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Reviewer: Flora Mile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 9

Hey darling, get the next chapter to you soon. Just changed my email address and though I am receiving mail, I cant get any out. The new address is as follows: famaggiolo @tpg. com.au just take the spacing out.

Love ya chica.
Firoella

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

you have done a great job of cloaking your mystery.  You pull me so deep into thier relationship I get this false sense of security then you remind me of the angsty stuff.  Great job.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 8

I loved the reconnecting.  I really wish Max would talk.  Great chapter.  And M - you can still write the lemons.  Wow is it hot in here?

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 7

I loved the intimacy that they were able to experience.  IF I were one of thier older children I would definitely have anger towards my father.  Great chapter babe.

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 9

hmmm, I don't like what is going on behind the scenes. Scared for the Cullens and all the family. Meanwhile I was blessed to be there when my daughters hormones struck lol. Those wide eyes and the blush that rose from her neck to her forehead the first time she saw a boy she thought was "hot" was hysterical. Poor Edward, he is going to have his hands full with all his children and their many many interests.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

Billy Black you need to be roasted on a fire.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

In a family when Mama and daddy have problems there is at least one child that will get involved. Most boys take up for their mother. Exception she is a b..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Tribe must be the Quilettes. The Person on the other line must be one of them.

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

We get a show down between Sam & Edward??? SA-WEEEET! I'm looking forward to that!!!! How cute was Edward being protective of Lexy??? Loved it!!!! I can't wait for more!!! 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

you can not have 7 kids and be weak and pathetic.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter! Thnks for the family tree as well! Very useful reference.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter.  Glad they have set Sam a little straight.   awww for Alexis.  Hope someone takes out Nadia before one of the kids gets hurt.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

Edward's reaction to the instant attraction between Alexis and Rio made me giggle, he's a typical, overprotective father who's not prepared to see his "little" girl grow up.

A lovely view of the family dynamic adjusting itself to Edward's renewed presence.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 9

Beautiful, wonderful, amazing.  This just keeps getting better and better!  Love that Edward can now sympathise with Charlie, because Lexi may have just found her "Edward".  You have done such a wonderful job with Lexi & Tif.  Seem so real and such a combination of each of their parents.  As for Josh, Jack & Nick...whew.  See lots of sequels here (I hope!)  Love your stories! XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

Slow is good ...gives m e a chance to savor!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved this chapter. Glad that Edward and Bella talked to their older children. Can't wait for the camping trip. I know Edward and Sam will talk/fight/argue. Will Edward talk to Nicholas and Jackson also????? 

Loved Edward's reaction to Rio!!!!!!!! He is going to get sooo paid back. 

I am trying to think of anyone from the first story that Edward or Bella made mad to want get back at them. I am coming up a blank. I just hope that none of the kids get hurt. 

Reviewer: Prillylove25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 9

So looking forward to Sam and Edwards talk. I think I will have tissues handy. 

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 9

OMG As usual I love this story! This was another great chapter of yours and looking forward to MORE!!

But I am glad to see that the older kids are going to support their parents, especially Sam... Cant wait for the show down and the wedding!

Thanks and please please update soon!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

I am glad that most of the childern understand that Edward was'nt the only one that walked away from the relationship between him and Bella.  But being left at home to see Bella's heartbreak, had to be much harder on them.   

Because in the end. They both hurt the childern.

 

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

oh loved it can see it coming but edward is an alpha male an should show his boys who is boss no matter what......

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

This is really amazing, and I love it.  The build up is slow, and I am wondering about so many of the people.  How many chapters do you see this becoming?  Looking forward to more.  xoxo, Kasi~

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great update. Can't

n wait for more

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

wow, Bella sure put Sam in his place quick! can't wait for that talk. please tell me Rio has nothing to do with the revenge plot! Anderson's group is so detailed, how did that bitch get thru!?

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

Love it!! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 9

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 9

Totally shit day yesterday and so don't want to de with reality today. Seeing this update totally is making it ok! Love this story - you have a gift !!! Thank you

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

Dad needs to work a little to set every thing right. Edward definitely dropped the ball where his family is concerned.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it!  One thing, is the word "sued" here, ""You seemed to like the sued " supposed to be "suede"?

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

Your chapters never disappoint. I think itmismvery realistic that they would and need to rearrange their D's lifestyle as they grow. Many things have changed over the years. It cracks me up that the granddaughters know that Carlisle and Esme are into the lifestyle also. I think that Sam will make Edward suffer as much as possible. That's what teenagers do right?

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 8

I absolutely LOVED that chapter! It's so good to see them connecting again! I think it's sweet that Sam is protective of his mom...and yes Edward owes them all an apology but hopefully his kids won't hold it against him for too long... Let Sam & Edward have it out and get over it in private ...and let edwardhear him but also Sam needs to realize Edward is Bella's husband and stop competing for her attention! ;)

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love love this chapter! so gald to see Edward and Bella are getting back on track and reconnecting. Now I only hope that Sam is not to harsh on Edward... looking forward to more reading especially the family reconnect time, the ceremony. Hope your thumb is healling nicley and please update SOON!!!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

Excellent! Happy to see Edward and Bella reconnecting more and more. Love the scene with Edward and the tadpoles. Too cute! Uh-oh on Sam at the airport. Highly doubtful that he will let anyone off the hook. I'd almost rather he didn't. Edward needs the opportunity to step in and take control of his family again. He needs to be the head of the house .... Maybe taking Sam off for a discussion ... Or maybe Carlisle needs to step in as patriarch. However you pull it off, I know it'll be good!

Reviewer: bookonabeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

GAH! Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the Edward/Sam showdown. I hope Bella steps in and has a few words.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 8

Don't make us wait to long.  Great update

 

 

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 8

Love the chapter. Looking forward to some dad and son time for Edward and Sam

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

Still....my favorite couple!  Love how you transitioned them into a more fitting relationship.  The re proposal?  Perfect!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 8

Little undecided about this story.  Not sure if I am more in love with the hawt love scenes between E & B or the fantastic part of the story with all the kids. You have made each of the kids so individual and interesting I keep getting pulled into their stories. So hard to wait for your updates, but you give us such great, long chapters that I can easily forgive.   Torn, but loving it!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

LOVE this update!!!!!!! Love little MAX!!!!! I feel sorry for Sam. I am thinking that he is not going to be to friendly to Edward. Maybe not really ugly but not real friendly either. Love Edward and Bella in the playroom. I just hope that Edward does not go all soft on Bella in the playroom. Hope he still keeps his "DOM Card"!!!!!! lol

Reviewer: sjdavis84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 8

I just wanted to say that I love your stories. I have re-read them and still love them. I get so excited to see updates. Just wanted to let you know. :)

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved the update and I'm so happy the E & B are reconnection! I think Sam should bust Edwards balls and really make him pay for his neglect to Bella and the rest of his family! Give him a good "Bella-like" stubborn run for his money!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

I think that Edward is getting off to easy.  He all but left Bella to deal with the childern by herself.  He went and played big shot, and didn't give a shit about them.

If he had put forth ANY effort his childern wouldn't be so pissed at him.  Its not just Sam, I think all of their childern are seeing/feeling his neglect.  Not just Bella.  Although he had push her aside for a himself and his wants.  He is feeling bad now, but it's just because he got her picture that he returned.  He thought she was screwing around on him.  Before the picture he was didn't give a flying shit to a degree.

~~"I spoke to Jasper earlier on and he seems to think that Sam is really pissed with me because of the way that I've treated you and I'm beginning to realize just how this rift between us has affected our children."~~  Pretty telling sentence there I think."~~

Looking forward to more!! :)

 

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 8

oh dear, poor guy. Finally getting happy with his wife again and so many more problems keep popping up. Smexy times was hot hot hot. Wish my old fart hubby and I had that kind of energy lol. We only have 2 kids too lol.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 8

So good!   

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

looking forward to omre 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

wonderful chapter.  Like all the vow plans.  LOL for the men keeping the women in line and not going overboard.   Can kinda understand Sam's anger.   Yummy playtime and after.  Max is so cute.

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love it 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

i know teenagers are stubborn, but if he sees how happy Bella is and that Edward has changed his ways, maybe he wont be so angry and the animosity will only last till that have a father / son heart to heart?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) Sam's anger is understandable, but hopefully they can sort through their problems

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

Hope your thumb is healing well! I love this just like the other People Like Us! So really forward for the next update! Thanks

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

This was really sweet and interesting.  It was very well done.  I hope Max talks to his parents soon.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

So excite when I realize dot day that you updated! Hoping your thumb is feeling better. It always reminds not to take the little things for granted when something like that happens.

 

wonderful chapter. I'm glad Edward and Bella are reconnecting. I'm enjoying getting to know the "kids" and watching their interaction with each other and their grandparents. Carlisle is always my favorite so love to see his wisdom come forth!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 7

I love the tattoos!!! 

I really hope that Max opens up to them about the scary man. 

Excellent chapter my friend. And the shower non-sex was HOT!!!!!

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

As always you don't disappoint...love this family!  Hope your thumb is better so you can keep the updates coming.

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2013 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

I just love this fic! The reconnection between Edward and Bella is glorious. 

Well I am hoping that soon someone will start putting the pieces together and realize the connections between all the weird things going on!

Will be anxiously awaiting the next update! Hope it's soon, and that thumb of yours is healing!

peach 

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 7

omg Michele...be careful with those hands hun!!!! Hope you are feeling better now. Who knew when I was scrolling around for something new to read long ago that I would come to love a couple so much and now I get to love their whole family. Its a wonderful thing you do! Please...can you send Carlisle to me...gah he is so dang sexy and wise!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

I hope your thumb is doing better. That sounds like it would really hurt. Hope it heals fast and painless.

I am truly loving this story. It is so indepth. I want to know what the next level of D/s is!!!! What does Edward really want from Bella and their D/s relationship?? 

Can't wait to find out what is happening with their kids in the next chapter. I love little Max. That part of the story was sweet and also sad. Poor Max. I hope he gets over his fear soon. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 7

I absolutely loved it!!! How sweet was little Max's reunion with his daddy? I hope it's that sweet with all the kids although I'd like to see Sam be in protection mode of his mother for awhile :) the guy max is scared of is that stable guy right? The one that claimed to be fixing a pipe in the house in Tahoe? I love this story can't wait to see what's up next for our favorite couple!!!! And I love the tatoos!

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 7

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

Ouch! Hope you're all healed.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

That was amazing :D  I really loved it! Their tattoos are PERFECT!  I am so sorry about your thumb, but so happy you're feeling well enough to type now :D

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 7

Know I say it every single chapter, but I love these two and I love this huge, wacky, wonderful family that you contine to share with us.  Wish Max and told them his worry tho. Love that the kids know about their parents problems, but don't know. Just plain love this story!  Take care of you, I remember 9 stitches in my left thumb from TRYING to remove carpet in my living room about a year ago.  Actually carpet knife 9, Cheri 0 so I understand what you are going through. Hope to see  you and this story again soon.   XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 7

poor Max, i do hope he does say more about the bad man......Bella will be so surprised and happy with he renewing of the vows! so happy they are getting back on track. Hope you heal quickly!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

Michele~ I loved this wonderful update, thank you so much for sharing it with us all. JUst love that they are getting back to each other and I hope that Max trusts in them enough to tell tem what is bugging him and who the scary boogieman is.  I am currently speculating that this may have somethign to do with the deranged doctor who I am sure is blaming the Cullen family for being caught.  Hugs, hope oyur thumb is better soon.  OUCH!  xoxo, Kasi~

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

That was wonderful and fantastic!   Poor sweet Maxwell!   What a family!   Love this story!   Hope the finger is better! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 7

Aww poor little Max.    Think the revow thing is a great idea.  Paul is cool.  LOVE the tattoos!!!

Reviewer: bella71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

I am really loving this story and cant wait to read bella's reaction to the revow ceremony .. hope yor thumb is ok .. I have done that and know how much it hurts and is a pain to do anything with../

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

great as always already looking forward to the next chapter no pressure at all lol

Reviewer: colinne75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

♥love it

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

I think Alexis needs to work for Uncle Emmett. She has the mind for it. She also needs to tell Jasper or Carlisle about that guy. 

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 6

Boy, love that Alexis! She just lays it all out there! So the Cullens have an interloper, just wish that everyone noticing weird things would talk about them to each other!

So glad that Bella and Edward have reconnected and are dealing together. They are so strong like that.

Enjoyed Jasper's talk with Jackson, though I can't wait until Jack talks to Edward about it! And just wondering, since Nick cracked the code to the "dungeon" 😄, and then Bella felt that something was out of place there, does that mean that someone else has gotten access to it too? Hmm? Lots of questions swirling as you lead us on another fantastic journey! Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon please!

peach 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

I remember now why I enjoyed your other story so much. You put a lot of substance into your chapters. They are like entire stories each on their own the reader gets so very wrapped up in the characters. You make them real people. Thank you! It is such a pleasure to read.

Now that I've come to the end of the chapters that are posted, I do have to say .... arghhhhhh ... Not a big cliffie, but I *****NEED***** to know what comes next NOW!!!!! Hurry and post the next chapter pleeeeeeeeeease!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 5

Excellent lemon with Edward and Bella. Glad that they are reconnecting. 

Wonderful growls from Carlsle and Jasper. Very glad to see the younger generation stand up for themselves. 

 

Intrigued with the mystery intruder and really wanting to hear how Jasper starts the conversation with Jackson. 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 4

Yum! Angsty but so good!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow! Love the scene! Love the chapte! Love Garrett!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

I always love the pictures you include! 

This chapter sure piles on the angst! Love that Garrett didn't react to Edward's anger. Eager to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just came across your sequel ..... So very excited!!! Off to a good start. I love your descriptstions and writing. You make all the children so very real. Sad to see Edward and Bella are not in a good place. I'm going to enjoy seeing where they lead!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 6

DO NOT PANIC!!!!!!!!  Are you crazy!!!!!! Some one is missing with your favorite family and you say DO NOT PANIC!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!! I know you will not let something to serious happene to our favorite family. I am questioning the older kids. They have been told to be on their toes and watch out for strange things. They have seen some things but have not reported it to any of the adults. That worries me. Can't wait for your next update. This story is just as good as your other one. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

How did you know I would panic at the end,LOL! Thanks for the a/n to calm me down. Loved Jackson's convos with jasper and Alexis. Can't wait to see what she and Tiffany Anne dig up.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

thanks for the update...... i loved it! i actually got to read this chapter while sitting on my porch swing outside drinking coffee.....good times!!!!!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wonderful chapter. Thank you for giving us both E/B and the Tahoe side in one chapter.  Was anxious for the Jasper/Jackson talk and it went so well. Love Lexi. Makes me wish I had a twin! I love how in depth I feel with ALL of your characters, of course the pictures help to 'see' them and really feel like you know them.  Silly, but I printed out the pictures in a collage of each family so I could keep it handy while I read and keep everyone straight. Really helps and I so love the 'people' you chose for the kids. Josh & Jared remind me of Em. Tiffany is absolutely a perfect mini Alice and Jack, Lexi, Nick and Sam... perfection! Still wish I could find the PLU picture of Edward holding Jack & Lexi in his arms when they were newborns. That picture haunts me to this day.  Cried happy tears when I saw it and I have never forgotten it.  Too much to ask for it to make its way into this story somehow?  Love the way you write and can't thank you enough for sharing! XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

No panic but Alexis needs to tell Esme, Jasper & her dad....pronto!

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 6

With this story one chapter long or short is never enough.

Lokking forward to reading the next chapter.

Kayla

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

Alexis sounds like one smart cookie.    She's going to be key to figuring this whole thing out.

 

Glad Jazz talked to the boys.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 6

Out of the mouths of babes...Alexis should trust Max's instinct and her own. 

I am loving the character development with this next generation. Very cool! Now I would respectfully request some hot lovin' for the older generation...namely Edward and Bella!!!;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

The whole tribe??? Holy shit! Don't even tell me that whole Jacob nightmare is coming back to haunt them again! Ugh. Can't the dead just stay buried?

I love that Bella and Edward are finding their way back to each other. It is like watching them fall in love again. :)

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

I am loving this story. There are so many dynamics to cover with all of the kids. How do you keep it straight. I keep the 1st chapter in another window to refer back to. It's scary that there is some strange guy wondering around their house. It's very cool that Alexis put Jack at ease. I'm excited to see where his research leads him.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 6

Bella seems to be able to sleep through anything!

Darryl White is obviously a rat in the nest. I hope Alexis tells Jasper about her suspicions.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 6

I am totally not panicking YET.  But I know you will take me on the best roller coaster ride.  Love you and your stories!  Great chapter!!!!  Mwah!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 6

That was amazing :D  I cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: HamHamNation Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 5

Skippy??  I thought his nickname was Sparky....  ???

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

This is a very good chapter.

The plot is already in place.

I look forward to reading more.

thank you

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

great chapter as always well done

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

What a creep that guy was!!! Is he the one watching them all? I'm hooked and look forward to your updates!!!!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 6

Michele~ I love that one of the kids will figure it out before the adults, as always wonderful chapter and story.  Thanks for sharing with us all.  xoxoxo, Kasi~

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