Reviews by Petralouise
Summary:

OOTD

 

Edward Cullen is a fallen angel, living among humans. He’s dark, snarky, tattooed and a total badass. However, he still has his wings and angelic powers because the ‘powers that be’ believe that he is capable of redemption, despite being cast out of heaven. His exile was due to the fact that he was interacting with an unknown evil that tempted him over sixty years ago. Because of his mistake, he’s resigned to live out his immortal existence as a bitter angel, caught in limbo.

 

Isabella Swan, a human, is in the wrong place at the wrong time. In her innocence, she manages to worm her way into his heart, bringing him back into the light and out of the darkness.

Banner by Clo Rodeffer

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Gelesen, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108687 Read Count: 68145
[Report This] Published: 03 Dec 2016 Updated: 23 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

I always get so excited when I see that you have writin something new. And I can't wait for each new chapter to be posted, yet grow sad as I get closer to the end of each great story. So yet again as this great story comes to its close, I look forward to the next adventure that awaits Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

I shall be sad to see it c

Summary:

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You know that sayin'  'Don't judge a book by its cover', Well they did! So I let her run with it, damn, I hope I've not made a mistake. Twilight AU Jasper's P.O.V  One-Shot


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Couldn't Help It!
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3392 Read Count: 924
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2016 Updated: 07 Dec 2016
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I so love hearing Jaspers take on everything. Another great job



Author's Response:

Thanks, thought that fitted well, he also is not what he appears on first sight xx

Alexis

Summary:

Evidence

Isabella Swan knew exactly what she wanted always and did everything in her power to get it. She was a strong successful lawyer who thought she had everything in her life figured out, until she met him.

Edward Cullen is an international music star who had the entire world in the palm of his hands, and lost it all. He doesn't know what he wants and has no idea where his life is headed. He had nothing in his life figured out, until he met her.

Nothing is ever as it seems. The truths we hide are far greater than any mask we wear.

A story about rediscovering oneself, the world, and each other. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15100 Read Count: 2892
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2016 Updated: 11 Feb 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great intro for Edward 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

❤️❤️❤️❤️

Summary:

 

After losing her best friend from a vampire attack, Bella had learned to fight them and dedicated her life on eradicating them. But what would happen if she falls in love with her sworn enemy? 


P.S. Twilight and its characters belong to Stephenie Meyer. This story belongs to me.    

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Family, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22848 Read Count: 9068
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2016 Updated: 08 Oct 2018
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Found

Don't worry to much about how long it's getting let it unfold and see where it takes you. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for understanding.

Summary:

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I have spent the last sixty years avoidin' the Cullens, my brother told me in the beginnin', her plans for me. Shit! that was not the future I had intended for myself, so I made the decision to never met her, the little control freak. Twilight AU Short Story. Jasper's P.O.V


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21839 Read Count: 15143
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2016 Updated: 24 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 1: I Will Never Be Controlled Again!

Another great read can't wait 



Author's Response:

Thanks, hope you like it, lots going to happen xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 3: My Mate Is Human?

this is getting so good ‘‘‘



Author's Response:

Thanks, hope you continue to enjoy this xx

Alexis

Dangerous Woman by hill00 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

I hate these things lol.... Edward Cullen isn't what everyone thinks he is. Isabella Swan isn't as innocent as everyone thinks. This is their story.....


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11586 Read Count: 3279
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2016 Updated: 22 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That was awesome such a cocky basterd LOVE IT



Author's Response:

Isn't he? lol.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 31 May 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That outfit was hot Edward needs to be more dirty it's so hot when he's nasty and dirty and Bella feeds off it 



Author's Response:

I know it. Edward will be dirtier in other chapters I promise. 

Summary:

ATLBLAH

Edward Cullen and Bella Swan hate each other. They have been wor0king their way up the corporate ladder in the prestigious advertising firm, Volturi Interactive Advertising Agency. Everything is a competition between the two, but when partnered on a lucrative account, will they discover that it’s a thin line between love and hate?

 

 

 

Banner by Clo Rodeffer! Thank you so much! :-)


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33618 Read Count: 4754
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2016 Updated: 29 Dec 2016
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is going to be a great read

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

such a great read

Whats Love? by Alyscia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 145]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is the smartest con artist with dark past.  She's tired of the con and wants to go home. Will Edward be what she has been looking for back home in Forks?

Extreme Angst and Tigger’s. 

 

An amazing author and beta wrote a summary of my story that I just had to share here. I really hope she doesn’t mind. PS (MeteorOnAMoonlessNight). 

Another new author with her first fic,  Bella is a hard hearted con artist, 4 times divorced. As things unravel for her in New York, she makes the decision to go back to Forks to start over, moving in with her foster brother Jasper. Flashbacks reveal that this genius has had a tough childhood with both of her parents dying, leading to a disaster of a foster home. She's really just trying to survive in a cruel world.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41336 Read Count: 23136
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2016 Updated: 08 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is going to be ‘ 



Author's Response:

I hope that is a good thing. I am working deligently on the next chapter. I am wanting to keep it at weekly updates. 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i want to know the history of Bella and jasper ☺



Author's Response:

All in good time. :)

Summary:

Complete AU, AH, PWP. Bella had a fantasy. Alice, her roommate, decided to make it sure came true and enlisted the assistance of Jasper and Edward, two sexy brothers who Bella has been lusting after for months. OS birthday present for QueenOfSmut, need I say more? M for plenty of lemons and little plot.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6812 Read Count: 3124
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2017 Updated: 04 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Super super hot I need to read more of your stuff

Summary:

bellas delights

 

 A childlike man with his love of treats, his younger brother, the love of fall, what more could a girl ask for?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4656 Read Count: 282
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2017 Updated: 14 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

you were spot on with Emmetts  excitement level,  i have an 8 year-old son.who is on the spectrum and anytime he sees anything that has to do with the polor express or the statue of liberty we have excitement. i want to thank you for writing this story and bringing about awareness to these amazing people. and that they can live full lives like everyone else. i hope you write more stories that deal with ASD. i would love to know why you chose this topic to write about. fi_am_i@yahoo.com



Author's Response:

Thank you! I can't say that I will ever write more about someone having ASD even though my 15 year old son might be on the spectrum or so my 21 year old thinks. He's very high functioning if he is, but he also doesn't display a lot of what might think he's on the spectrum. Whenever I think of Emmett I think of him as a big child at times or at least that is how he portrayed. Most of it was inspired by my prereader as she has a friend who's child is on the spectrum and likes things that are familair to him as well things that make him comfortable. One story that I would highly reccommend that you read if you haven't done so is Simply Edward by CaraNo it is up on her Wordpress. Here is the link to it. https://caranofiction.files.wordpress.com/2012/06/simply_edward.pdf

Summary: Past Featured Story

hopr

Summary: After hearing her son’s birthday wish, Bella decides to contact her ex-boss whom she had a short affair with before quitting, to let him know that he has a son. Edward loved Bella since the first moment he saw her, despite her young age and position he sought her out on many occasions, to merely be rejected in turn. Now that she has returned he hopes they can make things work and finally be together.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151416 Read Count: 127183
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2017 Updated: 07 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh the life of a server and college student. I remember those days of waiting tables people are crazy.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish

This is going to be good

Summary:

APS

When Mr. Masen finds a beautiful brunette in a deteriorating strip club he feels instantly drawn to her. Bella wants a new life, but lacks self-control and discipline. Which Mr. Masen can easily teach her with his heavy hand and controlling nature. Will Bella let this mysterious man take her down a dark path? Can Mr. Masen save Bella from her horrid reality? NC-17, BDSM, All human.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35637 Read Count: 37546
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2017 Updated: 07 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Coming Clean

im so enjoying this story i love ’ the notes you leave for your readers. i also like that your adding so much depth to Edward and Bella. looking forward to reading “ the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That means a lot! This story is also on fanfiction and one of my reviewers is a sub, so she is actually helping me out with this story now! so i'm pretty excited about it. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Aftercare

Last two chapters were so well done❤️❤️

Chicago by highlanderprincess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 234]
Summary: Past Featured Story

chicago

Summary: In the early 1950s, Bella moves to Chicago with her socialite mother in search for a better situation. Bella, who has reached the final stages of her teenage years, finds it hard to live in the shadow of her husband hunting mother who is feeling increasingly threatened as her beautiful daughter grows up. On their first night in the new city, Bella meets a mysterious and older man who starts a fire in her heart that she can't seem to ignore. As Bella lusts after Edward, so does her mother who sees dollar signs instead of a man. Will Bella flourish in the city at her young age, or will she drown into the sea of people the city holds?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86465 Read Count: 56798
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2017 Updated: 21 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A New Life

Love this time period of history. Can't wait to dive into the next chapter❤️❤️

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: City Lights Books

❤️❤️❤️

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Edward's Return

Just read the last chapter you've posted..and I can't wait to read the next you have me hooked. 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 04 May 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Look at a New Life

🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻 these last chapters are great as always can't wait for your next post. Hope it's soon❤️❤️

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 06 May 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Wedding

I hope Bella pulls out all the stops that drives dear ole Edward bat crazy

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 26 May 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Revelations

These last updates were great... I love that even though Bella was timed she still went after what she wanted and what she wanted was Edward ... And she was successful in her quest😛😛😛😛

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 29 May 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Discovering the Truth

What a way to learn the truth or the start of it

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life

Oh boy 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Letting Go

Heck yea take that as a complement ... The stories I love most are the ones of Edward being older and with a young Bella ..

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Confrontation

I'm so sorry for your family's loss. I hate saying those words the sound so trite... What I do hope for you and your family is that you all our able to cry together when you need to... To laugh loud and hard when remembering and looking back over the past... To recognize that it's ok to be angry and to feel this huge pain that seems to come in rushing waves when just moments before you feel almost normal... Don't think that you have to be the strong one and hold everything together for everyone else you don't if anything you just never know who's going to step up and take some of the burden and pain just by siting with you cuddled up with one another crying with and for you. .. These are the things that I wish people had said to me and my family when we abruptly found out two weeks ago that my father had died and I prepare to head back home for his service this Thursday. There is no time stamp for how long you mourn so don't think you should just get back to how life was so cry when you feel it sneak up on you no mater how long it's been and those around you are telling you it's been long enough... 

And on aside note I love that Bella went and told her mother to keep her hands off Edward great job❤️❤️

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Interlude

😍😍😍😍

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Interlude

😍😍😍😍

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Chez Paree

A chapter in epov of this night would be great

Summary:

BANNER

Charlie owes the mob an obscene amount of money and  it’s time to pay up. The problem is, he doesn't have the money. So in a last bid to save his own neck, he offers them his daughter. Dark Romance.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27753 Read Count: 53533
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2017 Updated: 17 Feb 2018
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Glad to see you back

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forward to reading this again

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

🐾🐾🐾🐾

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

‘‘‘‘

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

‘‘‘‘‘

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

‘‘‘‘‘

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

He's so bosssy ❤️❤️❤️

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

He's so bosssy ❤️❤️❤️

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So roses dad deals with Edward 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

❤️❤️❤️

Virtuoso by TwiAddictAnne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

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One name. One man. One goal. One principle. To get the job done and get out ... until one day, the job found its way back to him.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25194 Read Count: 7911
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2017 Updated: 04 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter-3: Horses

Post soon

Summary:

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When a mysterious bad boy meets a spoiled princess, is it a recipe for disaster or are they just what the other needs?

*** Mase is Dark, Possessive, and really Cocksure... maybe quite a dick... But I luv him this way!!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21481 Read Count: 6480
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2017 Updated: 21 Sep 2020
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: A Demon ...

You've posted this before I hope you add to it



Author's Response:

Currently working on Chapter 11 from scratch atm, the other chapters are simply getting the once over for boo boos. Hope you enjoy it. 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 2: ... and Angel

Post chapter 3 soon

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Drunk ...

😛😛😛😛😛😛

Summary:

ap

Bella is eating off the streets, edward see her one day, how will he save her


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/None, Edward/None
Genre: Adventure, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 263 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50697 Read Count: 278974
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2017 Updated: 27 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Oh oh Edward 😜😜😜

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

‘🏻’‘🏻

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I wish your chapters were longer 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Will we hear from Edward? And I do wish these chapters were longer 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

❤️❤️❤️

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

😂😂😂

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

She gave a facke name 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

James is a dink 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 BPOV

So when is going tell him her real name

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

These chapter need to be longer 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

When is she going to tell him her real name? I love that Edward left his wallet as a show  show of trust

Summary: Past Featured Story

tnmc

 

Summary: Antique or Ikea, Beautiful inside or out, maim or kill, he had decisions to make today that would change his life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 75 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 214108 Read Count: 157706
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2017 Updated: 27 Oct 2018
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh he's so 😢 sad



Author's Response:

He is at the moment 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is this something your going to work on? I do hope it is 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 27 May 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nice to see you back



Author's Response:

Feel like I've been gone forever !! Xx

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yes that was Classic 



Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

‘🏻‘🏻‘🏻‘🏻‘🏻

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

‘🏻‘🏻‘🏻‘🏻‘🏻

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I hope emmet brings Bella to Edward 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That was a classic move. I can't wait to see Edward's counter move

Married to the Mob by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 688]
Summary:

MOTM

 

Edward Cullen is the heir-apparent to the most infamous crime families in Chicago. He was notorious for his time with his enemies, his many dates and his ruthless skill in the board room, the front for the illicit dealings of the Cullen Crime Consortium. However, to take over the family, his father reminded him about the stipulation that Edward needed to be married. Edward hated that stipulation, but he agreed to it and he had less than a year to make it a reality.

 

 

 

Isabella Swan is a struggling graduate student, working as a waitress in a local diner, The Swan Dive. On a chance meeting, Edward finds Bella to be enchanting and the perfect woman to marry. He makes an indecent proposal, suggesting marriage and paying for Bella’s tuition, and then some. Will Bella accept his proposal, with the possibility of having her dreams come true, but married to a sexy, enigmatic rich businessman? Or will she figure out the truth, that her future-husband is Married to the Mob?

 

Banner by Clo! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 221384 Read Count: 146287
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2017 Updated: 16 Jan 2018
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 03 May 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Happy happy 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I keep checking for your next post to be up so please post soon

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I keep checking for your next post to be up so please post soon

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Was so excited to see your post I had to read right then. And like always a great chapter. Can't wait to read next post I love reading your story's they always pull me in❤️❤️❤️❤️

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm going to hate waiting for the next chapter... 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 15 May 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hate rose loved how Edward slipped the fact that Bella is the women for life and just kept talking like it was nothing.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 31 May 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You are so mean please don't make us wait long❤️❤️

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

❤️❤️❤️❤️ I love when I see that you've posted it makes my day

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So ”””

My Friend by chiqalinda Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 

Jasper and Edward meet in the playground sand box, and become instant friends. Their friendship grows and helps them get through some tough times they encounter. They learn that together they can get through anything life throws at them.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26084 Read Count: 2495
[Report This] Published: 21 Apr 2017 Updated: 20 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

😊😊😊

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

No this chapter was way to short oh I hope you post soon’’



Author's Response:

I know and i'm sorry but it wont but you know what they say, its going to get worse befor it gets better, and it will get bad. that will only make room for the really really good stuff, you have my word. so on the mean time here is an early gift, chiqalinda.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 0: Chapter 1

Looking forward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and the next chapter should be up soon. The story is actually finished I just didn't want to post it all too close together. Again thank you for reading and reviewing, Chiqalinda.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

❤️❤️



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving some love.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That just read as real life with kids they say the most embarrassing things 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I had to think "W.W.NN.S." "What Would NoNo Do?" Oh yeah NoNo is my eight year old nephew. He got the nick name because he was always into something and my brother was for ever calling his name right before he said "NO,NO". So NoNo was my muse for this part of the story. thanks Chiqalinda.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 15 May 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It's fun to see them this young but looking forward to them getting older

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 20 May 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 29 May 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Such sweet boys

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So sweet... How old are the boys now?

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️



Author's Response:

thanks for the love, chiqalinda.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Those last two chapters were such a tease 😮😮😮😮



Author's Response:

I know, I know but belive me it is worth it. please don't hurt me, its like a rollercoster ride, you just have to wait for it, chiqalinda.:)

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

❤️❤️❤️❤️



Author's Response:

thaks, next chapter today and friday too, chiqalinda.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

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Author's Response:

okay so i  know that thungs have been kind od down but i better days are coming you have my word. the boys will get through this. thanks for reviewng chiqalinda.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

😊😊😊

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I can't leave 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

You've killed me



Author's Response:

Awww come on it'll be okay. the boys are tougher the they sound especially Edward. thanks for reading ad reviewing, chiqalinda.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I haven't sent a review in awhile but I wanted to tell you that I'm still loving each and every chapter you post “



Author's Response:

Thank you Petralouise I appreciate that you're still reading 😁. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, chiqalinda.

Summary:

its time

Unbeknownst to her, Isabella Swan's fate was sealed when she was 13 years old. Six years have passed and Edward Cullen has determined that it's time to make himself known. Original One Shot for We Love Mobward Contest. 2nd Place Judge's Pick by Gabby1017


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7407 Read Count: 1448
[Report This] Published: 24 Apr 2017 Updated: 24 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a great story I would love if you wrote more. You could do so much ❤️❤️❤️



Author's Response:

Thank you!  <3

Summary:

Unbeknownst to her, Isabella Swan's fate was sealed when she was 13 years old. Six years have passed and Edward Cullen has determined that it's time to make himself known. Continuation of Original One Shot for We Love Mobward Contest. BPOV


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9610 Read Count: 6259
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2017 Updated: 07 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forward to the next post so glad you wrote me this is going to be a great story



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 05 May 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So happy your going further with this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 18 May 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

As always you've pulled me in😉 looking forward to Alice and Bella building a friendship over the summer vacation 😄



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!  It means everything!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh Edward Edward



Author's Response:

LOL!  :)

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I have not read daddy long legs but the movie was one of my all time faviorits I think I was about 7 the first time I saw the film.. Now having a little girl of my own I look forward to first showing her the animated version first then the fread Astaire one... I love when writers make references to old movies or songs... Your doing a great job