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Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Somewhere in the Middle

AWESOME fucking story!! I wanted to read it all the way through first before I reviewed. First let me say this Edward is fucking HOT!! Second.... my heart goes out to Bella, after what she experienced she should have went crazy and totally shut down, but no... She’s a fighter and I admire that about her. The whole chapter with Jacob’s torture and death was beautiful! It brought a smile to my face... I guess you can say I'm a bit sick, but I don't care.... I am a firm believer in karma! I just want you to know you have me hooked and I can't wait till you update!!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Same In The End

Poor Alice! I hope she can see that Edward was trying to protect her.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Numb

AWESOME story! I had to read the whole thing before I review and I love it. I can't belienve Charlie is gone, poor guy... will Bella ever tell Jacob what caused his heart attack? How are Bella and Edward going to continue being "just friends" again after making love?!?! Keep up the great work, I look forward to your update!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble

Ohhhh! Guess it isn't gonna help that Bella looks like she did in that pic. I can bet they think it's a teacher/student relationship going on!!! Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Allegations & Transgressions

Awesome chapter... I think the Cullens can think of something to get Bella and Edward to appear somewhat "innocent".

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner with the Cullens

Damn! It would have been awesome to hear about Jasper and Emmett shoveling down human food.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

So far I love it!! Poor Edward :(



Author's Response:

Yes, poor boy!  So glad to hear you like it!

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Decisions

Okay... so I do love foreplay.... but come on!! I need more of this story!



Author's Response:

Sorry to laugh...but I am!  (Affectionately!!) lol

Can I recommend cold showers?  ;D

Keep your fingers crossed we get enough response to post thurs instead of Fri! 

Thrilled you're loving it.  Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Regrets

OMG!!! You two are such teases! LOL.... I NEED MORE!!



Author's Response:

Ohhh, but it's so much fun!  I usually write such LONG chapters and get so few reviews, we thought we'd play with this one!  LOL

It's coming darling!  If it's any consolation, we're making our RL friends/readers wait too! :D

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

HAHA!! Her reaction is totally classic for her, she's embarrassed. I know deep down she was really happy to see him, but at the same time totally effin ashamed that he knew what she was there for and that it was him that bided on her. Hopefully she will let him explain... I'll review another 49 times if I must! I REALLY want to know what happens next!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Second Chances

EWWW.... Mike Newton is such a douche, please don't do that! HAHA, Well I have to agree ladies... I'm on the verge of Spontaneous human combustion here! Both of their confessions were so beautiful but now I need some love and lemon goodness here!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

That chapter was one the hottest I have read yet!!!



Author's Response:

Wow!  That just makes my day!  Thank-you so much for reading!!!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

I loved it!!! I think that was the perfect ending.... now if you want to continue with one more chapter completely full of lemon after lemon.... well I would be happy with that as well! ;)

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter12

Of course Bella was right! Come on now, we all know James is a totally douche! You are truly a tease though.... I NEED MORE!!! LOL

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Okay so I just read your whole story in one sitting and LOVED it! I'm not going to be crazy and review every chapter, so I just wanted to let you know that I am completely hooked to your story! PLEASE! OH PLEASE update again soon! I want to know how Alice's date went.  As for Rosalie and her double standards.... totally agree with you there!



Author's Response:

LoL did you read it all today? Wow, I really need to start making my chapters longer...Thanks hun!!!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

LOVED IT! I wish Emmett was my brother! I could only wish, so I had an idea that Edward was behind it, but I just thought he told Emmett and that was it. I didn't even think he was with him. As for there friendship...awesome job Hun!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love the fighting Bella! I think with her knowing that James has a idea that she knows about his drug dealing is in her advantage.  Lets hope she carries her gun on her now when around him!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Tanya the slut...ugh, I've never liked her. She was in town for months and after seeing Edward out with Bella she then decides she wants him when she sees him happy! Are you freaking kidding me, Bella should have beat her ass!!! As for James party... if you think about it, Bella has to go. I mean her cover will be completely blown if she attends the Gala. She's on a case, she needs to continue with her job, then when all is said and done her and Edward can have a natural loving relationship.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

God, I love Alice! I would love to read Rose's POV once they let her know EVERYTHING that has gone down as of yet. That would be interesting!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Rose is.... well.... her emotions are all over the place! Is she bi-polar? Thanks for the update! Hopefully you are over your writers block!



Author's Response:

LoL it would seem so, huh? I never intended to have Rose be so wishy washy..but she has some issues she needs to work out. Also, she is too close to this case, and I think it's a conflict of interest with her.

Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

"The wanton need I had to feel him in my mouth was indescribable and as I took him in, I relished in how good he tasted.” Maybe a grammar mistake.... is that suppose to say "The want and need I had to feel in my mouth...”.

Edward grunts roughly at my words and my body stiffens with my impending release, soon my body was riding out the intense waves of my orgasm orgasm.... You type orgasm in there twice.

Those are the only mistakes I saw, other then that the chapter rocked, I'm a bit nervous about Bella going to James party, I'm afraid he'll end up hurting her worse. What if they ever do investigate Edward and Bella because of the rumors... will Bella be force to let them know she is not underage and that she is actually an undercover cop?

 

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Nice.... I just wish Bella would of beat James a bit more ;)

Liar by Jadiona Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Just a one-shot of how Damien Feels about Zoey’s lies. Takes place between Chosen and Untamed.

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Categories: House of Night, Canon
Characters: Damien/Zoey
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 345 Read Count: 74
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2010
Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohh... I like it, Damian has such a good heart. It was lovely hearing something from him.

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

What the frick is going on!!!!!! No! this is all wrong!?! What the HELL is Edward doing!?!? Obviously he doesn't grasp what this will do to his and Bella "relationship". God he is so naive. I really hope Bella calls Jake out on his shit! Right in front of his wife too!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely adorable!! Please say you’re going to update soon?!?! Defiantly adding this story to my favorites!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

They're falling... and falling fast! I really hope they figure something out before the end of the weekend. Edward seems to really be confortable and enjoying his time with Bella, and the fact that Emma likes her is all the better! Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

There day alone was so adorable! I can't believe Carlisle caught them! LOL, that was priceless. The fact that Edward was able to confide in Jasper was great, I wonder if Bella will fell the need to do the same with Alice. I am happy they want to work things out, hopefully it does!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well that’s just perfect... What can Kate possible want after 3 years, hopefully Edward tells her to kick rocks! And Bella! What is she thinking!?!?!? I hope she decides to end it with Jacob for good, I mean come on... he's with Leah!!! She can't possible condone cheating right!?

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my... poor Bella :(. I can relate to her so bad, I know what she must be going through. She's trying to build that wall up so she can save herself from anymore hurt. Hopefully Edward can break it down.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awesome chapter!!! Glad to see they are trying to work in out.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh please say he gets Emma back safely and Kate gets what she deserves!!!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hope Riley does the right thing here, as well as Kate. She needs to get Emma back to Edward, she can't handle her properly yet.

Love and Obsession by michelly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 284]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Things were just starting to calm down for Emmett and Bella since the death of their parents, when the new kid James comes to town and shakes up Bella’s world.

Her crush had turned into love, his love turned into obsession. His obsession became Bella’s nightmare.

B/Jms at first then B/E


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230732 Read Count: 36438
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

AWESOME! I wanted to read the whole story before I review and so far I really like it! James has this creepy vibe to him that I can't seem to shake off... I usually don't like stories where Edward and Bella aren't the amazing couple and where she gets all her warm and electric feeling from, but so far... I really like this story. Update soon please!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I love E/B don't get me wrong but sometimes... you gotta have a twist. ya know.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh I love me some Patron!! And yes what they say is true ;). LOL, keep them coming love, this story is awesome!



Author's Response:

Patron is the devil!! lol... thanks for the review. And I am so glad you love my story.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

LOVE IT!! Just letting you know, I'm trying to catch up with reading all the new chapters you've posted. So please excuse my lack of reviewing.... I'm just so into this story I can't stop reading enought to do so.... keep it up love!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it... and thank you for your reviews!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ryan is a sweetheart! You know deep down I had a feeling James was cheating... after that night when Bella mentioned she wanted to tell Emmett and he freaked and told her NO! Yeah, dead giveaway!



Author's Response:

I love Ryan too... i almost changed where i was going with the story because i loved him so much... but in the end i had to stick to my story line.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Yea!!!! You don't know how good it felt when Edward and Emmett starting beating James ass!!! And when Edward yelled at James to stay away from his daughter... my heart leaped. AWESOME chapter! BTW... loved how you threw the ending to New Moon in there!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Beautiful!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

YOU TEASE!!! I need to know more!! LOL.... Holy SHIT! I can't believe James is such a freak! Someone needs to take him down NOW! Shit if I was Bella... I would carry a gun with me at ALL time, and not once hesitate to shot that fucker in the head to protect me and my family.



Author's Response:

lol... sorry... but a little cliffy never hurt anyone...lol. shit is about to hit the fan in the next few chapters, i will tell you that.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh shit!! How the fuck did he get in the house?!?!? Someone has to go check on her right? She need to make some noise somehow.... start breaking shit!  Dude, I can't believe you left us hanging like that!!!! Tell me James doesn't take her or hurt her.... Tell me the guys come in and rip his ass apart!



Author's Response:

what i will tell you is next chapter is in the works and is going to be intense. I promise it wont' be too long for the update.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

To be honest.... I am so freakin upset right now!!! How could you let James get her? I just want her and Edward to be happy and raise Emma together. Ugh... I'm gonna continue reading cause I have faith in you, but I can't help the way I feel at the moment.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry your upset but please keep reading. I promise a HEA but it won't be anytime soon.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Don't let those negative comments get to you like that love, people should understand that some stories like this especially need this kind of story line and plot... I'll admit I was upset, but I have that TRUST in you that this will all turn around at some point and be a happy ending full of love. If you want to make this story as believable as possible then you need heartache.... Stephanie did it in New Moon, so we can do it here. So keep your head up and keep up the awesome work.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for that!!!