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Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995727
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Really enjoying your story so far! I noticed a major inconsistency between this chapter and 16, regarding Edward's housekeepers - the relevant chunks are below.
Edward’s housekeeper, Maggie Paxton and her husband Reggie had worked for the Cullen’s for a long time. They were overjoyed when Edward had offered them the position as his housekeeper and groundskeeper/security when he had built this house. They lived in a lovely coach house apartment above the garages. This afforded them and Edward total privacy and space and yet they were close enough to be on hand when needed.
Edward explained that Reggie was a retired police officer and he and his wife Sarah had worked on his parents Estate, with Reggie being in charge of their security and Sarah running the kitchen. When Edward had built his home, they were looking for something less demanding than a busy Wine Estate and Edward had offered them the job of looking after his home. He had built them a cottage at the end of his property, so that they would have privacy, and they in turn had looked after his home and grounds. It was an arrangement that suited them all very well.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US
I just found your story and read it and the outtakes up to this point over the last few days. I'm really enjoying it so far! I realise you have a beta but I wanted to point out that there are still a lot of errors, especially with similar sounding words and homophones (ie. feint/faint, college/collage, fraise/phrase, parameter/perimeter, lose/loose, your/you're, Nomad/Damon, etc.). It really detracts from the story, which has an awesome plot, and may lose you some readers.
In any case - I'm loving the story and can't wait to read more!
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
E&C definitely need an outtake!
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
Loved your story - can't wait for the sequel!!
Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material
Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76140
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Glad to see you're back - I had almost forgotten about this story! It'll be interesting to get a bit more insight into Bella and her background. Hopefully Edward will clean up his act and stop being such a stalker soon - his behaviour earlier in the story was more creepy than dominant!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I'm thinking she hit Jasper. Glad to see you're back - I love this story! Your Edward borders on creepy, stalker behaviour but something about him pulls me in. I hope you update again soon.
I have consolidated the out takes of People like us into one place! These are the sub stories born out of the pages of PLU.
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54321 Read Count: 226979
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Loved the outtake! Esme & Carlisle are wonderfully done in your story and I'll take as many peeks into their life as you'll write!
Author's Response:
thank you so much - I love writing them!
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254909
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
Loved this lesson for Isabella - I saw it coming as soon as the evening started and Edward told her she could come as often as she liked.
I'm surprised that rape would have been brought up as an issue though. I think Isabella was so deep in subspace it would have been difficult for her to safeword but I doubt it would have been the penetrative sex with Edward that was the issue. If she had safeworded it would likely have been over her own painful orgasms or maybe the humiliation in the morning. She might not have enjoyed the sex or blowjob but it certainly doesn't seem like something she would have safeworded over. Maybe some readers were feeling like the forced orgasms were rape?
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Loving your story so far. I've noticed a couple of times in the last two chapters that you use the word 'withering' when it doesn't seem to make sense. Did you maybe mean 'writhing'? I know you have a beta but there still seem to be a fair few typos and small errors.
Back on to the love though - the plot is awesome!
Author's Response:
Sorry about typos - we are getting better..this is M's first story too ...so if you could just bare with us, maybe by the end of the story it will be perfect ...lol ...thanks for reading ..lml
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96
Wow! I wasn't a fan of Esme after the outtake but I think I like Alice even less! I'm hoping those are just pregnancy hormones talking...
Author's Response:
The Cullen women are -- not outwardly snobby, but it lies underneath. There is a supiority complex they kind of have. Esme's grandmother would call it 'good breading' and 'proper etiquette" Don't be mad at them though, it was ingrained into Esme by her grandmother and like any prejudice it takes time (generations) for those ideas to widdle away....
He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After. From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.
*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113787
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I'm so excited for this story. The first chapter was great and I can't wait to read more!