Date: 06 Nov 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
poor bella
Date: 06 Nov 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
sweet
Date: 06 Nov 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
poor edward he wants to stay married
Date: 06 Nov 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
very cute
Date: 06 Nov 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
loved it
Date: 06 Nov 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
really like this
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
oh my word - i'm on tenderhooks!
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
I know he's stressed but he doesn't have to take it out on her.. not good....:-(
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
For Chapter 22
Dammit, I was reviewing two stories at once and gave this one the wrong rating.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
Oh dear, I guess the honeymoon is over.
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
I feel like Edward was pretty justified in his reaction. Bella needs to realize that there are certain things that are not appropriate when you are married; allowing a man who is not your husband or family to have his arm around you is one of them.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
Poor Edward & Bella. But, Bella needs 2 grow a backbone & not let Edward get away with that shiz it. She kind of stood up 2 him, but not enough. ~Babs~
Date: 06 Nov 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Love the story!! I'm hoping for a HEA eventually since this is fiction :) Please,please!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
Wow. What s jerk
Date: 06 Nov 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
Loved it :)
Date: 06 Nov 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
He's being a major tool and he better wisen up before he loses her.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
4 more chapters then thats the end?... Please no. :(
Author's Response:
No, not the end, just coming to the end of a part of the story. Still about 20 more chapters or so, who knows.
Thanks!
Cat
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
Oh wow! That kinda blew all to hell... wow shit.
At least Rose is making it to preproduction though! *snickers*
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
how could a parent do that to their child! i don't blame him for breaking ties.....
Date: 03 Nov 2012 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
I think ruining her reputation would be fitting since that is all that truly matters to her.
I feel so bad for Edward and what he went though and I kinda am upset that Charlie played him to do so. Did Charlie know found out beforehand and what Bella to know too?
Date: 03 Nov 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
I can't understand why Edward isn't making a better effort to keep her out... Like a restraining order (if they put it on Bella... she and Edward would still be able to work together????)... any way.
I love your Charlie, even if he is a little obtuse.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
I'm lovin this story
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
When I read the Summary for this story I didn't think I was going to like it, but now I'm glad I gave it a chance :D Please update soon, because I can't wait to ready more !
Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
I say ruin her reputation lol loved the chapter!! :D
Date: 31 Oct 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
A kill Maggie contest? Too funny!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
Lol, I couldn't write it but I'd have her killed in an 'oh so unfortunate and tragic accident' involving those big heavy iron gates at the driveway to Edward's house, squished like a bug, mwahahahahaha!!!
Trust Charlie to get to the root of a problem, at least he didn't keep going on about it once Edward told him why he didn't speak to his parents. What kind of Dad does that? Did he have absolutely no conscience at all about making his son a drug addict just so he could earn him more money? I don't blame Edward for having nothing to do with him.
Ari's so cute with her Ehwar, awww. Edward will spoil his own little princess rotten whenever they have one.
Jane x
Date: 30 Oct 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
Right now I don't know if I want to kill Maggie first, Ted in one chapter won the 'let's kill him' award. Poor Edward, no wonder how all are so protectivew of him.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
People always want to do that - tell you that you should make up with someone just because they are getting older. Well - fuck that. There are some things that cannot be forgive and shouldn't. Edward doesn't need his father.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
I know it was hard for Edward, but I am glad that Charlie got him to talk about his parents. He needed to get that out to Bella. It will help them be closer. Edward and Bella don't need secrets between them. It will also help Edward and Charlie be closer.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
love it hate maggie and edward mom and dad
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
Great chapter, just the right amount of drama.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
Loved it :)
Date: 30 Oct 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
good
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
:)
Date: 30 Oct 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
A restraining order for Maggie would be a nice start.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
That sounds like fun, I think I might give that a go for you this weekend. I have to say, I would truly love to see Edward stand up to her and who ever is letting her in. I also feel who ever is helping her should loose their job on the spot also.
It was good to find out the reason why Edward did not speak to his parents anymore, I think I would also like to see Carlisle pull his head all the way out and take Bella on like a sister.
Thank for the update.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
I LOVE CHARLIE! Thank you for bringing him into this story and making him a good guy! Thank you too for the update, I fell in love with this story from chapter 1 and jump to read any updates you send out. Love little boy Edward, Dom Edward and all the others in between! LOL, Cheri
Date: 30 Oct 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
hmmm cameras to catch her entering the property maybe????
OOOh Bad Ed's Dad. What an arse.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
What kind of person does what maggies doing she needs help
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
Thanks good chapter
Date: 30 Oct 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
Well, I definitely think we should or you should kill her ass. I'm thinking the security gate accidentally chops her head off? She falls climbing over the fence lands on her head breaking her neck and when they notice a foul odor & buzzards hanging around..hehe or she gets run over by the Guiness truck!
Date: 30 Oct 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
I was so waiting fo Maggie to show up during dinner. Glad she didn't.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
It took Charlie to get to the bottom of things he is a good dad. I think Maggie should be caught on tape screwing someone to get into Edward place.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
Set a trap for the itch. All things in the dark come to light.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
RUIN HER REPUTATION THEN KILL HER LOL!!!!!!!!!!! SERIOUSLY I MEAN SHE WALKED INON THEM HAVING SEX DUDE NOT COOL YOU BITCH I WOULD HAVE DRAWN THE LINE AT THAT HAD I BEEN BELLA LIKE SERIOUSLY AND WHO THE HELL IS HELPING HER GET INTO THE HOUSE ALL THE TIME??????????????? IF ITS LAUREN OUT THE DOOR AN DONTO YOUR ASS YOU GO BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
Well I think that she needs to be written off by death, that's what she deserves.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
I wonder if she still had her ring on?
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Ohh what a weekend with her friend, I really hope Maggie disappears soon, but have a feeling she is the one that is going to out them!
Date: 18 Oct 2012 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Edward is not going to be happy that Bella's pictures are in the tabloids. She should have stayed away from her celebrity friend while in the public eye. Emily should have understood. Bella was suppose to stay under the radar. I think her cover is blown. Bella probably should have just dropped Eric off at the curb. It would have been the safest plan.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Why would Edward care about her getting her photo snapped? Because she was standing by Damien? Thanks for the update, still waiting to see if she's pregnant..:-)
Date: 17 Oct 2012 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Hmm, I'm thinking that Damian suspects Bella is not Edward's sister, lol. Surely Edward wouldn't be that angry at her being photographed, it was completely out of her control. I'm glad Carlisle's making more of an effort and warned Bella about Maggie although I think she'd worked that out for herself. I'd have effin killed her by now keep walking in the house whenever she feels like it, especially when she walked in on them having sex. Who's helpling her get in? They need to be fired.
I loved Eric's visit they has so much fun and oh my God, his reaction to Edward was classic, hahahaha!! How funny is Charlie 'You two are being safe, right?' Bwahahaha. I can't wait until he meets Edward.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
They had a great time but short.....i hope no drama comes from their outing and airport trip
Date: 16 Oct 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
It was very sweet to see Bella catching up with her friend, Eric. It was also hard to believe that Edward would be so accommodating to them, but I guess when you love someone, that comes naturally. I wonder who the traitor is that keeps letting Maggie into the house? It's depressing to think that Edward has a close household person who would do that.....missed my lemons but I know they'll be back...
Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
So, Maggie is annoying! I really hope she leaves soon. I cannot wait for more :)
Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Oh damn!!! Yeah Edwards not going to be a happy camper lol :) loved the chapter can't wait for the next update!! :D
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Thanks good chapter
Date: 16 Oct 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Loved it :)
Date: 16 Oct 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
I WONDER IF SHE TOOK HER RING BACK INTO THE NECKLSGE BEFORE THE PAPZ . LOVELY TIMES WITH ERIC. WHY MAGGIE IS STILL COMING INTO THEIR HOUSE?
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
:)
Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
LOL okay so that was realistic... good on you.. good emotions. :)
Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
LOL oh yeah drunk Bella new love... so can see that happening.. LOL poor Sober Bella.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
LOL okay it is a bit cheesy but honestly it is such a nice read and a little fun I have to keep going :)
Date: 16 Oct 2012 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Interesting first chapter I am looking forward to reading some more :)
Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
That was great she was able to see her friend and spend time with him :) I cant wait for more
Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
wonder how long the brother story is going to last. surprised they can't keep charlotte out of their house and keep her meetings at the office
Date: 16 Oct 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Thank you!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Ugh for Annoying Maggie. Glad Carlisle is behaving himself. hmmm Damien....I wonder if he's going to be trouble. Glad eric got to visit
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
I want to know who the hell is letting Maggie in the house-her interrupting them during sex? NO f*cking way! Why doesn't Edward put this foot down and keep Maggie out of the house?
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
GOD KILL THAT MAGGIE BITCH!!!!!!!!!! I CANT BELIEVE SHE WALKED IN ON THEM HAVING SEX I MEAN SERIOUSLY GET OFF YOUR HIGH HORSE YOU SLUT OF A BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!! LOOOOOOOOOOVED IT UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
great chapter! I really don't like maggie at all! She has got to go!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Great
Date: 16 Oct 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
So wonderful to see this update! Love this story and was wonderful to meet Eric. Now looking forward to some more Edward and Bella time! Thank you - Cheri
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Google Translate. French.
Départ canon!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Loved it xx
Date: 16 Oct 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion
Shit I think Edward's dominate side is hot
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 14 - My First Day
Wow tha was surprise with Carlisle and I thought he was in the movie industry. When are Emmett and Rose going to be in this
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage
I can't believe she doedn't recognize him expecially if she his movies so many times
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
Edward is so sweet
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
Well i thought Renee would be mad or have fight with Edward
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
Oh shit that was awkwards moment
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
cute dress
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Not bad at all
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
Loving it! Can tell it is going to be good.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Love the story so far...just wondering where the piano is...
Date: 02 Oct 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Edward needs to stop working with Maggie. She is going to cause problems within the marriage. She is sneaky enough to do it or at least try. The flu is the worst. Who would have though it would have brought the Cullens back talking.
Date: 02 Oct 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
i really like this story and cant wait for more!
Date: 29 Sep 2012 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
I can't wait to see what's really going on between Edward, Carlisle, and his parents. Thanks for the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
such a good hubby! :) can't wait for Edward and Carlisle to talk
Date: 28 Sep 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
:)
Date: 28 Sep 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
I WANT TO B**** SLAP MAGGIE! AND CAN'T WAIT TO SEE EDWARD MEETING ERIC. LOVED THIS CHAPTER
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Poor Bella getting flu. Maggie has no shame at all, throwing herself at Edward. I think he's going to need to get a bit tougher on her. It looks like Bella's school is going to be gossip central for a while. Imagine what they would have been like if she was pregnant. I'm glad that she isn't, I can understand her feeling both relief and sadness when she found out but I think she should at least finish high school first.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Jane x
Date: 27 Sep 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Loved it :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
I really thought she was pregnant, phewww it's not the right time
I cannot donate but I'll read Katalina's story. One of my friends suffers from leukemia and she only has a ew months left :(
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Great update! Hope Edward &Bella get a little surprise in a few months.Surprises are so much more fun than planned .
Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
GReat chapter and thank you for your contribution to fighting cancer. Can't wait to read more, I've missed reading this story!
Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Loved it xx