Reviews by DesertTwilight
Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: DesertTwilight Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - Making a Deal with the Devil

Really loved this story until now.  It's chapter 41 with no resolution in sight.  I love a great dramatic story but now I feel like you're stringing me along with a year-long captive hell and a sequel which suggests that even when they get off the island there is still drama.  I feel likethis great read turned into a cross between Gilligan's Island and a soap opera.  :((



Author's Response:

Hi DesertTwilight

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 41, and glad that until now, you've been enjoying it. I understand your trepidation with how the plot is progressing, but there is a happy ending in sight.

Edward will stay on the island with his family and Larry. He didn't have any choice other than to agree to Aro's blackmail, but he has no intentions of becoming Aro's 'lieutenant' when they return to Hawaii. We won't 'see' Aro again in Wrecked, though he will be a topic of conversation.

There is only about 10 chapters left in Wrecked. Each chapter will span about 4 - 6 weeks and then they will be rescued, but not by Aro. The sequel will pick up about 3 years after they return to Hawaii. Aro will be bested early on in the sequel.

I hope you keep reading, but will understand if you don't want to.

Regards, Jkazzie


Loose Screws by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 505]
Summary:

When your college degree and $2.25 will get you on a ride on a subway, if you weren’t stuck in the Podunk town of Forks, Bella struggles to figure out her adult life. A job that was a last resort, and a feeling she can’t get rid of lead her down a path she never imagined. Forks Hardware is the beginning of that journey, and it’s easy to see that to work there requires a few loose screws.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86660 Read Count: 173570
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2012 Updated: 31 Mar 2013
Reviewer: DesertTwilight Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Love this story!  Can't wait for an update.

Summary:

Home Improvement Project

 

 

Bella Swan would have been content to never leave Forks again after college, but an inheritance from her grandmother changed all that. Sometimes, a little change makes all the difference.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34487 Read Count: 7632
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2019 Updated: 29 Apr 2021
Reviewer: DesertTwilight Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I’m in love with this story!