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Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

oooohhhh, this is getting to be a serious mystery. Loved the interaction between the brothers and then the uncle and nephew. This is one of the reasons why I love this story so much. The sense of family is strong and that makes the story strong. Good stuff.

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 6

Can't wait to read more. Really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

I am so glad their are smart Cullen's.  I can't wait to see what happens with Alexis and Tif...these girls seem to be the ones that will find the reason behind all this disruption in between Edward and Bella.  I think it has to go back to Jacob because of the reservation comment last chapter...I am not panicked!  I trust you to do what you do...thanks again for such a wonderful story...I love to escape in a quite place, and read you!  Have a great week.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) loved this

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 6

uh oh, so now there's at least 2 to watch out for...... Loved Jazz's talk with Jackson, that helped him so much as did talking with his twin, i just hope she stays safe if she starts digging around for info......

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

Awesome chapter I love how jasper handled his heart to heart talk with Jackson.  Can't wait to find out more about this Darryl character, I don't like him already for scaring Max.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2013 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

Absolutely wonderful, and boy does Poppa C have his hands full!   PS Any chance E & B will make the two weeks?  Didn't think so!   XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 5

I am really enjoying getting a better look into the kid's lives. It is a little hard to keep them all straight, but each chapter gets a little easier. I love to see tem all interacting as one big unit. I'm so glad that Bella & Edward are getting back on track. That was a sad start to the story, that they were apart and struggling.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh wow, that was amazing :D  I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 5

I am glad that Edward and Bella are having time for each other again. I can not believe that they did not have sex...Paul be damn!!!!!!! lol

Can't wait to read about Jasper and Jackson conversation. 

Who was in the bushes??? Who is this girl??? What did you mean by "the Tribe"??? This is getting good. Can't wait for another update!!!!!!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

interesting for sure I had to finish reading this before I went to bed. I love it michele, thanks for sharing it with us all

 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

OOOh any connection to Jacob or James and Victoria?  

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

hmmmm Jacob back to haunt them. Just bringing the whole family closer than ever.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh mercy, now I have to eally think about this and who's  the caller, her parents huh?  Well lets think about that!    Could it be Jimmy and Vic's child?  I don't recall if they had one or not.  But it could be something to do with that mess since E and B are the ones being zeroed in on, but they are also using their children, this is just so intriguing.......Mercy this is good.   

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

This is getting interesting. I just love this family. I can't believe these kids talked to their Papa C and Jasper that way and they remained rather calm. It was disrespectful and I don't care how old they are. That little girl wouldn't be going on a date after that outburst.

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow this is awesome! I love that Edward and Bella are in the right track again!!! 

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 5

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 5

Fantastic chapter.  In this instance, it seems Carlisle's overprotective instincts are well founded.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh no. What's going on



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Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 5

Nice reconnecting.  I love how in control Bella is and how she isn't letting Edward off the hook. 

The kids, they are kids, and seriously when I was in my late teens/early 20's is when I was the stupidest.  Nice job writing them.

I am seriously wondering who the bad guys are.

Once again thank you so much for writing a sequel.  I am so excited by this.

Happy V Day from Madison, WI

Vicki



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Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

What a cliffhanger. So want to know who these people are and why do hate the Cullen's soooo much. Can't wait to read the next chapter, this is one very exciting story.



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Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it can't wait for more :)



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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

who the hell is that??? one of Jacob's descendants????

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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love that E is paying due attention to B now.

 

hmmm A little more info about the evil ones behind the plot.



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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 5

So intriguing! I love this story!



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 5

looking forward to more 



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Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 5

wow



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)



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Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love it



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Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm so glad you decided to finally continue telling their story! I'm really enjoying it so far and can't wait to see where you take them:)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 2

I have so missed these two!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

It's good to see them connecting again. Too special to let that fail. 

Cant wait to see shat the kids will do...once E&B are back together of course.

The Broken Road That Led Me To You is a great story. Hard to read (sad, shocking, gut wrenching,etc.). We don't give these women enough credit for how incredibly strong they are.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

I just love your stories!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

 I must admit I do find it amusing that Bella cannot feel complete unless she is being bossed about while getting her arse whipped.  I am glad to see that Edward has grown a pair and has now decided that he will take up arms again and sort her out.  Awesome stuff.  ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am soooo loving this story. You are doing an amazing job. I love the strength that Bella has to stand up to Edward. Loved that she told him that he did a shitty job as her Dom. LOL!!!!!

Reviewer: maryef Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

i just started reading the sequel and i am thrilled.  im looking forward to a stronger bella.  I mean really seven kids will do that to you. just saying.  I'm also looking forward to the kids becoming doms and subs. that is going to be good. i cant wait. as always, thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: maryef Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

i am excited to be reading the sequel.  I hope edward is not the asshole he was in the last story.  i guess we'll see.

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 4

Yaaaaay! They're talking and loving on eachother again!!!! I lived seeing an update I thought I would have to wait til next week! So ? Are you updating weekly? Or every other week? I love love live this story!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am so glad they are mending what was broken. I love how Garrett is the big dog in this equation. He wears that role well. I am a little upset with Paul's no sex rule. I wonder if they both will be able to avoid breaking it. ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

I know Edward is suppose to know what Bella needs, but I think Bella and everyone else is being too hard on him. Who safe worded? Did Bella ever go back to Edward and say Master I am ready now to continue. It would not have been right for Edward to push her if she was not ready. It was up to her to tell him. Edward should not have spent so much time away that was wrong. His family needed him and he was not there, but with the D/s situation, I think Bella had to make the first move.

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

So glad they talked and they had Paul and Kate. Hope Kate doesn't get into too much trouble, she was only defending her friend Garrett lol.

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

I like the way they are working things out together.  Love the chapter!!!

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

So glad that they are finally getting their acts together & have sat down to begin talking things out.  They are so good together. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

M - another great chapter in this saga.  I really applaud you and the way you wrote the theraphy sessions.  they were all very emotional and you did a great job handling the emotions.  See you again soon.  xx

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 4

long overdue talk and homecoming! they are so lucky to have friends like that.....

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love this story can't get enough. Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 4

That was amazing :)  I really am so happy they are working on this together and are beginning to come back together :)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story already.  I love your characters so much.  They seem real, its whyat made me love PLU and this is no different.  Thank you for sharing your talent with your readers.  Lots of Love, Cheri

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

Michele~  I am seriously loving this so much, but I am sure that you would not ever doubt that those words would be heard from me.  I love these guys so much.  SIGH... Thanks for sharing with us all.  BIG HUGE HUGS!  Kasi xoxo

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 4

brilliant as usual already looking forward to next update .

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love this chapter.

Thank you.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

Superbe!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

Magnifique!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

wow!

 

Quelle belle photo de Garett.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Quelle magnifique photos!

 

Je suis bien heureuse qu'il y est une suite, j'adore!

 

 

Une petite remarque...

Il est impossible que Seth et Sue aient une fille blonde selon la loi de la génétique.  Par contre il y a peut-être une histoire derrière cette petite fille blonde... elle est peut-être adoptée...

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wonderful update!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4

I can already tell the complexity of this storyline will definitely rival that of PLU,  and the love I have for that story!   This'll be even better!   Love Kate and Master G!   Paul your the man dude!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 4

wow is all i have to say about this one ... looking forwrad to more 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter.  We've got answers to a few questions but will they be able to overcome their reticence to talk and really open up to each other? 

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

Such a beautiful chapter.  I'm so glad they really talked.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

"Edward shook his head, "No, but I've left you alone for so long...""

I'm a bit cofused on how long exactly.  Has it been 4 years or just this last year?

And I know they are working through things and maybe I'm a bitch but I kinda want to see Edward drug through the mud a bit more. He feels like shit and well he should. He's been an a total, inexcusable asshole. I guess I just want him to know even more clearly exactly how much she's been hurting all this time and what exactly he did to her.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ooh I'm soo glad they talked things out! Not to happy there's not gonna be any sex for a week but then I think that means there will be sneaking kisses, teasing, & fondling, great foreplay leading up to the sex which after a month of being apart will be HOT, I say bring it on! :) I can't wait to find out more. Thanks again. 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 2

There's an awful lot of secrets in that family. Edward and Bella's lack of communication and his distancing himself has affected everyone.

Great chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Boy have they drifted apart and we're back to the old problem, no communication. Not even going to guess what's IN the envelopes, I think that's obvious but who's sent them?

Great start

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter.   Not sure I agree with them having thier first talk alone in the woods that way, but glad they went to Paul together.   

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 4

Amazing, wonderful, brilliant.  Thank you.

Reviewer: LCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 4

Awww, finally they talk! Loved it and can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2013 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

Love, love, love this already!  Feels like I am right back into their lives.  Love how you portray family in this story, alway did, always will.  Hardest part is the waiting.  Love your pictures as always, they really help tell the story.  Lots of Love, Cheri

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

thank you for the update.......I wonder who the culprit is?..I'm sure Emmett people wil get them.............not to sure I like the Mike person, he seems creepy

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love this chapter.

Thank you.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

This was a very sad chapter. They really both want the same thing,but they stopped talking to each other. Their relationship is falling apart because of it. It was a problem before they married and had 7 little people to worry about. It is even harder to find quiet time to just talk, but it is too important not to make it a priority. They love each other so much. Edward is going to take all the guilt as the dominant, but it is not all his fault. The submissive holds power in the relationship as well. Bella has to take part of the responsiblity. They need to spend their energy on fixing their relationship, not on feeling guilty.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

I am happy that Edward is realizing that he messed up, but Bella messed up also. She is responsible for telling Edward what she needs. He is not a mind reader. They both let each other down on their D/s relationship. Communication is so important and they seemed to stop that because they had to keep it from the children. They need to still have their date nights and keep a journal even if they have to keep it locked up. The other can read it in private and relock it up. At least they know what the other is thinking. They worked to hard for this relationship to not fight for it. I think the older boys are interested in the lifestyle. They need good role models.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am so happy that this family is back. I loved your first story. I am so excited. These two need to get away and have a long talk about Edward and Bella. I am about their age and have teenagers. Sometimes we forget that we worry about the kids and forget that once we were just a couple. The couple part needs to be nurtured because the babies leave the nest and the couple is left. Of course, they have many years of babies still in the nest with the large spread of ages of kids. 

Reviewer: Kirb Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 3

So much going on here, not even sure where to start.  Perhaps I'm just naive but until you actually spelled out what Bella was doing to herself, I couldn't figure out what her 'training' consisted of.  I don't know what I was expecting, but I was stupid enough not to expect that.  Wow.  Thats a drastic measure but considering their life, I understand it.  And when she said she broke her vows?  Gah!  That killed me.  I can't wait for them to reunite and TALK.  Having E and B so close to each other and not together - not since we started - is driving me crazy!  I feel so bad for them, though I want to kick them both, too, for not talking to each other, not voicing their thoughts.  Him, I want to kick him harder.  Or maybe twice.  He should know better!  And I'm not sure what to think about Garrett.  I'm torn with him allowing/helping Bella to bolster herself once more vs. making her speak with Edward.  Yes, it's her responsibility to voice her thoughts to Edward, but it does feel like Garrett is going behind his back, too.

In case it hasn't been voiced, I love that you include photos.  (That one of Kristen from OTR - LOVE IT!!  What a beautiful girl!)    Thanks for a great chapter!

Reviewer: lovetoread456 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Thanks so much! I just love your work!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 3

OH MY GOSH!  I really cannot wait for them to heal, together :)

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Date: 28 Jan 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

BRILLIANT!!

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Date: 28 Jan 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

Holy Hell your chapters are filled with such emotions. C:

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

I wanted to laugh and cry at the same time!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

I am sooooo hooked on this story!!! I LOVED people like us but I am equally if not more so hooked on this sequel you've had me in tears more times than I can count and it's only ch 3!!!! Thank you for not having them cheat on eachother I don't think I could handle it for these two!!!

Reviewer: plbsmiles Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

I cant.wait to see where this goes
it may be too.early but some how i have my own suspicions as ro who and why
So i have to see if i am right in where you are going
Thanks for another reallu enjoyable story

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow!!! How's that for what I think? Holy hell may be more appropriate. Even though she was only scening by herself, it was still intense. I love that Edward was able to see her and realize how he has failed her. 

As for the boys being in the lifestyle...I knew it! Bella and Edward are going to shit kittens when they find out. The ironic thing is that if E&B had not been so broken, they probably would have picked up on it. 

I can't wait to read more!!!

love this!!!

Nickey

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

So emotional!

 

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

I love the pics you add to your stories!  

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh, it was the dress from On The Road Premier in Toronto I think.   But yes, definitely from OTR Premier.  Awesome story! 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

M - great chapter.  I remember now how during plu i was always saying edward was the weaker of the two.  he went to a tv personality for bella's help.  And then refused to believe anyone else.  while bella has restorted to self-flag whatever, edward has always done the same psychologically.  And the revelation about the kids is perfect.  I can't believe it took the boys until they were adults to finally break into the room.  that will be interesting.  keep up the great work M.  Love you!

Reviewer: plbsmiles Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

I was so excited to find thus sequal to people like us. It was without a doubt oneofmy favorite stories
I am definately going to enjoy theongoing life of Bella and EDward

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

OMGosh!!!!! Poor Bella and Poor Edward. They STILL have communcation problems. After all these years they still have trouble telling each other what they want. 

Love that Jackson and Nick are into the lifestyle. Can't wait to see what Edward and Bella say. Can't wait to see how they find out. This whole family is kinky!!!!! lol 

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

wow what a chapter.  I flet sorry for Edward to hear what Bella said...but he needed to hear and see it.  Keep up the good work!!!

Reviewer: cassie616 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

I've skipped so many nights of sleep just to finish reading your stories, and i can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

I feel so sad that they lost their way. Glad it seems like they're fighting back. 

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love this story

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

They can get through this.  They really need to work on communication.  Can't wait till the next update!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

Glad that Paul and Garrett/Kate have helped her.   B is smart to go to Anderson.  Glad she is smart enough to not believe the stories/pics about E.  That Quack did a lot of damage.  E has alot to make up for. 

Reviewer: lililu0115 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

wow please continue this is so wow I want to know more please

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

loving it as usual looking forward to your update well done....

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