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Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh no!  Poor Bella.  Is Edward going to panic because she doesn't show up at school?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oooh, what's he bought for her?

Jane x

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 18

I read this story this morning and I love it,  I've reading a lot of older Edward and Bella stories lately and I find them so much fun to read keep up the awesome work.

Jukie 

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh Edward is leaving evidence, not good.

Reviewer: AngeliqueMasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

He REALLY should not be discussing this on work email.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm enjoying this story so much... only wish it were longer chapters.... oh well.. can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: monkeymom Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 18

Edward might not want to include the "&other" stuff in emails he sends to Bella from his school email address.   Not that I'm paranoid or anything, but just saying...   His sense of self-preservation seems to be lacking!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

I really like his answer!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it :)

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 17

I'm glad she said something. Means she has some control and he has respect.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 17

Well, I didn't see Bella putting the brakes on, that was a pleasant surprise.  I'm glad they're going to get to know each other before jumping into bed.

Jane x

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

Very good

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 16

Go Bella. I wish I had those balls when I was seventeen.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 16

Longer chapters are good for me, lol.  These two sure are moving fast.

Jane x

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it :)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 16

I love it so far!  can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 15

Wow, that's some house.  I love Bella's lack of filter, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMG! I want that house!

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 15

wow nice!! I really like how they are together!And that they have the same feelings, right? the house is amazing!!can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love when they ay their thoughts out loud, it always leads to interesting things.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 15

 

Loved it :)!!!!!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oooh Bella, forward much?  Lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 14

I'm sure there will be no talking.

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

I bet he has a HUGE smile :)

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

omg really.. I was hoping you get them to the house. This next scene should be good. 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh my God!  Bella's going to kill him looking like that, lol, he's either going to be a gibbering mess or all over her like a rash.  Mind you when she sees him in those jeans and that jumper, well all hell could let loose, hahahaha!  I love a man in a cable knit jumper.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 12

Edward is so besotted with Bella.

Jane x

Reviewer: robstenize Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

Amazing! Cant wait for the next one, hope the next one is longer:)

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow, it seems they are both excited. Can hardly wait to see how the date goes!

Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

love it cant wait for more

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

Brave brave Bella. Good for her.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hormones are raging making Bella rather brave.  Mr Cullen didn't mind his student suddenly calling him Edward in public either, did he even notice?  Did anyone else in that coffee shop notice anything?

Looking forward to more.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 10

So Edward thinks that inviting her to his place for dinner won't raise any suspicion or start any rumors?  How long has he lived in a small town?  Doesn't he know they are the breeding ground for gossips and there are eyes everywhere, probably even in that coffee shop?  They are going to have to be sooo careful.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 9

Hmm.  Is she in trouble or is Edward trying to hide his relief that she's actually turned up?

Jane x

Reviewer: monkeymom Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow!  He thinks that is his first mistake?   And he thinks asking her to dinner at his place will avoid suspicion and rumors?   Which head is he thinking with?!

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

Bella is feeling a little sexy. Way to drive him crazy.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 9

She's in trouble now

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 8

'My Bella' Edward's so far gone already.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Remember he has seen her before

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 8

Just started reading, read straight through, I love it. I love drabbles. Did he find out how old she is? And wheres Bella.



Author's Response:

I hope you are enjoying it !

thanks for reading ;)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

I like this little dabble that you have going on, can not wait to read more

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

Bwahahahahaha!!  Explain that one Bella.  I suppose she could always say the water was too hot, soap in her eye or she stubbed her toe......yeah, right. *snort*

I love that we're getting both POV's.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

Well, well, well, Mr Cullen has been spying on Bella, lol.  He's sure been biding his time if he thought she was older, good job he didn't approach her and ask her out.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

I love Bella's e-mail address, lol.  Bella gets her own desk?  Is this away from where she'd normally sit?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 4

Lol, Jakey the sometimes stupid puppy, hahahaha!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

Ooooh they're playing with fire but let the games begin.

Jane x

Reviewer: Teens Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 7

im' the first to admit i'm not a fan of drabble stories - but this is great coffee break reading!  look forward to your next post.  

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 2

Lol, there goes Bella stating the obvious. *snort*

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well it sounds as though you've been through the mill lately, I'm so glad you're all better.

Soooo, Biology just got a bit more interesting then.....bwahahahaha!!

Jane x



Author's Response:

Yes real life sucks alot sometimes  would be great if we could live in the life we write about sometimes !!

Glad you are enjoyng this I normaly don't write drabbles but it is a good way to get me back into writing !

check out my other storys I will get them finished  !

Enjoy and thanks for the review's .

         Nancy

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 5

More please! I've gotta say that I have NEVER had a hot teacher! Not even in college!

Reviewer: miss mollie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

love it!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh Edward

Author's Response:

Oh Edward is right !!!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

Very good.



Author's Response:

Thanks ;)

Reviewer: merrybc18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

wow

the possibilities of what could happen next....

love it!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

wow great start, I hope you will have regular updating

Author's Response:

Yes I will !! I am going to try  every say as long as that works with my Beta

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

:D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: CodyB Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait to see where you go with these two!! Looking forward to your future updates!!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: miss mollie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 2

lovin it!

just started reading deeper discord on fanfiction it`s a great story can`t wait to read more as i`ve read that i`m going to read cold summer tomorrow.



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: miss mollie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

great start!

how often will this update?



Author's Response:

I will update every day !

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