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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 9:52 AM Title: Outtakes-Foursome

one hell of a dream



Author's Response:

Yep, and a good one at that. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 9:48 AM Title: Outtakes-Wedding Night

yummy wedding night



Author's Response:

I am hoping to come up with a few more which show the whole honeymoon. I feel like my lemons have dried up at the moment. LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 6:47 AM Title: Do You Wanna Play?

Great start  can't wait to read the rest !



Author's Response:

Thanks I hope you like...Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 4:30 AM Title: Outtakes-Wedding Night

LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Another GREAT chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks!! Happy you enjoyed...thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 4:26 AM Title: Outtakes-Foursome

OMGosh!!!!! A dream!!!!! Really!!!!! Well, all I can say is Alice had one hell of a HOT HOT HOT DREAM!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, I wrote it as a dreaming being that neither one was into sharing anymore. LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing. A dream that was HOT!!

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 4:19 AM Title: Outtakes-Foursome

Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2013 6:16 PM Title: Submit Forever

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!!!! You have done an amazing job with this story. I have loved every chapter. Thank you so much for sharing this awesome story with us. I am sad that it has come to an end. I am also excited to see what you come up with next. 



Author's Response:

Thanks I hope to have more coming  soon have about nine stories swimming in my head. So, favorite me to see what I come up with next. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2013 8:16 AM Title: Submit Forever

Loved the ending as much as the beginning.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2013 1:52 AM Title: Submit Forever

ARE U DOING A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY???? U truely are a talented writer & I absolutly loved each & everyone of ur Updates!! This story truely was intriging a truely captivated me leaving me unable & unwilling to put down reading this amazingly beautifully well written story. Thank for all the time & effort u put into writting this story.I truely understand the hard work & dedication put forth.  Also I would love to see OUTTAKES for this story would be greatly appreciated. I am rating this story as a #10 out of #10!!

PLEASE LET ME KNOW ASAP IF U DOING A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY!!! I HOPE THE ANWSER IS A YES!!!!



Author's Response:

I haven't planned a sequel at the moment, LOL. I have about nine stories swirling around in my head dying to be written. Outtakes will be coming soon there are at least two with beta as we speak. I will be sure to send a message if a sequel comes about. Thanks for the wonderful words of praise!!.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 10:51 PM Title: Submit Forever

oooh yummy play times.   Like the new pearl collar.  

TY for writing and sharing

ty



Author's Response:

You are so welcome!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Outtakes should be coming soon!! **squeal**



Author's Response:

You are so welcome!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Outtakes should be coming soon!! **squeal**

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2013 1:50 AM Title: Till Death Do Us Part II

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Thanks glad that you liked. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2013 2:24 AM Title: Till Death Do Us Part I

Love how the girls were with Bella and not letting her use the phone to talk to Edward. I can so see them doing that. I don't like that Rose pulled the Domme card and made Emmett go get Edward's phone. To me that was just wrong. 



Author's Response:

Yes, so not cool of her to do that. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 8:36 PM Title: Till Death Do Us Part I

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: snotoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 5:13 PM Title: Till Death Do Us Part II

Enjoy the stroy glad to see them married, looking forward to the outtake



Author's Response:

There is one more chapter...the epilogue. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 5:34 AM Title: Till Death Do Us Part II

Ohhh, I cant believe that it is over... bring on more!!!

Author's Response:

I still have a couple of outtakes to bring about so, this will extend it some. I also have the epilogue coming. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 6:42 PM Title: Till Death Do Us Part II

Wonderful wedding.    Sweet ceremony and nice speeches.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 6:32 PM Title: Till Death Do Us Part I

ok I get the no seeing each other, but taking thier phones is ridiculous.  Glad E found Marcus to take care of the meadow.



Author's Response:

Yep, they went above and beyond on that one too. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 2:55 PM Title: Till Death Do Us Part II

beautiful! It was perfect!  can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

One more than a couple of outtakes. Thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 3:27 AM Title: My Perfect Submissive

I have absolutly adored reading this truely captivating & beauitfully well written story. I would love for u to write a sequel to this story will u????

Thanks for all ur hard work & dedicatin



Author's Response:

I don't know...Wow I had thought about it. I tell you what by the time I post the last chapter I should have a better idea. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: karemay Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 2:15 AM Title: My Perfect Submissive

Great story.



Author's Response:

Thanks there should be more coming. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 4:16 PM Title: My Perfect Submissive

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 5:20 AM Title: My Perfect Submissive

yummy chapter.   Glad James got such a nice reception in jail.

yummy end too



Author's Response:

Glad you liked...we couldn't have him making friends. So, we had to do something!! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you like the ending....

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 4:48 AM Title: My Perfect Submissive

Love this chapter. Edward was so bad during Bella's birthday party. lol. To be busted by your dad!!!!! lol!!!!!! I am sad to hear that this story is coming to an end. 



Author's Response:

Yep, it was sad to write the final chapter....but you have until 41 and there will be a couple of outtakes as well. I hate to part from all the reader. I guess I need to get some of my other stories online!!!!


Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2013 6:11 AM Title: Wedding Plans, Trips, and Other Things

love it and cant wait for more! Hope you can update again soon.



Author's Response:

Have three chapter with beta as we speak...one of my girls is on vacation, and I have been working on getting into the Mine to Mark contest, So, had a deadline. Now, that we have managed that we will be back soon...very soon. As always thanks for reading and reviewing. Come on over to Mine to Mark on fanfiction read the stories and vote.


There are 10 stories and they are awesome o/s, and vote.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4372463/

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2013 6:17 AM Title: Wedding Plans, Trips, and Other Things

Love the dress! Perfect for a girl with tats on her back!



Author's Response:

I thought so too. Especially being that she had recently had them reworked and was free to show them to the world. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I have entered the Mine to Mark contest over on Fanfiction, you should come along and vote for you favorite story! :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 10:25 PM Title: Wedding Plans, Trips, and Other Things

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

As always thank for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2013 8:34 PM Title: Wedding Plans, Trips, and Other Things

LOVE the dress.   Alice being there all the time would be annoying.  She needs to quit pushing so much with the playing thing.



Author's Response:

Yeah, tell me about...she had reading wanting to know if it happens....LOL Maybe in an outtake who knows what I have up my sleeve. Glad you liked the dress!! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 5:43 PM Title: Tied Up

Loved the ring. Another GREAT chapter!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks...I thought the ring was beautiful while cybershopping. Thank God, Edward has a big bank account!! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 8:02 PM Title: Tied Up

Lovely Ring.    Yummy end.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks glad you liked. As always thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 7:49 PM Title: Coming Out Of My Shell

Glad the girls are all doing well.     Yummy start to play time.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and review. Have to have good play time.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 7:29 PM Title: Every Which Way But Loose

Wow  Victoria came through for them huh?



Author's Response:

Yeah, made her good in this one. My other one she is as bad as James. Need a new antagonist. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 7:18 PM Title: These Dreams

hmm   Dont think james would quit without being killed.  Doesnt seem like he';d give up.

Glad they have Seth helping.



Author's Response:

Thanks gosh for Seth. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 7:08 PM Title: Backed Into A Corner

Glad she talked to rose at least.    Hope she'll be ok



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 3:02 AM Title: Coming Out Of My Shell

Love it!!!!!!! But to be honest, I did not think he would propose like that. LOVE IT though.



Author's Response:

I wasn't planning on him to propose either, I had actually planned a chapter called bend knee where, he would take her to the space needle, and a candle lit dinner. When I got to writing the chapter and had her get all emotional....I thought he has to let her know how invested he was....wait until you visualize his tattoo. I could have went that way, but I went with the ring. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 3:02 AM Title: Every Which Way But Loose

So glad that James is going away. I hope that he is someone bitch when he gets there. lol. Glad that Charlie could help like he did. Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks it means a lot to hear that you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 11:30 PM Title: These Dreams

NO NO NO he has not suffered enough!!!!!!!!!! He needs to have everything that he did to the girls done to him. He needs to have his nippled clamped, he needs a dildo shoved up his ass, he needs his skin craved on and tattooed. And his dick pierced without medication. 



Author's Response:

I agree, but we are going to send him to jail where he can be someone's bitch....day in and day out....for life.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 9:45 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?

I couldn't send you a private message since it was disabled; don't worry, I totally understand that. I'd be happy to answer any questions you have in regards to your story--to the best of my ability of course. You should be able to send me a message through my profile on here.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 9:42 PM Title: Backed Into A Corner

I am glad that everyone is working with Edward to help protect Bella. Well, that is everyone is helping each other except Bella. 



Author's Response:

We all need a little help sometimes.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 8:53 PM Title: You Sexy Thing

Some of Bella's answers conflicted with her hard limits. And when she was asked what attributes she liked, she listed off a list of objects and toys. That is not what "attributes" are. Attributes are qualities or characteristics, usually of a person. Some PhD of English you've created. 

I understand that some readers would love this, but I like to read stuff that is better researched--especially when it comes to BDSM.



Author's Response:

I understand if you want to depart from the story, thanks for reading and reviewing.  I know nothing about the community, and I am very open to suggestions. There are some issues with things, like she shouldn't call Edward... Sir...that is disrespectful to Jasper.  I was also told that she would never clean the playroom, Dom's wouldn't behave that way. Acutally, her lists and his have both need some major work. I looked over a list of several Doms and put it together. I am sorry if you don't like the story, as that is your opinion. Sorry to have disappointed.  I am working with PTB on issues...so maybe I can get them worked out.

The attributes I talked about  is a multiple choice list. This was a listed of questions one dom asked his submissived it was a multiple choice and I choice from the list he provided. I got this from the internet if you must know. The whole questionaire was something I found and incorporated. I guess I didn't covey that enough in the story. I wish I was smart enough to be a PhD, but I am not so this is what I get.

Once again....thanks for the review!! Happy New Year!

Reviewer: msbull Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 7:47 PM Title: Tied Up

Beautiful ring!!!!

Author's Response:

I thought so too...thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 4:37 PM Title: Coming Out Of My Shell

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 7:01 PM Title: Every Which Way But Loose

THANK YOU FOR THR NEW YEARS GIFT AND MAY THE NEW YEAR BRING YOU NOTHING BUT JOY AND MUCH LOVE. LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.



Author's Response:

Your welcome and thanks. I hope your New Year is safe, healthy, and happy!! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 6:29 PM Title: Every Which Way But Loose

Great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 5:46 AM Title: These Dreams

holy crow, she did exact some awesome justice here... all of the ladies did.... and TY very much for the help, Seth.... Again, TY for Not leaving us holding our breathes in anticipation!  this was huge for Bella's healing as well as Alice.... Edward was very strong for her, since he was helping her behind the scenes...



Author's Response:

I was going to push till the end of the story, but when I got to talking to my beta. I decided to get him out of the picture sooner. So, ding dang James is gone!! :) I had to have someone help the girls, and Bella didn't want Edward. So, Seth to the rescue.  The next chapter, Edward will bring us into the future with the couple and their recovery. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 5:15 AM Title: Backed Into A Corner

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it. As always thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 4:42 AM Title: Backed Into A Corner

wow what a  chapter... so good.... TY for the chapter And a very Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

Happy New Year to you, too. I hope that your New Year is happy, healthy, and safe. Thanks for reading and reviewing. In about 15 minutes, eastern standard time, I will be adding the next chapter. Be on the look out.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 5:15 PM Title: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....

Loved both pov's and the fact that you don't just retell the same thing it helps to understand how they are thinking loved it great first scene 



Author's Response:

In chapters 33 and 34 I will do a little retelling...but there was a purpose for me doing doing so. Thanks for reading and reviewing. So, glad that you like.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 4:55 PM Title: Natural High

I love how it's moving along so far . Can't wait to read the rest !



Author's Response:

Happy! Happy! That you are loving the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 7:21 AM Title: I Touch Myself

That was so good I can 't wait to read more !!



Author's Response:

You are still early in the story, you will get plenty!! LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 6:00 AM Title: In The Air Tonight

I think he really can help Bella to heal from her past with evil James. I love this story :)



Author's Response:

So, happy you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 5:33 AM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now

Loved it I love how they both reacted to seeing each other . James is a monster my heart broke for things he did to her . I am hooked on your story !!



Author's Response:

Yay me!! I love it when people come and then they are like 'we loved it so hooked' makes me feel good about my story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 5:32 AM Title: You Sexy Thing

I think they will be a perfect match . Can't wait till they get to meet 



Author's Response:

They will be...thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 8:36 PM Title: Don't You Want Me?

I can tell already from her list of hard limits that James was a sick SOB but I can't wait to see how the cennection whit her and Edward builds . Really loving this so far 



Author's Response:

Glad to hear that you are enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 8:17 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?

This looks really good I can't wait to read more and see where you take this



Author's Response:

Thanks glad you came along to read....I hope you enjoy. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 5:27 PM Title: Down On The Corner

I hope the new POV won't be James yet. They're discoverying so much about them and they need to enjoy and be more solid and clear about their feelings before he comes into the scene. But life doesn't always goes as we want.

I loved the collar and that she'll wear it at all times.



Author's Response:

Things will be ok for a while, but he does make an appearance. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: crazygirl2929 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 3:48 PM Title: Paging Dr. Cullen

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 11:24 AM Title: Paging Dr. Cullen

I think she is being so foolish. I get her logic & protectiveness but it still seems foolish.  I guess that's why she was such an easy mark for James in the past?  I can't wait to read more, great suspense.:-)



Author's Response:

Of course she is, she is the one in this story who does something foolish. Like Edward did in new moon. Only difference....they don't spare for months on end. Glady you like the suspense. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 9:19 AM Title: Paging Dr. Cullen

hmmm is Victoria really an ally though?

Hmm now what did E mean by that?   He'd leave her??? or would crack down on her more? 

Guess we'll have to wait and see.



Author's Response:

Yes, it will all come out in the end....or it's coming out soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing No worried all hea here.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 7:08 AM Title: Kitchen Rendezvous

I'm so anxious for their scene. I'm sure Edward planned something interesting and which both will enjoy a lot.



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm sure they will enjoy....LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 2:49 AM Title: Paging Dr. Cullen

Ok, refresh my memory. Irina is Edward real estate person about the gated community, right??? So, what does Charlie have to do with Irina??? 

Is Victoria really an ally???? Or is she just trying to get Bella to trust her so they can take her???? 

What does Edward mean that their relationship has to change if Bella does not tell him what she has planned????

As always I can't wait for more and more.



Author's Response:

Okay, Charlie has nothing to do with Irina, but James has something to do with both. James sent Charlie the text. He also tried to get her body close to him. You will have to see in the next chapter.

Yes, Victoria will help good Vicky in this one.

Edward tries to push her to tell him, he wants her to include him. To trust him, but she is trying to protect him. 

You will get a better idea when 32 comes out.

As always thanks for reading and reviewing. Two more chapters and James is no longer with us. The all Bella and Edward show. LOL

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 1:04 AM Title: I'm So Excited

Edward is very thorough which is good for oth of them. From reading the contract we know what he thinks and wants, it's now time to see about Bella.



Author's Response:

Now, you going to get into the fun part of the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 11:44 PM Title: Everyday Is A Winding Road

They almost got caught, or the officer was a bit of a voyer ;). 

Charlie had every right to be upset but after they explained things to him, it was better. Knowing his parents has to make Charlie feel better about Bella moving in with Edward.



Author's Response:

I had one of those moments in my life, who doesn't? However, the cop didn't flirt. LOL Yeah, Charlie and Edward are pretty solid. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 11:30 PM Title: Moving On Up

Meeting Charlie went well I think. Edward did get interrogated but he gets why Charlie did it. Honestly he's very supportive of Bella's choices especially after what she went through.

Edward might not have done vanilla in his life but it seems him and Bella will handle it rather well.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I wanted to Charlie to be really understanding. I would want my dad to be like Charlie. Edward does really well with him, it doesn't matter as much as long as he is with Bella. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 11:12 PM Title: Rehab

Rose made the plan and it seems no one will question her about it. It will be interesting to see if sometime she and Edward don't see eye to eye. 

For now Bella's life is going to change drastically, it's something she needs even if she isn't entirely happy about it.



Author's Response:

Rose is a force that is for sure. Bella will find her happy she just don't know it yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 10:50 PM Title: Disturbia Part 2

James is a sick man who has been able to tweak things his way for a long time, but it can't last forever. Sadly that hasn't been the case so far. But Bella and Rose will find a way with help of course, but they will.



Author's Response:

Yeah, they will catch up to him in the long run. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 10:36 PM Title: Disturbia

Bella a nd Rose knew each other and went through similar things, that's a surprise to all, no doubt ut it will be helpful as long as they can both be safe.



Author's Response:

Yeah, there are a couple of suprises in this story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 10:14 PM Title: Excite Me

I must agree there's something else going on with Bella, something huge that James left her with. Hopefully Rose will be able to help her not only today but in the future, especially if James is moving into the area.
I guess more people will have to be involved in this if it's the case, I mean parents.

Author's Response:

Yeah, a lot of people will be there for her. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 10:03 PM Title: But Whips and Chains....

I liked that they got the time to just be them outside the house, not only for the teasing but for them to feel more comfortable with each other. I hope the chocolate doesn't get Bella in trouble with Jasper.

Author's Response:

Naw, he doesn't mind. They are not that strick on her. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 9:51 PM Title: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....

It was intense, and really good. Everyone enjpyed it it seems. Edward wants her and Jasper is certain he'll be more than good for her. We just need to find out Bella's thoughts.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 6:39 PM Title: Paging Dr. Cullen

Loved it as always can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

More should be coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 12:49 PM Title: Doctor, Doctor

:-).  Good use of an empty office!

Thanks for the update. 



Author's Response:

Your Welcome and we couldn't have an office empty, needed to be occupied. LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 4:59 AM Title: Doctor, Doctor

The medical scene was fun. Even though fisting scares me  lol. 



Author's Response:

LOL I hear ya,..had to do a lot of research for that one. I could have went differently, but didn't want to make it too weird, fisting was bad enough. Thanks for reading and reviewing. For the record, I'm right there with ya!! :)

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 3:40 AM Title: Doctor, Doctor

LOVED it!!!!!!!! Loved the fisting. James is getting brave. LOVED the comment she made about tieing James up and beating his ass.



Author's Response:

Thanks I always worry about writing the more sexual scenes in the story, but tried to do a lot of research for that. Yeah, he should be getting his soon, very soon. So, that my couple will have a little playtime before it's all over. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2012 7:53 AM Title: Doctor, Doctor

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Cevvin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:59 AM Title: Doctor, Doctor

Yummy

Author's Response:

Glad you liked, thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 9:24 PM Title: Doctor, Doctor

Wow.



Author's Response:

I hope that is a good WOW!! Thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 9:01 PM Title: Doctor, Doctor

yummy play time.    Wonder why Em was looking at her wierd.   Becuase she didnt want to go to Cali?  or something else.



Author's Response:

Emmett can't understand why she doesn't want another restraining order. He has also talked to Rose and Edward about Bella's plan, he wants something to protect her. He didn't realize Rose's order was dead too. He is working an angle for Edward. Or, this was my thoughts with the look. Any of these could work.

I think. LOL I can't remember what I was thinking at the time. I wrote the chapter. Will have to read back, in order, to wrap my mind around it. It will come out in the end.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Nellybean0710 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 6:49 PM Title: Bound By My Love

very good I can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thanks so glad that you liked it, I might not be adding anymore chapters until after the first of the year. Just speculation mainly...the holidays have slowed all of us down some. Thanks for reading and reviewing, make sure to favorite or alert so that way you have the latest chapter.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 12:27 PM Title: Rehab

Awesome chapter Lovin it

Author's Response:

I am glad, I was worried there for a little bit. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:06 AM Title: But Whips and Chains....

Awesome chapter really liking it

Author's Response:

Thanks glad that you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 12:54 AM Title: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....

so good cant wait for their first scene together

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 12:42 AM Title: Natural High

great chapter cant wait for more

Author's Response:

Glad that you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 6:44 PM Title: I Touch Myself

hot hot hot

Author's Response:

Yes, definitely...thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 6:27 PM Title: In The Air Tonight

Liking this story its sweet and gentle Great chapter

Author's Response:

Glad that you liked, thanks for reading and reviewing. I love to see reviews in my inbox!!

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 6:36 AM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now

its getting really good

Author's Response:

Glad that you liked it....it will get a little rough soon, but hang on okay. I promise better times. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Happy Reading.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 6:24 AM Title: You Sexy Thing

liking this story

Author's Response:

Thanks... I am glad that you like. Thanks for reading and reviewing. As always Happy Reading :)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 2:41 PM Title: Bound By My Love

Oh no, I'm all caught up.  Great play scene. I wonder how she thinks she could over take James when if he's been arching her he knows what she's up to. I mean Edward & Seth do. If Seth is watching or one of his hired people is watching James they know he's following Bella.  They are following James I hope.

hope you can update soon.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I have to figure out something and Seth is on top of it. This is why Bella is save and Edward hasn't blown a gasket about her being up to something. She gets help is all I can say at this point. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:38 PM Title: Bound By My Love

Wow I usually get bored with unimportant details in a story and find myself skipping over many paragraphs but I have to say this is one fic I can't get enough of and have to read every word! Love it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks I do that too had a lot of stories here lately that I skip to the dialogue. I didn't want to bog it down with information. I'm glad that you liked thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:29 AM Title: Bound By My Love

I am so glad that Bella got her release. I am glad that she has given Edward some insight on her plan for James. 

Well, maybe I can get some house work done now and finish decorating my house for Christmas now!!!! LOL!!!!!!! Can't wait for you to update again. 



Author's Response:

It won't be long working on the next chapter and my betas are pretty good about getting back quickly. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:00 AM Title: You've Got A Friend In Me

It's nice how happy they are in their vanilla relationship, can't wait to read how they do in their D/s. relationship.



Author's Response:

The D/s will pick up more and get stronger through the story, by the end they should be more into that aspect. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 2:38 AM Title: Please Release Me

I am glad that Bella did ok with not knowing what was going to happen. I bet she could have killed him at the end of this chapter. lol. 

I have already told you some things I want to happen to James. I think he should get done to him everything he has done to the girls and as many times as it was done to the girls. He needs to suffer. 



Author's Response:

His time will come I promise something evil and rather nasty will be fall Mr. James. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 2:38 AM Title: Every Day of the Week

I do not blame Bella for being upset with Edward for not telling her about James. When he did not tell her I knew that was going to cause a problem with them. I can not believe that James went through the house like that. To me that would not be his style. His style would be to go through it without anyone being able to tell he was there. I am glad that Edward and Bella worked through him not telling her. But Bella is doing the same thing to Edward by not telling him of her plan!!!!!! What is Edward's reasoning for not telling Bella what the scene is going to be????



Author's Response:

He wants to make her stronger, you are not usually allowed to know the plans. This was something that was done to help her mind, he wants to push her because he knows she is up to something. James didn't break into the house....he's behind it, but he didn't break in. We will found out who did soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 2:37 AM Title: Prisoner of Love

I like when Bella is snarky with Eddie!!!!!!!! I am glad that they both made it through THEIR 1st punishment!!!!!!!!! I could feel how hard it was on Bella to have disappointed her Master. Great job writing this chapter. 

I just have to tell you that I am loving reading your story. One draw back is that I am getting NOTHING done to my house. No cleaning, No decorations for Christmas. All I want to do is read your story. I pull up about 5 chapters at a time and read them off line when I can, then I review and send to you at one time. GREAT GREAT STORY!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank You!! I'm sure your house isn't as happy with the situation, but it warms my heart. :) You are getting closer to the last chapters written maybe you could catch a break while I work on another chapter. 

Of course, I could recommend my other stories. LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chains of Love

OMGosh!!!!!! She blacked out. I hope she is ok. What has Edward found out about Irina??



Author's Response:

She will be fine, and is it sad to say I don't remember LOL. I have a hard time remebering what I put in them. Just the basic inform. Irnia will show soon I promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 2:33 AM Title: Sunday Kind Of Love

Now I know what you mean about Edward not being able to get a hold of Irina. Does James have her????? I do not blame Bella for being scared, I would be too. 



Author's Response:

You will have to wait and see...I don't think that Irnia has been found yet. She will show up soon. Yeah, I would be scared too. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:00 PM Title: Easy, Peaceful Feeling

He's right to have trust issues.   Aghhh, it's getting scary!

Love the ILY's



Author's Response:

Yep, and she's not much better with trust. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:31 PM Title: Down On The Corner

A little raunchy play time;-)



Author's Response:

Always like a little play time. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 8:21 AM Title: Bound By My Love

I am glad she told him what was going on I cant wait for his reaction.  I think she was about to catch fire if she didnt get release ;)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I thought so too. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 8:10 AM Title: Bound By My Love

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 7:34 AM Title: Please Release Me

I hope Bella is planing on taking James balls and pulling them over his head and shove them in his mouth and make him choke.  



Author's Response:

I definitely have evil plans for James. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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