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Edward saved the life of a girl he was not supposed to save. Bound by secrecy and by the terms of his sentence, he has no choice but to stay away from her. What happens when she accidentally finds him three years after her rescue? What she finds out will turn her life upside down. His time is running out. Will their fate keep them together or tear them apart?
Nominated for an Indie Award!
Romance/Angst/Adventure/No Vampires
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191619 Read Count: 13324
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Twister
WOW What a ride!!!
*clapping wildly*
I voted for SIN in the silent tear awards, and I hope that you win because this is one of the most original Fan Fics that I have been priviledged to read.
I am glad that Edward was allowed to live on as a human. I figured that he would either end up human or Bella would become one of them, and I would have been happy either way!
I am interested in seeing how Bella is going to react to Edward's memory loss. It's going to be so hard for her to be in love with someone who doesn't remember her! I hope that some of the Host are in the Sequel as well.
I am REALLY looking forward to the sequel, so hurry up E!!! :)
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: EPILOGUE
Sweet Jesus! I was blown away by your writing...AGAIN!
I was brought to tears by the fact that Edward doesn't remember Bella at all...the fact that they shared such a passionate relationship only to have it ripped away from her as penance for her knowledge about the world of Gargoyles is just torturous and unfair! She's going to endure so much pain because of his amnesia. Bella said it best when she said that Edward as she knew him is dead…I mean what a mess…she gets Edward back…only to have him be a total stranger with no knowledge of what they shared. WOW...just WOW!!!
It's absolutely brilliant to set up the sequel where the supernatural world of gargoyles is unwilling to tolerate the leniency she received from Aro. You certainly know how to convey a sense of danger. I LOVE Alice and I can’t wait to see more of her.
It warmed my heart to know that you included all 7 members of the host in the sequel! I will be on the edge of my seat the entire time! Oh...can we please have more Jake? I really liked the wolf! :)
It's writing like this that made me fall in love with the world of fan fic! You're so talented; the fact that this story is such a riveting work of art is a testament to the validity of my words! I voted for you and will continue to do so for every category in which you are nominated.
You've created quite a conflict for the sequel, and I will be there every step of the way to see how this pans out!
Please hurry! I hope that you’re writing away because I am on pins and needles until you post the first part of the sequel! :)
BRAVO E!!!!! I would give you a standing ovation if I could! :)
xxoo,
~T
On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.
2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Guest
This story story is very intriguing. I wonder who is watching Bella? I was sad to hear about Esme! :( will continue to read!
Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC. Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.
It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.
*WARNING: Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
This was such a sweet chapter! LOL @ Edward spitting out his drink when he got Bella's text during the poker game! I liked how you wrote the scene with Bella coming out of class and being the subject of mad speculation because of the Vanquish.
Can't wait for the next installment!
I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
You've done such a great job making me care about these characters! WOW @ 2 days full of Edward! That's swoonworthy! :) Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading it! Michele
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading it! Michele
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
WOW Edward really overreacted to that internal exam and Bella didn't respond well. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I am so glad that Edward saw the error of his ways before it was too late! The twins were a nice suprise. I am really enjoying this story! :)
Author's Response:
thank you for reading it!
Bella was a shell after Edward left her. She hated men. She was disgusted by them. She wanted revenge. What better way to get revenge than to use them? The plan works well…until Edward comes back. Bella’s POV.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68969
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Jacob
OMG Edward messed Bella UP! I can't wait to read more! WOW Edward is going to lose his ***T when he comes back and sees what Bella has become!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Jessica & Alex
This is such a cute story! I can't wait for Edward to finally give it up! LOL
Edward is a vampire who preys on the filth who pollute his city. She is his one weakness, her innocence calls to him like nothing else on this earth. Can he stay away from her to save her or will she be his downfall?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19693 Read Count: 2748
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
WOW this was dark but very VERY good!
Favorite line:
"This goddamned city was just like that dog, starving, been eaten alive by it’s own corruptness but struggling to survive despite the hopelessness. If ever a place was damned by god than this was surely it."
This line literally took my breath away! WONDERFUL! IDK if you've ever read the graphic novel Alan Moore's "WATCHMEN" (one of the greatest works EVER) but it reminded me of that sort of writing!
I hope that you continue!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the lovely review. I have read watchmen and some of the sin city graphic novels, i wanted this story to sound like that but didn't know if it would work out. I kind of see Edward as one of those type of characters, flawed but ultimately with more humanity than some people.
Anyway hope you enjoy the second chapter.
Chrissie x
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
This was a great chapter. I am excited to see how Edward is going to save Bella!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
That Rosalie is so nasty! I like the way that you've made the characters your own. I can't wait for the next update! Please hurry! :)
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
This is one of my favorite stories and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing, i'm glad you are enjoying the story and hope you like the next chapter.
Chrissie x
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I like the fact that you had Edward change Bella after James bit her; it's better than the original work that drew it out for 3 books! LOL That's just my opinion anyway. I am glad that you are keeping up with your story and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
I hated that too in the books, i really couldn't understand Edward's reasoning for not changing her. Glad you are enjoying the story and i hope you like the next chapter.
Chrissie x
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Poor Jake. I like how you changed things up from the book as far as the way that Jake becomes a wolf and the shield being impenetrable. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material
Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76150
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like your fiesty Bella! I am glad that she stood up for herself because Edward was soo rude to her!!! It's not nice to ask someone "didn't your mother teach you...."
I am looking forward to reading more!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
WOW Edward was really cruel to Tanya. I hope that he doesn't treat Bella that way. I can't wait to see who is screaming outside the door!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oh NO!!!!!!!!! How embarassing! I wonder how Edward is going to explain this one?? If I was Bella I would have walked out too!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I can't believe that Tanya tried that shit with Bella!! OMG I wish I could beat her ass for trying to force herself on Bella like that!!! I never saw that coming...WOW you really suprised me with that one!!!
I would like to say that your take on the Bella/Edward BSDM thing is really refreshing. It's quite different from other stories with similair themes. I am a huge fan of this story and I will follow it through to the end!
How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is. Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?
Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Surprises
I am glad that Bella accepted James offer to date!! I can't wait to see what Edward does when he finds out!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Unexpected Turn
I am glad that Bella got some from someone else!!! Go Bella!! I can't help but feel as if the shit is about to hit the fan!
I have a theory...I think that James is pursuing Bella to get back at Edward for something. I bet he's the one that started the rumor about them dating so that it would get back to Edward...
It's only a guess...
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: What He Said
I can't BELIEVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG Edward got that two-timing bitch pregnant and then she has the nerve to brag about it like she's won the lottery!!! I wish I could whip her azz myself!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Eyewall
I am so sad for Bella right now. I was right about James, but I realize now that I wish that I was wrong. I can't believe that Edward claims that he wants Bella back but yet he brought trashy Tanya to Em and Rose's wedding. I hate to say this...but your Edward is a real bastard!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Phoenix
This is a great story and you've got me hooked!!! I can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my little story. Here is the James interview. Enjoy!
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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Confessions
LOL @ Edward's nomination for the "what an asshole" award! This was a fabulous chapter. I look forward to reading more.
He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29923
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I LOVE this story!!! Seth is super cute, Collin is adorable, and I like the way that the Cullens interact with each other!
I want to know who is following Bella, and why her boss is being so nice all of a sudden. I hope that you update soon!
FBI psychologist Bella Swan is being stalked by one of criminals she helped put behind bars. When she is forced to leave her home town to lay low for a while, she meets the most gorgeous man she has ever seen. Is he really who he says he is, or is he working for the stalker?
Thank you NoelleSeven for the banner!!!!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277257 Read Count: 40875
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Everybody's Fool
I can completely understand why Bella is so hesitant to trust Edward again. You did a great job conveying Edward and Bella's conflicting emotions. It's going to be very interesting now that they are living together.
I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
You will get to see a little of what happens as a result of them living together in the next chapter. Plus they will have a nice long talk.
Thanks for reading, if you want to see a teaser for chapter nine it is posted on my blog.
EA~
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238937
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I really like this story. It's quite different from others that I have read.
Why is everyone intimidated by Edward? I guess we will find out more about that later.
I despise Tanya and I can't wait for her to get her due. I doubt that she has as much power as she insinuated that she does.
I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you like this story so far. =)
Yeah, I hate Tanya too. Hopefully, she'll get hers soon.
Thanks for reading/commenting =) I'll post ch. 5 soon
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I am so glad that skank Tanya got what was coming to her!!! I thought that this chapter was sooo sweet! I love your Edward and I can't wait to see the bond/ relationship between B &E blossom! And no...you are not twisted. I like that you made the mating venom red!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you don't think I'm twisted 'cept you may change your mind when E&B engage in bloodplay in future chapters ;) LOL I hope you'll like it. Thank you, I'm happy you like my Edward =) I hope you'll continue to find this story interesting. The red venom came to mind when I thought about E&B's love. Awwww LOL
Thanks for reading/commenting/liking.
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105129
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
I LOVE THIS STORY!! It's quite unique from other fics that I have read about the "lifestyle!"
I can't wait to read more and I hope that you continue this story.
Author's Response:
I am deffinately continuing this story. The fans like you have been great! Next chapter is already written just waiting for it to come back from my so talented beta! Thank you for reading snd review it!
Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Rocking Car
Luv your Assward...and he IS a HUGE ASS!!! :)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Life as we knew it
I know the quote:
"The absence of him is everywhere I look. It was like a huge hole had been punched through my chest."
That's from New Moon.
I am sad about Jake...What a tragedy. Edward is still an ass.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: New Girl
I love the new Bella. She's standing up for herself and is a lot more fiesty!!!
I still can't stand Edward. :)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Life from a new perspective
Edward is still and ass...and someone needs to whip Lauren's ass for what she did to Bella.
I am still loving the new Bella, and I can't wait for things to heat up between Bella and Edward.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Happy fucking birthday
I loved this chapter!!! My favorite part was when Edward showed out on Lauren's spiteful ass!!! This is a great story and I am excited to see what happens next.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Sunburned
Great chapter! You can see that they're getting closer as they spend more time together! I have had a terrible sunburn as well so I know what Bella felt like. I can't wait until next week's update. :)
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: That special moment
This was my favorite chapter to date! That kiss was so precious, but hot at the same time! For a minute, I thought that Bella was going to let Edward have her virginity too (I only say that because she wanted more).
Congrats on the new job! I can't wait for the next update.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Back to reality
My fav. chapter to date! The ending was awesome! I am glad that Edward finally admitted his feelings for Bella and I am excited for the next update. Merry Christmas!
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389624
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
I like how you've created a situation where Bella and Edward know each other, but they don't know that they have a past yet. I love this story and I will continue to read.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, I really glad you're enjoying it! Thank you for taking the time to read and leave me a review!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
-thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-
There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?
Lemon? Yes please!
-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84276
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - The Pleasure
*(&^$%#^#$#$%%^&*(*((()()%$##!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ONE OF THE HOTTEST LEMONS I HAVE EVER READ!
Shit, it's just after noon and I made this mistake of reading this early!! Now I don't trust myself out in public!!!
You killed that! The banter between the two really put this chapter off the charts. LOVE the sexy talk!!
Damn girl! :)
Author's Response:
LMFAO!!!!!
Now THAT was a great review! Thank you so much!
I'm thrilled that you liked it! :)
Yay!
xoxo
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - The Present
Best chapter yet!!! I am so glad that Bella told Edward the truth. I felt so sad when she realized that he intended to teach her a lesson...if I were her, I would be mortified if I thought that someone I cared about would have slept with me and then used it to hurt my feelings. The end of this chapter was soooo good!!! The lust was off the hook between these two! I at work but I damn near fell out of my seat when Edward said "don't make me make a liar out of you again Bella." HOLY SHIT!!! I can't wait until the next chapter...I am going to enjoy reading about how Edward does just that. :)
Author's Response:
LOL!
BEST REVIEW YET! ;)
Thanks for sharing! So glad you enjoyd E's words...I would die if a man says that to me! Lucky Bella! ;)
XOXO
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - The Progression
LUV it and can't wait for the next chapter!!!! I feel so sorry for Bella though...she's gonna get hurt, I can feel it. Edward still talks about his "plan" and the "game" so even though his feelings have progressed, he still has a vendetta. Please update soon!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
Very unique idea! Love it so far!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Practice
This is one of my favorite stories! I really like the fact that your story has Bella as the boss, and Edward as the employee. Poor Bella likes Edward a lot, more than she has admitted to herself. I think that the tension between them is just right!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
I think that Edward found out that Bella manipulated the facts surrouding Aro's review of his manuscript. That doesn't bode well for Bella. I bet Jessica ran her fat trap because she was pissed that Bella got the editing rights. I can't wait to see if I am right!
And I want to smack Renee for brining up Leah and Jacob. Why on earth would she be so insensitive?
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
I knew it! I almost feel sorry for Bella now, because Edward certainly has the upper hand now that he knows how dishonest Bella was about his manuscript! It's reallly getting good now!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Player
I hope that Edward doesn't humiliate Bella at that wedding! Oh my goodness I know he deserves some recompense but by then Bella will probably care for him! Oh lord...
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Prick
This was the cutest chapter! I enjoyed the game of Scrabble! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
There is no way that Edward slept through that!!!! Great chapter! Poor Bella, I almost feel sorry for her...ALMOST!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
Hottest masturbation scene EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jesus thank god I am alone!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow
I love love LUV this story! You can see that the tension is building between the two. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - The Pick-up line
This story highest lust rankings ever!!!! They haven't even shared a real kiss yet but I still find the plotline so captivating. I am glad that Bella finally admitted that she wants Edward, but I wish that they would stop dancing around each other so that they can move forward. LUV this story and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
LMAO!
Sometimes I want to kill myself for writing such stuborn, complex characters! They're killing me!
Nevertheless...we'll get to the emo parts soon enough. :)
Thanks for the awesome review!
xoxo
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Progression Part Two
Wonderful job with this chapter. The lemon was great, even more so for me because I LUV me some carrot cake (my mom makes the best carrot cake ever!). I dislike how Rose acts as if she's Edward and Bella's judge and jury. Her rude remarks would have gotten her an earful from me!
I love how things are moving forward between them but Bella needs to fess up right away. Edward seems confused, as if he cares for her but is afraid to trust her because he knows what she did. She's reallly digging her own grave by being dishonest.
Luv the story and can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 14 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - The Pants
I absolutely adore this story!!! You did such an amazing job with this chapter. I LUVED Edward's game that revealed his secrets to her. Glad that Bella didn't ditch Alice to be with Edward. I think it's adorable that Edward tracked her down to apologize. Honestly, you can feel things really blossoming between this two and I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response:
Yay!! *blushes*
Thank you SO MUCH!! Your kind words means the world to me.
Keep well girlie!
xoxo