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Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64202
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
There were a few times where the writing didn't quite flow but I'll choke that up to nerves;-). I am assuming this takes place in the 40's or early 50's due to the lingo which I actually enjoyed.
'Your' Edward is cocky and arrogant as all hell which is fitting for a man in his postition. Bella maybe a 'Canary' but she has some serious bite and isn't about to just rollover for him. Both have strong personalities which can turn into some seriously hot chemistry...ahhh potential for 'CaveWard' to make an appearance;-)
Any story where Bella isn't all that crazy about Jacob gets my vote!! Your story has some serious potential!! I can be pretty finicky but as long as you keep Edward from getting all mushy and Bella from being a doormat I'll stick with ya;-)
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The devil is charming, sweet and manipulative and he always get's what he wants no matter the cost. A dark story of love. ON HOLD UNTIL AUG 2016.
And StillDreaming85
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English, French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58663 Read Count: 52217
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
This is one of the most well written stories I've come across in along time. It's intelligent and I thoroughly enjoy the Art and History. Edward is extremely dark, sexy, provocative, unforgiving and unapologetic. He is everything one would expect from The Devil and your not afraid to cross the line with him and I respect that in a writer. Bella isn't getting on my nerves by impersonating a carpet and letting Edward walk all over her. She is smart, she questions everything even her attraction to him but he is The Devil and she merely a human so honestly what chance would she have? So how does one fall in love with the devil? Better question, how does the Devil learn to love? I look forward to reading what happens next especially to Rosalie.