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Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 16

awww that was so sweet and hot!!fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 15

wow awesome house!fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

aww their just too cute.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

fab chapter 

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 12

aww hes such a romantic hope she doesn't run for the hills lol.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 11

aww bless em.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

fab chapter hmm wonder whos gonna give in first the sexual tension is electric.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

wonder if hes noticed her outfit.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

wonder where she is??fab chapter aww hes in love.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

poor bella lol.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

aww bless him fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

i think their gonna get on just fine fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 4

fab chapter.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 32

Lol, a little bathroom adventure for the pair of them.  I'm beginning to think I missed out at school 'cause none of this ever went on.......well not that I heard anyway, hahaha!!  I can't believe Bella left Edward soaked in his cum and hers, lol, good job everyone's gone home because he's going to look a right sight. *snort*

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 31

Oooh time to meet Alice and Jasper.  Will either of them be weird with Bella?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 30

Hmmm, what does Edward have planned?  Lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 32

The story and pics are so hot!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 32

who says in the toilet is not fun ;)

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 32

Wow! that was risky.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 31

cant wait lol

Reviewer: nix69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 32

I hope they dont get caught anytime soon or they will be in so much trouble! Im surprised no one has seen all the flirting they have been doing especially at Edwards car!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 30

good times how are they going to get through class

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 32

HOT STUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: nix69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 30

Its going too be hard for them to sit in that classroom after that lol.
Cant wait for next chapter!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it :)

Reviewer: keemastcloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 30

Whats.gonna happen now? I wanna know.i wanna know!!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

wonder who will crack first hmmm.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 2

oo wonder what he wants with her.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

shes soo lucky to have such a hot biology teacher!fab start.

Reviewer: piyali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 29

Please update soon :D

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 29

Oh I thinks shes in big trouble.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 29

Bon chapitre !

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 27

Je les adore ces deux là !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 26

Wahou ! Edward va lui donner envie d'aller en cours.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 29

nice pic's  she was not nice lol

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 29

Oh my God!!  So hot!!  Lovin' the piccies.

Jane x

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 29

HOttt

Jukie

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 29

Oh that was priceless!  I loved it!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 28

Bella's turning into such a naughty little minx, lol.  Edward will be a walking hard on all day after that message and picture.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 27

Lol, I hope they didn't hear him either.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 26

Oh, my!!

Jane x

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 27

oh my!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 26

oh boy

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

oh boy let the games begin

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: nix69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 28

Cant wait to see Edward's reaction to that lol!

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 28

Yeah, I think I would have the exact same reaction.

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 27

Um, could I have acopy of that picture?

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it :)

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 25

Aww omg alice... Wouldn't be right with out her in it. OO this should be good with jasper in it. 

Reviewer: nix69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 15

How many rooms do you think they will get through lol?

Reviewer: nix69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love that you made Jake a puppy!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 25

Ah il y a Jasper aussi !

Sympa le retour d'Alice.

En tout cas Edward est content de la photo de Bella.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 24

Elle est mignonne cette Bella.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 23

Bon tout va bien, maintenant Alice arrive...

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 22

C'est un beau cadeau ! surtout s'il paie l'abonnement.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 21

Il est très mignon ce prof.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

Je croyais qu'Edward était venu chercher Bella chez elle, donc il a dû la ramener le soir !

En plus il connaît son adresse.

Je pense que tu as du changer quelques détails, essaies de réctifier ce serait mieux.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

Ah Bella, quelle "boulet" !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 18

C'est quoi la surprise ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

C'est bien d'attendre à mieux se connaître, ils ont la vie devant eux.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 16

J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre et en tout cas, leur différence d'âge n'est pas si énorme.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

Mon Dieu quelle maison ! (je ne voudrais pas avoir à faire le ménage, c'est immense..).

Bella est une dévergondée ! Non ? 

Je crois qu'Edward va aimer ça.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 14

C'est bien vrai Edward a beaucoup de chance avec Bella !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

Donc rendez vous pour dîner.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

Il va l'emmener chez lui et lui parler, j'ai hâte...

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 11

Ouais courageuse la petite Bella !!!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

Le destin fait bien les choses en tout cas il a l'air favorable à ces deux là.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 9

Ah bon il boude ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

Où est-elle ? Sont camion est en panne ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

Ah Charlie, bouches toi les oreilles...

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 6

Mon Dieu, il l'avait remarqué avant !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 5

Et bien c'est parti je crois.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 4

Je crois qu'il ne veut pas perdre de temps !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ah le coquin, il est malin l'homme ! Bella est plus que d'accord !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ah ! Déjà il veut la voire !!!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Je suis sûr qu'elle va adorer !

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 25

Ooooh is Jasper a little jealous of Edward's and Alice's relationship or is he just a little overwhelmed by them?  I love how he calls her a little spaz, such a lovely brother, hahahahah!!

I'm glad you're back.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 24

I hope she's sent it to the right number.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 23

I think it's only natural to have doubts, he wouldn't be human otherwise, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

I've gotten greatings l that before. Thankfully I never fell over when I was tackled. 

Yay! Alice & Jasper! More fun to be had.  

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loovvve it. Love it. Awesome writer you are.  love jukie

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 25

Good to have Alice home how old is she??

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 24

need more please

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 24

fun stuf

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

he is easy lol

Reviewer: sarasue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15

I want to  live there its so Gone with the Wind really enjoying the story

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 22

Well thank God he realised about using his school e-mail account.  I'm still wondering about Alice though, how old is she?  Isn't she going to think this whole thing between Edward and Bella is weird?  I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Jane x

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

Out of town for a few days. Catching up with updates. I missed alot. Ya I was wondering about the emails. And good job on the blackberry's.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 22

aww so sweet... and happy birthday bella!!! whoo hoo

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 22

nice

Reviewer: AngeliqueMasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 22

Glad to see he wised up about using the school email.

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 21

1st love the story so far...

2nd I think Edward better get a new email address...

I am just woundering what else is going on in his live.

I can't wait for more wish the chapters were longer...

Plesase update soon!!!!

:)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 21

Hmm, I don't know what to make of Alice coming home.  Is she going to go completely mad at Edward?  Hmmm.

Jane x

Reviewer: debussyfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

These two just kill me! great story.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 20

I'm hoping that Edward will be deleting his e-mails.  Is it really a good idea to be using his school e-mail like this?  I can't wait to see what the surprise is.

Jane x

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