Reviews by kneon
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Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177881
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: kneon Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)

Great chapter.  I see that there is going to be a threat from the Russians.  I’m glad I love this story so much.

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Date: 11 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Bitter!

Wow, I kept waiting for something to happen at the wedding. Then when Edward got a phone call I thought something happened to Lizzie.  Didn't see something happening to Carlisle & Alice.  I love this story can't wait to see what happenes.

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Date: 15 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Wow I can’t wait to hear why?  Love this story so much.

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Date: 02 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: pride & folly

I love this story because you keep us on our toes.

I think Kate will be a great addition to Bella's team of girls.

I think Esme will take Laurie and go to London.

Summary:

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Isabella's parents were murdered. Her sister betrayed her and her marriage is on the rocks. Things couldn't get any worse, right? Bratella Mobward - PART TWO - The Ties That Bind


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26487 Read Count: 57155
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2016 Updated: 11 Sep 2017
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Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I don't know I don't trust this Maggie. Especially since Bruno doesn't like her.   I'm glad that Edward and Isabella are mending some bridges.

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Date: 14 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

How sad. Yeah he messed up, but they were such a great pair together. He needs to find something to bring her out of this.

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Date: 26 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well baby step.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

How heartbreaking. He has a lot of work to repair that bridge.

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Date: 03 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I really don't trust Maggie. Edward & Bella need to talk & spend time together. They need to heal and work through the mistakes.

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Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well yeah he's was probably worried sick. She goes for a walk with the dog and is gone all day. He doesn't know if someone has taken her or did she get hurt.

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Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

She needs to talk to him. They aren't going to get anywhere not talking.

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Date: 22 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So glad Edward took care of Liam. also glad Marcus called Edward & told him what was going on. But Bella was going to talk to him she just didn't get the chance. I hope he calms down enough to understand why she went to Marcus. She wants to talk to him but he needs to be around. They both are frustrating. Love the story. 

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Date: 07 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh you know that Marcus is going to call Edward, right away. Telling him everything that Bella just told him. For one reason to save Bella from herself.

Bella & Edward need to start communicating again, that was there problem in the beginning & its there problem once again.

 

So glad your back. Hope things are going better for you. Have a good trip.

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Date: 15 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well I'm not surprised that Edward killed Liam and Maggie.  Not quite sure why he killed Nora, unless he found out something about her.  Glad that Marcus is coming back, he seems to get these 2 to talk.

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Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

All the progress down the tubes & back to zero.

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Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oh she should tell him. She should go with her gut feeling. At least they have started mending fences.

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Date: 18 May 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Glad you are back. 

Maggie is trouble. So two Russian guys are following Bella around that is not good & Edward is going to have a cow.

So Bella's going to go to the club & see something and misinterpreted it. 

 

I can't wait until they get passed this & are back to their newlywed selfs.

 

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Date: 24 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Edward is trying. Bella is getting mixed messages from Esme. This is just a mess. There is no communication between the two which will cause all kinds of problems.

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Date: 05 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Finally some one talked.  Communication any kind is good.

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Date: 27 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh wow! Poor Bella everything was going so good, she was so happy. Now she is stuck in this creepy place. Hopefully Edward is out looking for her and not thinking that she is dead. 

Danger In New York by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 536]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A Corrupt district attorney and his daughter who pays the ultimate price for her father's betrayal. Two brothers at war and a family divided.

Twins Edward/Anthony. Mature content, mention of rape, abuse, drug use, prostitution, human trafficking, crime.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90965 Read Count: 84518
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow great story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Definetly a page turner.

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Date: 20 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I'm wondering what is going on with Edward. Something big must have gone down if he started using drugs again after not using for awhile.

Yeah, I think once she marries Edward and is not so afraid we will see the real Isabella come out & then these two brothers better watch out.

 

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Date: 20 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

These two give me whiplash. I can't imagine what Isabella is going through.

 

This story is so intriguing and wild ride. Just when I think I have it figured out it twists.

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Date: 18 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I knew it.  I just hope she agrees to it. Of course its not like she has much choice.

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Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

How awful for Bella.

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Date: 10 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I hope Edward shows up.

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Date: 09 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Isabella has to realize this world is so different then the world she lives in. These people have to listen to orders or pay the concequenses.

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Date: 08 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So what plans does he have for Bella.  So both brothers are starting to have feelings for Bella, but Bella can't stand either one of them (can't blame her). 

This is getting more and more interesting.

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Date: 12 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I still think Edward should marry Isabella, but what would Anthony do if he did that.

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Date: 15 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Hmm explains so much of why Anthony is the way he is. Kate really broke him.

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Well that would be upsetting to see your own funeral.

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

How sad for Charlie

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow that wasn't a very happy wedding. Edward is going to have his hands full, but this thing has been a mess from the start.

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

So is Esme going to be an allie.

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Edward is trying. I know he isn't the best guy, but at least he's trying to make what his brother did better.

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Anthony has no say when it comes Isabella now.  He has to stop comparing her to his wife.

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

His father is correct he is in love with her but how is he going to fix this.

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Oh who has Isabella. Edward is going to freak out out.

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Wow Tanya was not so smart.

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

That was a sad chapter. Anthony was not the nices guy all the time, but he truly did love and care for Isabella. I think Bella had feelings for him.

 

Edward losing Anthony is big not only brothers but twins.

 

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Of course she wants to leave. Edward is going to be destoryed though. Losing Anthongy and now losing Isabella.

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I actually feel bad for Edward.

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Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Oh I can't wait for the sequel. I have a feeling these two are going to be a force that no one will be able to stop.

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Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Why doesn't he just marry her.

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Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

He's there just as she need him.

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Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So what does Edward have planned. I bet its to have people believe that Alice is Bella. I still think he's going to marry Bella.

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Date: 14 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I think Carlisle was the one that helped Victoria.   I still think Edward is going to come and get Bella out of this place.

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Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It's going to take them both baby steps, New territory for both. Could be stockholm syndrome on Bella's side or it could be an attraction to Edward.

 

Can't wait to see him try to win her over.

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Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

How heart breaking.

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Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh Anthony does have a heart.

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 184273
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
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Date: 30 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That was a nice surprise for Bella.

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Date: 30 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

So glad that they had some play time before they get into another big family business.

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Date: 06 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Sounds like everything is running smoothly, which is good they need smoothly.  I'm just waiting for something to happen, because you know something is going to happend.

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Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh Edward will find a way to get his way. 

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Date: 28 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Would be hard to be so sweet to someone so slimy like Roberto.

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Date: 28 May 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wait until Edward finds out that the hit was put out by Aro and that he gave Bella to Roberto. There will be no way he's going to stay in that hospital bed.

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Date: 28 May 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yeah I can't wait to he tries to make her his. That should be interesting. LOL

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Date: 26 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So Roberto is a little crazy. Can't wait for him to meet his doom.

Edward took that better than I thought. They didn't have to sedate him.

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Date: 09 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter. Can't wait for Edward's reaction.  Love this story.

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Date: 21 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter. I don't envy them when they show Edward those pictures. 

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Date: 22 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter. 

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Date: 29 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor Edward he won't know which way is up fighting pregnancy hormones.

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Date: 27 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ooh mysterious. Can't wait to see what you have for us next.

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Date: 03 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Can't wait for the fun to begin once again.

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Date: 04 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Finally, So glad that Bella was able to get the first blow to Roberto.

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Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter.  Everyone is happy with weddings & babies.  Hopefully we'll get some more playroom time.

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Date: 15 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Well things are going to get more exciting.

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Date: 22 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow don't get on the wrong side of this family.lol

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Date: 08 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I will truly miss this series

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Date: 23 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great ending. I am sad to see this series end. Great job.

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Date: 30 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great ending to a great series.

Summary: Past Featured Story

TOTGA

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196828 Read Count: 280863
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2016 Updated: 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 84: Epilogue

Another great story.  As usual you weave an amazing plot line into some tear jearking moments and pulse racing lemons.  I can't wait to read the next one. 

Bewitched by TwiAddictAnne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She was his only friend. She was the laughter of his childhood. And then she was gone. Will he ever find the love that was lost? Or was it all for naught? A love story as old as the times. 18th Century DukeWard. All Human. Canon couples. Rated for language and adult situations.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11225 Read Count: 18249
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2016 Updated: 15 Jun 2016
Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter-15: Epilogue

Great & sweet little story. Loved it.  Thanks for sharing it.

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Leaving behind a misserable childhood Bella trades one type of misery for another kind.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64876 Read Count: 46224
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2016 Updated: 20 Jun 2017
Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Great job for your first mafia story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I never thought anyone would still ne reading it after my long absence.

Six by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 371]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sixth sense: a special ability to know something that cannot be learned by using the five senses. Humans use 10% of their brain, but it's been proven that those with a sixth sense use more. Some wish to harness that power. With a target on us, sixxers are hunted as we try to stay hidden, blending in with the average world around us...when we are anything but average.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151831 Read Count: 41094
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2016 Updated: 23 Aug 2017
Reviewer: kneon Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Love that they said "I love you " Definitely need to work on that control.

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Date: 18 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Another great chapter.  Renee & Phil are really winners. You can figure that they most likely were paid by Volterra for Bella.

 

I like the family dynamic of the Cullen household.

 

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Date: 05 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter. Loved the action. Love this Edward.

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Date: 07 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So glad that Edward and Bella are getting to explore their relationship more.  I had a feeling when Jasper and Alice went outside of the area to take walks that something like this would happen.  Edward is going to beat himself up for this, just because he wasn't paying attention to his surrounds but paying more attention to Bella. I hope not.

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Date: 16 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella and Edward are perfect for each other. They ground each other when the other needs it.

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Date: 15 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This was a great exciting chapter.

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Date: 25 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved Mr. Jackson.  Great chapter, but sad especially with the reality of the homeless situation that is in our nation, which seems to only be thought of during the holiday season. You also brought up another good point about what happens with some of these people getting targeted for human trafficking, prostitution, drugs & other awful situations.

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Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm hooked. Great concept and great beginning.

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Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter. Great suspence and action.

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Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Another great chapter.

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Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yeah I can understand why Mr. J had to go, it was necessary for the plot. You are staying true to your characters with Bella testing her boundaries by jumping in and out before letting some of her guard down.  Edward go through all the emotional upheavel & in the end letting her know that she did trust them a little more because she jumped in & out.

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Date: 22 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter. Love seeing their relationship grow.

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Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter. Nice quiet before the storm. With some background information. 

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Date: 12 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Some great information on backgrounds about abilities this chapter.  I can totally understand why Edward doesn't want to go to Alaska.  He is just getting Bella comfortable and opening up & know he has to deal with Tanya.

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Date: 19 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter.  So glad they are admitting their feelings for each other.  If they have that kind of reaction just kissing the world may not be the same when they have sex for the first time.

 

I'm glad Edward set Tanya straight. 

 

Love this story so much.

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Date: 28 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So glad Edward put Tanya in her place in a sense.  I hope Bella doesn't have a panic attack going back to VI. 

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Date: 03 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow intense chapter on so many different levels.  I can feel each chapter the intencity is growing.

I believe when Edward and Bella finally have sex it will be earth shattering.

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Date: 21 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This chapter had a lot of emotion in it. I'm so glad they were able to make love without destroying anything major. I'm so happy for them., but this is the calm before the storm.

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Date: 13 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great build up to the conclusion, ladies.

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Date: 07 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

This was a great chapter, love that Alice finally decided to get her sight back.  

I love this Edward.

 

 

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Date: 24 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Epilogue

Thank you both for writing another great story.  I hope you both get struck with another great idea, so we may be blessed with another great story.  I will be one that will wait for the next story idea. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He could have chosen any female wolf in the room. Why did he have to choose me, the lone half-breed?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32608 Read Count: 178676
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2016 Updated: 06 May 2017
Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good for Bella. Now she needs to believe it.

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Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I was downloading these until it was complete but saw it mentioned on Rob Attack. It sounded really good & I'M reading your other wip The Ties that Burn (love that one) so I know you regularly update.

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Date: 25 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yeah Edward

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Date: 16 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

How sad.

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Date: 26 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Edward is being very patient which is what Bella needs.