Reviews by mialuvtwilight
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

so sweet!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Carlisle's POV

wow big shit happening!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

a boy!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i was scared there for a second!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Tammy's POV

i actually kind of felt bad for her!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

it was beautiful!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Birth

aw i've read so many birth scenes in fanfic but this one had this sense of peace and relief and longing, i loved it!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

wow did not expeect that!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: The Apology...

i loved this it was so sweet and touching, is it done or not?



Author's Response:

Not done yet... almost though, maybe two chapters but Im leaning toward one long one!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well i'm glad there is a little bit left, i love this story!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

This was very interesting!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Extra (takeout)

Aw this was really sweet!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

It was so sweet! And i was thinking she was pregnant!! Please write more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I loved it and inwould love to see more of them!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

aw poor jaack!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

wow victoria is such a bitch!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

i can not wait for more!!! this is so great!!! update soon please i want to see how edward reacts to everything!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

i really hope they can work everything out, i love how edward gives her tingling feelings!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!


XoXo

Shel


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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.

"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."

"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."

"Duly noted, Alice."

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

wow poor edward and i can't wait to see them get together!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

i really loved how well bella, edward, and jack are doing, and i can't wait for more! The whole renee thing was heavy!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

oh edward's not theirs biologically, i almost cried, and i love the emotion thhat edward has!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

i love that Edward and Bella are getting closer, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."    

 

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Loved it and I'm glad everythings good now!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!

♥ Shel ♥

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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."

She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."

The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"

Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.

"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.

Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

they're getting closer, and i love how jack and her baked a cake for edward!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

i absoluty love how edward and bella and jack are so cute together as a fmaily and the couch scene and the office/handolding scene, loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.

Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!

<3 Shel

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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.

"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."

Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.

"What is your problem?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.

"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

ooh i can't wait for Edard and Bella to admit their feelings!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Whoo, hoo!!! can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Aw they are so cute together ibhope when the summer ends they realize that theybcant be apart!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

i love how close they're getting!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

i really liked this one!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

they said it i hope evrything is fine!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

drama, i hope everything works out!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Loved Charlie and I can't that they have the move back to Washington over their heads!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! There are teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Yay Edwards moving with them! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

I love how Edward is already thinking about marriage and that Jack getting lost was resolved very quickly!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!

♥ Shel ♥

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

i loved the fun anf just seeing them get ready for their life together!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

I'm so excited for this to be over with so they can start their lives together!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Loved it and how Bella wants them to live Nd be a family already! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

In other news, Bella and Jack both won the Avant Garde Awards that they were up for! I simply can not thank everyone enough! You guys are the single biggest reason that this story has been as successful as it has! I adore each and every one of you! And not just for voting or reviewing, but for continuing on this journey with me and loving Jack as much as I do!

I'm shooting to have the EPOV up soon, but he's been difficult. I'm also in the process of writing a Victoria POV for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence compilation. It should be interesting to see how well I can channel bat-shit crazy!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Edward, can I ask you something?" she asked in a quiet voice.

He shifted slightly and brushed a piece of hair from her face. "Anything, baby."

She swallowed nervously, worried about what his response would be to her question. "The documents that James showed me, were they real?"

He took a deep breath and nodded hesitantly. Betrayal pierced her heart and she felt tears spring to her eyes.

"Ssh, don't cry," he whispered, brushing thumbed across her cheeks. "It's not like it sounds."

"Then how is it? Why were you petitioning for custody if you're moving across the country? Or was that a lie?" she replied with a small sob, her body beginning to shake.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Aw em and rose are pregnant!!! I can't wait for Edward, Bella, and Jack to be reunited!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.

The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"

She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."

Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"

Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"

"That you have a dad now."

"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."

"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"

Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Inloved riley and Garret they were so much fun!! And I love how Jack is hinting for a little brother and Edwards proposing!!!! I'm so excited can't wait for more! I'm glad he's moving in as well!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

I love how Jack almost caught them and how everyone though Bella was cheating inlove that they can finally be together!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

I loved that they had a girl and that it took Jack a little warming up to get used to the idea of a baby. I'm really going to miss them and I'm excited for your new story! Thanks for this!

Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary:

"I leaned over my wife again and stroke every little inch of her face “I’ll make your pain stop…”  I kissed her unmoving lips with all the love I had as I thrust the sharp needle straight into her heart..."

 

 

 

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"Renesmee's tiny warm hand touched my neck. She showed me the three of us in this room with me holding her and with Bella laying on the bed her thoughts shifted and re-focused on Bella, they had a questioning edge…"

 

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This story is a retelling of Breaking Dawn. It sticks to cannon up until Bella and Edward are back from Isle Esme, from there on it's all mine! In a way this is how I wish Breaking Dawn was written. However, the major focus of this story is on Edward and Renesmee's relationship rather than Bella's experience. So if you're a Dadward fan this story will appeal to you! (or at least I hope it will)

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72115 Read Count: 11221
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2014
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Birth

i loved it and i felt the fatherly love so much, he is so adorbale with her!



Author's Response:

He really is adorable... Too bad we didn't get to see that in BD, eh? Oh well, that's part of the reason we're going to have plenty of Dadward in this story ;) the other part is because I can't help myself!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Conflict

ooh she;s awake!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: A Change of Heart

The flashback was my favorite part I loved how the baby already loved them!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Meeting Renesmee

I love their little family!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Desicions Desicions

I love Edward, Bella and Ren as a little family I can't wait to see the cottage and their life! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Not a moment of peace

I loved the nursery bit!!! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Motherhood

I loved the little drama but fluff at the same time!!! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Tattle Tale

Can't wait for more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183783
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase

I like how Bella had that big a ha moment in therapy and I'm glad Edward proposed although it didn't seem as happy or rommantic in bellas part. I love that em and rose got married and the arch car elevator scene was priceless!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

i love it already!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One

they are so cute together!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Hammering Out a Plan

i loved it!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)

i can't wait for more, i loved it! i loved that bella came up with that idea with Carlie!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating

I loved can't wait for moreno loved the family time and the lovin time!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie...(Part 1)

so he's kind of kinky, like it!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style

i really loved this one! one of my favorites although rose and em arent doing as well! i love how close and tight knit bella, edward, and carlie are at the moment! i also loved the traditions, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

ooh carmen creeped me out! can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Unexpected Surprises

Inloved it! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Settling In

Inloved their family time so I'm scared for the next chapter!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)

wow poor bella, carmen is a pyscho bitch!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)

Sorry it's taken me so long but rl is crazy right now! I love that Edward finally asked her and they'll be together hopefully through everything with Jessica.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident

Loved everything and how they're a cute little family already!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!

Sorry it's taken me so long but I tend to shy away from angst and drama so when you mentioned it I procrastinated! Mybfavorite part was when Edward slipped with the whole mother thing!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time

Loved that they talked!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...

I thought it was Bella

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?

Aw poor em and rose! I love that Bella and Edward are ready to fight! I can not wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming

I loved the BDSM part and the whole marriage talk can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

love how Carlie called Bella momma and Edward was so mean!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...

I loved that they worked it out quickly and the whole school board meeting thing was very interesting! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Commitment and Commitment Issues

I love how Carlie kept saying that they were married and I love the whole Dom/sub relationship!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

WTF???? i am so confused that was a whirlwind!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache

I'm so glad she's back! I can feel how hard the whole situation is going to be for Edward, Bella and Carlie! I know they'll get through it but they just have so many issues now that seems so overwhelming! I can't wait for more! I'm very excited for all the conversations and changes and Carlie seeing Bella again!Noh and Bella said that she's left Carlie twice now, I forget, what was the first time?

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal

I'm glad they're going to counselingand they're working on their problems. Inalso like that Bella isnher own person now and although it was tough they all grew from it! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

I'm glad they're doing better and I love how Bella is mom now and that they're getting married. They're getting there, I'm excited!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

Inloved the wedding and that she's pregnant and the sex was hot as usual can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to!)

Inloved it and that they like the kinky but not to the extremethat it affects their marriage

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

OMB I was scared there for second I almost cried!!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Wow caius was a total creep and Jack was just too funny!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Kind of Horse You Can Only Find in Bora Bora

Inlove that they're doing better and the drama with Carlie was interesting!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Great Car Caper

Aw it's a boy and I love the name! I also loved the whole scheme with em and the car!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Aw the kids are a handful bu fun! I love that Edward and Bella did it in public and the guy thought she was throwing up!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip

Inloved nudist Jack and Carlie growing up! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

I loves the kinky!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

Aw esmes gone! I almost cried a few times, this chapter really minded me of how life goes by so fast and is so precious!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

I loves the name Ruth and how life isn't perfect but it can be worked out! I'll miss this and I would love if possible to see Carlie and will as parents!

Life's Journey by JoeMomma1214 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

LJ_Banner2.jpg Life's Journey Banner 3 picture by joemomma1214

Bella is left with a baby that's not hers. What happens when she meets Edward the Pediatrician? Follow us on Life's Journey.

Rating for language, violence, and citrus...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34843 Read Count: 31444
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you, and thank you for your review!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

aw he is so sweet!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! Gotta love a sweet Edward!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

they are so cute together!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you like their relationship!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

loved it can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I just posted chapter nine... I hope you enjoy it as much as this chapter!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

so cute can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I'll post 10 in a few minutes!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

they're so happy, i hope they catch the people soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. They are happy... too happy maybe...?

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

i liked it, they needed that!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review... You like the next chapter even better! ;)

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

that was really good, and perfect, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank yo so much, and thank you for your review!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

i hope thye find them soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. They will find them... or will they? :)

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yay they're fine and Edward is so cute!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review... Edward is cute!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Aw they said it!

Author's Response:

Yes they did... Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Aw itcwas so cute!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Epilogue

Aw Abby is growing up so adorably! I loved it I hope you do future one shots!

Author's Response:

Thank you for all of your reviews. As of this time, I'm not planning on doing any more for this story... that may change though. (I don't know if you can do story alert on this site or not, but if you can... do it... now!) Hehe... just kidding, but really, do it. :)