Reviews by JasperWhitlockIsTheStud
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: JasperWhitlockIsTheStud Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Your story pulled a lot of heart strings of mine since I began it. Emmett is such a crazy person but honestly? The way he killed Edward was just agonizing and terrible to read! 

 

I LOVE the way your tale is going. It's brilliant! I bet the douche mofo is ticked after losing his so called "win" prize. For the record, I KNEW exactly when Alice made eyes at James it was a J/B! Then Char appearance further proved it. LOVE HER! Anyway, so far I think James truly won my heart. No matter how short their interaction was...but truly? I think it's bc of him Bells was able to run away. 

I got chills when Bella cried for Charlie/Edward and the cupboard opened etc, I guess people never leave do they? Especially the love one

Love this bittersweet tale. I feel the pain ... for Edward/Bella/Charlie/unborn baby.  



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. We haven't heard the last of James or Emmett just yet. We still have a ways to go for Bella's happy ending. 

This started as a one shot for Beyond the Pale contest and won 3rd place. Its kind of obvious it would be Bella/Jasper since Edward is dead and Emmett's the killer. Jasper is the only one left.