Nothing better than learning your tween idol has a potty mount :)

Oh wow. I like how this is starting. A more Dominant Edward sounds wonderful to me. Can't wait to see what Bella has planned to put her self out there to Dr. C :)

I think Dr. Cullen has been attracted to Bella but circumstances never allowed him to dream of anything more.

I know Bella is hoping he will fall for her once she becomes his Sub and I think she is naive in thinking that. Yes I think Edward could fall for her but I think it would take longer than what Bella is hoping.

Damn. That was one hell of a ride for her first time in the play room. I want to cry because there is no pretty little Next link. Can't wait to see what she wakes up to.

I think I would have to tell mommy dearest to eff off. With his job and a mother like that no wonder he wants to escape into his role of Papi. Yeah, one of those socialites would freak out if he tried to pull any of that with them. He def needs someone like Bella.

Oh the joys of a window with dark window tinting. Each chapter gets better and better and I find myself loving your Edward and Bella both more and more.

Wow, Carlisle is quite a piece of work. I think I would avoid my family too if it always ended like that.

Tanya is one hell of a good friend. She is quick to call in Bella and always seems to be right when she does.

Me thinks the Senator is developing feelings for our dear Bella.

I flove Tanya. She is greatness.

Master Yoda is so cute and such a good idea for Edward to get him for Bella.

Yeah, I didn't think their sex embargo would hold up. Hello, if I had sexy Eddie at my disposal I know I wouldn't be ble to hold out.

I was shocked to see Bella acting like such a brat. It's nice to know there was a reason for it.

I love seeing Edward's feelings become deeper for Bella. It is quite obvious that Bella's are becoming deeper as well.

It will be interesting to see how they both handle his trip to DC. I'm also wondering when he will find out that Dr. Brandon is one of Bella's close friends.

LOL, Emmett is great.

I love how Edward is realizing that he is falling for Bella but also that it won't happen over night.

I'm dying laughing at the "old man" having a hard time keeping up with Bella. It sucks to get to an age when you can't drink, etc. like you used to.

I love their little happy bubble they are in while in Italy. I wonder what will happen to change that once they get home.

Yeah, Charles was quite entertaining.

I loved the Edward told her he loved her. I think her response that she was falling in love with him was perfect. Poor girl needs baby steps.

I lost it when Edward was so eager to get a room and Victoria was so clueless. Poor guy. LOL!

I love how they can start off being sweet and then it gets dirty and gritty.

I wanted to slap the crap out of Edward's mom. Once again it was all about her. It sucks that she always hurts Edward.

Other than Mommy Dearest they did great at the charity function. It was a great introduction of Bella to his world.

Sexy times afterward was hot and so emotional. They both needed that. I think too dirty or rushed would've totally defeated the purpose. Great job with that one :)

Yay, Charlie wants to see her. I just want to know what Renee told him when she stopped updating him when Bella turned 18. I'm sure it's because she didn't have contact with Bella but I wonder what she told Charlie.

*sigh* I think I fell in love with Papi even more this chapter. I love it when we get into his head and get to see what he's thinking and feeling.

I love how Edward stood up for Bella with Jacob. That was awesome.

I love their intimacy. Even though they are getting down and dirty the intimacy shines through :)

Wow so much going on in that chapter. I'm just glad the both removed their heads from thier butts and reconnected :)

There's nothing I like better than a dominating Mr. Cullen :) I think they both needed that after the crappy week of not seeing each other.

I can't wait for Charlotte's reaction to the truth about Bella and her connection to the Cullens. Bella definintely needs a friend in LA that knows the reality of her life.

So gald to see you on TWCS. I hope you continue to update here :)

Wow, the ex is a raging bitch. I almost wish Edward hadn't held Bella back. That could have been very interesting.

I can't wait for them to realize they are truly in love with each other. I mean you've done a great job portraying it so I know all of us readers can see it :)

Wow, Kate was a real bitch. I couldn't imagine having an abortion and telling my husband I miscarried. Especially when said husband was so anxious to have kids. Poor Edward deserves a better life and relationship. 

Nice reaction to Bella :) this was a great first chapter and I'm looking forward to the next. 

Jake being gay makes sense. I like that he won't interfere with B&E. 

It was nice it get into Bella's head and know what she was feeling. That was so sad about her twin. 

LOL! I'm dying to know who will catch him sleeping naked. 

I don't hate Tanya. I can see how he would go out with her since she did after all appear to be available and actually interested in Edward. I'm just glad nothing felt right to him. 

I love jake and Renee gossiping about Bella behind her back. That is definitely something your best friend and your mom would do. Maybe that little chat will get Bella on gear to talk with him like momma said :)

I can not wait for Edward to see jake and Seth together and of WTF. That will be so entertaining. 

Awe, B&E were so cute shopping together. I think Bella opening up like that will get Edward to open up to he about Kate. Baby steps ate better than going backward. 

Awe. They ate so cute together. So glad everything is out in the open now about Kate.

That was a nice encounter with Tanya. Glad things are amicable between them :) 

Sucks to have to be at home under those conditions.

Good luck with that, Bella ;)

My fave line:

It made me cave quicker than a whore in an adult toy shop.

Too funny :)

I predict lots of flicking in Bella's future.

LOL Bella in the pimp mobile. Awesome.

Of course Bella would start thinking with her lady parts. It's going to be a long 2 weeks fo rher.

WTH was Bella thinking not bringing any toys. She might get carpal tunnel if the gay sex is that hot.

Oh please tell me one or both of the guys walk in on special Bella time in the shower.

Damn phones are always interrupting the good stuff.

Oh yeah, Edward will be screwed six ways til Sunday :)

ROFL! I'm loving Bella!

:)

Oh I can't wait to see what Bella's wearing. Yes, she will have both of you on your knees begging before too long.

Uh oh, Daddy Charlie is on his way. Protect your nuts guys.

I can't wait to see what keeps Edward from his shower and bed.

Bella was landing two jumbo jets, huh?

LOL. I think Bella is quickly driving Edward insane.

Just give in Edward.

That's right Jasper. You and Edward need to take care of business :)

It's about time! Will Edward finally chill a bit?

What an evil witch. She cock blocks like a pro.

I AM IN TEARS. LOL THAT WAS GREAT. Nothing better than Edward having a wicked case of word vomit.

OMG, STILL CAN'T BREATHE! LOL! I'M IN TEARS!

Holy crap. What a way to leave Edward and Jasper hanging Bella. Damn.

I loved reading Bella's POV of her life. She's lived such a hard, sad ilfe. I found myself tearing up quite a bit. I can't wait to hear from everyone else in these out takes.

Great job with this :)

I think I love Edward. He is too good to be true.

It's gotta be quite a blow to a guy for your wife to leave you for the female version of you. I think I would go home too ;)

Rose's story broke my heart. I'm glad Edward is there to be a good influence on her. I had a feeling she and Bella would end up bonding and helping each other.

Great chapter. Can't wait for more.