Reviews by mialuvtwilight
A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

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REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167642
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

wow i did not see that coming but i love it and edward will be so happy, and i didn;t really  see the little clues, what were they??can not wait for more!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

so she didn't tell pooredward, what is she doing??? i can't wait for more, she isn't going to break upi with him right!!!???

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

so she didn't tell pooredward, what is she doing??? i can't wait for more, she isn't going to break upi with him right!!!???

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

so she didn't tell pooredward, what is she doing??? i can't wait for more, she isn't going to break upi with him right!!!???

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

wow i feel awful for edward and i'm kind of mad at bella, can;t wait for more!!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

wow this was tough, can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

oh my god, i feel their pain, i can not wait for next monday!!please tell me he will know soon!!??

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

so cute, and gross but that is life, and they were so close can not wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

wow i loved how they just kissed but poor edward he is so overwhelmed, i can not wait to see how this goes and what the girls will say!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

can't wait for thier mext reunion and for them to tell the girls!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

wow i;m lizzie was okay with eveyrhting i can't wait to see how they are doing in the epilogue!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

so sweet can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

aw so sweet and hot it was perfect thanks for such an amazing story!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

loved it it was cute!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

it was nice to see they are so happy!

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

so good!

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Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

so i love this and i hope they can work it out!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i hope they can make it work!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wow poor bella!

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Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

god i can feel the stress and worry in these chapters i just hope everything works out, they are going through so much!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

loved it although it was a little angsty, but i hope verything wroks out!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was so sad I really hope she gets better

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

aw they worked it out!!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I really loved how masen interrupted the wedding and riley and scarlet I really loved how everything worked it and em and rose and the twins! Thanks !!

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

i don't mind jumping forward i love this!

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Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections

i love the pace!!!

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Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls

aw that was so sweet i love him, he was so vulnerable here, so sweet!!!

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Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: You’re Asking Me This NOW?

aw so sweet!

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Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood

aw i loved edward in this and the house sounded awesome ands o cozy and so them!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pushing Boundaries

wow i've never read this kind of date it was so original and very them!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado

can not wait for more and they said it!!!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interruptus

loved it ,can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event

they did it and it was perfect!

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Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Sacrificial Lion

can't wait for more and i hope she agrees to move in with him soon!

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Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers

aw so cute!

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation

they are so cute!

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Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...

i feel so bad for them! can't wait for more!

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards

meeting the parents soon!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

i feel bad for esme, can't wait for more!

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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

aw this was so sweet!

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Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money

aw i'm so happy their business venture is working out, they are so happy, can't wait for more!

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Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them

oh that was interesting!!!

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal

bella is so nice, can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Home Stretch

it's coming along!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge

oh poor bella and edward they'll be fine though!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing

aw all their dreams are coming true! i loved it and i can't believe it's ending, sorry i didn't review last chapter but life is hectic right now!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

aw Kyla was so adorable and their a cute little racing family, i;ll miss them!

Summary:

Edward knew he loved Bella from the first day of pre-k.  Bella's loved everything pink and carnation since Edward gave her one for her birthday.  Remeber a simpler time when your biggest worry was getting your favorite crayon and our booboo's could be kissed away with the promise that it would be better before we got married.  Originally an entry for the Crayola Contest.  My crayon, Carnation Pink. 

Warning: this story is rated K for cavity causing sweetness!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 897 Read Count: 9020
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 05 May 2010
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aw that was so adorable and i could see this going further, just saying, but it gave me butterflies, so cute!



Author's Response:

This one isn't going to be continued in the traditional sense, but I'm planning a multi chapter story that takes place 12 years later with Edward and Bella struggling to battle thru life and hormones when they have such a history...it's much different from A Way Back to When, but there are some definite wink wink, nod nod moments....

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297712
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue nr 1

It was so cute and I can't wait for more Emily is so adorable as well as lily! I'm hapy that Alice and Jasper are getting their baby!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Starting of a new life

I loved it! I loved the wedding and I can't wait for Emily!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Vegas

I really love it and want to keep reading, poor Bella !

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple

I can't wait to get Edwards full story!

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

I can't stp reading!

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip

Wow tough but Im rooting for Edward!

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Husband and Wife

They're getting closer!

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Wedding

I love how they're getting closer and I want to keep reading so bad but I have to sleep!

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown

wow poor bella and edward!

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by

loved it!

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past

I almost cried because poor Emily was worried over gaining weight and I'm worrying about losing weight. Thanks for that wake up call.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday

I love how their relationsip is evovling!

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

I loved it! And they're getting so much closer!

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Leaving on a jet plane

Aw that was so sweet, I love their relationship!

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

Poor Edward, he'll be rewarded with those three little words soon, I love their relationship, I hope I'll have one like theirs someday!

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you

Yay they're so happy!

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Date

Loved the date and the jewelry!

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together

i liked that it was realistic, can;t wait to keep reading!

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

loved it, the sex is getting better, so much better, for poor bella!

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving

Loved tipsy Bella!

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

It's not too soon!

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas

I loved their peaceful Christmas, can't wait to keep reading!

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve

I loved it andci love that they want a baby so badly!

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

I loved their free time and Bella must be preggers!

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A visit to the Hospital

yay she's preggaers, loved it, i am so happy and i just want to keep reading but i have so much to do! RL!

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats

i am so happy for them!

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: I forgive you

Loved it was the quote from remember me?

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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents

I loved how Edward was there and loved and told Bella that she wasn't fat and was beautiful!

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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower

Quote from twilight right? I loved lily and ems push gift!

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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Boy or Girl?

I love the name!

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: New Body

Loved the shopping and babysitting!

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Surprise

i loved the bay shopping i can't wait till thats me, and i was kind of confused with the dream, though!

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Babysitting

Loved the babysitting!

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Stood up

Poor Bella she got accidently stood up! I loved the nursery!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: A mother's touch

I just want to say thanks for such an amazing story; it reminds me of those awesome stories you first find when you discover fanfiction, and I hadn't felt that in a while, thank u and i can't for more! The quote was from eclipse right?

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Best birthday ever

I loved her great idea for his bday, and I loved thebeach, can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Scared of something beautiful

i loved the shaving part and the shower so cute, can not wait for more!

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Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Emily Grace Cullen

I loved it and I like that you tried to make as realistic as possible! I'm kind of hoping for green eyes!

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Coming Home

i'm thinking that alice maybe can't have kids? i really hope she can though because it looks like alice and jas really want a baby!! i love that edward is so understanding and sensitive and that bella isn't pushing him away because she doesn't look the same, i loved it and i can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: On our own

i loved it and they are such a cute little family!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'm glad you liked it! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Halfway to fifty

I loved Emily! They make such a cute family can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Yeah, she's a real cutie-pie! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Therapy

I can't wait to hear what Alice has to say and the flashback was cool and relatable! Emily is so cute, good luck tomorrow! Can't wait for more!

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Alone Time

Inlove that they finally got some alone time and that Alice talked! I feel so bad for her! Cantnwait for more!

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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 46: S: First day in school

I love Emily she is adorable as well as lily and Rachel!!! I loved the pill flushing and hat they're having another baby!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: S: A Shocking Surprise

aw em is so adorable!!!! i loved it and how edward and bella stick through everything thick and thin!!! and they're pregnant can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: S: High School Reunion

Aw they're having a boy!!! I just love the three soon four of them together!!! I hope i have a familyblike theirs someday! I love how strong they were at the reunion and em was just so adorable here she was so great!! And you are one of the most reliable authors! Incant wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: S: Father's Day

It was so sweet! Em was so cute she was aonscared and shy, inloved it!

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue

Wow it was great! Before I forget I would love a PDF file!! So I love how Edward says that they better not run off to Vegas but they did that! I love that ems first date is Jared and Sophia was adorable! I can't wait for outtakes, thanks for such an amazing story!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

what a douche!

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Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

my favorite so far!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

poor edward and bella i can feel their pain!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

so sweet!