Reviews by NY13
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

Love it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467281
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Alex Outtake

I love this story and 'The Story of Us'  They're one of my first Twi fanfics and just made me fall in love with your writing.  I always felt like this ended too soon or with a little more to go w/ this outtake and maybe just a bit more of my favorite E&B.  Hope you're doing well and enjoying life. 

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

banner by FrozenSoldier

 

 

banner by SoapyMayhem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312761
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

too cute

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806505
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Wayward Son

Oh when I think of the Years of happiness you gave me from reading your stories - this and The Story of Us and many others.  I've been reading and rereading your work for at least 3 years and it's been wonderful.  Thank you for writing, thank you for being creative and passionate, thank you for not giving up, and thank you for sharing.  It's been a hell of a ride and I've just loved it.   I hope you are happy, healthy, and lucky.  I hope some day you publish or do a pilot or a script and makes lots of money.  Thanks again and I will continue to reread often.  Ny13

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717354
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

'...I know a guy..."  and "tell me what?"  love those lines...they never get old

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Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

good stuff but oh man it seems like he's walking a fine line between Jr and Sr....thanks for sharing your story and I can' t wait for more.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

I like when she grabs onto his shirt and I like the way the house has nothing...starting from scratch.  It sets the tone.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

The plot conflict of not speaking to one another never worked for me.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

OMG...ssssh I loved it....is it weird that I really want pizza now?   This story is too good.  I also think this is the first time Bella actually totally listened to Edward, which I liked.  Also Edward getting all tough on Caius is hot....that's probably weird of me too.  I do sometimes forget all the players and feel like I need a chart.  I hope you don't end this soon cause I feel like I'm walking around Brooklyn again...thank you for sharing your stories.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

these two are so goofy...ssshhh I think I love them....they should get a goofy dog too.....

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Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

love it...

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Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

"I fucking growled, which scared me!"  lol - like when my dog farts and wakes herself up...

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Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Sobs - I love Little Eddie - I'm a mess

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

OMg I died -

Fucking Alice. I wanna see how calm Jasper is the day she goes into labor when I call in a bomb threat . . .

This chapter is so so good and it is scary

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Alice has a big mouth

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Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Hilarious - you are so funny - - I'm dying over here.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Omg - tears - dying laughing - You know I didn't really scream either - just whimpered and pawed the wall over and over.......at the very end I did do that get it out get it out in an exercist voice though (according to hubs)  Thanks for your stories - always

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

good stuff

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I love it Lex

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

really good story

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Belly's confused; that's ok

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Alice is wack-a-doo; I like her.

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Oh my - somebody is going to have to start talking....

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Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Edward using a machete....awful...but I could read about it....oooh shivers

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Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

wow Carlisle complicates everything....it's a conundrum but such a good story

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Date: 02 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

beer gives me gas too

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Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Wack-a-doos and strangely innocent for all his sins.  I kind of love them.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

OMG Lexi -this story is giving me scurvy from all the cock-blocking.  I really love Jasper even though he drives me nuts.  He reminds me of my in-laws and some of their wack-a-doo components who always hold on to an argument even when it makes no sense.  I love Edward and Bella and how they're both relationship neophytes but they gotta keep talking and actually saying something.  THank you and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I love these two and she is young and has a lot to figure out...at least she's talking about it.  I also love how they don't completely have their shit together and how each day they're put another piece of the puzzle in.  I'd also love to see Edward's tat...js.  And love how Edward takes his time to assess the situation...kind of chill.  I hope you don't end this too soon; it's wonderful.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Love it all but man that's such a delicate place to be - between father and son.  I like this Bella; she's young, human, goofy, confused, been through a lot.  She's growing though...getting stronger.  I like the "thing" drama but yeah I could read some more lemons...just saying.  Oh and I always love reading about food...lol.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

oooh take your time...I love it and want it to last

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

I don't know why but I just don't really trust Riley.  Also have to wait and see where CJ ends up.  I think Carlisle is ok as far as any of them go and Jasper just doesn't think stuff through and listen enough.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

I love this story and can't wait for more.

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Date: 24 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

It's like a franchise - you pay for the family name and they give you corp benefits but you run your own business....

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Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Good chapter - It's really wonderful to have someone on your team, at home, whatever, someone that's with you for and against what life throws out there.  It's really what it's all about.   I also loved this "She goes about life all la-di-fucking-da, in her own little world—whether she’s happy, sad, or withdrawn—and then some genius shit flies out of her mouth."   Interesting to see the mob life from 'middle management' POV.  thanks always for sharing your story...

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

hmmmm

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Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

whew good chapter

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Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

woh Ed's moving up fast - love it

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

good chapter...lots of ummm detail

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Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Christ is Bella in labor; these two are wack-a-doo....ssshh I love it

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Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

"You and the fuckin' desert!"   OMG Lexi - stop it's too funny.

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

If Dad was on fire and Elizabeth had a bottle of water, she'd drink it....damn...so good this story

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

This chapter is amazing - so good

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

man so many things to consider

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

good - I always wondered if someone could pick up one of those cannon balls in the park...lol

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

wow - that was scary to me - huh - vry atmospheric

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

This chapter was so very good; I loved everything about it.  First - so heartbreaking Liz's story, unloved, ostricized, scared...so sad for Ed sr, jr and her.  They were all so young and it broke my heart.  So much information too about the families, and Edward's concerns, and yet funny stuff in there too...and Jasper taking those steps.  I could read about these guys forever; your touch is magic.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Love it - so hot

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Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Eddie Spaghetti....

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

love it....thank you so much for continuing this story

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Young women can act silly, but men... Men make bold gestures." I opened the trunk for Bella. The man inside ended up on the pavement. Bella's eyes widened, and she covered her mouth.

 

* Period fic. Takes place in 1958/GangsterWard. 

 

*Not so canon couples, but a few are. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115343 Read Count: 76900
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2013 Updated: 20 Sep 2013
Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm not getting a strong sense of the times and and society may have be male dominated but that doesn't translate to morality.  Mostly I feel like the events are being related but I don't feel the emotions behind them or any rhymn or reason to them like I usually do in your other stories.  And that's  regardless to whether I agree with the actions of the characters. Also don't see any center or the why of the story.



Author's Response:

I honestly don't understand what you're trying to say here. Sorry. 

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

As the story progresses, I really like the AN's, the first paragraph here, and throughout the story your incuding more historic information.  It enriches the story.  I also seem to have more a feel for what motivates the characters particularly Bella and the feeling behind their actions.  I still don't agree with your early premiss of it's a man's world justifies E's actions.  In fact when E had his ephiphany of feeling for Bella, I had trouble buying it.  It was almost as if he went from a robot walking over everyone to a man with a heart?  Maybe his heart was institutionalized in the can?



Author's Response:

I'm sorry. I thought I did a great job of weaving things together. There's a bigger readership on FFnet, so about 100 or so other people thought I did a fantastic job with the time period. They felt they were there. Still, I don't understand your problems regarding this story. Back in those days, it WAS a man's world, sweetheart. The laws, everything was designed that way. I feel I've explained enough in my authors note. And I'm confused as to why you'd continue reading a story you disliked/did not understand. But thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts, even if I still don't understand your point. 

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Outtake One

good stuff

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I could hear a little more about the night Edward's drinking and the two hookers went wrong....just sayin

Summary:

 

Fourth Addition to the Storm Series. This is a compilation of future-takes that follow Riders on the Storm. We'll hear from Damion, Kylie, and Sonny. We'll get glimpses into their future, adult lives. And every Storm character will be present, including Edward and Bella. Romance, Humor, Drama, and slight angst will ensue, along with other genres. *Will Update Quickly*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Drama, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95666 Read Count: 106136
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2013 Updated: 20 Oct 2013
Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Damion Chapter 5

I love Izzy!

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Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Kylie Chapter 4

Love how you show all kinds of households can raise a family. I used to work full time until I had kids.  Then I only worked a few hours a week until my youngest was in all day school.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Santino Chapter 2

I think the gang needs to head back to universal this summer to go to Diagon Alley...

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Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Santino Chapter 7

Omg I love the three witches of Bayridge - Kylie, Maggie, and Jordan.  They are gold together.  Love it.