Reviews by artri
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: The Next Move

Loving this story...can't wait for the next update...thank you for all your hard work.

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Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: The Last Straw

Beautifully executed chapter, can't wait to find out what happens next.

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Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 11: The Crossed Paths

Love reading this story.

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Date: 16 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 13: The Pending Assignment

The story is developing smoothly, looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 15: The Modern Fairytale Part I

Delighted to see the new chapter and it is a good one.

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189020
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Really, really, REALLY like this!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you like it!  I have a great time with these characters :)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Second Down

Love the sauna mmmm!!!

Author's Response:

Hehe I want it for my very own :)

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Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line

Bella's word vomit, love it.

Author's Response:

Haha thank you!  I love her word vomit myself!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Airing It Out

Oh!Oh!Methinks there is going to be trouble at said auction, he,he.

Author's Response:

Trouble??? Or fun? :)  We shall see!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher

Hahahaha, Emmett...so much fun.



Author's Response:

:) Yeah he is!  I loved writing him!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive

Loved the auction and as for Emmett...ha,ha,ha,ha Their faces as Esme used the info Bella gave her...just classic...a lovely ending to the chapter and T got hers.

Author's Response:

Thank you :)  Emmett got his this time but you know he kinda loved it!  Having sweet Esme read off the dick names just gave me the giggles.  So glad you enjoyed that and Tanya getting what she deserved ;)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Scrum

Still love Emmett...

Author's Response:

Hehe good.  I adore him so :)

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference

Wo! This is definatly not going to be good. This story is steaming along, love it.

Author's Response:

Haha glad you love it!  Definitely something of interest coming up :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Gaining Ground

Love the wallpaper and the stones, Christ this cracks me up so much fun... As for what they got up to in the movie theatre...if only it were so easy,ha, ha, ha



Author's Response:

Haha glad you loved the wallpaper and the stones and you know I love making you laugh!

It is that easy, at least at that place!  It's a real place and I wanna go, even without an Edward :)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF

That was the funniest...Hahahahahahaah...God what a conversation...sides hurt from laughing. Can't wait to find out what Em has planned.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you had fun with it!  Thank you :)  We'll see what Emmett has in store next!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

Great story, from begining to end...



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you think so!  Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 Dancing with the Emmett

Excellent...



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sequel to The Good & The Bad. Follow Bella & Edward as they mend their relationship & start their new lives in LA. Old friends & new enemies make life more interesting. With Twilight Records blossoming, Bella & Edward find their niche in the music industry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55499 Read Count: 20188
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Bad Girl Bella: I'm responsible now

Oh! hell don't know which out come I want!

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Good Boy Edward: Who’s Your Daddy?

Poor Edward, he,he,he,he...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: he Good Boy Edward: Daddy's Gonna Buy You a Diamond Ring

"Where's my ring, you ass?" Best line ever.

Collide by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We alone, a little flock,
The few who still remain,
Are exiles wandering through the land
In sorrow and in pain...
We wander in the forests dark,
With dogs upon our track;
And like the captive, silent lamb
Men bring us, prisoners, back.
They point to us, amid the throng,
And with their taunts offend,
And long to let the sharpened ax
On heretics descend

 

 

Two lost souls trying to figure out where they belong, collide. What happens when Isabella wants out of the plain life she leads that Edward wants to be accepted into? Will Edward face what he is running from to leave with Bella? Or will Bella surrender and embrace her culture?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57683 Read Count: 11066
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 04 Sep 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Lovely story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76150
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nice beginings...

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think it is Bella he would prefare to teach a lesson to...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Feisty what... this looks to be shaping up to be fun.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ouch... she is falling for him, nicely done.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good writing I can feel my stomach churning...you can feel the upset.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love it...he,he. Can you image Bella's.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I am not surprised...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Cannot wait for more.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That was great, I have been waiting for this update...really like these two and looking forward to keeping up with them as they make this journey.

We're Married by dolphin62598 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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1st Place Winner!! Til Death Do Us Part O/S Contest Entry:A drunken night lands four friends in Vegas with the purpose of getting married. Best friends getting to share their day with each other, but their spur of the moment nuptials don’t turn out as planned.AU/AH/OOC/ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7101 Read Count: 2055
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2010 Updated: 08 Jun 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: We're Married

Good story.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251334
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Really enjoyed the entire story.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting!!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

OK you have me...want to read it all NOW!!!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I love the way this story flows...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I have become so engrossed in the story I forgot to review...what can I say...excellent!!! Love it.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Brave girl...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Like Esme and "all of my boys"

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Keep on writing, still loving this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I can't wait!!!!

Author's Response:

YAY!!! Thanks so much, you never let me down and it really does keep me going

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Lovely start ...

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Very nicely done, slow draw in...

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

way to get the heart rate up...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Ah ha, who could it be?

Keeping the heart rate up...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Powerful piece of writing...*sob*



Author's Response:

Thank you... this was a hard chapter for me to write.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Nice intro, cute.

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Wow! OK the intensity of feeling is... Wow! Going to read more now.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Its sweet, its cute and it is so easy to read.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Love the way you bring ut all together.

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Never ending spiral of desire!!!!

Good one.



Author's Response:

Thanks I am just about to out the next chapter up

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

OH! s*&t... it is not fair on her.



Author's Response:

lol, thanks for reading

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I am sure he did not...you had to be on the nice list for giving everyone so much pleasure with this story...Happy New Year and thank you for a great story. Looking forward tothe continuation...

Author's Response:

PMSL!!! hehehehehe, nah I was tricking, I got some good shit hehehhe but I figured if I pouted I might get a few extra reviews.... LMAO Thanks so much for your support and for all the reviews you send me they are always loved and rev me up for my next ch MWAH!!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Perfect...

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Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Discoveries, discoveries... relly enjoying this very origional.



Author's Response:

Thans for reading

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Love the way you are shaping this story.



Author's Response:

So good to hear... Thanks

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Well maybe she is helping ...maybe not ... we will wait and see.



Author's Response:

hehehehe.... thanks for reiewing and for still reading

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Love Alice when she is trying to keep things to herself.

Reviewer: artri Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

It seems they affect each other...love the way you write.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

God the heat...whew...*wipes sweat off brow*...* fans face*... giggle.



Author's Response:

hehehehe.... you crack me up.... I take it you liked that ch..... thanks for the review

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Well she has the incentive and they are dead men walking...I hope.



Author's Response:

lol.... patients my dear one.... all good things come to those who wait.... she will end them all but not while she is human... hehehe

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Yes you are evil I was engrossed and you ...leave...a...CLIFFIE...screammmm

Author's Response:

hahaha.... at least you didn't have to wait for the next ch......

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

OK your forgiven,RL has been intervening and ch 30 was ready by the time I read ch29...nicely done by the way.
Now...Goddess I hate James...evil little...mutter, mutter ...cretin. A few nasties in this story, really add tension.

Author's Response:

hehehehe... thanks... love the mutter, mutter...... you crack me up

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Oh Goddess I love feisty Bella and more so confused Edward.*giggle*

Author's Response:

*giggle* in deed..... I'm very happy you are enjoying my story

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

OK hate mail it is...not nice...Grrr... not nice at all. Rile us all up and then...stop...poor E&B.
Now I will admit that the rest was very interesting...creepy little...mutter, mutter...hate J... but still...Grrr

Author's Response:

LMAO...... I did warn you before you started that you may want to shoot me before you finished that ch.... hehehehe.... I hope I didn't get you toooooo worked up....hahahaha..... I have been begging Rose & Em to let me into their bed for a night so hopefully we can get a complete lemon.... hehehehehe....

Keep the reviews coming... Grrrr your funny..... I love it

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Wow are her and Edward ever connected...beautifully drawn as usual...the warning was a good idea.You wrote it well, cold, sharp and very harsh.

Author's Response:

hehehehe..... thanks so much I am happy you liked it

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Love Emmy...he,he.

Author's Response:

hahahahaha... I couldn't resist using him for that ch.... thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Hate James...mutter, mutter...creepy yucky little fu.... Hate that he is anywherenear her...he, he can't wait to see what she does to him.

Author's Response:

LMAO!!!! Thank you for your review.... I'm not sure what happens next but you can be sure it won't be good for James...hehehe

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

He got his...good for her...he deserved nothing less.

Author's Response:

I agree... but it may have been nice to see the Cullens rip him a new one...hehehe... Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

A small amount of quiet before the storm?

Author's Response:

hehehehe..... you could say that..... Thanks for pushing that button again you are a superstar

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Love the way this is going...aw hell, just love this story.

Author's Response:

So happy when I woke and saw 22 reviews.. OMG that's soooo cool.... I just posted ch 39

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Yea...fighting Bella, kick their asses.

Author's Response:

hehehehehe.... You haven't seen nothing yet..... Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Take it easy, flu is a bitch and it can take a while to recover from...great chapter...much bonding.

Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch for sending me some much needed love... hehehehe ... I'm glad you liked the ch

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Keep writing...don't stop...it will get here in good time.
Love the bonding between Jasper and Bella.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.... I am always happy to get your feedback

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

You bet I will but then I always do.

Good chapter...needs careful reading.

Part of me feels sorry for Reenee and part of me does not...I find that sad.

Author's Response:

lol....I know you do because you're a superstar!!!!!! I know what you mean about Renee, hers is a hard POV for me to write in....she finally has figured out mothehood though... and if she ever gets out of this situation it will be interesting to see how Esme reacts to her

Thanks for reviewing

 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

You capture every emotion perfectly... Bella's hatred, the families love for her, Edward's desperation and despair.

Author's Response:

OMG!!!! YAY!!!! Thank you soooooo much SqUeAl!!!!! I am bouncing up and down in my chair!!!!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Oh God you are, all caught up and now we have to wait...he,he cant wait... wonderfully HOT!!!

Author's Response:

hehehe.... YAY!!!! thanks for reviewing and I am sooooo happy you liked that ch

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Oh! I love the blushes, embarrassment and gigglyness of them all around Bella.

Author's Response:

hehehehe.... Thanks a bunch I am glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I cannot believe you did that...come to think of it...I can...Grrrr...you better make up for it next time.
A truly stunning story.

Author's Response:

*GaSp* I'm so sorry please don't hurt me!!!! hehehehehe LMAO!!!!!

sQuEaL!!!!! you cracked me up in a big way.... what can I say I am a mean, nasty, evil wench and I love to inflict torture.... OMG talk about stroking my ego "A truly stunning story" are you serious.... WOW!!!! I really hope the next 2 chapters make up for your torment!!!

Thanks soooooooo much

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

You were right to warn about making sure to read the previous chapter and what do I find, I didn't.
Well I have now...They do love her don't they.
Love when all the words come out together from embarrassment or being afraid of Carlise's reaction to Edward.

Author's Response:

hehehehehe.... silly girl you need to be spanked!!!!!! hehehehehe I'm glad you went back and checked because I liked that ch... and yes they do love her very much!!!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

You bet you did, Whew! Very exciting in all senses of the word.

Author's Response:

hehehehehe... Thanks for reviewing I will post next ch asap!!!! I am so happy you liked

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

WOW!!!just WOW!

Author's Response:

hehehehehe MWAH

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Excellent as usual...

Author's Response:

Why thank you ma'am!!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

No need to beg.
What can I say...so exquisitely drawn in words I can see the whole scene.
She is so naughty but oh, she needed to do it or Tania would never let them alone.
Thanks, by the way, for the cliffie dying to know what that is all about.

Author's Response:

AWE!!!! you're awsome, hehehehehe... I am so glad you could picture the scene I really tried to capture it.... OMG I can't believe you thanked me for the cliffie, normally people want to kill me hehehehehe... I won't keep you waiting too long and the cliffy is nothing bad... MWAH to you for reviewing and stroking my ego in all the right places....

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Hot session with B&E
Ha,ha lovely to see Tania so confused...she ain't seen nothing yet.*giggle*

Author's Response:

hehehehehe, I'm thrilled that you liked it... It will be interesting to see where the story takes me... even I have no idea how this is going to play out... Thanks for reviewing... Don't forget to check your email for the link... MWAH!!!!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Fun times acoming...Tania is such fun...I cansee why you like to mess with her. Whew! is all I can say where E&B are concerned.
Will be waiting.

Author's Response:

hehehehehe, YUP it's fun and I find it really funny how many people hate T, I wonder if my upcoming sneakyness will change a few minds or if they will shoot me instead hehehehe

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

As always...leave us wanting more...I begin to suspect the evil gene...will be waiting

Author's Response:

hehehehehe, nah I'm not really evil, I just get such a kick out of all of your reactions hehehehehehe, if I was really evil I'd make ya wait for ever to find out what happens, MWAH!!! stay posted next ch is not far off I'm pretty much finished and I'm really excited with how it turned out...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

This should be interesting and what a cool talent, bolts of lightening,lved her saying"my turn".

Author's Response:

hehehehehe Thanks so much, I am late responding because I figured you would be happier if I hurried up and posted the next ch so its up now go read,

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

There was no way she could part them, glad thats over, now lets see what she will do about Aro...

Author's Response:

hehehehehe, yay you had faith, hummmm not sure what will happen with Aro but it will be big hehehehe

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Me thinks Marcus is for turning...
interesting to see where things go from here.

Author's Response:

hehehehehe, my lips are sealed... Thanks so much for taking the time to review I will try and update asap

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

That was not nice at all...oh I can not wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

hehehehehe I know it was nasty of me but after reading all the reviews I can't find it in me to feel guilty... hehehehehe... I love the pouting from all of you.... MWAH

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Never Say Never

Love the story, dying to see where yor going with this but RL is more important and in order to write well you need to settle that...best of luck and I'll still be waiting for updates.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Never Say Never

Just a note to ask how you are getting on. Hope RL is going better and to wish you well. A. This story was always good.



Author's Response:

hey thanks hun, I just posted an Author's note. 

 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Author Note

Please do continue...your writing was always amazing and the story flowed so smothly, it would be a shame for this wonderful story not to have a fitting end.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings

Still as good as the first time, love your writing style. (Go find a publisher)



Author's Response:

Naw you're a sweetheart, thank you! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42793
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Full Circle

Great story, sorry to see it end but glad it ended this way...love all the multiples.



Author's Response:

thanks!!  so glad you enjoyed it.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Exclusively by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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WINNER - TEXTS FROM LAST NIGHT CONTEST - hosted on Fanfiction.net

 

Edward was a sexual predator. The bars and clubs of Manhattan were his hunting ground. Would he let the ultimate prize slip through his fingers?


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22733 Read Count: 2971
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 31 May 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Epilogue

That was delightful...

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255211
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Now that 'Bella?', at the end has me intrigued.



Author's Response:

I think there was something Edaward was expecting to see, that he didn't ... thanks for reading, until next time...louise

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Great chapter, do love Dougie.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow! That was the best yet...

Author's Response:

I'm glad you are liking the story ...lml

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

What a pack of yoyos, they are not worth her time.

Author's Response:

They are yo-yos...lol