Reviews by WannaBeBella89
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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389593
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

This is a story from Hell... and heaven at the same time ;-)

I'm an addict to your words, honestly - and would be happy to find the next chapter soon!
So far, Bella dna Edward have made the hell of a story, not to forget Alice and her skills :-P
But it seems like the devil is ready to unleash his fury on them, since "Mack" has entered Edwards life now... I just hope that Edward soon gets a feelong of what this guy is like and what his plans are... Edward has a good intuition and he should listen to it! It will prevent him and Bella from serious harm, I can feel that...

I keep m,y fingery crossed that you will soon bless us with an update! I can't wait to see how James wants to track Bella down and lands on his ugly arse :-D

All the best,
Bella89

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113785
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Apologies accepted :) A good story like this sometimes needs its time - so take it and we will happily wait to read such good chapters like this!

The reuinion in the playroom was perfect - not only for Bella with being in sub space again, but also to see the two of them interact with all their passion and love for one another! They really need their couple time and Edward is right in planning to book the room more often.

Do I have to worry about the new security guy on the ranch?! I hope that he is an honest guy and does his job properly!
We really have the calm before the storm now and I hope that the team doesn't give up on finding out what's going on behind the scenes! Darryl should really have the guts to step up and tell the Cullens what Peter and Larry plan! If he does it right, nobody will harm him, but of course he's frightened by the article he received... I wonder whether Bella has told the guys that she may have seen something at night? The details are alsways the most important facts, so I hope she didn't forget about it! Maybe she and Edward will talk about that the next day?

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Hello and welcome back ginger :)

I'm really glad at the new chapter and it has had so many turns in things! With the team having finally been able to track down the kids, Alexis being pregnant with supposedly twins (at least :D) and Bella having a fit... WOW!
I'm glad that Bella and Edward have made up fast and that they do not let anyone get in between them egain! It's important for the whole family that they are in the same boat!
Now some mother-daughter-time was really necessary and surely the hormones have their say in Alexis' reaction, so now I'm just curious who overheard the last part of this chapter. Since Edward is not home I guess it's Papa Charlie :D

Looking forward to next week!!

Bella89

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hi Ginger,

after having finished the first story and now uip till here, I just HAVE to give you feedback on this amazing story!
Bella and Edward are just the perfect couple! And this is due to the fact that they are NOT perfect! They love each other (although I still believe that this kind of love and devotion does NOT exist in reality) and their family, which is the most important thing at all!
The family is crazy as it can be, but they do have a lot of fun and adventures never stop!

The obstacles in their lives can be helped with the solidarity of one true family and Esme and Carlisle have just achieved that!

The only thing that irritates me is that you keep telling us that everathing will be fine in the end. I mean it is okay to know that there will be a HEA, but I git the impression that by smoothing us you take some of the tension away! We know that something will happen, so just let it happen ;)
I still hope that Darryl will find an occasion to talk to Edward or Andy, this would help a lot! They can set him up without Larry knowing it! He should have a bit more trust in the Cullen men ;) Hopefully the family does not have to endure the drama of one ore several children missing! Bella would be moritiied! I don't think that she could really stand that... I mean she would, but afterwards it would take a lot to make her feel safe again!

So I am really looking forward to the next chapter! Hope it comes soon ;)

Oh and BTW: Found this story on the German fanfiktion.de, translated by Haifischbecken! I just had to look up the original and satisfy my hunger for more chapters ;)

Take care!

Bella89

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Hi Michele,

I'm so glad to find the new chapter on here!! It took a litte to remember the latest happenings, but this one was really great and I hope that your block has now left ;-)

I really hope that Darryl will soon let the cat out of the bag and reveal his knowledge to Edward and his crew! Nothing bad must happen to this family and, fortunately, Darryl has realised that!

This thing with Seth and jesse is really strange and I have the feeling that there is more behind this, because Bella is right that Seth normally would never abandon his family like this!

Read you soon :-)



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Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I will never give up on this story, simply because it's so amazing... It was worth waiting for and now you came back with the big BOOM! It's good that Andrea has thought of so many things before they left the house, but now the question is if anyone will think of Tahoe...

What about the envelopes Darryl has left? Shouldn't anybody have found them by now?! Even if it does not help to find the kids right now, they will surely want to know what has been going on! If only Darryl had had the guts to go to Edward earlier... this won't save him and probably he will not survive this if he will stand against Larry once more.

I sincerely hope that neither Max nor Andrea will be hurt and that the family and cops will be in time...!!

I'll keep my fingers crossed for the next chapter to be finished soon! :)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Just reread the chapter and I really hope that you will post the next one soon ;) I'm glad that the kids are safe and hope that Lexie' news will be the last portion of drama for now... the family really deserves some peace and quiet! I think its a good idea to wait until Edward learns about the pregnancy ;)

Is there any hope for a mew chapter soon?

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Hi Michele,
it's great to read from you and I'm so glad that everybody is home :) I also like how Bella and Edward talked to Alexis and Mario, Mario surely has his hands full with her!

The idea of building a new house is a good one so that all bad memories can be stored away... I just hope that there will be no new drama soon... it will take enough strength to work through all this in therapy, especially for the kids.

I cross my fingers for the next chapters to come soon :) 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285500
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for

Oh wow I loved this chapter! :)
Everybody so loves Ant and his grandparents! They'll be a wonderful big family! And now Bella's even become his "momma"!! They ahve done everything right here I think!!

Let's see what you planned for Bellas BDay and if Ant will be going to Paris with them! I think he has to, after all they're his new family now!

See you and keep going,
Bella89

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry

Oh my...! This is honestly one of the sweetest if not THE sweetest scene I've ever read!

Anthony is just... I don't know how to put it in words, but he's the cutest boy and he's so brave! He cares for Lil Bit in an instant and immediately accepts Edward as his father!
Would like to know what Kate the Bitch told him about his father and what he thinks about his poor excuse of a mother! But I think we will get to know all this in time ;)

The Williams' are great people and Edward and Bella are really trying hard to make it as comfortable as possible for them. Of course the boy should live with his (more or less biological) parents and they can accept that seeing that it is a very loving and caring family Anthony will will be joining.

Kate's behavious is just unbelievable and I don't know what else to say about this!! I wouldn't be surprised if Bob will tell her some honest words in absence of any children... and they won't be nice, not at all. If she didn't want a child, she better check her contraception methods! She was pregnant twice from Edward and he didn't know of either child!

But for the happy parts of the story: I am glad that Bella is healthy so far and hope she will be fine in the next months as well!

So I am keen on the next chapter - keep it like this ;)

Bella89

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 peanut butter sandwich and a large glass of milk

Haha, bella walking in on Caius and Seth... awesome! I wouldn't have expected that, but it surely is great :-D

also Edward panicking about the fragileness of baby Thomas... but he will soon adapt to it and be the perfect Daddy for the little one!

It's only natural that Ant was worried for them of not coming back to get them, but each time they do come back, it is a reassurance for him and he will grow confidence that his "new" parents won't ever leave him alone. He is just such a sweet and loving boy, I still can't believe it ;-)

Looking foward to the next one!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Wow, this is some news indeed! I'm happy that Edward managed to talk it out immediately with Bella, after calming down of course ;)

I'm curious to see what the relationship between Kate and Anthony is like! I mean if she is a good mother, then she would just accept it (but then again she wouldn't have hidden it for all this time) and Edward could get to know Anthony. But I assume that you're not gonna make it that easy!
Probably Kate is still a bitch (the Professor left her, didn't he?) and is not too happy with her situation.
What I'm wondering about is whether she knew that she was pregnant again when she broke up with Edward.  Maybe she just found out some weeks later. Doesn't make it any better though.

The story is amazing and I'M really looking foward to reading the next chapter!!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird

Oh wow Ant is one sweet boy! He seems to be really talented! I hope Edward finds a good art school for him, I'm sure he'll be quite successfull in his life!

Edward prepared a good surprise party for Bella which she really can enjoy!

I'm looking forward to the wedding!!

Hugs,
Bella89

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53~ barbecued sausage & potato salad

This family is crazy and simply adorable! :-)
I love seeing Edward and Bella so happy, plus Alice "releasing" all of her lovingly craziness on the family although she probably won't have any children of her own. I'm sure we will learn the backgrounds of this condition, but obviously she has learned to live with it and so has Jasper, our fine Texan Prince Charming ;-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 brave brave beautiful girl

Wow this was intense!! bella is such a tough woman and Edward is so brave... Thank God that little Charlie is fine and that Bella is alive! It is really sad that she won't have any more children, but there are enough opportunities to enlargen the family, but first they have to get accustomed to the life with three children ;-)

See you next time!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 - the usual Cullen craziness

I did indeed enjoy this! I love it that Bella always is so positive and looks at the good things in her life, not the bad! She will overcome the hysterectomy well I think, and she ahs a wonderful (extended) family that cares for them.

Edward is doing great and gives exactly the right support to Bella - they are a wonderful team and with Lil Bit and Ant being so mature for their age it is very much fun reading about them ;-)

Read you soon again!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334497
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter: One

This story is nothing short of amazing! I think I've read it twice already and now I'm heading for the third shot.... :D Just scrolled through a profile and saw it - now I have to read it again....

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The Sequel to Swan Lakes Ranch. The Cullens are on the ranch and ready to help out. Bella comes to terms with her husband’s death, can she find a cure for her broken heart in Edward? Will Edward’s past haunt him? Will their relationship be ripped apart before it has a chance to grow? AH B/E M Romance/Drama

 

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Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, Stephanie Meyers does. However, I do own this plot and story-line.  I also own my own original characters.

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, products, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

Author’s Note: This is a continuation of my story Swan Lakes Ranch. I would advise you read that story first as they go together and there are things you will not understand in LTLA without reading SLR. 

Also, if you are looking for a story full of lemons, this is not the story for you. 

I’m warning you now, there will be character deaths in this story.

Enjoy!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Swan Lakes Ranch Series
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107330 Read Count: 40193
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2013 Updated: 16 Jul 2014
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

So Bella's preparing to give Jane the lesson of her life - I really look forward to reading that one :D I hope the boys get it all cleared while the girls are away! They really deserve to have some days off and especially Bella to have the chance to further sort her feelings!
I'm really happy that she said goodbye to Mike and accepted Edward's invitation! He will make her happy and she will make him heal as well!

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Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101885
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Wow, this chapter was simply amazing, A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!! Edward is SO wonderful with Bella and the kids... First she cares for him which he really needs and then he's just slipping into the father role for Johnny... they are the perfect family! I love it how John and Grace accept him and how he always points out that he does not want to replace their father! 

Then the borthday present... wow, they really did a good piece of work here! And obviously, Bella may be ready to get it all with Edward soon, too! Why else would there ba a "wedding"-like page in the scrapbook?

Of course it's important that Charlie gives his blessings, but he's a wise man and knows when his daughter is happy :)

I agree that the lemony goodness would be too much here, the emotional part was very important for all of them and the cherry on the ice cream may be next :)

Read you soon!!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Here comes some! I discovered the story on your profile and am totally engulfed by it ;-)
Bella has gone through hell and back, as Edward put it, and is finally starting to enjoy life again! This will have a good impact on the kids, we  have seen what Johnny has told Edward about his mom being sad all the time and not scratching his back ;-)

I am happy to see that the dates with Edward go so well and that therapy and a strong environment get Bella out of her misery.

However, I am crazily curious who will be the first person to sleep with her in her bed again... I hope for it to be Edward, but you never know. Maybe it is a good point to start with him and to expand the trust!

Hope to get to read your next chapter soon!! :-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I don't think they will get it on, but I think Edward may stay - but I assume his condition will be to actually sleep in Bellas BED, which will be difficult... but maybe they can cross this bridge finally and he can show her that with him, it's actually nice to sleep in a bed again.

The dinner with the kids went perfect I think! It's natural that John is irritated at first, but if Edward continues to be this open with regard to Jacob, John will be perfectly fine!

The game was fun and even the bruised nose can't shadow that! Kylie is quite a piece of work, I wonder if there's more behind her behaviour!

Hope you update again sooooon :) I just LOVE this story! (as some of your other ones as well, but anyway...)

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Bella has been blessed with the finer things in life. She has always been focused on what she has and never understanding that money doesn't buy you everything. It will take one stupid bet and a homeless man to teach her what really is important in life. Can Edward get through to snobby Bella Swan and show her what she has been missing? AH HEA Mature.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113417 Read Count: 56681
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ouch - cliffy!! :-D Bella has made great progress so far, with finding a place to be and a plan for her studies. She has done everything right and seeing Charles in this pathetic state of mind is just... satisfying :-D 
I really wonder who stands in front of her now, because I am not sure if it's Edward or Alice or someone else. But I doubt that it's Alice, because that wouldn't be that surprising!

So I hope for the next chapter soon to ease my poor mind of this uncertainty ;-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh my...!! Edward has really done some work here! Why does he never explain what he said to Bella that morning? I still haven't understood why he constantly names that a "mistake". He seems to have feelings for Bella but then he writes an obviously mean article about Bella and does not even try to really explain everything to her. Now she will start to try to close with this situation and I am not sure how long it will take for both of them to see that they are good for each other - even if it takes some work for BOTH of them to get over their own mistakes. Bella is right in some points - he should look into said mirror for once and really accept that he has done some great shit with Bella and that she will not forgive him that easily.

But maybe Bella will realise that she can in fact do what she dreams of and maybe she will attend college, eventually. 

I hope you update again soon!!!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ok so Bella has (hopefully) really made up her mind about the future of this company and I'm quite sure that it will NOT involve charles :-D
Michael and Bella get along really well I would say - he treats her like his sister and this is what she currently needs. He is somber and can give good advice so I hope that the faith Bella now puts in Edward will be rewarded!

It really is a surprise seeing him there, standing up and wanting to say something. But I really do not have any idea of what he is about to say (and this is making me a bit crazy right now...)! 

As for the end of the story or a possible sequel: What I wish for os that Edward and Bella are happy and content with theis lives. May it be together or seperated, but they should be able to close the past with having processed it. No "what if"'s or something like that - I hope that Bella finds her way into a college and studies that she likes so that she can lead the life that she wants. And for Edward I wish that he can forgive himself what he did, because Bella will do taht at some point as well. This does not necessarily need a sequel but maybe a small jump in time. No, they do not have to have children and be married and so on, but only a small perspective of their future, as a couple or not. But I also think that as soon as both of them have forgiven what has happened, they may be able to start over and see where it takes them!

So to make it short: I'm lookong forward to the next chapter and only hope for a HEA for both individual people. :-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ooookay, we're getting serious here! The beginning was... interesting! So Bella realises her feelings for Edward, but why should it be bad that he wakes up?! I think we will soon find out about this ;)

And Bella wants to tell him her secret... will he also tell her his?

I really look forward to the next part and hope that the two of them can soon sort out their feelings ;-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Ok now that is A LOT to take in for Bella! 
The article Edward wrote is... honest, correct...but also just unfair towards Bella! Yes, what he wrote is not wrong, but he disclosed things about her that are not for the public! Her treatment of him is the one thing, her private history another.

It is fully understandable that she lashed out to Alice and Rosalie - and as you said, if we love people we will forgive, sooner or later. 

That her father put the cherry on top of this cake of chaos was to be expected... he is the shallow asshole that does not deserve to have a son following him everywhere and doing everything for him. Why does he throw Bella out when HE is the one who dictated her NOT to go to college?! I just don't get it how peolpe can be like that...

Michael at least did the right thing to look for his sister and I am absolutely on the same page with his speech about Edward being the ignorant person. I am not totally furious about him, but he saw himself in the glory light of soing something special although he did not learn very much in this process. At least not when it comes to Bella and their relationship.

I hope that Bella will not forgive him for some time, because he needs to learn his lesson as well! I think she did, it will only be a matter of days or weeks for her to accomodate the new circumstances. Maybe she and Edward can start over once she has a life of her own, with job and/or college and some genuine friends like Alice.

So I really look forward to reading the next chapter to see what Edward was doing in the hospital, how her gradnfather is and if the two can clear the air!

This story is amazing and I am glad to have found it ;)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OH MY GOD. 

Wow - I really hope that Bella now knows ALL important things about her... This really is a blow! To learn that Charles is not her biological father and that he rejects her because of that is just cruel. 
It is understandable that her grandfather gives his company to her! I'm curious what she will do with it! Will she really sell it? I mean just because she's the owner does not mean that she in eprson must run the business. 

Of course it will take time to forgive Edward for what he has done, but it was really important that grandfather told her about forgiveness and that this is the only way to be truly happy! 

I hope that Bella finds her way, not only with regard to her future, but with her friends, the real ones, as well!

See you :-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I really like this last chapter and you wrapped it up really well! That Bella has chosen Angela for the charity is a very good idea and she has truly made her and her kids happy! That the others used the occasion to talk to her was also just what the doctor orderd! 

Edward's dictionary action was totally edwardish and sweet and ultimately led to their reunion - even if it was Bella's anger the brought her to Horizons. But she saw the one important thing: That she would regret it for the rest of her life if she did'nt give Edward another chance to make this right. And he will do so, I'm sure! They both know that a relationship is not just fluff all over and this is very vital in my opinion!

I really look forward to reading the short sequel, because I want to find out if Bella has the chance to get to know her biological father and clear her backgrounds! Maybe there is another part of her family that will welcome her, I mean we don't know what her mother has told the people, do we?

So thank you for this story, it is really just wonderful and shows, how people can, with the right influence and amount of love, change their ways and see what's important in life!

I'll go check on your new story once it's posted!

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Support System

Wow there was a lot of stuff in this chapter!

I liked Alice's and Jaspers' reactions! Alice is the ever supporting sister and soon-to-be aunt and she will fully support Edward, also when or after the "secret" is revelad to their parents.
Jasper as Edward's closest friend asks the important questions but without any presumptions, just to make sure he is not running blindly into something, just like the best friend should act!

Yeah, well, Em and Rose... I assume this is a story of hatred before heated love ;-) I think they will, however, discover their affection (if not already) earlier than Bella and Edward can sort out their feelings for each other. They saw that they better behave for Edward and Bella, but as soon as they will be alone, they will fight like cats and dogs again before Emmett just kisses her :-D (my imagination os getting ahead of me again...)

So I think that in the next chapter we will learn about the first encounter of Dr. Carlisle Cullen and Bella... and this does not seem to go well although he does not know anything about her pregnancy yet...

I look forward to it and hope that it doen't take you the full two weeks for the next part ;-)



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Jasper and Alice both are supportive in their own special way. And they'll continue to do so down the road. Yeah, Emmett was a bit intense but I think he projected his own fears on Bella and Edward. After all, he's quite the man-whore and I think he's scared to death that something like that could happen to him. Maybe you're right with your guess that Em and Rose will grow closer before Edward and Bella can. For now, they seem to enjoy riling each other up. See you next chapter with the mystery encouter ;).

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - Invasion

This were some nice invaders I would say ;-) Renée and Charlie helped a lot more than they probably think, according to Edward's thoughts. I like the idea that for once Bella's parents are the positive constant from parental side in a story, it doesn't always have to be Esme and Carlisle ;-) Maybe, at some point later on, Edward and Charlie will have some man time and Edward is able to thank him for his calm temper and being a good sample for a dad! This would really enhance the relationship between them, I think.

Now, next chapter I suppose that we're going to meet Esme! You're teasers are simply so good, it's not that you're predictable, but you are able to put a lot of content in few words and this is a talent!

Maybe, when Bella starts to overcome the post-pregnancy hormones, she realises that she also actually like to sleep in a bed with Edward. I suppose that even now she will see that she doesn't sleep as well without him ;-)

See you next time... I'm SO going to check on the complete rec story now... :-D



Author's Response: Thanks for your great review. Well, on the whole, Charlie and Renée's visit went well. At least it forced E and B into bed together again. I promise, it won't be long now until Edward's back to stay ;). So, next visitor, please. Esme, you think? We'll see. I promised she'd be back at some point. See you Monday.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Surrender

I'm glad that they finally made it and then in such a good way ;-) I didn't expect that Bella would return the affection and statement of love immediately, but this is even better! Now they are ready for the furuter as a family!

So in the next chapter we will have a declined proposal?! But the answer you posted almost seems a bit too impatient ;-) But let's see what else is behind this and what you have planned for the final ;-)



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. No, no declined proposal. They're not there yet. Edward'S just making a precautionary statement ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - Fever

Oh wow, a lot happened in this chapter! The two had their first "cirisis" with Chris and Em and Rose are married?! I'm really curious what happened between them and if they have talked it out - are we going to get some more details on this possibly? ;)

Now with Bella being emotionally overloaded, i expected a kiss or something, but that they would go all te way surprised me! I think Edward did the only thing he could do now, because who knows how long Bella would shut him out had  he not taken this chance. According to your teaser, they are going to talk about this and this I like very much. Maybe Bella only thinks that she is not ready to make the official relationship inofficial as well, but I'm sure that she will eventually see that she really does want this. And that she won't get hurt with Edward by her side.

So - let's see what happens next time!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review. So, little Christopher is fine again. I'm sorry but there won't be any inside knowledge about Rose and Em's wedding. That would have to be an outtake and, for now, I haven't planned writing one. Well, damn, they finally did it. And I'm glad you liked it :D. I was afraid that, after all these months, it wouldn't measure up to your expectations. As I said, I'm sorry about the cliffie, but I promise everything will be okay. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News

Strangely, I did not receive an e-mail alert that there was a new chapter, so my review is late ;-)

I'm really glad that Bella told Edward and that both of them react so responsibly! This really looks like they could hit it off! ;-)

I'm happy to learn about Emmett's next failures of good behaviour and hope that you post soon!



Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't get the email alert. But I don't mind a later review. They're always great, whenever I get them ;). Bella and Edward will definitely spend lots of time together, but we'll see how close they'll get. But remember, the prologue gave a HEA garantee. Next chapter we'll meet Alice and Jasper, and there will be fun times with Rose and Emmett. See you then.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Accidentally on Purpose

Wow, Emmett really did a number here! Rose will he furious, but he better tell her sooner rather than later! If he doesnt start this honestly, Rose will probably not forgive him this one. But we'll see what happens and keep our fingers crossed for them ;) I like it that Aro and Esme seem to get along, O hope that they maybe wil have their happy end! Plus Edward has a father figure he may turn to :)



Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I know what Emmett did isn't actually reason for laughing and it was clearly wrong. But I'm glad you weren't too hard on him or me. This is fiction after all and it's supposed to be entertaining, not a guidebook on what's right or recommended to do in RL. Aro and Esme have a long history. Maybe they can pick up where they left off. Next chapter will end with a bang. See you then.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame

I am absolutely in this! The first chapter really hit it off and I'm glad you won't be repeating scenes in alternating POVs. Bella is confused, understandably so, and now I am waiting to read how the thing with Riley turned out. And Edward of course, but you can guess as much ;) 

I am looking forward to the next part, and don't stress yourself about it, good things take their time! :)



Author's Response: Thanks! No, I won't repeat. Mostly when the povs change, the story either continues where the other pov stopped or there's time in between. Bella will tell you about Riley in her next pov. I'm glad you understand about the updating schedule. I'll give you a new chap as often as I can. See you with the EPOV.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets

Hehe, of course Renée had to find out about the pregnancy, but I'm really glad the she and Charlie are positive about it and welcome Edward in the family immediately!
It's really nice to see Edward and Bella grow closer and sharing deep secrets with each other and also intensify their ohysical contact. Although it's VERY slow in my view ;-) But still, I can understand Bella's hesitance, but on the other hand, why should she shy away from her own feelings towards edward? We'll just have to wait until she discovers how serious these feelings are!

I'm not quite sure what I should think of Jacob, since he calls Edward a bastard after the first 5 seconds, but since he obviously doesn't love Bella in this very way, he will probably be ok... But in my view he has to proove that he accepts Edward by her side.

As for the preview of next chapter, I assume that this is Edward receiving a call from Bella in the middle of the night? I hope that everything will be ok with little peanut!

See you soon :-)



Author's Response: Thanks for your wonderful review. Yeah, everything goes very slow but I have a plan and it takes nine months to complete it ;). Bella will give you an explanation for her reluctancy a few chapters from here. And Edward will get it. About Jake, he didn't call Edward a bastard but said "Jealous motherfucker" which wasn't personal but just a colloquial expression that fits the way he talks. He's actually a nice guy, but only a small supporting character. You can rest assured that Bella and Peanut will be okay, but their circumstances might change considerably. That's all I'm saying. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors

So here we are - Forks and with it Renee and Charlie - the two are gorgeous! I like them a lot and I'm sure, if they'll ever learn about Bella's and Edward's real story, they won't mind, because Renee has seen from the first second that they will be a wonderful couple! Edward is not really hiding his attraction and willingness to be more than just Peanut's daddy, but Bella, so far, doesn't see that! I wonder when she wil start realizing that there can be more between them! But as I said before, I'm sure this will, unfortunately, take some time ;-)

Sooo, Edward will be a little uncomfortable next time, he? :-P I'm not sure if there's anything he can do about it other than jacking off in the shower, but will he do that in his future parents in law's house?? I doubt it!

Definitely looking forward to the next part - and have some relaxing vacay!



Author's Response: Thanks for your wonderful review. Aren't Charlie and Renée great? I'm glad you like them. Bella will realize Edward's intentions soon, but that doesn't mean she'll jump into a relationship with him. Edward will be uncomfortable more than once next chapter, but for different reasons ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue

This epi was totally worth it and it was fantastic! I like how everyones' lives turned out, especially that Esme is happy again! 
I like that the revealing of Rose's "accidentally on purpose" pregnancy has not harmed Em in a bad way - I think it was right that she learned it later on, since she was absolutely correct about her probable reaction at that time...

No Bella and Edward got their HEA and I'm totally content with this :)

Thanks for this wonderful story and I'll definitely keep myself posted on any news or alerts from you!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Wow, Carlisle really is a first class asshole! And should he run into Bella he will hold back to tell her again what he told Edward. Hopefully she fells sure enough of Edward's support to not get shocked and leave him as a consequence! I'm really curious where Edward's train of thoughts will go and if he really changes his plans. I think he would be a lot happier with this and he must finally cut the ties to his parents.
They destroy his happiness he builds up with Bella and they still ahve the power to influence him this much. Either they learn what's really important in life or they can go and leave him. maybe it also takes an emotional outbreak of Edward's to show how unhappy he really is with them. I'm very curious what you'll make out of this!

The drunk Edward was really sweet in this chapter, he's totally harmless ;)

I also didn't realise until your A/N that you live in Germany like me ;-) Thus: Frohe Weihnachten und guten Rutsch! :)



Author's Response: Thanks for your long review. You're right with most of the things you're saying and it'll all be resolved in due time, but not now ;). Where in Germany do you live? I live near Moenchengladbach. Frohe Weihnachten und Guten Rutsch auch für Dich und Deine Familie.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - The Prodigal Mother

I am not that surprised about Esme's behaviour since she wouldn't have shown up if she was still the cold-ass b**** from before ;-) I think it's remarkable that she finally stood up for herself and left Carlisle. After all these years it is not easy to do this I suppose, even it has never sat right with her. Better late than never! She has seen that Bella is a good and kind woman and despite her merely non-existent relationship to Edward she mustered up the courage to talk to him and use the opportunity. 

I am proud of Edward for listening to her and the fact that he called her "mom" shows that not everything is completely lost for them. Esme knows that she must be careful and mustn't expect too much out of this, but this will give all of them the chance to get acustomed with the thought of her being a part of her children's lives again.

And no, I don't think that Carlisle will show up soon. Or if so, it's only to accuse them of luring Esme away from him. I don't think that he will come to his senses and also they won't give him a chance like they did with Esme.

Now for the next chapter I would say that it is about Emmett and something he has done :-P

See you around!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm so sorry for the delay in replying, but my family didn't leave me much time to go online during our vacay. Anyway, I'm back and here it goes ;). Yeah, Edward calling Esme 'mom' is a good sign. And she'll prove herself trustworthy. See you Monday.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Hello again and a happy new year with all best wishes :)

Yes, Bella acts totally irrational, and yes, sheh's pregnant, but this doe NOT have to mean that Edward must hide his feelings along the way! Ok, she has convinced him to (pretend to) go on a date, but I think he should have told her the truth. If he has to hode hos feelings so long, they will probably burst one day and then Bella will be completely flashed, so I think it wouuld be better for her to know that he really only wants her. Either way, the parenting-and-friendship-thing would never work out since Edward will not accept this forever. For the time of the pregnancy, yes, but not for more years to come. Even if he was a very VERY tough guy ;-)
Maybe Bella will even be a little mad at him when she learns about his scheme...who knows!

So I assume that Bella's former home will be destroyed then? This means that she either has to get a new accomodation or give in to Edwards plan of keeping her :-P

And by the way: I also love tuna on pizza :-D

Daher: Ich bin jetzt mal deiner Gruppe beigetreten im Fratzenbuch, da es hier außerhalb der Reviews ja keine KOntaktmöglichkeit zu geben scheint, wenn ich das richtig sehe... Hast du denn noch mehr/viele deutsche Leser hier? ;-)



Author's Response: Thanks for your review and the New Year's wishes. Bella will be flashed when she finds out, but she'll be totally out of it in that situation anyway. That's all I'm telling now ;). Go tuna! My favorite is tuna and onion. Ich hab ein paar deutsche Leser auf ffn, und alle anderen geben sich nicht zu erkenne ;). Wie ist denn Dein Name auf Facebook damit ich weiss, mit wem ich's zu tun hab? CU Monday ;).

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

So I've inhaled your first story and I will of course HAVE to have a look into the second one! I will be there in July ;)



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you liked POMH and I'M glad you'll give TBL a chance, too. Can't wait to hear how you like it. See you on Tuesday!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale

Ok so Edward has tried to find Bella, but he is right that this seems rather impossible in a large city like Chicago...
It sounds really cruel how Carlisle treats his son... of course he only wants his best and bla bla, but did Edward really want to become a doctor?

So as for the teaser... Bella will probably find out that she is pregnant! I'm curious how this comes out, how she reacts to it and whether she will inform Rose immediately (but I assume this much)...

Looking forward to the next part!



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, Edward did what he could to find Bella. Now it's up to either fate or her to bring them together again. I'm not sure if Carlisle really wants the best for his son or if it's the best for himself he has in mind. Edward will reveal more in time. All your questions will be asked next chapter when we're inside Bella's head again. See you then.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate

So Riley is the big idiot that I expected him to be ;) That was really heartless of him and he could as well have stayed in London directly! Moron...

BUT Bella takes up on her responsibility and does exactly the right things: She ends this shindig with Mike and will inform Edward of her situation! I like this, there are so many stories with spontaneous mistakes in these moments, but here Bella does the only right thing!
Of course Edward will be shocked, that's only natural. But I also think that the two of them will be able to talk about it and how it will affect both of their lives. They both know that neither of them has the full responsibility for the pregnancy and so far both of them reacted very mature! PLUS Edward will be over the moon for Bella standing in front of his door ;)

Looking forward to the next part!!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I like your take on the chapter and the sitation in general. We'll see next chapter how much of you're guesses are right ;). See you then.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps

Ok so Bella has not met Carlisle officially yet, seems to be the best for the moment! 
Alice and Bella will warm up to eacht other and I can see that maybe Alice will have a small part in opening up bellas eyes for new love :-) I think that she will probably blame the pregnancy hormones for her feelings towards, so I think that maybe they will really take their time until after the birth to completely wrap it up ;-)

I'm glad to see that Bella and Edward can already communicate with each other without even saying a word, this is great news! Although I'm sure that Bella really does not want to see her feelings (as soon as she really develops them...)

Until next time!

P.S.: Your recs are always interesting and I might find some great stories to dive in!



Author's Response: Thanks for your great review! I'm glad you agree that Edward isn't hiding Bella because he's ashamed but because he's protecting her from his father. Things won't get easier once he knows. Some of your guesses about how Edward and Bella's relationship will go are quite close, others not so much, but I won't spoil it for you ;). I'm happy you like my recs. I love it if someone recs a good story to me, too. CU in Forks next chapter.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Surprise!

Wow, this was an amazin surprise party! Bella has deserved this and I'm glad she could enjoy it as well.
I would love to see her admit her feelings towards Edward, but obviously it's still too soon so show the real emotions :( It would make things a lot easier for all involved parties ;) But maybe the landlord really takes a long time and maybe the damage is even bigger so that Bella will have to move out completely ;-)

See you next time!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Well, I won't reveal a lot, just so much, as far as I've written yet, Bella hasn't returned to her apartment ;). See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Ok, there goes the "conversatoin" with Esme and the one with Carlisle is just appearing at the horizon... But I like how Edward defends Bella and Peanut and how he obviously continues to do so in the next chapter!
He shows her that he's reliable and that she can absolutely trust him with everything!

Looking foward to the next part - I love it!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. After Carlisle has his say, I'm sure you'll wish Esme back. Edward won't cave, but we'll see about the trust thing. See you Monday.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

I'm really glad that Edward has thought about these issues now and that he makes sure that his parents will not have a say in things!
However, I think he should have informed Bella that she is to be consulted when it is about his health... anyway, I think his decisions are very wise and everybody will agree with him - plus I think that Rosalie will be impressed ;)

I think that Rose and Emmett may have some further arguments, but they will make up very soon :P

I bet that it is James (that was Bella's ex, wasn't he?^^) who's there with his new/current girl and that Edward will really have to struggle to reign himself in ;)

See you next time!



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. There are several things Edward should have informed Bella about, but telling her about the living will at this point would probably upset her needlessly. Rose and Em will definitely have further arguments. But I like to call it verbal foreplay ;). Bella's ex is Riley. But you may be right about him being back. You'll know Monday.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - When It Rains, It Pours

Haha, I love Rose and Emmett in this story, they will be a grate couple once they are through with their teasing ;-)
Rose is behaving like she wants to be conquered by him, and I think he will give her the pleasure to do so once he gets his head out of his ass :-D

The run in with Tory and Riley was great and I'm proud of Bella for her reaction! She said the right words in the right moment and totally smashed him - hilarious!

Of course her fall was not noce, but it was good of Rose to take her to the hospital immediately! Now she can spend the holidays with Edward and his friends / family.

I'm sure we'll meet Carlisle, our ever charming senior of the family, in the next chapter, and Edward will once again have to defend his own will and opinion. How Carlisle became so bitter is a mystery to me... and I have no idea how he and Esme came together and could stay together this ling, but supposedly the don't interact that much I'd say...

See you soon!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I think Rose and Em will make an interesting couple with lots of tension once they're ready. Yeah, Riley had it coming and Bella finally got some closure. I'm not sure if Bella should spend Christmas with Edward's family. Carlisle would have a coronary. See you next chapter with the holiday festivities.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Merry Effing Christmas

Best fucking Christmas indeed! I love Edward for his standing and that he did not back down in THE TALK ;)
I wonder how Esme really thinks about this and whether she in fact does not care about him either or just hodes it for society's sake... But I wouldn't be shocked if she changed her mind some time during the story... but until now we simply don't know enough about her. 

I was and was not shocked to learn that Carlisle was in the same situation as Edward when he was younger. What I wonder is if Esme knew... He is so cruel that I can't even imagine how he stands his job, where he helps OTHERS and not himself! HOw can he even be a doctor or something close to this?!
I'm so giddy about his reaction once he learns that Edward will change his profession/specialisation! ANd he will be a great doctor, no matter what! With Bella's support he can do anything and he will be happy AND successful - what a shame for Carlisle when the rest of the high and mighty gang learns that he has abandoned his talented son!

The Christmas night of the not-couple was lovely and the presents are great! Rose  is such a good friend in helping with the tree and everything and even though Charlie and Renee couldn't be there, they will be soon and that's all that counts! They love their daughter and support her and I love this ;-)

I think it's good that Edward does not tell Bella now what it's all about, it would upset her although she can#t do anything against it. Especially since she's supposed to relax and so on, it would unnecessarily stress her. She knows something is not right, and she will all to soon learn the truth, I'm sure.

The only question: What is it that brings her in such a worry/stress that she leaves spontaneously?? I hope that it does not hav something to do with Edward's parents...

So - great chapter and yes, it seems to be some kind of turning point here. I look forward to the next one!



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Esme will get to tell her story too, eventually. She isn't in the right place to face Edward at the moment. Well, I can't really agree with Edward about keeping the details about his talk to his father to himself. Bella will be totally defenseless if Carlisle should decide to corner her. See you Monday with the update and some career options for Edward.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Ambush

Ok so I get in like this: Carlisle is the ass of the century, has raised some doubts In Bella so that she decided to call Rose, take a break and talk it out with her. She won't leave Edward since Rose will help her get back her confidence. The she'll come home and sort it out with Edward...hopefully! Maybe it's Rose calling and letting him know Bella's alright? Maybe it's Esme? I have no idea but the teaser definitely starts where Edward know everything and seeks out Carlisle...and I'm So looking forward to this :D This will end it for all times and Edward prepares for the final strike. He will show his father how important Bella is and how inseperable the two have become :) 

 

Ok, so this sounds a bit too idealistic, but I hope I'close to your plans, anyway ;)

See you soon!



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your pretty much accurate thoughts. Yeah, you could have written the next chapter - almost ;). See you in a week.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - The Truth and Nothing But the Truth

Rose and Em are so great...! It's also a lot of fun reading them :-D

I liked the talk very much - Edward was honest and they did not need to talk out their feelings for each other since it was about Carlisle and the whole circumstances in Edward's family. However, Bella now already acts like she really is in love with Edward, so it seems strange for me that she does not want to admit this to herself! But we will be patient with her ;)

I'm really curious how Carlisle will react on Edward's resignation - we will all be thrilled while he'll be ultra pissed (hopefully) :D

P.S.: I'm all the way into "A family like ours" and it's a great story!! I started it on fanfiktion.de with the German translation of the first part and then skipped over here to get all the other chapters plus the sequel afterwards.
Even though I do not know a shit about the lifestyle, the story sounds very realistic when it comes to the education and habits!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bella IS in love with Edward, although she wants to believe it's just hormones. Those will be gone at some point ;). Carlisle won't pose a problem anymore, at least not for Edward and Bella. There's a German translation of PLU? I never looked into the German version of any story but it's interesting to know. All I know about the lifestyle results from reading Diamond in the Rough mostly and PLU. Most of the other stories just don't seem authentic or are written for the kinky lemons. Those are great but I enjoy reading about the backgrounds as well. See you next chapter.

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Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1081949
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

I suppose that Bella has some doubts regarding her scars from the C-section... but I'm confident that Edward will be able to get her off this train of thhought ;-)

Baby Marie is doing fine and I'm very happy to see this!

 

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

OK we are getting closer... NOw they are on James' track and he knows it! So probably he has something prepared for the police pursuing him??

See you soon, I can't wait!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Hehe, they will manage and Bella will overcome her fear! Edward is just great and they talk it out - this is important for Bella's healing process! So just go on like this, I LOVE this story :)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Ouch! Way to kill the romance! But I don't think Edward will be mad, it's just his now natural reaction to this name... but Bella is really brave and talke honestly with him and this is the most important thing! She tells him that she's not ready for him to see her and asks about Irina, this is the right direction :)

And BTW: What bomb shall Edward drop?! ;)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

Okay, Bella has some explaining to do! First about what happened to Edward and then what happens in her belly ;-) He'll be over the moon when he learns about peanut!!

Seriously, I still think that James is alive, but hopefully not in a good condition! Maybe he would have already come back for Bella if he was alright...

Thanks for this long chapter - it was wonderful to see Edward finally wake up! My aunt has recently been in a medically induced coma as well, so I know about waiting until someone wakes up after they cancelled the medication...!

See you next time :-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

So I was correct with bith of my guesses ;-) I hope that Marie is healthy and that she and Bella will go through delivery safely! I am relieved that Edward has not taken any serious damage from this attack and that he will be able to care for his girls...but he has to care for himself as well!

Not let's see how the baby shower goes and how Bella is doing...!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

This was a good start for Charlie I think! I'm glad that he and Edward do get along, Charlie is a wise man and immediately sees how strong the love between the two is. Bella really needs his support and if he approves of Edward, this will have a positive impact on her as well!

Looking forward to the next part!! :-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

HALLELUJAH! It's finally over... I suppose Bella will get bedrest for the reminder of the pregnancy, or she will deliver now...but whatever happens, James is gone and cant do any more harm and Bella and Edward finally get their happy ending! :)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

I sincerely hope that Edward will make a full recovery, or at least nearly... Bella has to stay strong but she also must have time to work through this and not become too stubborn about this. A good cry in Esmes arms is not the worst thing in this moment. She has to be strong once Edward wakes up, until then she must try to regain some confidence! But let's see what some sleep will to to all of them!

And about James... I still hope that he got caught or will be caught soon and that he will rot in jail for his plans! Death is too kind for those people!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

I liked this and the previous chapters! Yes, Bella could have included Edward in the discussion of not using protection, but she is absolutely right and I really hope that the two of them will be blessed later on!

It is a perfect weekend for the two of them and I'm curious for the opening!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

After the first three paragraphs I knew it was Renee... I really wonder when and how James made her believe that everything was Bella's fault... and I am equally curious if she will ever realize that she is wrong!

I hope that they will be caught before they can do any harm... so please hurry ;)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Edward really os tpp sweet ;-) I'm curious about Bella's reaction to his presents and of course we all know what's inside Alice's present ;-)

Charlie is exactly what Bella needs and I could even imagine him moving to Chicago to be near her, at least when he retired. He is the perfect Dad I think and the hug between the two shows how much they missed each other. I really like him and not only because of his affection towards Bella, but also how he immediately accepts Edward and spends time with him.

Read you soon!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Edward really did good with this present! And he will surely make the rest of the day equally perfect! 

Charlie has to work throuth his feelings of guilt, but I think he will have the support of all of Bella's freinds, including her and Edward of course!

See you next time :-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Hey, that was some hot stuff ;-) Alice can really be a pain in the neck, but in the end Bella stands up and shus her down - great! :-D

I bet for hand job! The two are just hot and it's awesome to read it in the way you've written it, very sensual and sexy, but serious at the same time!

I'm hoping for more :-P

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

I think that she will let him move in, at last. She will need some time to think it over, but she knows that it is better, for both of them.

My first thought also was that James is behind this cruel act, and this is really scary! So I hope that they will catch him before he can do any harm to Bella or her close friends als Dad!!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

I'm glad that Edward knows about Peanut, know they can also tell everybody else! I only hope that the news doesn't spread to James! He would be furious and would want to kill the baby...

I will go for a girl! Let's trust Bella's intuition ;-) No name so far...

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

So now I have another drug from your side... :-D This story is amazing and I love the characters! Alice and Edward are real jewels, and with Emmett being his usual adorable ass-cracking self, it's a lot of fun! 

It is really disturbing that Renee is such a bitch and that she really doesn't seem to be interested in her daughter's well-being. Probably she's paid by James or something... Plus I'm a bit scared that James and Irina/ Tanya will get together at some point and will make Edward's and Bella's life a hell... I only hope that I'm so NOT right with this ;-)

What I wonder about is this thing with Charlie: I understand that Renee told him lies and all, but this is old shit and she has done this for years - why did Charlie never ask Bella earlier? I mean they talked from time to time and only because she sounded a bit different this time he asks and gets the whole story? Don't get me wrong, I find it awesome for the two to get to know each other better now, but this seemed a bit strange to me.
However, I'm curious what Charlie will say about Edward and whether he approves of him ;-)

I hope that Bella and Edward will not have to suffer from James and Irinas crazy plans and that they will be caught before they can do real harm again.

Read you soon!

Bella89

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Oh I think she will say it back soon, it won't take too long, he's just the perfect man for Bella and she knows that :-) She will regain confidence, because he makes her stronger and gives her the self-confidence that she needs :-)

Looking forward to the next part!!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Bella seems to make a good progress, she's content in her new life and can work over her past - and Charlie is a good help, since he's got the chance to get to know her and I'm really looking forward to his trip down to her :-) Plus he will be a good backup once James finds her (because I'm sure he will, unfortunately) and then he and Renee will feel the wrath of Charles Swan for hurting is baby  girl ;-)

But let's see what happens at the BBQ and which drama you exactly plan on releasing to us ;-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Another very intense night! I really like your way of describing the feelings between the two because you make us feel what they feel!

I think Edward should not think too much about their relationship, sine it evolves in its own pace. Bella is ready to have a child with thim whenever they are blessed with it, so I think she is ready for a marriage soon, as well.

See you next time!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

HALLELUJAH!

There you go :-D I wouldn't have thought that Bella goes for it all the way, but this is perfect, of course! She really gains more self-confidence and can thus better listen to her own inner voice and feelings - I hope that the drama will not be too bad, because that would only throw her back...

See you next time!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Puh, that's heavy stuff! I totally understand Em and he really has to sort this out. The question is why Rose and Irina are not talking to each other and if it's permanent. Maybe Rose had an enlightenment and realized that her actions were not ok and that Emmett really is a jewel! At the moment I do not give up the hope that Rose has com to senses, or will do so soon, and that there is still a chance for the two of them, even though this needs time.

As for Bella and Edward, they are just sweet and I hope, still, that the real drama will not be too hard for them, especially Bella!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Woohoo! In the end the drama has one positive effect: Bella and Edward grow even closer and they just make up the perfect couple! Renee's appearance really was a blow to the party, but Bella was really brave in kicking her out and having the boys exchange the locks immediately. She also accepts Garrett's offer and will talk to Antonio - this is the only good thing she can do now! She really should get a restraining order, I'm sure Renee will ignore it and she will hopefully be in a bunch of trouble!

I'm looking forward to meeting Charlie and learning which drama you have planned next ;-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Hot citrus - the right thing for the beasty weather outside ;-) I liked it and am looking forward to the next chapter!!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

This sounds nice - I'll have a look on the dress next ;-)

I wonder how long it takes James to go through with his next actions, but I hope he will be found before!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

*RAISING THE HAND* I bet Laurent works for James, it cannot be anything else ;-) 

Looking foward to the rest of the ball and possible Laurent-happenings...

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Yes we do know what's coming up :D

My prediction about Laurent is that he was sent by James to learn everything about Bella's way of living and her relations. Then James probably plans his ultimate revenge and I pray that he will be stopped before being able to follow through with his plan!

Don't keep us hanging ;)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Okay so James' plan is coming up... The ring will be just perfect for Bella, I know this, so I can wait for it's reveal ;-)

I cannot understand how James and Renée can both be that evil... I mean what has happened to them to be this crazy? I still pray that nobody of our friends will be harmed, but even the shock of events will be enough...

Read you soon!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

I'm sure she'll say yes! I mean she loves him so much that she will spare him the feeling of neglect, even if she might say "let's wait a bit until the wedding", but she also knows that he's it for her...

I only hope that everybody will make it to the wedding without harm----------

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Girl, you ARE being followed... she should better not only think about this stuff but tell Edward, at least! Intuition is rarely wrong in these cases and I still hope that you will let them get out of this unharmed...
It's nice to see how Bella is bonding with Kate, she is a good friend I'm sure that this may even deepen :)

See you soon!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Ok finally the police are involved in the matter and Bella has openly named the possible connection of the fires. It is best to let them do their work and hopefully the final curtain of Renee's and James' plan will not be lifted...

It is totally understandable that Bella is upset and fears for being left, but this will never be the case and I'm sure that some girl time with Esme will calm her down :)

Looking forwar to reading the next part!! 

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

I hope Bella's not in danger, but you never know...! I hope that they can find James soon!

Honestly I was a bit irritated why you informed us about the climax of the story and repeatedly added that it will be a happy ending - it kind of takes the thrill a bit out of it, unfortunately.
Nevertheless, I'm going to read the story till its end, but know that we approximately know when the big blow will come, it is kind of too much knowledge in advance...

See you next time!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

I definitely did not expect this, but I think it's a wise decision to get away and clear the head of all the things that are bothering her...It is good that Bella did not decide to just leave everyone behind but talk to her dad first. Of course she should let Edward know where she is, but she will need some time to sort her mind out and to calm down. I don't think that James will stop even if she leaves, so it won't make it better at all! I hope that Charlie can calm her down and let her come to her senses. He will help her with his calm spirits and then try to strengthen her optimism :)

See you yoon!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

I think she is - or alice would not have thrown the result at her. Probably Edward will put her in a bunker so that nothing can happen to her ;-) Hopefully Bella can gain back her strength for her baby and share the good news with Edward soon!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Hopefully Edward will be able to free Bella of her concerns that he would evr take her child away from her! But I think she rather needs professional support for this... And hopefully her baby will remain unharmed, otherwise I'm not sure what will happen to Bella's sanity...

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 05 May 2015 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

I SO hope that James will be caught... maybe he survives but he will be found. He can't be fast with the injury in his neck!

So Renee will probably not survive this I suppose, even if they can extinguish the flames, she has swallowed the pill that probably will cause her enough inner damage...I would hope that both survive and will be sentenced to a life behind bars! 
But I seriously hope that Edward will not have lasting damages from James' attack...his colleagues will safe him and he will be brought to hospital where later a desperate Bella will find him. But the most important thing is that now it's over and Edward and Bella can hopefully start over and be the family that they deserve to be!

See you next time :)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 08 May 2015 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

I really don't unterstand how James could get away! I meant there are people everywhere, so how can heute simply sneak though?! Now I only hope that they can safe Edward and that the Baby wont be harmed by the stress Bella is going though...it was a wonderful chapter, so dont let anyone tell you otherwise!

See you next time :) 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

Banner courtsey of Mina Rivera

 

Edward & Bella may have had some difficulties in the beginning of their relationship but as they move forward, they will find that it will take even more work to stay together. In order to make her future work with Edward, Bella has to search out her past. It just may take this journey for Edward and Bella to learn the true definition of love. Continuation of Lottery of Life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80982 Read Count: 22997
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Jul 2015
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella is definitely making a progress here! (I mean of course this is what you intended to show us, but anyways...) The decision to meet Elise was wise and she learned a lot from it, even if she was ery upset before, but this is only natural I think. 
Edward seems to be rather unset, sometimes he is so kind and in the next moment he gets in rage! I wonder when he will finally be able to settle down a bit, mentally. Maybe if they are married? In any case I agree with Bella that she should relax a bit...

"The List" is a good thing fr both Bella and Edward, because it challenges their relationship in a completely new way. I think that, in the end, Edward will support Bella in all activities, and then there are number 9 and 10 still :-D I think if she decides to make marriage number 9, he will be happy (at least partly ;-) ), but we still do not know about number 10, or number 1, originally..

So I'm curious for the next chapter :-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh ok, this is going to be an interesting conversation I think :-D Is he there to find her or did the just stumble across each other? In case of the first, what is he going to tell her?

Please post the next chapter soon ;-)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, Bella really stands up for herself and does the thing that I deem necessary in this very moment. She is right about Edward - he gets sensitive about almost everything and this makes it very hard. She does not say that she does not want to work for this relationship, but Edward doesn't make it a lot easier for her. It is understandable that she feel inferior to him and so I'm curious to see if she really travels to Scotland on her own and when the two will see each other again.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Ok so let's see who Edward has brought to the event! But I can imagine that Bella, once again, see's the situation not as what it exactly is... I think she still needs a lot of time to sort everything through and I really hope that she will be surprised about the effect of a therapist once she has been there...

See you soon!

Summary:

Isabella, desperate for a job after college agrees to move across the country to apply to be governess for two young children. She soon finds out that the Cullen Estate and the Master that resides within are dark and frightening. For the sake of her charges, she must attempt to find a way to reach the heart of the man who looks at her as no more than a servant. Read warning!    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81972 Read Count: 48030
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Jun 2018
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 15 May 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ooookay! Bella did great with the girls and also with her speech to Edward :D Now he will have to divulge some information to her, because he simply can't negate the fact that her name is on the graveyeard. Is it one of Bella's ancestors or is this stuited for her? Or was it before Carlisle negotiated the peace???

Please update soon, this gets more mysterious every chapter ;)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am really curious what this is going to be like... In what time or age does the story take place? I assume it's our time, but the while setting seems really mysterious!

I'm definitely on board here ;)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I assume that it will take a while for us to learn why Edward acts the way does, but this is truly horrible! No matter what happened before, but he can't be serious in treating his children like this! I hope that Bella will soon break his spell and show him that being correct and cold as ice is not the solution to everything...

I'm curious for Bella's adventures in town and eager to see how the inhabitants react to her!

See you yoon :)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hehe, Bella has found her eagerness and confidence again! :) She will be successful in helping the girls, I'm sure, and I'm glad that she knows that it will be difficult to change her master's habits! But I'm also sure that if she is persistent enough, he will come up with the background behing his actions and maybe both will understand each other better.
Yes, it's a mystery what happened to both of their families and why Edward knew her father. But I hope that you will not keep us waiting for too long ;)

See you soon!

The Body by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 403]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has a fetish that no one else in the world knows about. Except the thousands of followers on his anonymous blog. What happens when Bella works out who 'The Body ' is.

Ths was my submission to the twkink 2015 fest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121593 Read Count: 145727
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2015 Updated: 19 May 2017
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Ok I saw a rec for this fic in a different one and was hooked after the first chapter.

You write wonderfully and I really like the development of the story so far! Edward and Bella for once are quite normal people who act how real humans would. That Edward has some of the more special 'interests' that get him off is desribed very well I think, at least it feels like it.

I'm curious to see Bella's answer to his hidden enquiry - he does not know that he's going to probably have the time of his life coming up ;)

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

YAY! :) I'm sure that Bella will not yet be fully up to it, but I'm also sure that she will try playing with Edward and he will SO play with her as well :P *phew*

I think this brutal honesty is very important to their relationship and it will bring them SO much pleasure and trust.....

And BTW: My man is also not opposed to this stuff and it IS a lot of fun indeed, seeing him come apart like this! ;)

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Banners by Mina! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307437
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Wow... it's good to see that Edward is safe now and that he has not totally lost his senses! Here's in there and Bella will help Eddie to come back out, even if it will take quite some time. But he's there and Carlisle will stay close. I think they may develop kind of like a father and son relationship and this is something that Edward needs right now. He needs reassurance and Carlisle can give this to him.

Now let's hope that they can also save Elizabeth in time... and hopefully Emmett and his team have found some proof on Esme's sick mind and doings...

Keep going on like this! :)