Poor Edward. That is a huge change he wants to make and it will definitely take work. I wonder how Bella will react when she finds out.

I love Bella's interactions with James. It's so sweet and pure. That is the real, happy Bella coming out :)

Edward is smooth. What a way to "introduce" himself to her.

Okay, a little more clarification in the Bella/Renee puzzle. I'm going to assume that pregnancy brought on a hormonal/chemical imbalance that caused Renee to become unstable. I'm sure that's why Bella is afraid to have kids.

I knew it wouldn't go well when Bella found out her mystery man was Edward Cullen.

Yay, they've talked and are going to work this all out together. I bet they can work out something that will make both of them happy.

I'm glad they didn't wait. They both needed that connection. I also think Edward needed some affection outside of the playroom or a controlled scene. Nothing better than spur of the moment outdoor sex :)

It was nice having all of the family together. If Alice will ever finally get over her hang up with Edward I can see all of them working out happily. At least she is relaxing a bit more each day.

I liked Edward's POV of their shopping trip. Seeing it from his experienced view was nice.

I can't wait for the playroom. I want Edwar to see that he and Bella can have play time and have it not mess up their relationship.

Of course something would have to go wrong. There's always problems when things are going so good.

They are so cute together when they are happy :)

The engagement party was awesome. Everything seems to be falling into place for them :)

Look at the exhibitionist coming out in Bella :) Yay for the upcoming wedding!

I have a feeling that wedding is going to be awesome :)

What a great fairy tale wedding.

That playtime was well planned. They both needed the release and relaxation it provided.

I loved Sophia being welcomed home. That was great :)

*sigh* I always love sexy times with Dom and sub :)

Thanks for letting us know how he knew about her dress. Loved this story :)

I just love it when relatives want to go all TMI on you. Of course Alice would be that way.

I love how B&E are taking it slow and having some good LONG phone conversations before the face to face.

I really think Alice over reacted but I can understand where she's coming from.

Edward tugged at my heart with his understanding attitude toward Bella and trying to give her the easy out. At least I'm smiling at the end with the next date coming up :)

I forgot how much of a douche your Jacob was. Again, Edward makes me swoon with his perfect responses. I don't know about Bella but I'm already in love with Edward.

Hell yeah! Sleep over! Even without sexy times, a sleep over with Edward can only be good :)

I really don't like Alice in this story. I get that she is worried and being protective of Bella but she has gone too far.

Again, falling more in love with Edward. Any guy that will kiss you right after you've done that is a keeper.

LOL, I loved Charlie ambushing them. Of course Sue would keep him in line so he knew she needed to be gone. I just love that he is the Chief but she rules that house :)

I want to beat the crap out of Rose for what she did. That was wrong. Edward, his parents, and Emmett were fine with Bella and so nice. She just had to ruin it all.

Anyway, it's great seeing your story here. I hope you continue to update here as well as FFnet.

Okay, I definitely say Victoria is the leak in the company. I just have to wonder who else is in on it. You've got me thinking Royce could be part of the embezellng. I'm still keeping Laurent on the radar. We haven't really heard enough from him for me to decide.

I love how Bella doesn't back down from Edward. That is definitely the kind of woman your Edward needs.

I have a feeling my Saturday is going to be spent reading this entire story and not getting anything done around my house :)

Now you've got me anxious for the whole Edward finds out about Bella and James to hurry and get here because I know he is going to blow up.

Oh yeah, Emily is definitley behind a lot of crap going down at Edward's company. I just know he is behind the strike. I think she wants to be in control of everything and wants to see Edward and the rest of her family with nothing.

I love Jake! Thank you for giving me a Jake I can love and not despise. Most authors don't do that. I want him to meet James in a dark alley and beat the hell out of him and get away with it :)

I just love these two :)

Edward just can't catch a break. If it isn't someone in his company screwing him over, then his sister is doing it. Emily deserves everything that is come to her.

The anticipation of the big James reveal is still driving me crazy. I just know Edward is going to use it as an excuse to say Bella is just like all the other women.

I was cheering when Edward punched Mike. He so deserved that!

Every time I think Edward has gone overboard with his temper you surprise me. I totally get why he was upset with Samantha over lunch but dumping it on her chest was a bit much. I was surprised Bella didn't get more angry with him over it. 

I didn't realize Bella didn't know Victoria was the PR rep for Masen. I'm surprised she hasn't put two and two together yet. Now I wonder why the volturi background check on Vic hasn't revealed her relationship with James. That was interesting that quil is so buddy buddy with James. I have a feeling embry is going to run his mouth and James is about to get the scoop of his dreams. 

I just love how it feels like you ate listening to me and dealing with my questions (lol, yeah I know this is already complete). Yay for Bella speaking up about Vic. That do needed to happen like 5 chapters ago. 

Why do I have a feeling James left Vic after seeing how awesome Bella looks in love and thinks he will try for her again. 

I love demoting Vic and making her answer to Jess :) yeah it is time to get rid of Samantha. I have a feeling she thought she would wiggle her way into his bed. 

Anyway, loving this story and see another day of neglecting the family and house cleaning to read it. 

I am just dying for them to go public and get it over with. 

Oh hell. Maria is about to start a bunch if trouble huh?

Edward is learning the hard way, huh?  I loved Bella punching Jane. That was awesome. I'm glad I was right when I thought Edward was calling security for Jane. I just Bella Hadley that play out. She would have been so happy to see Jane escorted out by security. 

I was finally starting to like Benjamin until he opened his mouth about Bella. Seriously, man, you just complimented Edward about how is doing with the business. Do you not think that maybe Bella has something to do with that?

That was just perfect for their first time. Thank you so much for taking it to a Narrator POV. Great job :)

I loved Esme throwing out the bad seeds. It was sad one was her own daughter but it needed to be done.

Now you've got me wondering if Eric might be up to no good as well. Dear God, that family is full of crappy people.

I loved the shower scene. It was so sweet to see Bella step up and take care of her man like he needed. It was also nice to see the two of them connect on that level. Yeah, the I love yous better be coming soon :)

That was one hell of a start to a chapter. Me likey :)

Emily is a b*tch. Can she please get a few more black eyes from Bella?

Benjamin is on my last nerve too. I don't know if he is up to something or he's just pissing me off because of the crap he spews about Bella.

I really like Mac and his wife. I hope we see more of them around the family gatherings.

I'm so glad Edward is not trusting the Volturi right now. I like the new investigators so far. Of course I have no reason to not like them yet.

I get where Emmett is coming from but honestly he pissed me off a bit in this chapter. I thought he knew Bella well enough by now to trust her. I just love how he didn't like the tables being turned on him and Rose. I have a feeling Rose will be highly pissed at him when she hears about this.

Hmm, I wonder if Seth and Hannah could have a little love connection :)

Yeah, very nice and juicy lemon. That was hot.

I really hate Jane even more. Were you trying to be evil pulling the cigarette bit with her? I surely can't see her putting up with Maria saying crap about Edward being hers if she was the mystery POV. I loved Edward telling Jane that he was going to marry Bella. In your face biotch!

Oh yeah, there is definitely no better way to wake up :)

Yay, they are engaged. I say no time like the present so they should go for and get married now.

The wedding was perfect for them. I'm so glad you let them have that happy moment before all hell breaks loose.

Thank God Emily didn't cause too many problems. I just hope Carlisle and Esme talk to her to find out what's up with her and Maria.

Okay, now that the happy is done let's move on to the angst. I have a feeling I'm about to want to do some serious ass kicking on James and Maria and all the others that are trying to ruin Edward's life.

This was such an emotional chapter. You had me in tears reading about the hospital and home visits. I could feel Bella and Edward's emotions.

Benjamin won't get away. You wouldn't do that to us.

Bella did a kick ass job standing up for herself to everyone in this chapter. I was fist pumping all over the place :) I loved it when the Masens were all shocked wth Emily supporting Edward.

I think my hubby needs to read this chapter so he knows what I mean when I ask him to put me to bad.

Bella and Edward are so hot and sweet I just can't get enough of them :)

I'm assuming this whole Maria in a mental institution is all part of her plan. God I can't wait for Seth to shoot her ass. James too. They both need to die.

Yeah, I can definitely see Jake being the new body guard :)

Carlos is quite the idiot, huh? I can see the love between Edward and Bella and I'm just reading it. He's lucky Edward didn't rip his balls off right there.

I'm wondering if the twin secret will stay between the four of them until Christmas.

James has to die. That is the only way they can guarantee he will go away. I guess the doctor's appointment is forgotten with all the crap James is pulling. I can't wait for Seth to get the chance to use his gun :)

Daddy C is a real piece of work. I loved it when Esme slapped him. You go Momma C :)

Demitri rocks! I can't wait to see the three of them and his boyfriend out together.

Their nervousness in exploring their sexuality is so great.

I'm so nervous about the dinner with Daddy C. I sure hope he isn't a total tool towards Bella and Edward.

OMG, I'm rolling with laughter about James. Of course he writes gay erotica. So fitting.

I love Rose. She is so going to give Emmett hell.

Their first meeting was so perfect for them. They have both fallen hard. I can't wait for Edward to get his first kiss :)

Poor tortured Bella. Kids truly can be so cruel. I love how her tormentor has grown to crush on her.

I hope Jake is gone. I really didn't like him (lol, of course I'm really not a Jake fan to start with). I loved the phone conversation with Bella and Edward. They are so perfect for each other. I can't wait for them to meet.

Awe, they are too cute. The I love yous are out of the bag and nothing standing in their way :)

I can't wait for the reaction in Chicago to Edward's life changing weekend.

*sniff, sniff* He flew back home. That's so sad. It would kill me to have to leave my love for 6 weeks.

James is about to get a smack down. Dude, if you are going to write gay porn about Edward, at least make it good ;)

I adore your Rose. I think she is one of my favorite Roses ever.

I had a feeling Emmett was being a bad boy but I didn't realize how bad of a boy he'd been. I love Demitri. Every girl needs a good gay guy friend :)

I'm so happy to see them together again. It will kill me when they have to separate.

I'm dying to find out what Carlisle and Emmett are in the middle of. It must be huge.

Yay for Edward standing up to Emmett and doing the right thing by calling the cops. So long overdue.

I find it quite funny how your tormentors in school run into years after and act like you were good buddies. I know most of us grow up and become mature adults but the tormented don't just forget how they were treated. A little bit of chagrin (LOL, I think that's the first time I've used that word...didn't think I ever would after reading Twilight) would be nice comging from the tormentor. Anyway, it was nice to see Edward being confident and proud of his Bella in front of Laurent.

Yay for sexy times. The virgins are going at a good pace. Definitely no need to rush the big event :)

You had me in tears reading this chapter. Edward and Emma both tore me up. I really lost it when Charlie joined the Cullens. He was so sweet with Emma.

I'm so happy Bella is found and James is dead. I see a long road to recovery for her.

Seeing Bella like that just breaks my heart. At least she has a big family to support her through her recovery.

Poor Emma. Thank you for making her a real child and not some fantasy one that we know does not exist. A normal child would have reacted the way you had her react. A fantasy child would have just been the perfect child who loves and supports and wants for nothing. Reality is a good thing in fics :)

I think they should have a boy. Emma is so used to being Daddy's little girl that I think it will be easier for her to share her daddy with a boy.