Reviews by mlbf1970
Summary: Past Featured Story

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183781
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: mlbf1970 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Hammering Out a Plan

It's official,  Rosalie and Alice have taken over her life. Telling her what to wear,  what to do, where to go. Showing up uninvited to pressure her into giving details about her personal business. Another story with Bella having no backbone and allowing others to dictate her life. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467281
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mlbf1970 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 47: The Best Years

They are horrible parents. The example they set has come back to bite them in the ass. So willy nilly with their sons having casual sex. Surprised a pregnancy hasn't happened before now. At least Edward was pissed off at CC and Natalie. Bella was like, ok whatever, let Natalie move in and I'll babysit. They didn't do their sons any favors by being so foolish about their sexcapdes.  Why would CC and Natalie want a baby now when neither have graduated high school or can support themselves? Guess they figured stupid Bella would be there with open arms and open door to take care of them and not hold them responsible for anything.

Summary:

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BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 74921
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: mlbf1970 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

What is with Bella always going without underwear? Guess it's suppose to be sexy, but all it is is redundant along with the super tight jeans. Every chapter is the same shit.

Reviewer: mlbf1970 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Emmett needs to seriously mind his own business. Know one said anything when he fucked Rose the same night he met her. At least Edward and Bella waited and got to know each other.  Edward should have told him to stay out of their relationship and mind his own.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533049
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: mlbf1970 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

Hope Aro has enough sense to drop Gina, because she has the potential to be a problem. She seemed put out that Edward didn't remember her and was trying to stare him into recognition.  Lucky Bella didn't peep that out. But Aro does seem like the type that would go for the Skip's sloppy seconds, where as most other guys wouldn't.  He seems desperate for attention.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31183
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: mlbf1970 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

Bella's misdeeds always seem to be forgiven and Edward somehow is the asshole because he doesn't forgive her in 5 minutes. Where as when he does something wrong, she holds a grudge marathon and is encouraged to be a spiteful bitch.

3 Up...3 Down by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary: Past Featured Story

3up

A baseball pitcher, a catcher, and a fact checker/aspiring writer.  If love is so hard for two people, can three possibly make it work?  Edward Cullen has two problems…First, he’s in a secret relationship with his catcher that’s very contentious at times.  Second, his high school girlfriend, his first everything, is back in town.  Will the three strike out or will it be the ultimate homerun?

This story is a poly/slash story.  If that’s not your cup of tea, then I’d urge you to find something else because it begins with a bang, literally.  Edward and Jasper play semi-pro baseball, so there will be some baseball-related action, but it’s not a full-on sports story.  There will be a bit of violence and talk of domestic violence, but I’ve tried to be sensitive and will post a warning in those chapters.  At its heart, it’s a love story.  It’s just not a conventional one.

 

E/J/B and the rest of the cast.  Alice gets someone, too.  Very OOC/Sex/Some violence (nothing sexual)/Rated NC-17 for sex/language/ adult situations.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215194 Read Count: 222316
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Aug 2012
Reviewer: mlbf1970 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - The Keys to Happiness

That bitch Alice shows up on their door step with her drama and then wants to cast a dark cloud of doubt on their relationship. Then she, being the leech she is, ask to stay with them. And as soon as she meets Irina, she's in love. Wasn't she just in love with Seth.

Glass by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 226]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three women develop a close bond despite having never met face to face. When tragedy strikes one of them, they band together to help her heal. A story about friendship, loss, and love.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29708 Read Count: 33974
[Report This] Published: 10 Dec 2012 Updated: 23 Apr 2013
Reviewer: mlbf1970 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Apparently it didn't occur to Emmett to just drive around to look for her before calling people from another state. And they all just jump on planes and rush there, to find her around the corner.