Reviews by icequeen83
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311144
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Crazy story, but I can´t stop reading

Thanks for sharing

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

Hey girls, thanks for writing, great as always, another POV was very appreciated.

To your second point of your end notes: Maybe you are crazy, but than so am I and maybe all other readers who can´t wait for your updates. Maybe you are the "queens of craziness" ................and I really adore you :-)

 

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

Hey girls ;-). Don´t waste your time reading reviews. We all love you, as you already know, and I am dying for an update.

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

Thanks for the "Not Cliffie"

 

James is gay!!!!! Hilarious.

 

Thanks for writing,

Lots of love and congrats for your publishing house, I just had a look and I am thrilled about some of your coming books.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625393
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

huh, hard staff. Your story is worth reading, but really hard to bear sometimes.

Summary: Past Featured Story

sos

 

Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55121
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

really nice so far, sorry can´t write more at this point, I can not stop reading ;-)

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Cool! I really like your story so far, I wonder a bit about the swearing of E but ok ok... sometimes I get the impression that in every story I read E swears, but I just can´t get it: why the hell???? :-) I would find it nicer and more interesting if there would be  more difference in language, thoughts and behaviour between B and E. But as you already noticed: I am not a native speaker, so maybe my opinion in this case is not really extremly relevant.

Liked the ending!!!!!!!

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet story, thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I really think, this guy is creepy!!! I start to wonder if this could be something you personally want and expect in arelationship.

But although I am not the biggest fan of fucktard I cant stop reading



Author's Response:

This story has nothing to do with my personal expectations in a relationship.

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edward and Emmett are overprotective assholes, also the fact that you put the girls into an accident cannot change this fact.

Sorry just my opinion

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I just wanted to say that for me it´s absolutely not OK to criticize the speed you write your story. I do not want to offend anybody but in my opinion the story you give us is a present. You have noobligation,  thank you for it. Sometimes I have my  problems with your characters, but although I don´t like all characters personally I really like your story and I am quite attached to it.

Thanks for writing

( I hope I got this right although as you notice I am not native)

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

No sorry, I had no idea, maybe I am quite naive about teenager pregnancy and all this stuff. but I don´t like the idea at all, I never liked this reneesme idea.

Sorry just my opinion

 

 

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Just wanted to say, of course it´s your choice, do whatever you want with your characters. Let dem die, let them get pregnant..... but you also have to understand that some of us don´t like the idea.

I like your story though I am not happy with this pregnancy part.

And I will continue reading.

I am still impressed how you do it, your RL seems quite stressy.

 

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter, although it was a little bit tragic, there were some really funny parts in it, and I have to admit, that I understand her mother. What she says is not very nice, but I can understand her completely. And if I would be B father, I would also want to kill Edward, I mean he is 25 and B´s parents did not even know that they are together. They got the hole story in about what - 3 Minutes?

If they come over their shock and do the right thing, who can blame them for their first reaction?

 

Do you have first hand experience in this case? The hole chapter seemed so realistic?

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

First of all: Good to hear that your father is on his way to get better (or is completely healthy  by now, I don´t know)

Second: I really liked this chapter, I am not even shocked about the marrying thing, I expected it since you let her be become pregnant, so stay on your way, I will follow you :-)

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Funny :-) But if Edward thinks that this could be true he really is an ass.

Nice chapter, thanks for writing.

 

Thanks also for your reading recommendations, "TUOEM" is really great, i read it since a while, but I will also check out the others when I have time.

 

What do you think of "Emancipation Proclamation" by Karizzmatik, I am so addicted to this story I can´t believe it myself.

And from your own interpretation of Edward you must also like "master of the universe" by snowqueens icedragon, don´t you?

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315856
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Add it Up

This chapter was just excellent, awesome, great.

Love your story

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

I love your story so much.

Pure smut and also sweet, I can´t say more ;-)

 

Thank you for sharing.

All the best from Tirol

 

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Uhhhhhhh, the end of this chapter is so sweet.

thank again for sharing,

 

love your story.

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

Great, as always, thanks for sharing.

I am wondering a bit about this "need to kiss and f*** Edward" thing you describe at the beginning of this chapter. I mean, of course I know the feeling when you miss someone and all this stuff, I know the urge to come closer and ........but really NEED? OK maybe it´s just me and I can´t imagine it because I got never "edwardised", unromantic prick that I am ;-)

Hope you had a good time in turkey and are back healthy, sun tanned but without permanent skin damage :-) and in the mood for writing (smuty) fanfic.

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

Love your story, thanks for writing,

I didn´t see the end coming so quick:-(

 

All the best from Austria

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995786
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Yeah, I liked it, thanks for writing.

OMG I would never ever accept any punishment like Mr Bristles , but I can imagine to like the rest ;-)



Author's Response:

thanks for the review

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Sorry, i found this chapter a bit hard to read. I don´t agree with Jaspers and Edward behaviour at all: At this time there was no danger, A and B wanted to talk to them later. Sometimes you have to think things through before you tell someone.  At this point it was not on B to tell Jasper, it was A´s turn. And what is the problem if you tell it just two f... days later? Truth and trust...fine to me, but come on!

Gosh, I can´t imagine how angry I would be if I would be treated the way Bella and Alice were. If my boyfriend would tell me im am not allowed to meet my best friend, I would just laugh! And how can Jasper dare to make Alice appologize to Edward? It´s not his f... business at all.

I get the feeling you describe a 24/7 BDSM relationship. I get the feeling that B loses more and more of her own will. She is under control in every part of her life.

Should I mention that I have no experience in BDSM? Maybe you describe it just right and I just don´t like the lifestyle, I am not sure myself.

Sorry but I really had to let steam off.

None the less, I love your story. Thank you for writing



Author's Response:

keep going iq83 - they are wrong and Bella is getting stronger - believe me keep going.  Thanks so much for your review and your commnents. I really appreciate them all.

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Great chapter, exactly what I needed to read.

Their fight at the beginning was hilarious despite their serious problems.

 

Thank you for writing this epic story, it´s so entertaining to read.

All the best from Austria

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you for your quick answer.

And yes you are totally right!!!!!!!!!!

:-)

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Really great chapter, hot and sweet at the same time.

I wonder a bit how they both could overcome their fight so quickly

They hurt so much in the last chapter and for me their crisis felt so deep. I am not sure if i could just continue from the point where I was before and I sure as hell could never accept that Jasper and Edward just stayed in line with this punishment as for me every part of their reaction was wrong on so many levels.

When they have the feeling, that they have to punish the girls, than for me it would acceptable if they did this as their masters, but never as their boyfriends and I would never get along with this.

Hope I got it right, you know, it´s not so easy for me to review in a foreign language

Once again: Thank you for writing, I love your story so much.

 

 

 

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I really enjoy reading your western story, although the scenerie is normally not my first choice. But as many reviews you got I decided to give your story a chance and I got rewarded. I can not stop me from reading in every free minute.

 

Thanks for writing

All the best from Austria

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71762
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Your Highness rubicon queen,

 

I know, it´s about time to leave my first reply.

I really like your story. To find a new mate for Bella is a very cool idea and I have to say, your story makes sense to me. To leave Bella was cowardly and rash and I am not sure that you can really do something like this if you have found your real mate.

The one thing I don´t agree are their feeding habits: I am no fan of self-justice and also not of death penalty, so I cannot sympathize with their idea of "fair trade food".

 

Otherwise great story, thanks for sharing.

 

yours truly

 

icequeen ;.)