Yay! Glad you updated. I was waiting patiently for this chapter. Can't wait for the next! Great chapter.

Poor Edward, he didn't have an easy time since he started working in the hospital, his work load only increases every time... 

Great chapter.  Poor Eli.  Hope he'll be ok in the end.   Nice brithday surprises.   Garrett sounds like he'll be a great addition.

Hi, I really like your stories. I always try to have a look to see what's worth good reading and your stories are definetley more than really good. Please continue with the beautuful work

What a great birthday for Edward, Bella did a fine job. I love how their relationship is progressing.

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Absolutley loved every chapter so far. LOVE. Love LOVE!

loved it!

loved it!

loved it!

Awww.  Edward's such a romantic.  I'm glad that Bella said yes.  Rose should definitely stay close to home for the time being, she needs her family and friends around her.  She's really made some great strides in her recovery but I don't think she's quite strong enough to go it alone.

I hope that Jacob isn't going to be a to wriggle his way out of what he's done. I'm thinking that Lauren or Jessica gave him or made a copy of a key for him or maybe even Britney.

Jane x

Well the reprimand letter was a long time coming. Bella's right it should of been done a long time ago. I wonder how long it will take Edward to forgive himself. 

I hope Jacob and company don't come in with guns blazing. I can see them shooting up the ER. With Jacob saying Sam I know it's involving Bella's dad. Sams his land lord and he gave Charlie a 'job'. I'm sure some of the drugs were for him. It also explains why Charlie made bail.  

The only two people in this story that could afford to bail Charlie out that would possibly want to hurt Bella as well are Jacob and Jasper.  Now I'd hate to think that Jasper would stoop so low and be so cruel so I'm keeping my fingers crossed that the didn't go there.  Jacob's a different kettle of fish but at the time it all happened I don't see why he would be bothered about Bella.  I'm beginning to wonder if Jasper's on drugs, he's been pulling some long hours working on his doctorate.  Has he been taking something and it's affected his personality?

Dr Sexward is the man, lol.  Bella's one lucky girl to have Edward make love to her, treating her right. *sigh*  He can come to my house any day of the week and give me three orgasms and a massage, hahaha!!

Jane x

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Bella may not have really laid into Jacob but she made and amazing start and that was a really big start for her.  The more she stands up for herself the confidence and self esteem she'll get back, it's onwards and upwards for Bella, woohoo!!

Oh my God!  LMFAO, Mr Pecker, Woody, with an erection problem, seriously? Bwahahahahahaha!!  I'm still laughing, I'm no better than Mike but that name and that problem......well I'm reduced to being a teenager, lol.  If they're not careful half the ER are going to be sacked for harrassment.

Jane x

This new surgeon wouldn't be Jacob by any chance would it?  Why is Jasper so stuck on Tanya as the ideal type of woman for Edward?  Why does it matter to Jasper if his brother wants to be with a curvy girl who is loving and kind?  I'm sure he'd have an issue with Edward if he was to start having a go at Alice for being small and slim.  I understand that Jasper wouldn't go for a girl like Bella but it doesn't mean he has to be disrespectful towards her.

I loved their lemon.  I'm so glad that Bella's got over her aversion to oral sex and rather spectacularly, I'm taking it that Bella's a squirter, lol.  Did you know that your vagina is cleaner than the inside of your mouth?  Well it is.  I can't believe Edward's such a germaphobe, he's so funny, at least it doesn't stop him going down on Bella......he probably knows that little fact about the vag, lol.

Jane x

Charlie's an absolute fucktard and I hope that Bella goes through with pressing charges.  He's mentally abused her for fourteen years, ignored her and destroyed her self esteem.  Now things are a little tough for him he's come to find her at the hospital to humiliate her further and get her to pay his bills when previously he couldn't get out of his chair to make himself something to eat.  I would say, for Charlie, that things have improved without Bella being there, he's had to move his lazy arse and start doing things for himself.  Bella's an extremely caring and sensitive person but if she caves in to Charlie now then I don't know if she'll ever fully recover her self esteem.  Throw the book at him and forget him, that's what I say, he's never deserved Bella as his daughter and it's time she realised that.

I loved their lemon.  They're getting closer to each other and Bella's fighting her body's desire for Edward.  She's still a mix of sexy minx and naive school girl, lol, I'm surprised Edward's not walking around with a permanent hard on.

Jane x

Bella said that the reason she didn't stay to listen to Edward and ran away instead was because she didn't want to be hurt anymore.  What she did by running was hurt herself a lot more than she needed to, if she'd stayed to listen to Edward and talked to Rosie then she would have realised the truth so much sooner and, I think, built up a little bit of trust with Edward, she certainly wouldn't have spent her afternoon being cold, miserable and crying.

Lol, Bella was so embarrassed by all the sex talk on the girls night out.  They're right though she has to learn to pleasure herself and find out what she likes, she's going to miss out on so much if she doesn't give oral a try, lol, I couldn't believe she didn't get the Sqweel, I have one of those, it's soooo goooood!!

Writing that letter to Jacob seems to have released something in Bella and I'm glad she ended up in Edward's arms.  On a different note, is James going to start causing problems for the girls?

Jane x

Still swooning, lol.  I'm so glad that Bella's getting help and that Rose has found a reason to get better and get some help, she really should want to do this for herself to prove that she can't be broken but it's a step in the right direction.

I think Bella's going to be up and down with her self esteem for quite a while.  Undoing fourteen years of abuse is going to take a while and, of course, there are always people around her willing to knock her back down on her arse.  I hope she can hold on to the good thoughts about herself and kick their arses.

I loved the date, it was so romantic and perfect.  Oh my God the car!  I'd cream myself over that car too, lol.

Jane x

It's a good job I'm sitting down because I'm swooning to death here. *sigh*  Edward is such a good man, so kind and loving.  I love that he's made his intentions clear to Bella and told her that he'll wait for her and that he made her look at herself whilst he pointed out all the positive things about her.  Edward knows that nobody's perfect and pointed out his own flaws.  Bella knows this but I think she's lost sight of it from all the derogatory remarks and treatment she's endured over the years.  All of those people who say things or treat her badly, they may look beautiful or, for want of better words, 'normal' but they all have ugliness inside them.  Bella's so much better than any of them, hopefully one day, she'll not only realise that but believe it too.

Jane x

God Bella can't catch a break from anyone can she.  Kids can be really cruel but when they're old enough to know better then they should apologise and I'm glad that Evan eventually did.  I wonder if Victoria now wishes she'd swallowed her pride and apologised rather than taking it further in the ladies room with Bella.  

I love how Edward and Bella's relationship is developing and even if Edward's not ready to admit it yet, Alice is spot on, he does like Bella and it's slow burning but more than just a friend.  Lol, I loved her reaction to Edward's news about his ex being a lesbian, hahaha!  I'd have done exactly the same.

Jane x

Oh, this elusive something will involve Charlie, Sam and Jacob. This is not going to be good for Bella at all. I am definely excited to read how it all plays out.

Oh my God!  I feel so sad for Bella, I want to grab hold of her and give her a big hug then I want to keep telling her that she's not fat and lazy, that she's worth so much more than the way she's being spoken to and treated.  She's going to have to learn to stand up for herself, I know it's difficult especially when you feel worthless but even just a little step will help build her confidence.  Don't even get me started on Charlie, there aren't enough words in the world to describe how I feel about him.  He deserted his daughter when they needed each other the most, well now it's time she deserted him and let him fend for his own fat arse, if Bella's so fat and lazy he won't miss her will he.

This is a really good story, I know I've only read this chapter but you have made so many emotions come out of me that I know this is really good.

Jane x

Love it!

I know I don't reveiw often - In part becuase I usually read on the run on my phone - and in part becuase I dont really have much to say - I only like what I read and I feel weird just sending a "good job" or "liked it" - like a sticker given on your paper in elelmentary school.  

BUT --- This time I had to reply!!!  First of all I Love this story!!!! I like how the characters are not perfect they all have issues to get thruogh - just like the rest of us. I love how you are weaving in plot from several chapters ago.

I also couldnt resist giving you MY Guesses: 

* first of all Charlie is not done - he is so poking his head back in - Sam (the apartment super) has got to be the one that bailed him out in the first place

* Second - I picked up on the fact that Jacob is giving Sam/ to give Charlie the meds he has be over-using to satisfy his habit.

* Lastly - I think that they are all 3 gonna team up against Bella some how - to kidnap/ or kill/ or throw her in some sort of scandal that they think will ruin her life or career.

* Not quite sure how Tyler and Newton play in to it all - though the fact that Newton and Jessica are MIA did not slip notice - I fugure they have either skipped town OR better yet - Newton is to spinless to be the real brains - Maybe Sam is the real dealer and they are selling to him --- which means they are dead meat for getting Jacob in trouble by having loose lips --- This last one of corse is wild spectulation.  

Though I may not have time to reply often know that this is currently my favorite story!!!! Hands Down!!!!   keep up the good writing --- "Loved it"  "Good Job" with 5 gold stars on your paper LOL

TTFN

Oh this getting good can't wait to read more.

He's gone....yay!! I am with Alice, I think he will find someway to retaliate. I have a feeling that his "buyer" is Charlie, and I hope that he goes down in flame with Jacob. Great chapter!

Totally loved this chapter. So happy Bella's moving in with him and I hope they don't move. And it's about time Jacob gets what's coming to him. I figured it had to be Newton or Crowley that gave him the drug locker key. I didn't think they'd be involved in selling them, too, but it makes sense. He deserved to get fired and he's such a dick to Bella. Poor Edward. I feel so bad that he had to write her up. She's handling that write up much better than I expected her to. She's making great progress. 

Now, as for the elusive it...yeah, it's going to happen. Jacob is going to come back. I'm still all for him being incahoots with Charlie. Somehow, Charlie is going to be back and I think it will be him, Jacob, AND Sam that show up in the ER. Somebody's going to lose it and I don't know why but I can see drama, like a hostage situation or something happening in that scene. I'm really looking forward to the trip to Hawii. That's going to be fun. 

Thanks for sharing! 

Looking forward to the explosives.

Great way to end the chapter.

Loved this chapter, Edward's just so cute and "perfect", gotta love him!!!!

And is better Jacob tell who really gave him the key and not accuse anyone else!!! I think it was Jessica!!!

I'm really glad that they are moving in together. I wonder how long it will take Edward to convince Bella to let him buy her a new house. Lol

Poor Rosalie I know the prospect of Royce getting out is scary but I'm glad that Edward was able to talk her off the ledge. 

Fabulous chapter and look forward to the next one.

Oh wow, I didn't expect that Angela was pregnant. That's great! I love that Bella agreed to move in with Edward. Very sweet. Now, more than ever, I am POSITIVE that Jacob is helping Charlie. He mentions Sam and he's stealing meds...yeah, that's who's behind it all. Ass. Thanks for sharing!

I was glad to see your update thanks I love these two.  Bella is taking control of Edward she is good lol.  Jacob is going down will he blame Bella???  Love pregers Angela with no filter lol

Incredible chapter. WOW!!! Lot'sof twists and turns.
I was really concerned when we did not her from you last week. I am glad to her you and yours are better.
Thanks for writing.

:)

Loved this chapter. I can understand that Bella was thrown with Ang's pregnacy and moving out, because change hasn't worked well for her in the past. Looking forward the meeting in the next chapter.

Loved these chapter can't wait for the next update

"Yeah, again, reminder...not a doctor. Yes, the best place for someone who has lost consciousness is a hospital. If that happens to you, do not pass go. Do not collect two hundred dollars. Go to the hospital!"

Fuck that, if that ever happens to me Edward can take me home and keep me!

loved it!

loved it! Go Bella!

loved it! Poor Bella!

Wow! Jasper is a complete douche, but I still think that there may be a chance for him. James is a creeper that I would rather not see again and I think that Jacob should be fired and his license revoked. As to Charlie...a slow and painful death would still be too good for him! Can't wait for the next one!!!

I love me some Jasper --- I think he needs to be redeemed so that Alice can have her HEA --- Dont get me wrong - it needs to be hard for him but I pick Jasper 

What can I say I love the underdog - I have always truely been a team Jasper Girl  Gotta love a "good ole boy"  he he he (even though you don't write him that way here ;))

TTFN

Great Chapter update soon. 

Well I'm hoping Jasper will redeem himself.  He's the only one that really matters in this situation.  James and Jacob don't mean anything to her and Charlie burned his bridges already.  You go Esme take him down a peg or two.  Edward stand fast with her, she is the innocent one in this mess.  I'm glad Rose is being strong and moving on.  B gave her good advice by telling her to control this situation.   This story is truly awesome.

Jasper is an asshole and I am glad he got cut off and punched good thing Edwards hand is hurt real bad or Bella would blame herself she just cant get that he will love her no mater what.  I hope Jasper prove not to be such an asshole all the time and pulls his head out of his ass.  I am worried about Jacob doing something evil to get back at them.

Hi I really like this story and as a big girl myself like that now Bella is better about her weight its others oppinions that cause the problems. I can so understand this. I hope Jasper can be saved and become nice but I do think that he posted bail for Charlie so if he did I think it will be a step to far to save him. Looking forward to the next chapter.

That was one monster chapter, wow! Loved every word. Thank you! There is no way I can pick one sleaze bag that is redeemable. They each have very different issues but all are major assholes with some pretty big screws loose.