marriage away, they do need time to get to know each other and hopefully this time over Christmas will help them with that. Edward needs to keep his promises though. I can't wait to find out what they're going to do about Maggie and what Sam's come up with as well.
Jane x
Date: 17 Dec 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Awesome chapter. this story gets better Every time I read it. Thank you for writing!
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Love it can't wait for more.
Date: 17 Dec 2012 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
He really needs to grovel and appologize about telling her she wasn't allowed to come see him at work. I don't know why but that one sticks in my craw above all the others. He gave her an open invitation and then acted like she was a burden. If I were her, I'd never come to visit him at work again.
Date: 16 Dec 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
"So, there went my first V lemon. I never thought I would write a story with a virgin..."
You did it well! And more importantly, to me anyway, realistically. It always annoys me when Bella loses her v-card to Edward and it only hurts for a fraction of a second and then they have wild, perfect, orgasmic sex. Also, I think you are the first author I've read who actually knows where the hymen is actually located. Most seem to think it's actually up in the vagina. lol
I think it was a perfect experience. Sweet, tender and real. (Not to mention hot. I don't think I'll ever get tired of the idea of Edward growling 'Mine!')
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2012 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Good talk
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Well he’s certainly a “multiply personality” type in this story.
One week he’s cold and impersonal treating her like an employee on their one their third warning letter then he’s hyper howling and crying, begging and breaking down.
But I supposed he was, and still could be, an actor.
Luv
XOXO
Date: 14 Dec 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Edward did his part, but Bella did not take responsibility for her part of the problem. She is not innocent. She should also give it more than a month since he has to rearrange his business hierachy, figure out his security breach, and shutdown production of a movie. This is a lot to do in a month expecially during the holiday season. This is just the work related list. Edward has a list of what he wants to do with and for Bella. I would like to know what she is willing to do for Edward to make his life better and easier. She needs to make some attitude changes. She is acting like a spoiled teenager. If things don't go my way, I am out of here. Your feeling don't matter. It is my way or no way. I am always right. Adults don't know what they are talking about. This is just a few of the teenage attitudes she needs to change and grow up if she wants to live in the grown up world.
Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Nice chapter. Edward made a lot of promises, what is Bella going to do to keep this marriage, make it work?
Date: 14 Dec 2012 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
;-)
Date: 14 Dec 2012 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Awe...public outing, yippie!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
loving it!! i cant wait to see how it ends n i am kinda hoping that Maggie gets her come uppings in the very best(worst) way *evil smirk* lol
Date: 14 Dec 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Loved it :)
Date: 14 Dec 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
I am so glad he finally opened up to her and that they did talk. I cannot wait to read how he follows through with regaining her trust in their marriage. Keep up the amazing writing and looking forward to the next update.
Date: 14 Dec 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Finally, peace! Maybe now we can get on to the the hawt make up sex... lol, Cheri
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Great chapter. Good to see them working things out
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
wow!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Oh my god, yes!!!! Such a beautiful tattoo... he needs to do all the things he has said... he'lll be much happier
Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Awwww.......
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
YES THEYRE BACK TOGETHER BUT STILL HAVE OSME PROBLEMS IN BETWEEN BUT OMG!!!!!!!! YES IM SO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Can't wait to see what they have planned for Maggie and how has she been getting in.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Great chapter! I can't wait to hear some of the media shitstorm when they go public.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Maggie is going down now
Date: 13 Dec 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
glad they worked it out
Date: 13 Dec 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
hahaha can't wait for THAT reunion.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
I'm so glad you chose to take the story in this direction! I love that Edward came to get her. Lets see now if he makes good on him promises! I can't wait to see him kick Maggie to the curb and how he accomplishes it! You are currently juggling lots of stories and I, for one, am very glad to see an update on this one! Happy Holidays!!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Go edward u better be sincere abt that change
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
:)
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
THANK GOD! I am so happy for them! I knew they could do it!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
loved it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
thank you for the update.....I didn't realize they married on my birthday!! Yay!! and now my boy has it plaster on his chest, even though it's not for me......lol....well done.....Bella gave him a lot to think about
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
loved it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Excellent! You just made my Thursday!!! Can't wait to see where this goes from here but I am so happy!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
loved it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Talk about making me cry!!!! Great chapter! ! Let's see how this next month goes!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
loved it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
I love this chapter and their meeting, they will repartire together because they love each other.
Thank you.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
loved it!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
loved it!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
thank god!!!!!!!!!!!!! but.....please let there be smooth sailing from here on in. ok maybe a slight bump here and there because otherwise it's not an edward and bella story. besides they deserve some happiness and maybe a baby surprise hmmmmmm! don't you think?????????? update soon!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Well I'm happy they actually talked and its good of Bella to give him a trial period cuz seriously needs to get he's priorities straight!! :) loved the chapter can't wait for the next update!!! XD
Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
loved it!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Nice reunion. :) I'm glad they both understand each other better now... enough to truly be a team, I think. More power to them!
:) Thanks for writing!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
good
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
I really hope Edward can make things right & change 4 Bella & hope things start working 4 them. Loved the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
glad she was strong and made him listen to her. Hopefully things will change for the better now.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
I love this story sooo much(: it is amazing, I wake up every morning hoping for an update, and when I saw it today, I got all happy and giddy. You are doing such a great job, keep it up :D looking forward to more (and frequent haha :3) updates.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
oups!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Please update!!! I love BTS but this is my favorite.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
What a turnaround from Carlisle. I'm so glad he gave it to Edward straight, it seems that he would be the only one to make him see sense. Now it's time for some epic grovelling and, as much as I want them back together, I hope Bella makes it really hard for him, she deserves better than the way he's been treating her.
Jane x
Date: 09 Dec 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
god, i began to read this and i couldn't stop reading and now i can't find the next button and it really pissed me off!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
What?! OMFG I can't believe how this chapter ends, please please please tell me that son of a bitch grovels his ass off and Bella forgives him. I have been reading this story pretty much nonstop the past day and i NEED to know it'll all work out *sobs*
Gah! I feel like a soap opera junkie right now
Oh and please for the love of god, please just kill Maggie off!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
I don't think Edward has done anything to make things right! She does not feel at home in that house where he fucked Maggie and she seems to be getting in all the time. He told her he would take care of Maggie and he never did. Edward expected too much fromBella and by him not speaking to her and explaining the lifestyle he fed her to the wolves. Some reviews blame Bella for not speaking to him, but how was she suppose to when a. he was never home b. his job was his number and c. everything Bella tried to spend time with him he would cancel. What the hell was she suppose to do? Sit there and hope he will show up to dinner or even come home?
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Renee needs to stay out of it. Bella and Edward need to go to a remote location and work this out. They need to reconnect. Bella is not innocent in all of this mess. She knows he is busy. She should have made sure she kept him updated on her plans as should he with her. Bella needed to make sure she was available when he was not working. She should not have pushed him away when her friend Eric was in town either. She needs to learn to balence both men in her life. Just like Edward needs to learn to balance work and a wife.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Yay Carlisle!
And Edward might be doing some of the things his father did - but he is also being a man. Men love to "fix" things without telling the women in their lives what's going on.
Stupid testosterone.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
I have given it a lot of thought. I think it should be a sex tape of Maggie with the two biggest scum bags in holleywood, dated recently so that she can't claim that is was a long time ago. Then it makes Edward look like the wronged one, and gives him a reason never to take her back. Once the industry sees the tapes plastered all over the rags, she is dropped from her contracts and fades into the shadows never to be heard from again.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Hmmm, the next chapter is going to be an interesting read, I really do hope it is nearly ready, I dont want to wait to long for it. I would really like to see them at least make some sort of head way in the relationship. But I also want to see Edward be honest with Bella and explain what has been going on for me to shut her out and the crap decisions he has made with out including her.
Sometimes an second objection or thought is a good thing, open up the world of forward thinking a different prospective.
Thanks for the chapter.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Love this story! I usually don't read a story unless they are complete, but this one just drew me in. I Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Thanks good chapter
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
So finally the light at the end of the tunnel. The first part of correcting an issue is to understand a mistake has been made and kudos for owning up to it and the balls to make it change.
Heading your way for the annual xmas trip again soon.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
He needs to get his shit togetehr ASAP. If he loves her he needs to effin show it!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
great story can't wait for more
Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Got to say I am loving me some Carlsle never would of thought he would be on Bellas side this will blow her mind. I am so glad he is pulling his head out of his ass and going after her. If Bella doesnt rip his balls off I am afraid Renee will lol
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
I hope Edward can talk her into coming back...and he treats her better! Great chapter!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Yay Carlisle for metaphorically kicking Edward in the ass. Quite an emotional chapter. Brilliant work!
~Anna-Margaret
xx
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Wow! what a chapter! so heart aching! cannot wait to read the next!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
SO glad Edward decided to pull his head out of his arse. Carlisle probably told Edward the one thing he really didn't want to be. His dad.
Loved the down maggie down entires.
Great chapter x
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
take away her eyes and tits, silicone tits.. slowly, so slowly. with a spoon.
please. :D
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
i.am.sucked.in.
holy moly, the energy, the ups and downs the realness. i love the juxtaposition beteween high school and the "adult" world. edward getting wrapped up in his own little world..trying to figure out what lauren did to fall out of favor and who is letting maggie in.
love this and can't wait for your next update!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
PLEASE DON'T TAKE SO LONG TO UPDATE AGAIN!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Yay he finally grew a pair!I cannot wait for the next update love this story.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Loved it :)
Date: 02 Dec 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
looking forward to more
Date: 02 Dec 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Thank you for the update. Hopefully next chapter will find them back on the kitchen table!!! lol, Cheri
Date: 01 Dec 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Oh carlisle and renee thankyou for giving it to edward straight
Date: 01 Dec 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
OH SNAP! I hope he gets her back and figures out how to NOT let this happen again!
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Damn right she needs to put him in his place.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Asshat Edward. That's all I going to comment.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Yeah I hope she makes him work for it and doesn't forgive him fast!! But I hope they can work things out!! :D
Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
poorn edward
Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Wow I REALLY love carlisle in this chapter. Hee hee for Renee.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Great chapter, excellent writing
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
:)
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
I love Carlisle. He is the big brother every man needs to kick him where it counts.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Thank you for the update
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
That bitch is going down. Also Edward get some knee pads...you might be there for a while.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
I'm sort of glad he is suffering too. Now maybe he will see what his insensitivity and selfishness did to her. Grovel, Edward....I really do hope they work it out!
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
omg i have been waiting for an update to this story love it more more more... thank for the update keep them coming i am loving this story ....
Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
At this point I honestly couldn't care less what happens to Maggie. She didn't force Edward to treat Bella like a toy. What an ass. I hope Bella tears him a new one.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
loved this chapter! sooooo good!!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Loved it. Wow, Carlisle nailed it with his observation that Edward was doing to himself the same thing his Dad had been doing to him. I can't wait to see him grovel;-) So Carlisle comes thru, surprise, a good surprise.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
He desered it yeaiii Bella!!! They sometimes beed a lil push in the right direction, cant wait for next chapter =)
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
OMG I CANT BELIEVE HES BEEN SUCH A DICK TO HER I MEAN DUDE GET RID OF MAGGIE SEND HER TO FUCKING ANTARCTICA FOR ALL I CARE!!!! THEY HAVET O GET BACK TOGETHER I MEAN SERIOUSLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY BELONG TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!