[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ok, Carlisle as the butler is new, I like that they are,close.
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
I loved this chapter and the date was swoon worthy! swoonward?
Date: 02 Oct 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Is the Bella in the banner how you really picture Isa? Cause she looks pretty stick thin to me, I was thinking more Christina Hendricks, sorry if it's a bother, I'm just a very visual person, I like pics that go with stories that's why I like TWCS so much. But if it's possible can you let us know who you picture as Isa...
Author's Response:
My Bella's body type is a mix of Christina Hendrinks and Kat Dennings. Her features are similair to Mel Suicide (if you google image her and find the head host pic you'll see hwo my Isa looks)
Date: 01 Oct 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
What to call Edward? Too early to tell. Thanks for the update
Date: 01 Oct 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved their banter. Can't wait for this story to unfold.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good story so far
Date: 29 Sep 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
He is quite romantic and an artist. Artward is probably too calm. We seem to be needing a little more info for that decision.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
That was amazing :D I really loved it! Cannot wait for their next date ;)
Date: 29 Sep 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh, the date was perfect. I really enjoyed the casualness; it gave them more time to see if this was a journey that the two of them wished to embark. Even if it was not mutual, it could be seen as something that two friends would do together without the pressure of presumed expectations that would leave neither party feeling that they put too much forward and not have it reciprocated. I don't know if that makes any sense to you, but I was racking my brain trying to come up with the words. LOL
Again, I need to compliment you on your creations of the visual. Sometimes authors seem to leave out the descriptions, or scene setting, and jump right to the dialogue and immediate actions. It doesn't make the reader work to put themselves in the story. Leaves nothing to the imigination so to speak.
I definitely am enjoying this slow build up. It leaves the reader wanting more; and definitely keeps the reader on edge trying to anticipate what the writer has in store. I laughed at some of the A/N at the end of this chapter. Do people really ask some of those questions? It's almost as if the reader is asking the author to publish an outline of the story. Wait for it! I am currently reading a story that is finishing with just two more chapters to go, and the couple has yet to consumate the relationship. It is how that story needed to be told; and, I can tell you that if the coupling had been rushed, it would have definitely detracted from the story. So, I hope that your readers will relax and let you unfold this story as you obviously have intended. The saying, all good things come to those that wait, is definitely apropros.
Thanks again for sharing your words, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes, those were all questions asked by my readers. They can be an impatient bunch, but I can understand. The funny part is that there are some parts of the story that I don't even know yet, my characters are rather subjective in what information they give me. Thanks for the review and the kind words
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait for more
Date: 29 Sep 2012 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
A great first date. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hey,
I really liked their first date...the attraction between them is really strong and I can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
I got a Bruce Wayne vibe from Edward... Smoothward? *shrugs* I don't know... I'll have to think about it. He's not a playboy and not a hermit... I think Mysteryward will sufice for now since I don't know much about him.
Thanks for the update, I loved the chapter. I was pulled into the momment and literally sighed at the end. The date was perfect. *dreamy sigh*
Can't wait till next Saturday!
xoxo
Mina
Date: 26 Sep 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
it was awesome!
thank you so much!
see ya!
Date: 25 Sep 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning. Looking forward to more.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I'm sorry to hear things will move slowly though! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loving the start!
Date: 24 Sep 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am so glad that you have started another story.
I knew when I was judging Fetlife at Twilight that I would love you as a writer. I was right.
Congratulations on another successful story. Until we meet again in the next chapter.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting and I read it with wrapt attention.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
oooh! this looks like it's gonna be a great story, and I can't wait for the next instalment.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2012 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome, as always! Can't wait for the update!
Date: 23 Sep 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it :) can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it can't wait to read more soon
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a terrific story; the first chapter is outstanding!!
Date: 23 Sep 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for more!
Date: 23 Sep 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
When I went to read this the first thing I noticed was that there was 20 reviews. I thought "that must be good". TWCS stories never get as many reviews as FF. Then I read it I love it! It was so good. I love the way you have painted Edward and Bella. Her ordering a milkshake. Loved it. Their banner back and forth. Just a really story. Looking forward to the next chapter.. Update soon! :~)
Date: 23 Sep 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was so hoping that when you finished "Who's Your Papi", that you would begin another story. You have not disappointed with the promise of this story.
The way you have described the scene, it seems to put the reader in the story, but instead of participating, we are quiet observers. It's quite refreshing that you have set the scene, almost as if one is peeling an onion, with each layer peeled back, another truth is revealed.
I also like that you have described Isabella in the terms of how many "real" women truly are--full of small imperfections that make each woman unique, but not unattractive. I guess it takes the correct man to see this. Additionally, you are portraying Isabella as a person with a strong sense of worth, who obviously knows herself and makes no apologies.
I look forward to updates.
Author's Response:
I love it when my readers understand me! I got tired of writing a flawless unreal Bella knowing that it was unrealistic and overdone. I'm glad you're here on this journey to see me unravel these characters because I have great things in store for them. Thank you for the lovely review!!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning! Very intriguing!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
'you are off to a great start keep going I will can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 22 Sep 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it already. Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it so far! Your E and B seem so real. Can't wait for more. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yay! So glad you posted a new story. I'm liking this one already and its just the first chapter. Its going to be a slow burn till we learn the secrets? Can't wait to read more!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
A beautiful start! i love their playfulness already!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to see where this goes
Date: 22 Sep 2012 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
A great start to the story. I can't wait to read future chapters.
Date: 22 Sep 2012 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
A great start, looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 22 Sep 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Um....when is chapter 2 going to be up because I can't fucking wait!!!!!!!!! I am so loving this:) I am glad that we didn't have to wait for Edward to make his move. He just went right for it! And, not calling her Bella, love it! Love, love, love!
Author's Response:
next chapter should be up next Saturday
Date: 22 Sep 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey,
great, a new story!! And it's really interesting and I'm sure he'll call her ;-)
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I looooooooved this first chapter. I was completely hooked from the start.
I was a bit weirded out because you metioned the same birthmarks I have, my dad calls them my constellations, they start on my left cheek and reach my left wrist... so weird.
I love the start, Edward is hot. Period. He won me with his tastes ;)
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
xoxo
Mina
Date: 22 Sep 2012 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
awesome,
very real characters and the semblance of plot
even in the first chapter yay
teeny bopper fiction has ruined my expectations
are your posting just here... or elsewhere
i hate the format of this site on my iphone
so just for travels sake
Author's Response:
I've also posted it up on Fanfiction which is more mobile friendly
Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I already love them, you have a terrific writing style. Now I am enjoying your other history and look will be waiting for the continuation! I enjoy your stories!
I wonder what is the secret of Edward, but I'm sure Bella will not be afraid!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
When will we see another chapter?! Love it so far! Really need to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
hopefully next saturday!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is amazing so far! I love this Isa/Izzy (Bella) and Edward! Question...when you say "slow", how "slow" are we talking about here; 2 months or more? Just curious! I cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
lol, by slow, I mean no sex till the seventh chapter