Date: 09 Feb 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 301
wow! ok..that last pic of the kiss. For some reason that is the sexiest of ALL the pics you have posted yet! I know its not as explicit as most but damn... so sensual, so sexy.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 301
LOL LOL Edward is in for a wild ride::))
Date: 09 Feb 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 301
Oh snap Bella got that venom in her making her act that way
Date: 09 Feb 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 301
ok, so...after reading this NINE times...I am here to tell you it was SO WORTH THE WAIT, and I can't thank you enough for having it be in EPOV! I'm fucking LOVING THIS STORY!!!
Thank you for your talent and for sharing it with us/me....truly!! <3
Author's Response:
and the fun has just begun... :)
Date: 08 Feb 2013 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 301
WOW ! JUST WOW ! Very good, thank you.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 301
AW, this just keeps getting better! I figure if you are willing to post everyday I'm going to thank you everey day.............THANK YOU!
Date: 08 Feb 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 301
wow that was awesome
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 301
well that must have been one hell of a shock for edward! teehee wonder what he's gonna do next??? so do you think that if she was to ingest a bunch of it that she would become as strong and hard as a vampire to where edward could thrust full speed of a vampire?
Date: 08 Feb 2013 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 301
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome job!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Feb 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 301
holy hell Noc you know how to write good sex.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 301
she loves it wants more of it and he better give it to her lol
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 301
I love this chapter.
Thank you.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 301
More more more please!!!! Beautiful and always Noc!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 301
Sounds like Master has empowered his butterfly with more strength and confidence than he was prepared for. Another amazing, hot, sensual chapter. I always look forward to these updates and sharing the pics with the hubby. Thanks so much for writing, sharing and giving us such beautiful visual aides for each chapter.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 298
Hot!!! Now that she can see him everything is kinda like the first time :)
His answer to her saying she feels like she could fly....priceless!!!
Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 301
And we want always more!
Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 301
SHE IS GOING TO KILL HIM WITH HER PUSSY!
Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 301
I can just picture his face.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 301
Insatiable...that's good!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 300
*sigh* Such a touching moment right there. Wonderful, Noc.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 300
Awww sweet honey sex
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 300
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 2nd which I know is untrue because u were not at ch 300!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!!
Author's Response:
You know we can't do that right? It's a TWCS issue. I ask the admin to change it, but I'm already writing it, finding pics, posting it, and if people just favorite the fic and me, it should show up for them. Also, I post almost every day, they can look. I tell admin almost every morning and they go in and manually change the date. That's the best I can do.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank You for sharing your story. Enjoyed reading it. All 300 chapters!!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 300
Thank you for the update.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 300
so sad this is ending, but so glad that at last Bella and Edward are finally getting what they both want
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 300
Holy hell, what a place to stop...please update again soon, the wait is going to kill me...
Date: 07 Feb 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 300
Finally :)
Date: 07 Feb 2013 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 300
oh GOD... Love how slow ur taking this so we can enjoy every inch!!! :)
Date: 07 Feb 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 300
Fuck!!!! Made me clench!!
Date: 07 Feb 2013 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 300
Superbe ! Excellent ! And of course, you are in my favs.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 300
SO amazing :D I really loved it!
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 300
The only thing she will be crying is his name :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 300
And so it begins.... Can't wait to see what you have in store for us! :)
Date: 07 Feb 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 300
300 chapters! congrstulations? is that what people normally say?
obviously, a thanks is in order. so, thank you for writing such a great story!
Date: 07 Feb 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 300
aww Noc that was beautiful!!! Can't wait for the sequel!
Date: 07 Feb 2013 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 300
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!We need more!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 300
Yes! It's here and I'm excited. I can't wait for more tomorrow.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 300
AWHHH!! hurry!!!!
Date: 07 Feb 2013 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 300
Love the chapter and Sir's love for his butterfly, but confused by your notes. Are you leaving us hanging here for a while? You are already on my favorites!
Author's Response:
No, but its ending soon. Just letting people get a chance to favorite me so that when i put out teasers you all get them :). And thanks for favoriting me.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 300
OMG FINALLY I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Feb 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 299
Aww their sweet :D
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 299
Awww very cute pic and nice chapter and funny
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 299
I love this chapter.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 299
Aww.....such a slow burn. Love how he's all lol shit you can hear me now! Lol
Date: 06 Feb 2013 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 299
I loved this one thanks
Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 299
superslowmo burn;-)
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 299
its finally going to happen! he's going to take her!
Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 299
His forever and ever
Date: 06 Feb 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 299
aww hell I love one possessive Edward (Master)!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 299
Oh yeah... All the build up to this moment...
I still can't believe he's ready to sleep with her without first having the whole - "Hey babe, I'm a vampire" discussion. But then again -- considering all of the stuff she's gone along with so far, anything short of "I have a bunch of my victims' dead bodies in the freezer. How'd you like a little school girl fricasse for dinner?" would probably be A-okay with Butterfly. :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2013 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 299
I loved it. His surprise at her strength and being so in the moment that he forgets she can hear him, just perfect. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Date: 06 Feb 2013 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 299
Has his cum effected her more this time for some reason? LOVE this story.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 299
Dear Noc, I don't mean it offensively, but since there is no intonation in writing, I have to say that I mean it jokingly exasperated: "Fuck, Noc, let them go at it!!!" If I were a guy, I'd say I got a serious case of blue balls!
I've enjoyed this journey with Domward and SuBella, but I must confess the drabble format is not my kind of fic. It's downright frustrating most of the time.
Sorry for the outburst - I'm usually more contained than this. The prolonging (is that a word) of the climax must be getting to me.
I also rarely comment, even when I adore the story, therefore somehow this story has me going out of my usual quiet self in order to vent some sexual frustation online, hehehehe.
I am looking forward to reading more from you (just something a little less intense than Involuntary Rapture), so I am adding you to my favorite authors.
Read ya around.
SF
Author's Response:
awwww you have no idea what that means to me. Thank you thank you so much! Um... something less intense... Serving Mistress Jane, Secret Letters... idk, I'll think of something. message me on fb and I'll hook you up :)
Date: 06 Feb 2013 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 299
I've always loved this pic. So....maybe next time?
Date: 06 Feb 2013 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 299
OH MY HEART!
Date: 06 Feb 2013 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 299
Such a beautiful chapter. Thank you!
Date: 06 Feb 2013 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 299
More, more, more!!! Please!!!!!! I'm not ashamed to beg.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 298
so fuckinhot
Date: 06 Feb 2013 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 298
Well if that wasn't hot I don't know what is
Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 298
*panting* oh dear GAWD!
Date: 06 Feb 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 298
man that was very good like all the others you never disappoint
Date: 06 Feb 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh, im not saying i didnt like it, im just saying im definitely waiting for them to have sex to see how sweet and intimate or hard and passionate it will be and for them to have the vampire talk
Author's Response:
no vampire talk, sorry. Im ending it right where i ended the one shot, well, this is that little bit extra. I will be writing a sequel though :)
Date: 06 Feb 2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOL. Maybe a little bit.
Date: 05 Feb 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 298
Love the visials lol
Date: 05 Feb 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 298
HOT HOT HOT !!!!!!!! He needs her cum for control, right????
Date: 05 Feb 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 298
Gah, that was amazing! SO HOT!
Date: 05 Feb 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 298
Loved the dirty talk and the hot gifs!
Date: 05 Feb 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 298
Loved the chapter and the pics!! :D
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2013 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 298
Holy hell thst s hot!!
Author's Response:
lol.. were ur fingers sticky when you typed that?
Date: 05 Feb 2013 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 298
Nice way to start my day.
Date: 05 Feb 2013 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 298
well you certainly know how to drag things out with these chapters, lol. i cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
awwww.... i thought u would like this. It was a super long chapter. I almost cut it in two.
Date: 05 Feb 2013 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 298
Hot, hot, hot! Thanks for my morning wake-up!
Date: 05 Feb 2013 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 298
This chapter is so good so good !
Date: 05 Feb 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 298
UM..... YEAH....
Date: 05 Feb 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 298
can they please make love now instead of fucking would be a nice change
Author's Response:
nice change? I've had them fuck?
Date: 05 Feb 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 297
Damn Bella she getting it
Date: 05 Feb 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 297
Good for you Edward!!
Date: 04 Feb 2013 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 297
Damn loved the chapter and the pics!! :D
Date: 04 Feb 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 297
Love the update
Date: 04 Feb 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 297
this story just gets better
Date: 04 Feb 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 297
Yup...hopped up on vamp cum is clearly a fun thing. She is devoring him ;)
Date: 04 Feb 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 296
Nothing is better then a chapter all about giving Sir a blow job!!
Date: 04 Feb 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 295
Love love love...there isn't much more I can say about this chapter but that.
Date: 04 Feb 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 294
UGHHHHHH the neck kissing does me in every time!!
Date: 04 Feb 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 293
She is surprising him at every turn here.