Reviews by Wiseoldsoul
Summary:

bannner

 

Isabella is an English woman, married to a Scottish laird, living in a foreign land. Will she be able to find the peace and happiness that she so desperately seeks, or will their differences be too much for them to bear? **Sequel to My Laird**


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20446 Read Count: 57222
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2015 Updated: 13 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

bella is a stubborn, foolish, spoiled woman.

she may be kind but has been very ill mannered 

against the laird whose words are the law, esp since

she doesnt know their ways of life.

also, this doesnt seem like an epic love story. they appear to

be attracted to each other and care for one another, but love?

not so much...yet, they have declared themselves...just don't

buy it with their behavior and their words.



Author's Response:

It was never my intention to write an epic story. Sounds like maybe this one isn't for you ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

Thanks to the LOVELY heartfortwilight for my banner!  I LOVE it!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 99337
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

i love all of the characters you have chosen so far. pierced and tatted edward is always so sexy. fanfiction would be soooo boring and limited if the characters remain the same as the originals...that is the whole point of fanfiction is to allow the fans to broaden the spectrum to use these characters as they see fit with the fics... so whoever said that has no clue what they are talking about.

this isnt the first time i have seen rossum used to portray bella. took me some time to "see" her as bella since there are different pictures/looks of stewart used in these fics, but did think that she (stewart) lacked the "big brown doe-eyes" used to describe bella, which rossum has.

i love everything you have done with the characters so far. i always hated the depressed, quiet, poor, "plain" bella with self esteem issues who always allowed others to walk all over her. i love how carefree, outgoing and somewhat confident this bella is without being too aggressive.

keep up the good work!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I love Emmy as Bella (well, since I look a little like canon Bella in the novels, I see myself as Bella, but I don't think I'm as pretty/hot as Emmy).  Thank you so much for your kind words!  I hope you will continue to love it as I write more!

Summary:

soa

 

Sometimes it’s the ones that are seemingly invisible that have the bigger impact on our lives. This proved to be truer than anyone ever imagined in a town known none other than Charming…

Contains: violence, language, racial remarks, explicit sexual content, abuse, drinking, drugs etc…




Categories: Sons of Anarchy, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Jax
Genre: Action, Drama, Family, Friendship, Horror, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 348213 Read Count: 97804
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2015 Updated: 20 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Arrested Developments

Never saw an episode of Sons of Anarchy...but  read a few fics on them x bella.

should have known you were the author of one of the most interesting/intriguing ones thus far...

as always, cant wait for more updates...

 

 

 

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - An Outlaw's Oath

cant wait for tara to get the beatdown that she deserves...

from both jax and bella :) in front of everyone!!

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 03 May 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - I Got This - Parts 1 and 2

awesome story... what a ride!

so sorry to see it end...

loved every moment of it...

 

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - The Life of a Teller

love all of your stories. hope we see HEA here.

did he just kill david? is this woman tara?

if it is tara, hope he doesn't give her a quick death...

she doesnt deserve it...she needs to suffer a slow torture...

and he deserves some answers.

cant wait for more...and please dont forget your other stories...

waiting for updates on them as well !

 

Crowned by cristina Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

banner

 

A playboy prince and an unwilling princess. An unusual match, brought together by strange circumstances. Will they find love or are they doomed to hate each other? 

Banners made by  the very talented StillDreaming85 and FallingSnow Winter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35361 Read Count: 32511
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2015 Updated: 04 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i certainly do not agree with the kidnapping.

i think she has every right to be upset, pissed.

however, her behavior and the way she speaks is

just too "common". i wish she was somewhat polished.

Summary:

Bound and Dangerous

 

 

 

Sequel to Bound to Family.  A continuing story of Don Edward Cullen and Donna Isabella Volutri-Cullen as they begin their new adventures in combining two power crime families together, while exploring their Dominant/submissive relationship in Master Edward's playroom.  Can they keep their families safe, their relationship safe, or will outside forces tear it apart?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90815 Read Count: 229369
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2015 Updated: 19 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

it keeps getting better and better...

your fic, not the situation, that is....

Taigai Ridatsu by meekobb Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

 

 

Bella is being held captive as a prisoner of the Cullens with no means nor hopes of escaping to safety. When not faced with unspeakable tortures at the hands of captors, she is left in abject isolation – enough to drive a sane person to desperation. Bella uses their projection power in order to escape her bleak circumstances, if only for a few hours. She projects herself across the world one afternoon, after her captors have gone, and encounters Derek. Though they have little time together, Derek quickly becomes a bright spot away from her horrible reality. Gradually, Bella begins to hope that Derek can help her be rescued.


Categories: Teen Wolf, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Derek Hale
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61709 Read Count: 2721
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2015 Updated: 19 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

i love this intrigue..

although i never watched the show, always enjoyed

reading about derek...derek and bella, idk why :)

cant wait to read more! esp the impending showdown,

werewolf vs. vampires ... btw wonder if derek will give jake a

little beatdown...

 

 

 

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

Buying Love GIF

Banners by Mina! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307437
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

i feel like i held my breath for all of this time

and finally able to let some out...

phew.

hopefully, this means edward is at least free from

esme's clutches for good.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 64

i realize this is a sad moment but...

bella was really dumb to do this on her own without

the reinforcement she could have had.

i know she wanted to help and try to get esme on

her own, but you never know with crazies, you need all

the help you can get to capture them.

Summary:



Banner by: AstridGreenEyes-Banners

Summary: Being born into a made family has both advantages and disadvantages. Sometimes a man has to reflect on which relationships he involves himself in.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98617 Read Count: 229009
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2015 Updated: 23 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Love this story thus far. Perhaps aro will hand the reigns to

edward rather than Heidi if she marries Matt...

i also appreciate how quickly you update,

instead of having to wait some indefinite amount

of time. It makes the story all the more enjoyable.

Hate all of the incomplete stories having to wait months, years

for an update. Thank you and plz, keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

I am a bit disappointed that Bella was "weaker" than Tanya ans was captured 

by her.  Wish Bella was more kick ass than she is.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I'm just surprised how Tanya can talk like that to Bella since essentially 

Bella will become aro (his position as the head).

Just imagine what would happen if Tanya behaves like this against aro...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Come on Bella, just a punch at least.

dont let Tanya keep disrespecting you, the head of the family.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

i hope you plan for them to get royce and tanya alive to

torture them to their slow deaths....gaaa, im being quite bad.

Summary:


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 129826 Read Count: 3447
[Report This] Published: 17 Sep 2015 Updated: 17 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

i enjoyed this book so much. i do like that you changed the characters we are familiar with here. i will look for the sequel on wattpad but am sad that it isnt bella/edward story there. i have these 2 characters on my mind since that's the way it started for me. not sure how i can reconcile that with your original characters. i loved how strong and powerful bella was. of course, i didnt like edward in the beginning but as time went on and he has been changing, trying to redeem himself, that helped. it appears we will never see book 2 and 3 with twilight characters. i think it's a shame that not more people have read this great story. if you can convert book 2 and 3 to twilight stories here and elsewhere, people will also read book 1 to get the whole picture. i think this story is too good for it not to be more widely read. thanks for writing. wish book 2 and 3 were available for the conclusion of this awesome story.

Summary:

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What if Bella was the youngest daughter of Galadriel, one who thought was lost but in hiding. What if Gandalf asks for her aid in Thorin's quest.


Categories: Lord of the Rings, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Legolas
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Changing of Tales
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121939 Read Count: 30706
[Report This] Published: 28 Sep 2015 Updated: 19 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Blessed Day

always loved your work!

this is no exception...

am sorry to see this end...may i persuade you to write another

bella/legolas pairing for the LOTR? with much more loving interaction b/t

bella and legolas with bella continuing as a bad-assed elf-witch warrior.

loved her fighting/loving spirit and assertiveness without having to succumb to being

a complete bitch. not enough of this pairing in twilight crossovers.

btw, missing the she-wolf very much...*hint* ;)

thnx for writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

lucky Charm

Edward Cullen's mother taught him that storms are beautiful. They make the air feel clean, while the day is refreshed, and it produces some of the loveliest of rainbows. He will find out they can also bring out your Lucky Charm.    

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10815 Read Count: 16688
[Report This] Published: 01 Oct 2015 Updated: 29 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

cute story.

i do want to read what edward is thinking. we saw that

he was obsessed in finding her for 4 years. we read about

his conversation with jasper right before the storm.

then all we get are bella pov. it would be nice to know

what all edward was doing and thinking throughout the whole

time. we were made privy to his earlier years then afterwards due

much to his mom's influence, then trying to find bella after

seeing her once. imho, it would be great to continue to give us

edward's pov since we have come to care about him through your writing.

not to say you havent done a great job, just a little bit of what i was

expecting as a reader.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you like it. My muse jumps from Isabella to Edward. I can't make it stay with Edward even though his voice comes to me easier than hers? Thank you for reading. I truly appreciate it. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

ttb

 

Isabella, a young girl of seventeen has the world at her feet, but all that is torn away when her father forces her into an arranged marriage with a stranger. #mobward #bratella

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64912 Read Count: 171243
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i read a lot of people cheering on this bella on the review...

but i think she is being a complete brat.

she is very immature throwing these tantrums.

there is obviously a reason behind this arraingement no matter

how much unwanted. she was also aware of arrainged marriages so

if she would be more mature and thoughtful and be patient then perhaps

she will get her answers instead of being so juvenile. she doesnt want to

be treated like a child so she needs to stop behaving like one. she is being too

impulsive, just like a child instead of contemplative and thoughtful like a

mature adult as she would like herself to be treated.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

honestly tried to be in bella's shoes. with her situation, with her age,

her immaturity, etc...

she has a bad attitude, makes terrible choices, and i am

completely irritated with this girl.

except for the physical attraction, i have a hard time understanding

why edward would even like her, let alone love her.

but, i understand this is a fic and we want HEA with cannon pairing...

just wished bella would start to grow up , make better choices with better

attitude, and become a mature adult...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

i think edward has been very patient with bella. we are not dealing with some sensitive little boy, we are dealing with the boss of a mafia. having grown up in this world, bella should recognize how she is pushing all of edward's button and granted he didn't seem too sympathetic to her in the beginning but he prob had no clue how to deal with a teenager with all her emo's and tantrums...for being the boss who is prob quite a scary guy, he had been caring and trying hard at keeping her alive and she didn't make it easy on him and that prob frustrated the hell out of him. we have to give him kudos for keeping his cool and not blow up at her much more than he has done. any other person, he prob would have shot them already...bella keeps saying how he is mad she doesn't do what he says...but what does she expect from the boss who expect everyone to do his bidding as told in the mafia world...she's just lucky she is his wife or she would have been off'd a long time ago...

Under Construction by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 275]
Summary:

Under Construction

 

Bella Swan, a divorced adoption attorney, is relishing her time with her two hot and attentive boyfriends, Edward Masen and Garrett Keyes. Never in her wildest dreams had she ever considered being with two men, let alone two men who adored her as much as they do. Their relationship is perfection. With all new relationships, they are trying to navigate the ins and outs of being together. Their little bubble of sexual exploration is threatened when Bella is sent to New York City for a high profile adoption proceeding.

With a heavy heart, Bella flies out to New York to meet her new clients, close friends of Aro Volturi, her former boss. Carmen and Eleazar D’Amato are finalizing the adoption of a child that they fostered for almost a year and a half, but dealing with them is easy. Running into her ex-husband is not. He manages to appear everywhere once he found out that Bella was in New York. His new marriage has crumbled and his estranged wife has taken their child, hiding him away from James. His job is hanging by a thread and he now blames Bella for everything.

On a whim, Edward and Garrett fly out to New York to surprise Bella. She loses herself with them, but they had an audience. But, who and to what end?

 

Banner by Mina


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33096 Read Count: 45288
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 16 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

grrr,

oh why, why must you have james get the upper hand (with the cameras)

on the threesome...so unfair...he is obviously completely

insane to believe bella had anything to do with his demise...

it was all on him...please, don't allow james to have any real

control over them/bella...not even for one min.

ps. fire the security guy and the girl who allowed james up to bella's place.

no matter the circumstance, the story, they should never have allowed that.

Earn Me by Ila Rose 25 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Anger destroys.

Greed destroys.

Lust destroys.

Love heals.

 

But is the love they once had enough to ease the hurt created from their destroyed marriage? How tragic it is to see a marriage once so strong reduced to nothing.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3023 Read Count: 2487
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2015 Updated: 30 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three

if he loved her so much,

what's with the cheating and the divorce?

just the thought of my husband with another

woman makes me want to puke...not sure how

to forgive and forget all...

this has intrigue and mystery ... hope edward has

real great reasons for all of this deserving of forgiveness

and HEA for him and bella...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

I hope Bella finds love and happiness with garret...

with everything Edward had apparently put Bella through,

he does not deserve her back nor know his child. I hope, 

if he is, he continues to be miserable with Tanya with whom he had the

affair with while married and divorced for... Too bad so sad too late to 

be sorry for all the heartache and cheating...once a cheater....

but I would love to see Edward squirm many times over as well as watch tanya

be somehow belittled many times over by others as well as in public...

vindictive? Hell yea! Basically I want to see Tanya and Edward and maybe Esme too if deserved to feel the emotional pain many times over...

 

 

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

mmm what is going on with these she devils? what really has been going on?

whether edward had been manipulated or whatever the case may be, it will be a hard

sell for bella (i would hope) to forgive edward for everything he put her through.

the humiliation, the lies, the cheating, having to face all of those witches on her own....i cant even fathom picturing my spouse with

another woman kissing let alone having sex...disgusting. i have trouble with people who

forgive so easily unless somehow he was completely and absolutely blameless...

sorry, but i just cannot condone cheating...i am enjoying your story and cant wait to

see everything unravel.

Summary:

fs

What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.

 

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 173762 Read Count: 87142
[Report This] Published: 09 Nov 2015 Updated: 06 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 9: 9: Bumps first picture

being stubborn isnt necessarily bad but bella is

stubborn about stupid things...

in fact, i am not sure i am liking this bella's

personality at all. this version of bella is just

a pain in the ass having issues about stupid

stuff.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 15: 15: Family Buisness

you know?

this bella is a lot of contradiction. here she is

having fears of being kidnapped but has been 

again security detail since she has been young.

she is now preg with triplets yet still against security

when she has 3 children to protect. she recalls what

happened when she was kidnapped before clearly yet

fights against security. what the fk is wrong with her?

she is just a very foolish person. as i said before, she is

stubborn about things she shouldnt be. she is willing to

play with her 3 babies' lives not wanting security. she knows

exactly who her family is yet willing to allow danger to follow

her and her kids...foolish, moronic, idiotic, stupid girl.

Summary: Past Featured Story

SYTYCD

 

The competition is fierce. Dreams are at stake and a budding romance between All-Star, Edward and contestant, Bella are the talk to of the competition. Not to mention jealousy and bitterness from fellow contestants. Will Bella's dream become a reality or will her dreams be dashed before she even gets a chance to compete? Will Edward open his heart to the sweet brunette who captured his attention at the auditions?

 

"And America's Favorite Dancer is..."

 

 

Banner by the talented Mina Rivera

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ON HIATUS


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 209773 Read Count: 45863
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2015 Updated: 30 Nov 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Road to the Finale

will you please stop bella from being soooo nice?

right after the hit, after falling to the floor, bella says, it was an accident.

why would she continue to give alice excuses, an alibi of sort when

she knows how evil alice is?

bella and her friends need to be more offensive, NOT defensive and

just wait for things to happen...it will be too late!

soooo frustrating!

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Final Four

your writing is sooo amazing as always. so much research and effort

i'm sure have gone into this. the emotions your stories evoke show

how great your writing is. of course, you've left us on a sort of a

cliffhanger. so what was all that about the medical file renee gave to alice?

what suspense....cant wait!

Cover up by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 100]
Summary:

cu

Betrayal and revenge are powerful motivators, and when two people who have been betrayed by the same coven come together under dire circumstances, revenge becomes all the more sweet. NM-A/U, N/C, OOC, all normal disclaimers apply

Banner by the wonderful TheDarkFallingStar

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62831 Read Count: 19895
[Report This] Published: 29 Nov 2015 Updated: 02 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Gawd, didn't think bella could get any more

annoying but she has proven us wrong...

love your Peter! wish you'd update more on this.

Summary:

Requiem for a Dream

It started with a ring and a dream, he dreamt of her when he needed her. Will he find her?

 


Categories: Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Klaus
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7589 Read Count: 4266
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2016 Updated: 26 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooo, always enjoyed original/Bella story.

cant wait for more.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

yes, you best run.... :)

so sad...bittersweet .

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 135005
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 19 May 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Would love to watch (read) nurse skank getting her due walking papers...

or at least some tongue lashing.

also, we know emmet is a loud obnoxious guy. He would

not go gently into the night...I mean jail/prison.

would love to see (read) all the crap he would pull in court and well

deserved reprimand.

it was so heart breaking to read all of the previous chapters  against 

Bella. Love love that she is receiving some satisfaction but need more....

with everything she went through 😋

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177659
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - no trucking way

i love this story. it's very smart!

so civilized with documentations for

both legal and illegal...isn't that dangerous?

to have so many illegal documentations? but i supposed

there is little choice in order to keep the "peace".

love how edward can change his facade so quickly

from cool to deadly within millisecond...as needed.

the only complaint i have is that...

you don't update fast enough.

 

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

wow, what a man.

wish such a man existed but doubt so in reality.

he says things without problems . hard to imagine someone

saying such things to a girl...

guess we can all dream.....

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Bitter!

is this an honor and suicide killings? hate to say

#1 did Carlisle kill his daughter then himself...or 

#2 did Alice kill Carlisle as he tried to kill her...or 

#3 did someone else kill both Carlisle and Alice 

are they going to make it look like #1 or frame Jasper or

since it is a mafia world, it was someone, an assassin?

intriguing...

The Bunny Ranch by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary: Past Featured Story

bunny

Her outward beauty entices him, her innocent optimism intrigues him, her loving heart ensnares him. A lighthearted, fluffy tale about how a twenty-something's sanguine leash on life brings joy and happiness to even the gruffest member of the Playboy Club. A/H

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 65809 Read Count: 24564
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 30 May 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

 

i love how you have portrayed these and

their love... they are so awesome...even edward's grouch.

i hope we get to hear *read* the smackdown on

chelsea and kate...they deserve whatever coming

to them...what about that goodbye speech from edward

did chelse not understand? what nerve?

and what a biatch of an exwife thinks she can come in anytime

to his home and feel something is wrong with edward for having a

private time anywhere in his own home?

what is wrong with these women?

oh...and i am sure we have yet to meet the worst of them of all...

victoria! i cant wait til edward and bella knock her down off her pedestal!

i would so enjoy *hopeful*epic annhialation of these mental bitches,

even better if they are loud and public so everyone is privy to their

downfall...

Summary:

learn

Bella is done with Maggie always coming and going as she pleases in her and Edward's house. She is at the point that she will be taking matters into her own hands with some help from others.


 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5470 Read Count: 958
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 09 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 03 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

would have loved to have bella beat her down a bit more...

and how about edward pushing her off and getting away from her

a bit more? i know a guy cant hit a girl, but how about having a body

guard do it for him? edward sounds like he has so many excuses...

it wasnt my fault...she ambushed me... just how many times will he allow her to kiss him before he puts his foot down,,,somehow??

wished we could see maggie be oh so humiliated...what happened in the meeting

is obviously not enough...

 



Author's Response:

This was written for the Down Maggie Down contest for Me and Mr. Cullen by Catastrophia. It has nothing to do with the actual story for that you would need to read MaMC.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A simple experiment turns into a passion-filled night for both, nerdy Bella and motocross racer, Edward. It's a night that neither forgets. Burdened with darkness of their own, can they be more than only half truths? Forgetting it as a lustful desire or fighting for what really matters - what will win at the end? **Control. Possess. Seduce. Contest entry. Won 2 awards**


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Sports
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57580 Read Count: 14363
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2016 Updated: 17 Feb 2018
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

honestly, i was a little nervous about how things

started out in the beginning...the covert meetings

and sex with a stranger in the dark...but your writing made it

so endearing almost, so natural b/t these 2.

and i love how you made bella so smart and not

whiny or weak minded, so far without being obnoxiously

unreasonably stubborn. 

can't wait for the update(s) :)

Summary:

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Summary: She did not expect this, it started something casual and he just… broke down all her walls and vice versa. Cursed Wolf, Sweet Swan… what could go wrong?


Categories: Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Klaus
Genre: Action, Angst, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5717 Read Count: 5703
[Report This] Published: 23 Apr 2016 Updated: 23 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 03 May 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

would love a sequel to this epic love story..

would enjoy some sufferings of the Cullens...

could never figure out why/how bella forgave them so

quickly and easily...

how about torturing Victoria by Nik? that would be

so epic...

yea, this is just the beginning...isn't it?

Summary:

 

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Bella had worked hard and studied hard. She graduated at the top of class. What would her first assignment be?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25483 Read Count: 6511
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Revelations

am so enjoying this story...

please, please don't allow the quileutes to force

the cullens/edward to agree not to change bella, esp

since she is edward's mate. that is such an unnecessary

conflict, imo...i never could understand why couldnt the cullens

simply leave with bella and change her elsewhere, ie. europe,

what was stopping them??

as a vampire, she could not appear to her father/family

anyways so i didnot feel this was much of an issue as

everyone seemed to think.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 helpful advice

love it...

i do worry for edward since he is such

a gentleman how he will effectively

thwart all of those girls who will certainly

try to go after him no matter whether bella

is with him....i hope he is very successful and

is not so gentlemanly in getting rid of those girls

even rudely for some...ahh then we have jake...

please dont follow the book and make him such a good

friend of bella...i hate that in spite of the man she loves

having problems with it, she continues to be very close

with jake ...always wondered how she would feel if edward

had such a close friendship with a girl who loves him??

ty for writing...cant wait for more!

Summary:

rabbit

 

What happens when a freak twister sends Bella, Jake, and Paul back in time? Come and join our three favorite friends on a rip-roaring adventure in the past.

Note: Jake's Rabbit is a convertible in this story. Also, there were adjustments made to the ages of several characters for the sake of story uniformity. A few of the characters are several years older than in the original series. Alternate Universe/Out of Character/Extremely Over The Top

Beta: Mist

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

A special thank you to Mist for the awesome banner and the beta job.

Originally published by mama4dukes on December 12, 2015 on Tricky Raven.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81378 Read Count: 18055
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 21 May 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

😂😅😂😂😂😂😆😆😆😆ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘

LOVE LOVE this story!!  ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘

BRAVO! 

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 21 May 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

😂😅😂😂😂😂😆😆😆😆ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘

LOVE LOVE this story!!  ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘

BRAVO! 

Summary:

Résumé :


Traduction : Edward est fasciné par Bella depuis le début et décide de lui venir en aide. Jasper, déjà éloigné d'Alice qui estime que ses projets pour lui ont échoué, et qui se demandait s'il devait quitter Forks, a ses propres raisons d'essayer de se glisser entre son frère et la nouvelle jeune fille. UA/ OOC. Jasper et Bella. L'histoire est traduite avec la permission de l'auteur.


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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: French
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120074 Read Count: 2018
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2016 Updated: 07 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 12 May 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Boy, edward is really quite obsessed, NOT protective but obsessed. It is really not a bella

Jasper do, is it? For carlisle to even entertain edward's fears is just poor leadership.

He has had soft heart for edward ... no wonder he is spoiled

Whether or not bareback or not ... how dare he ... just b /c he is so obsessed ..

Why has not anyone caught that ??

Rogue by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary:

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Meet Masen.

He is not just any thug growing up in a family of organized crime. He is a man who has changed the way families do business.

Masen is in line to be the next "Boss" for his well connected family, and in one night there is a massacre and all his rivals and their families are wiped out leaving no one left behind. The authorities have no clues as to who, why or how someone could pull off a mass murder of this scale. 

Meet Charlie.

A soldier turned businessman who will stop at nothing to give his little girl whatever her heart desires, and what she wants is something no mafia family has ever been able to stake a claim on...the city of Angels.  

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42527 Read Count: 22440
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2016 Updated: 16 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 19 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

The only thing wrong with your story

is

is that you are not updating fast enough 😏😉

love the lethal strong Bella... Don't want her to show her hand 

first or too early to Edward that she wants him. Let him

"crawl and beg" for her attention.

just wished Edward wasn't such a hard ass jerk with her.

yes, I understand he wants the swans to know how powerful

he is but would love to see him be more affected by her, of course, 

sometime without meaning to be.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Flash Fire

 

She sacrificed a lot for her brother so he could escape hell. Now in isolation, will she find her own happiness or will war come knocking once more?

 

Drabble Fic

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Garrett
Genre: Action, Angst, Friendship, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 124 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54248 Read Count: 51503
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2016 Updated: 24 Dec 2018
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

love this. hope angela gets a dose of real med,

she deserves it. this story is so good but not

being updated fast enough...*hint*

hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

enjoying the fic!

i am having some issues with the font...its very small. tried to increase the size

+text but not working.

is there anything that can be done on your end? i have tried all i can.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

this is getting quite exciting...

Angela starring as "human bella"

would love manipulative edward and alice

try to manipulate isa with edward being star-struck

by enyo/isa...and of course, not succeeding...

always love your fics! tysm!!

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

so fab...getting better and better...

cant wait...ty!

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 09 May 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

just wondering if this isabella is indeed older, 38

according to the years born and changed. so does that

mean that cullen "kids" don't pretend to be high school

kids since jasper is bella's twin? just making sure since

i thought bella was much younger though mature from

having been around for such a long time. i have read this

before but must have missed this...

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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AU in 1950s Paris. Celebrated private detective Charlie Swan is hired to investigate wealthy playboy Edward Cullen who is suspected of having an affair with a rich businessman's wife. Charlie's innocent but overly curious daughter Bella gets too involved with the case. Based on the plot of the 1957 Billy Wilder movie "Love in the Afternoon." Drabble. Updates EVERY DAY. AH, HEA.

Banner by Rita01tx. Beta'd by Frannie Walsh.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15056 Read Count: 20431
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2016 Updated: 09 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm cringing and embarrassed at her behavior.

for an intelligent girl, she's being quite stupid.

what a foolish foolish girl.



Author's Response:

Ah yes, foolish... ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Summary: What if your soul lived in another and theirs lived in you? How would it affect your life until you meet? How would it change your life once you meet; “You are my soul without you I don’t exist”.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92457 Read Count: 10643
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2016 Updated: 27 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: CHAPTER 9 RELAXATION AND PROCESSING

it's a cute little story so far.

the only objection i have is having both rose

and bella be soulmates of emmet and edward

the soul protectors...what are the chances?

plus, it's just too much.

it detracts from the importance of it all,

i feel to have "so many" people involved. instead

of this special feeling between 2, it just seems not as special

to have it happened to 4...



Author's Response:

Well, I just felt everything was always Bella this and Bella that. I wanted a closer bond with Rose. So what if they were sisters and they relied on each other. Thus you have DNA and Gene makeup playing a roll. I wanted Bella seeing to Edward's needs and wants instead of only her's. I wanted a better balance/maturity level between them and everyone else. Edward always felt Emmett was more of a brother, so I let them have that bond. I gave them something they could rely on each other and talk through things that no one else could feel what they feel. Yes we have Carlisle, but brothers talk about things they don't want to say to Dads. I see your point and I did weight that option before starting, but in the long run I was happier this route. It's fantasy and anything can happen that your imagination can dream of hopefully. Thank you so much for sharing you points with me. You will find this story leaves so much open for anyone to take it and run with it from so many directions. If it sparks a story from this for you run with. I will not get mad. Thank you again. P.S. just let me know so I can follow.

 

Summary:

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When a small town girl finds herself in a world of trouble, she turns to an old ‘friend.

 

Rated: NC-17 for the following strong language, drinking, some drug usage, SEX, violence, etc…

 

Genre – action, adventure, drama, romance,  some horror, gore, death

 

 


Categories: Sons of Anarchy, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Chibs
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 292645 Read Count: 38006
[Report This] Published: 28 Jul 2016 Updated: 27 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Everybody hates Chibs

didnt know if i'd like bella/chibs pairing but ... not too bad...

it's not fair to keept these 2 separated at a time like this. bella needs

chibs asap esp in her current condition and chibs will always need

bella. gem might want to let the boys(chibs and jax) in on this right away,

but give tigs time to run off for a while til he can explain better without

getting blown up. can't wait for the update.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Take Me To Church

Hope Tig is left handed..

OUCH!

great fkn story!

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
Summary: Past Featured Story

chimera

 

Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 332982
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

i realize bella is the victim in all this but,

she is being just too stupid, too timid. everything

in this story is going too too slow and bella is too

too frustrating.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

 your stories are always so detailed and have enjoyed

reading them. i didnt want you to misunderstand my previous post 

regarding my frustration at bella which is not completely uncommon

in some of the fanfics. many of her behavior/character befuddles me

and i just want to shake some sense into her sometimes...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

so awesome how he FINALLY figured it out!

what a frustrating road it was...

since Angela was Ben's gf, she along with Alice definitely had

something to do with bella's rape...

angela and alice need to be humiliated somehow publically

and loudly...by edward and bella or edward alone...whoever,

but they are evil twins that need to be put in their place.

edward though "innocent" was too passive in allowing things

to happen to bella...he needs to atone somehow. bella cant just

forgive him immediately...of course, she will allow him to see his

son whenever he wants since she is that kind of girl, but hope she

doesn't forgive him right away. let edward grovel a bit, let him beg...

sorry, i have a bit of a vindictive streak....

i want bella to be vindicated somehow, someway and become stronger

woman and don't allow anyone to take advantage of her ever again.

Tagged by TwiAddictAnne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 74]
Summary:

By nature, all male species want to mark their territories. It’s in their nature to try to keep their female safe and tag them as theirs. I wasn’t an exception … until her. She drove me crazy. She tagged me as hers. And in return, I gave her my heart. All human. Rated for adult themes.

 

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Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11334 Read Count: 15894
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2016 Updated: 07 Nov 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter-7: Crazy, Stupid Love

in stories like this, i do have some sympathy for bella, but she

is wrong. he could have found himself in Chicago whether in his dad's business or

elsewhere. or they could have found a new life together. she should have spoken

with him about it all instead of doing her own thing giving him the ultimatum to go

to Seattle. i have no problem with her chasing her dream, but she did it without

giving any consideration to edward. there longterm separation and ending of

their relationship, it's really all her fault. i have sympathy for her wanting to fly,

but i have no sympathy for the way she did it.

Summary:

stories/7216/images/broken_dreams_&_Battered_Hearts_banner1.jpg

Banner by CloRodeffer

Photographer Bella Swan loves everything about living in Hawaii. The beach, the surf, the warmth. Everything but the two weeks when Professional Beach Volleyball takes over. Now, she's been cast with the joy of capturing every moment with her camera. Only, a tall, auburn haired player isn't making it easy for her to stay professional. Cannon Couples. UA and MA


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102425 Read Count: 41255
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2016 Updated: 19 Dec 2022
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i dont get it. edward has been an ass since she first met him.

he showed no interest in her except to antagonize her.

of course, you could say he was fighting the pull to her, but

that's just too easy. he was/is this cocky good looking athelete

who kept running into her but not really looked to be interested but suddenly

he wants to have dinner with her. now, he wants to somehow be close to her.

idk, i just cannt buy it. suddenly he is a nice guy after learning she has a condition,

is he just being compassionate? of course with bella/edward stories, it's b/c he feels for her...

i guess im just questioning his motive and his feelings just b/c he didnt appear very genuine at all.



Author's Response:

Edward is definitely cocky and arrogant, but that doesn't make him a jerk. He's attracted to her, hence why he basically forced dinner on her. So when she had th seizure, he was scared and needed to know why. Now that he does, he is trying to be a friend. 

Summary:

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Bella meets the Cullens when they move back to Forks. But she's not quite human, she also has a long and interesting past and it's not over for her yet. Short Story. Bella's P.O.V Twilight AU    


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18944 Read Count: 8036
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2016 Updated: 21 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Promises Upheld, New Friends & Loves

this was such a delightful story...

Almost plausible vampire story...

i have enjoyed it quite well...

just a question, did bella become full vampire ever

or remain half human? did she need to take birth control

to prevent pregnancy if she remained half human?

i recall reading they didnt want any more children at

least "for now" but don't recall any more than that on

that subject...ty for writing this...there was a whole lot

of story in just 14 ch...



Author's Response:

Thanks, no Bella didn't need to be changed, she was happy as she was,

I would presume she would need birth control, in case they wanted more in say 200 years time lol

I,m glad you liked it, It was just a bit of fun for myself that grew arms and legs so to speak xx

AAP

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Information Super Highway!

LOL this is quite an amusing story.

poor edward...

from sex symbol to an immature spoiled brat.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I aim to amuse myself first and happily everyone else as well xx

AAP

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Nighean sgadain

Ah Ha moment...

i wondered who you were going to make her mate.

considered the new edward...then thought that would

be so awkward...for the readers and bella.

then considered Garret...wouldn't have minded him..

then you surprise us with Alistair...Great surprise!

i often wondered why he was even in the twilight story...

he didn't really contribute or do anything...except show us a

disgruntled vampire who scowled a lot...but here,

i'm glad you gave him something of a place...not enough story

about him in fanfic world...Looking forward to the rest of the

story....:)



Author's Response:

Thanks, yes I always thought he could have had a bigger part, so I made him special lol xx

AAP

Summary:

If it's out of alignment, we fix it!  If it's unacceptable we fight it! Who are we? We are the Shadows. Twilight AU

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2677 Read Count: 294
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2016 Updated: 26 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Shadows

I got 3 out of 5... not bad :)

thought Jane instead of Alec and

considered peter instead of eleazar.

thought your story may have peter

as former volturi guard.

hope there's more...eventually.



Author's Response:

Thanks, thought Alec would give people trouble, sorry, was just an annoying plot bunny in my head,

so needed to get it out of the way to concentrate on part 3 of the Bella/Garrett series called 

'He Wants, She Wants, What Do I Want?' xx

AAP

Summary:

Banner by StillDreaming85.

Sequel to Danger In New York. 

 

There is no such thing as freedom. 
Marie Cullen: I'm a killer, a criminal, no better than Edward or Carlisle or even Esme. I should feel bad for what I have done. I should mourn for the lives I have taken and probably turn myself in, pay for my crimes. But I felt none of that, I felt nothing in fact. It was them or us, there was no other choice and I made the right choice. I chose him.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85421 Read Count: 50918
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2016 Updated: 09 Jul 2019
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

sorry but why would bella, as smart as she was agree to this

with a stranger when both edward and carlisle are there? this

can only end badly if they find out esp edward. just...dumb.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

i am not sure how i feel about all of this...

i am frustrated with bella for not understanding edward better...

i am frustrated with edward for not being able to keep his head straight

and explain himself already...

i am even more frustrated that bella is too fucking stubborn to try to

have any kind of understanding of everything thats going on...

i bet michael is trying to off both edward and bella...more edward than bella

yes, edward is bad but relatively was/is very good compared to anthony and

did save her under the circumstances...

wish bella would just give edward a chance and wish edward would

just tell janine off loud and clear in front of bella and everybody else...

i would love HEA but not sure how in the world you are going to achieve that...

finally, wish you would update this more...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Bella better start learning to be and act like the don's wife. She doesn't want to return to NY to be the scared little girl but she is just that anywhere and everywhere. She needs to grow the hell up...she had 3 years, living in a fantasy world instead of facing reality. Not sure how long I can take this bitter antagonistic immature girl. Yes, I empathize with her treatment 3years ago...now, it's time for her to rise above it and become a strong fierce wife of the don one who supports her husband; of course, after she gives him a good kick in the ass... he could have had her killed, instead he married her to protect her... Bella needs to start using her brain instead of having misplaced stubbornness.

Summary:

OOTD

 

Edward Cullen is a fallen angel, living among humans. He’s dark, snarky, tattooed and a total badass. However, he still has his wings and angelic powers because the ‘powers that be’ believe that he is capable of redemption, despite being cast out of heaven. His exile was due to the fact that he was interacting with an unknown evil that tempted him over sixty years ago. Because of his mistake, he’s resigned to live out his immortal existence as a bitter angel, caught in limbo.

 

Isabella Swan, a human, is in the wrong place at the wrong time. In her innocence, she manages to worm her way into his heart, bringing him back into the light and out of the darkness.

Banner by Clo Rodeffer

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Gelesen, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108687 Read Count: 68112
[Report This] Published: 03 Dec 2016 Updated: 23 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

i too am rather low on patience regarding bella's situation.

normally, it would take years and years of therapy to get to where

i believe you want her to be...

however, we are not dealing with a "normal" situation.

we have angels and devil and minions so why cant we get some sort

of supernatural solution?? 

perhaps bella somehow overcoming some of her past and helping to defeat the devil, rose, reilly, etc and winning this upcoming

war will empower her to "cleanse" herself of all negative energy?!

of course, this cleansing may also become complete during her transformation

into a full angel?....

certainly, this concept needs to be thought out more/better but something

supernatural would help....imho...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

as smart as bella is as well as all of the angels protecting her,

cant anyone tell her it's ridiculous to try for a new job when her life,

lives of others, lives of angels are all on the line?

isnt this upcoming war a bit more important at the moment? 

she has food, a home, people who love her...what else does she need to survive

without a job at the moment? isnt she being selfish wanting to work at this time? 

they need to focus on the war...winning the war rather than trying to get a job,

get to and fro work, check out all new people at this new school, need more protection

at said new school...just would cause more complication to an already complicated

and dangerous situation. 

did we not read that carlisle once had a child? is bella a descendant of said child? 

also anything involving Jane Hopkins(Volturi, lol) is suspect! lol, imho...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

this is such an unique story, awesome.

love it thus far...

seeing the author's name, i figured, what else is new...

tysm!

Watching! by theadosia57 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

stories/96487/images/W.jpg

Two people told Bella today they've been watching her! Hearing if from one sent a thrill through her, hearing it from the other! Now that just plain sickened her!  While hundreds of miles away a third person wasn't aware yet that he should also have been watching. Twilight AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57034 Read Count: 14552
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2017 Updated: 07 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Those Who Won't Help Themselves!

Not sure how i feel about alice/charlie and jasper/bella...i certainly dont mind jasper /bella mating but alice/charlie on top of that...it's not my favorite...

Just a week before, jasper was w/alice- husband/wife with intimacy

Now, they are w/a father&daughter combo...just not feeling it...i thought it'd be esme/charlie pairing

which may have actually been better but...😒ðŸ˜



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes they were still together, whether they were still intimate is open to personal choice.

But it wouldn't do if everyone liked the same thing xx

Alexis

Summary: Past Featured Story

hopr

Summary: After hearing her son’s birthday wish, Bella decides to contact her ex-boss whom she had a short affair with before quitting, to let him know that he has a son. Edward loved Bella since the first moment he saw her, despite her young age and position he sought her out on many occasions, to merely be rejected in turn. Now that she has returned he hopes they can make things work and finally be together.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151416 Read Count: 127183
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2017 Updated: 07 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 72: Epilogue

i enjoyed this story so much...

sometimes i love reading a fic where majority/all of the situations go perfectly

for couple, bella/edward with awesome communication between the couple and

catching the "bad" guys as soon as or before they act...

love the romantic/whipped edward also.

ty for writing.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 70: Moving Forward

I have to say the whole confrontation with Tanya then with Victoria was a great disappointment. As kind as Bella is, I reject the notion of her allowing such compassion towards Tanya after everything she has done, I mean how many times must edward tell her it was over...get a closure? Isn't it a closure when edward told her it was over before he started to see Bella? How about all of the emails sent and Edwards response? Or how about when she came to his office again? Then after all of those rejections she pulls that scheme wth Victoria and Bella is like"sure, have a moment with my husband". I don't think I would have been that nice...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 59: Downtown Disney

i have read this fic several times and i love it.

this is so romantic perhaps not in a traditional sense

but nevertheless, edward is so loving, a prince charming...

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

ur

 

An Undercover cop and a notorious crime family, what could go wrong?

Peter/Bella

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Action, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28611 Read Count: 9016
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2017 Updated: 25 Feb 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

wow,

what a twist!! brutal on edward...

after i finish this fic, i cannot help

but re-read with the full understanding of

bella's true ID... it makes the story

different than the first read...

well done...never would have guessed!

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

loved it!

love all your fics!

dont ever stop writing!

...please...

ty...

Chicago by highlanderprincess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 234]
Summary: Past Featured Story

chicago

Summary: In the early 1950s, Bella moves to Chicago with her socialite mother in search for a better situation. Bella, who has reached the final stages of her teenage years, finds it hard to live in the shadow of her husband hunting mother who is feeling increasingly threatened as her beautiful daughter grows up. On their first night in the new city, Bella meets a mysterious and older man who starts a fire in her heart that she can't seem to ignore. As Bella lusts after Edward, so does her mother who sees dollar signs instead of a man. Will Bella flourish in the city at her young age, or will she drown into the sea of people the city holds?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86465 Read Count: 56798
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2017 Updated: 21 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life

both of them deserve each other...

he flirted around with a dumb, naive teen who is looking

to get out of her mom's reach and she pushed herself on edward

knowing he was interested in her.

sorry but bella isn't much of a heroin here.in fact, she is an annoying

idiotic teenage girl living in a fairy land looking for HEA with her 

prince charming. she pretended to be wiser than she was and encouraged

and pressed her sexuality on this guy too eager to lose her virginity.

hope she redeems herself somehow but as it stands, her ignorant actions prob

will cause a nightmare for both of them.also, although you can say

that edward was trying to help her, anytime bella needed comforting in this fic,

he seemed cold and is never available right away...he does eventually hug her

in comfort but much later on and she had to get over the "shock" on her own...

in all of the situations...so, just seems he is distant, detached emotionally...of course, 

you can always say he was trying to protect her but he could have at least provided 

some immediate warmth or comfort...

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 64410
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 03 May 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future

i hope bella is feeling very very guilty right now.

not only has she gotten malcom in trouble, but she has messed

the whole plan on this. of course, busybody alice would be the cause

of the whole thing. sorry but i do have some issues with alice

and bella here.

Dine and Dash by KittyTylz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary:

Rival gangs, rival hearts. Maybe he went too far but she was worth risking a gang war for. He wanted her, now he's got her... That dare was unexpected but it served its purpose, the purpose he needed it to.

Bella gets dared to dine and dash a restaurant but gets caught by the owner, Edward Cullen. He's a 19 year old deadly sexy gang leader and the enemy of the gang her best friend Jacob belongs to. Now he's found a way to spin her dare so that it works in his favor. She's stuck in his territory working at his restaurant to avoid a permanent record. What more could a Cullen ask for?

 

(Warnings for - Sex, Crime, Language, Violence, Self-harm)

(Pairing- Edward Cullen and Isabella Swan)

(Repost due to deletion)


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 255047 Read Count: 52790
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2017 Updated: 25 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

i would have loved alternating Edward POV's. i would be interested in

what and how he feels about everything...he is such an important and

interesting character who made the biggest impact in this fic...

he is so patient with bella who is still very irritatingly immature both in age and

in behavior, i really don't know how he does it. yes, he calls her "soulmate"

and seems so much more mature and worldly...opposites attract?

i want to know everything about him since he is such an essential

part to this story. this is such a gripping story, hope to read more soon.

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

PWF

Jackson Teller gets himself into a veritable shit-storm. Will he be able to truly change his fate? Or will Opie do it for him?

Will contain: language, violence, explicit sexual content, abuse, drinking, drugs, smoking.

Genre – action, drama, romance, family, friendship, horror, humor

fs


Categories: Sons of Anarchy, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Jax
Genre: Action, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 348276 Read Count: 39945
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2017 Updated: 08 Feb 2018
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Halo on Fire

Sometimes Bella is way too annoying and a pain. 

She's defensive, all about trying to be so tough and be 

the leader, always trying to do it her way while jax is trying

 to include her and do it together. Yea, he had his own probs too

but it's usually Bella who is trying to start the fights....and jax is

the one trying to grovel..kind of getting tired of her attitude...

yea, I like her bad ass ways but sometimes she's not bad ass, more like

just an ass.

 

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Halo on Fire

Sometimes Bella is way too annoying and a pain. 

She's defensive, all about trying to be so tough and be 

the leader, always trying to do it her way while jax is trying

 to include her and do it together. Yea, he had his own probs too

but it's usually Bella who is trying to start the fights....and jax is

the one trying to grovel..kind of getting tired of her attitude...

yea, I like her bad ass ways but sometimes she's not bad ass, more like

just an ass.

 

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 – The Game

rats! you gave tara an out too fast.

at the least after a beat down by jax, she

should have been tortured slowly...

but she died too fast and got her peace...

just not fair.. :(

Summary:

tranquillity


Bruce called the first person came to mind when he struggled to control the Hulk. Pity he didn't know that doing so would cause a chain reaction.


Categories: Twilight, Avengers, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Thor
Genre: Action, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10123 Read Count: 1297
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2017 Updated: 28 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love, love, loved it!

now, how about part II, 

Death of Odin :Return to Asgard

:)

Summary:

ap

Bella is eating off the streets, edward see her one day, how will he save her


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/None, Edward/None
Genre: Adventure, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 263 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50697 Read Count: 278972
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2017 Updated: 27 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 263: Chapter 263

this story was weird...

however, i did looove the fact that there was

no nonsense drawn out crap against bella...

ie. tanya's pregnancy was immediately shown  to

be not edward's, bella's mom being immediately

villainized by the family, tanya and renee's attempts

curbed at every turn...it was refreshing to read their attempts

not being coddled and put down quickly...i loved that...in some books,

bella is villainized for so long until the truth comes out which is so damn

frustrating... but, this is a strange way to end things...i imagine there

will be a sequel??

Summary:

Who is the mystery patient in room 007 and what happens when a Kind doctor tries to help only to find out her patient is involved in some questionable things. Just who is the kind hearted Dr Isabella Swan.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7060 Read Count: 801
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2017 Updated: 05 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Surprises revealed

interesting but there are waaaay too many questions with 

not enough answers to form any real opinion. 

the only thing i can say is that i am confused. 

obviously these 2 know enough about each other to 

have gotten married with a child now. we know that the

father was not present during the whole 9 months of 

the pregnancy while life continued for bella, which must

have been quite difficult dealing with the pregnancy on

her own as well as working full time? i assume. meanwhile,

she did have some people who cared about her ie. esme and

perhaps carlisle...she was also aware of edward's family since

she wasn't too surprised to learn of his father's behavior or their

involvement with mafia organization. and let's not forget no one in his

family knew of his wife except for esme and carlisle.

that seems to be all we know which doesn't give us a whole lot of anything.

so, though this may be somewhat intriguing, i can only say, Huh? where

the hell was edward for the last ~9 months when she needed him?

Summary: Past Featured Story

tnmc

 

Summary: Antique or Ikea, Beautiful inside or out, maim or kill, he had decisions to make today that would change his life.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 75 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 214108 Read Count: 157705
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2017 Updated: 27 Oct 2018
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

wonder if we'll be reading about a mob torture on michael

who apparently has not only got the hots for Tanya but is good for

nothing letting her into Edward and Bella's home. He must have done 

something to create a diversion for embry. That Tanya gets around.

she needs to be whacked sooner rather than later.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

I love it when the story starts to come

together... and the "good" guys have a nice 

plan to catch all of the nasty players... though

esme is the wife and the mother, she deserves 

to rot in hell for all of her manipulations and 

underhandedness...to actually plan the murders 

of your children and husband... how evil she 

must be...then to try to be with someone who 

made your child miserable, to steal from him, to have

lied to him, to have cheated on him...

guess those women were made for each other.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

a ha... always wondered about those two.

I called it. tanya and esme.. really gross to

think about. 2 nasty bitches. guess they are

made from the same stone. no wonder they 

have a "connection ". disgusting.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

tanya?? perhas as esmes lover?

or if not her, Denali's wife?

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Lol,

bella is going to make this "foul loud mouth"

speak more respectfully and quietly....

sometimes quieter they are, more dangerous they can be ...

love it..but need more Tanya's colorful input.

Married to the Mob by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 688]
Summary:

MOTM

 

Edward Cullen is the heir-apparent to the most infamous crime families in Chicago. He was notorious for his time with his enemies, his many dates and his ruthless skill in the board room, the front for the illicit dealings of the Cullen Crime Consortium. However, to take over the family, his father reminded him about the stipulation that Edward needed to be married. Edward hated that stipulation, but he agreed to it and he had less than a year to make it a reality.

 

 

 

Isabella Swan is a struggling graduate student, working as a waitress in a local diner, The Swan Dive. On a chance meeting, Edward finds Bella to be enchanting and the perfect woman to marry. He makes an indecent proposal, suggesting marriage and paying for Bella’s tuition, and then some. Will Bella accept his proposal, with the possibility of having her dreams come true, but married to a sexy, enigmatic rich businessman? Or will she figure out the truth, that her future-husband is Married to the Mob?

 

Banner by Clo! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 221384 Read Count: 146215
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2017 Updated: 16 Jan 2018
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

hmmm, was she on antibiotics? is that how

she will get pregnant? in many fics, bella tends

to get pregnant due to being on antibiotics thus

preventing the birth control being effective...

we shall see... im surprised no denali sisters confrontations

with edward or bella. those are almost always so juicy...

A Royal Duty by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 279]
Summary:

Story cover


If you were born into royalty, is there anything you wouldn't do for your kingdom and its people? Even when you got no choice in the matter, do you stand with a straight back and accept your fate? What if you're just children? DRABBLE FIC M for future content!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40342 Read Count: 171518
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2018 Updated: 20 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 30 May 2020 Title: A Royal Duty

As ignorant as he is, he's a fully grown adult...he still thought it was alright to have mistresses even when he was in love w/ his queen? Idk...just seems like he obviously had his cake and atenit too which was selfish...if he truly loved bella, i just dont know how he believed it was fine for him to be with other women...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2018 Title: A Royal Duty

i love this story and can feel the ambience of the period. 

i do like that they are discovering each other physically at least

in this scene...i don't like the thought that he performed this act

for his mistresses before his wife whom he supposedly love.

i realize he is somewhat clueless and the idea of the king 

having mistresses is a "no biggi" during the time but just the fact

that he did all this with his mistresses but not for his wife...

just irks me. i certainly hope he never has another mistress 

after his declaration of love for the queen...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2018 Title: A Royal Duty

wished we could have read some dialogue between edward and jane and marcus.

though jane didnot have a trial, perhaps have edward visit these 2 with his guards and jasper prior to the beheading... it would have been interesting

for us to see how crazy jane is and what marcus had to say. of course, when the

engagement was called off, which was all legal, they didnot have to notify the girl, that was the way things

worked in those days...so just curious to see where jane and marcus was coming from

blaming bella in some way and edward as well since all of this was done when they were children. i would think jane and marcus should have been angry at their father 

more than anyone else but displaced their anger onto bella...and edward.

Summary:

Banner

Earthquakes so rarely occur in the Pacific Northwest that the phenomenon causes the members of the Quileute tribe to investigate. They never would have expected to find her. She is stubborn, wild, and fiercely independent, and she willfully goes against everything they try to teach her. Especially when it comes to staying away from vampires. AU/Supernatural


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84901 Read Count: 40204
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2017 Updated: 30 Aug 2019
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2018 Title: Seismic Shift

sorry but this whole situation is a big deal...a life changing big deal.

yet, bella is thinking about school and job that is preventing her

from finding her parents...yes, they are important aspect of life but

as i said, the situation is a great big deal on a whole another

spectrum.



Author's Response:

It is, that's exactly right. It's monumental for her future.

Summary:

paradise

Will Bella ever find her Paradise or will she forever be plagued by fools trying to run her life their way? Well, revenge is a dish best served cold! So they say.  

 

Disclaimer: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35712 Read Count: 7981
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2017 Updated: 30 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 26 May 2020 Title: Chapter 8: PR: We're Not In Kansas Anymore Toto!

Damn, you are an awesome writer...

W/a fkn great imagination! Loved all of your stories and pairing!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you liked it, one of my favourites.

Slightly off the wall Bella xx

Alexis

Eala by Alyscia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 310]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

26167373-10159870349445192-1624629287814295822-nEdward Cullen and Bella Swan have an instant attraction from the first night he walks into her pub. The mob boss and the enforcer's daughter have more in common than they know. Danger is the name of the game, but they must be willing to sacrifice their love for their safety. Will their secrets stay hidden, or will they spill along with their blood?    

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49457 Read Count: 57010
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2017 Updated: 23 May 2018
Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 30 May 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Good story

Hate to say but would have loved to watch alice be humiliated somehow in

front of the family w/her traitorous ass... 😊

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Sorry but no sympathy for the rat. She should have talked to jasper. The

cullens could have done something to help her and her brother. I have always 

been bothered by Alice's spoiled and childish attitude. But I'm sure jasper

will forgive her.



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Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

it's only been 1 year. why would they need the reason to "break" ?

they are young and in love...they can still continue what they have been 

doing at least for now... not that anyone would want to have a secret

romance but in their situation, they can continue to meet... certainly,

they are sad about the situation but at least for now, nothing needs to

change, so why?