Reviews by MidnightKat
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thanks to Jadiona for the banner!

It's been years since the Cullens left.  There's been tragedy in Bella's life; she will find love where she least expects it.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139798 Read Count: 20505
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Apr 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: MEETING

Great job of handling the Alice/Jasper break up and them moving on.  So many stories that I have read have left me feeling like the breakup was either forced or incomplete.  Anyway - great job.     Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I hear ya...I tried to make the story as realistic as possible...kinda hard when we play in the world of the supernatural, but anyway...hope you like the rest of the story!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: INTERVIEW WITH A VAMPIRE

I love that things are progressing slowly and realistically between the two of them.    Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: BIRTHDAY

I love Emmett but he has really bad timing...lol          Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  Love your story and I think its cool that you are reviewing mine!  :D  I know I'm a nerd, but it can't be helped.  :)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: VICTORIA

I didn't think that the chapter was crap.  I really liked it.  I know what you mean about losing motivation sometimes - it happens to all of us - I think.  Anyway, I look forward to checking out the next chapter tomorrow.

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing again.  I'm looking forward to your reviews tomorrow.  :)  Time to get back to rl, huh?  I hear ya...thanks again!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: THE WHOLE TRUTH & NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH...

What a great job describing the loss that she felt in not only losing Edward but the entire Cullen family...and then again losing Jacob and the entire pack family.  What a great combination of tragedies that you have woven into this story for Bella.   Great Work!      Kat



Author's Response:

Hi...good to see you back today.  Thanks for the review again.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: VIDEO CAMERA

I'm still loving the story.  I'm really hoping that you don't put Edward and Alice together (not a favorite pairing of mine).  It's your story and I'll read it anyway - but I can hope...lol               Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing again.  No Edward and ALice aren't my favorite pairing either.  You won't see that!  :)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: TEXAS

Still loving this.  Naughty Bella and Hot Jasper are just too much.   lol    Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: JASPER'S VISIT PART I

Alice is going to be trouble.  Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: THE PAST, PRESENT & FUTURE

I'm so excited.  I can't wait to read the next chapter.  Bed will have to wait. 

Kat



Author's Response:

Is it wrong that I'm glad you are depriving yourself of sleep to read my story?  LOL...hope you liked it.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: TEN YEARS LATER

Will it be Alice or Edward?    Kat



Author's Response:

Guess you'll have to wait until tomorrow to find out, huh?  Sweet dreams!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: WHO ARE YOU...?

Great job.  I hate to see this story come to an end soon,     Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

Well I finished your wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing it. Now I need to actually do some work (my job) and maybe make some time for writing the next chapter on my story...lol

Loved It --- Kat

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review even though the story is completed.  Did you check out the one shots that went with the story?  Well, if you find any more free time, I have another story that is doing pretty well.  Check it out if you get a chance.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995763
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

That was great.  What about the punishment?  Either it is still to come or she got off really easy.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Wow.  Bella and Edward really need to sit down and talk face to face.  I loved the chapter - great job.           

Maybe you should let Alice kick Carol's ass...lol...that could be a lot of fun to read.

Kat

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Edward over-reacted, but that shouldn't surprise me.  Maybe he will move Bella into his house now.

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chemistry...Desire...Playfulness...Hot.   Need I say more?      Kat



Author's Response:

loved your review!!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Great chapter.  I wondered when the paparazzi shots of Edward and Bella would hit.  I also wonder if that will push the James situation into overdrive.

Kat

 



Author's Response:

thanks kat.

Author's Response:

TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Damn Woman!  I love a long well written chapter!   Great Job!    Kat



Author's Response:

thank you my friend!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Alice and Rose are just wicked!  lol

Great Chapter.    Kat



Author's Response:

yes they are - I love them. thanks for the review

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Great chapter.  I loved it as always.    Kat



Author's Response:

thanks Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

That was so damn hot!  **giggling and squirming in seat**

Loved it sweetie.    Kat



Author's Response:

thank you so much ;)

Summary:

Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21773
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2011
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love your approach to this storyline.  When I read your summary, I realized that you were right.  Why should she promise him anything.  The fallout from Edward's decision is very believable.  Great job so far.     Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Jasper.  I'd say poor Edward but he had it coming. lol     Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wolves being reasonable...amazing!   lol     Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Edward fishing with Billy??  That would be a hoot.  Great chapter.    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter...but why couldn't Edward smell the blood?    Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you for pointing that out, as I was writing that portion of the dinner, my mind was moving faster than my hands on the keyboard and was left out.  I have now corrected it and he couldn't smell it because of a special mint leaf that grows high in the mountains that blocked it Jasper gave her.  I also made a note at the end of the chapter that Charlie & Bella were drinking fruit flavored v-8 juice.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved it!

Sorry it took me so long to read this...I'm trying to get caught up on all the updates on the stories that I follow. 

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks, so glad you enjoyed it.

Was Every by jol27 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Was Every Banner


 

Was every smile I gave him a lie?

 

Was every look a lie?

 

My name is Bella Swan and I have a secret. For 25 years I have been in love with my best friend.

 

When Edward returns home he also has a secret that will change their lives, "guys, I'm getting married!"

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84116 Read Count: 24053
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 Jun 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great twist.  I was soooooo relieved.   Thank you!    Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter.  I just know that Alice stopped her from getting on the plane and Edward will look around and spot her...Please!!!      Kat

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wonderful story so far.  I can't wait to read more.     Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I had such a busy day but I was able to squeeze in a few chapters of this wonderful story.  I absolutely love it.   I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next.

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I am just amazed by this story.  Quite often I lose interest in a story after E and B get together because it all becomes so predictable.  That's not the case with your story.  I truly enjoy every chapter and can't wait to read the next one (too bad work and sleep keeps getting in the way) lol. 

BTW - its the Suwanee River.  The only reason I know that is because I live in Georgia. 

Kat

 

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I am finally caught up with you on this story.  I can't wait to see how Bella copes with Edward being away and what all happens when they announce their marriage.

Great Job.      Kat

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella was a shell after Edward left her.  She hated men.  She was disgusted by them.  She wanted revenge.  What better way to get revenge than to use them?  The plan works well…until Edward comes back.  Bella’s POV. 

Bella's Revenge

Bella

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68969
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Bella

I just finished this story.  I apologize for not reviewing each chapter. 

My impression of the story during the first handful of chapters was that this was just a smutacular without a lot of plot.  That changed as I kept reading.  The plot started to develop and I became intriqued.  I am so glad that I hung in there and read the whole thing.  I really did enjoy it. 

Now, your ending was a killer.  I can't believe you left it there - you are so wicked!  I can't wait to read the sequel now.  I promise that I will do a better job of reviewing on it. 

Thanks for this story.  Great job.     Kat



Author's Response:

Lol, thanks for the kind words.  Yes, it does seem like that at first, but then we learn Bella's TRUE motives.  And as for the ending, I know it was pretty cruel, but what other way to get people to read the sequel?  ;)

I hope you enjoy MHD as much as I enjoy writing it.  Chapter 17 is the latest and has been posted.  I will try and get 18 up very soon.  :)

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100554
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You

Great start.  I can't wait to read where you are going to take this story.   Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read my story! I'm glad you like it

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Desire

Great job.  Your story is just the kind of story that I was looking for.  Please update soon.   Kat



Author's Response:

I am so glad to hear it! I just wanted a Bella that wasn't so timid and shy all the time, ya know!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Your Room

I don't get Rosalie, but I'm sure that you will make her motives clear to us in the future.  She is such a bitch.  Emmett should kick her her out...yeah, that would be fun to read.           Kat



Author's Response:

Rosalie is a bitch, isn't she...thanks for taking the time to review, it really means alot to me :)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Physical

What a great chapter.  Doesn't everyone wish they had such cool parents.

Kat

Summary:

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Sequel to Bella’s Revenge.  Bella has been abducted by Edward’s brother.  Edward wages war on anyone who stands in his way of finding his one true love.  Brother against brother.  Can he save her before she’s killed?  Before she’s turned?  Or before she falls in love?  How can Edward ever forgive his brother?  The one he trusts.  The one known as…Jasper.   

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81658 Read Count: 24568
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Nov 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was assuming that something was off here. I can't help but wonder how you are going to explain all of the Cullen bodies - but maybe they will be put back together. I wonder why Victoria didn't burn them if she was indeed behind this whole thing (and its not Jasper's doing). Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can't believe that Bella is even considering being with Jasper.  What happened to a respectable mourning period?  I don't whether I want to kick Jasper's ass or both his and Bella's.

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Okay.  So is Jasper working with Victoria?  Where did Victoria come from?  Where exactly did Edward's dead look a like come from?   I know...I know...I'll read on.

 

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Is the Jasper with Bella a double?    kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I just don't get Jasper's actions.  I'm sure that it will become clear in future chapters.  I'm just being impatient.  

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh good.  So the Jasper with Bella is a fake...yay!   What kind of creature is with Bella that he doesn't need to hunt?  kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Alice better hurry and find Jasper.  I wonder why she doesn't see him - just the double.  And when is Bella going to get a clue that something is off with her companion (and not just his ease with being around her).  

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Nooooo  Bella!                  Kat



Author's Response:

Lol, I know.  If Edward's not available, why not his brother?  :)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

You couldn't be so mean as to really kill Jasper.  I assume that will get him out in time.                   Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yay!!!   Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ok.  I'm caught up now so I will be anxiously waiting for the next chapter. 

I hope you explain this ability of Victoria to make doubles.  Are they machines or clones or what?  How did she get the ability to do that? How is it that the double has Jasper's abilities and memories?

Kat



Author's Response:

Hi Kat.  All will be revealed.  Jasper is the key.  :)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Such a sweet reunion.   Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kat.  I thought you guys deserved it.  :)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I know I'm late with reading the update but I truly hope that your week got better.  I loved the update.  The Cullens just can not catch a break.

Kat



Author's Response:

I know.  But if they could we wouldn't have a story.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 184002
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bella's punishment

Very intriguing storyline.  I can't wait to see how things work out. 

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Volturi's request

I have a feeling Bella is going to pay for biting Aro, but I can't say that I blame her.  I would probably done exactly the same thing.  Gross! 

Sorry it took me so long to read this...I'm trying to get caught up on all the updates to the stories that I follow. 

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Don't cross Aro

Can Edward come take care of me??  Please??  lol

Kat



Author's Response:

The next chapter's title is conveniently Taking care of Bella. You will get to envy Bella even more...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

It's about time!!  lol    You did a great job with advancing things.  I'm glad you didn't rush them into more yet.   Kat



Author's Response:

Glad it worked!  It's pretty slow burn, but they're getting there!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Beautifully written.     Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you, I consider that a huge compliment coming from you!  Karo

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Nice job.  I am looking forward to reading what comes next.  I wonder when Jasper will make himself known and how Bella will react.  I also hope that things work out for Andy to get his self straightened out.

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I hope you continue to enjoy!  I'm a big fan of yours, flattered that you're reading *blush*!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Good job.  I love sweet Jasper.    Kat



Author's Response:

Laugh, I've totally over-idealized Jasper in this fic, but I can't seem to stop and give him a character flaw, no matter how I try!  It just doesn't fit him and I'm gonna stop trying-  he's perfect, he's fictional, what am I gonna do, lol!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Wow Protective Andy.  Now you have help him be okay...I hope.  Bella and Jasper have an interesting connection.  Can't help but wonder how this is all going to work out...and how Edward is going to react. 

Kat



Author's Response:

Not gonna lie, things get worse for Andy before they will get better.  Edward will react, but not for quite awhile down the road.  B and J will have some time to build their connection before they get any interruptions from the past!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

I loved it.   Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Is Andy jealous?    Kat



Author's Response:

Nope, not romantically jealous.  Trying to protect her as best as he can!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Poor Jasper.  Just trying to make her more comfortable and Bella freaks.  Kat

 



Author's Response:

Good thing he's just perfect and can take her shit, huh, lol!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Great chapter.  I hope that they can help Andy. 

BTW - can I sit in the back row at the movies with Jasper? lol

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

I'm caught up now.  I'll be waiting on the next chapter.  I am really enjoying your story.  Great work.     

You might want to consider editing your author notes - they reference counts and stuff from another site (FF).    : )

**hugs**  Kat

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm really glad you've enjoyed it so far! I will go back and "house clean" the ANs at some point, but right now, I'm just feeing proud that I got it posted, lol! My kids really limit my computer time, demanding attention and affection and stuff- who knew?  ;p 

Thanks again for letting me know you liked it!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

It was perfect!  I love the slow build up.  I'm glad that Bella stood her ground against Rosalie and earned her respect.  I have to wonder how long before Esme and Carlisle find out about Bella.  It will kill Esme to find out how much Bella has suffered.

Kat

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Great job describing Jasper's struggle.  Can't wait for more.

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks, had to write it twice before I got it right!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great Chapter.  I was beginning to think that Bella was going to be the one to get through to Alice.  It will be interesting to findout more about this vampire whisperer. 

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope I can pull the vamp whisperer off!  He's cool in my head, I hope I can translate him to the page- little worried about it, lol!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Happy belated birthday!  Loved the new chapter.    Kat



Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow.  I knew that they were kick some ass but I didn't expect there to be that many people there.  I wonder how Emmett is going to deal with killing so many people - that will have to bother his conscience.

 

Kat



Author's Response:

Did I go overboard?  I really tried to figure out what would keep three vampires out for revenge occupied, but maybe I overestimated, lol!  Don't worry too much about Em, he's about to wax philosophical!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm so sorry if I made you think that you went overboard or that I didn't like it.  You surprised me and that's a good thing.  You wouldn't want your story to be predictable (did I spell that right?).

I love your story and your writing.  Please feel free to keep surprising me!

Lotsa Love.....Kat



Author's Response:

Oh my goodness, you didn't make me feel that way at all- sorry if I made you feel bad!  I just think it's a funny thing to talk about, lol!  How many licks, oh wait, that's a different part of the chapter *giggle* I mean how many humans can three vamps take on at once before one escapes to tell the tale? 

Will do my best to keep the surprises rolling!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, and don't worry about hurting my feelings, I try not to take this too seriously!

xoxo

heavy

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved the chapter...as always.

Family should always come first, so we'll be patient and wait for your updates (without bitching too much - lol).

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for your patience- things are better this week and I'm making some progress on the next chapter!  Glad you enjoyed the latest!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I finally got back to finish this story.  It was wonderful and you did a great job.

Kat



Author's Response:

So glad you liked!  I consider that a huge compliment coming from you :) 

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together

You did a great job with the lemon.  I hope you don't make Bella suffer too long before they both can enjoy it.       Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I won't. I'll just try and keep it as realistic as possible!

xx
Gelix

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle Cullen has been the object of Bella Swans fantasies for years. The problem with that is he’s a very bad boy. Hot tempered and tortured by his past. Can Bella break through his cold, hard mask and warm his icy heart? What secrets are hidden inside the home and hearts of Carlisle and his Brother and sister?

Story starts out light with some humor becomes more intense in later chapters.

 

All human characters….contains underage drinking, drugs, sex, abuse. 

 

 I'd like to thank Moonlit Wishes for making me an awesome banner for this story.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55668 Read Count: 23163
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is a very different story line from what I usually find.  I am really enjoying it.  Good job.      Kat



Author's Response:

Hi there MidnightKat,

 I am glad you are enjoying this story.  I am a new writer, and I have really jumped in here with both feet. I appreciate the review and I hope to hear from you again soon. :)  Diane

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Bella and Alice

Great chapter.   Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks Kat. :)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 The Cave

You are soooo mean!  lol

I hope that you plan on telling us who shot James in the next chapter.

I loved that Charlie is finally starting to understand what they have been through.  I hope that he will now start to support Carlisle and Bella.

Wonderful Story!          

**hugs**     Kat



Author's Response:

I thought it would be cool to let you all decide who did it. Everyone has a different way of seeing things. However, if I get enough people saying what you are I will go ahead and write it in the next chapter.

Well, Charlie tries to be a fair person he just gets a little over-protective, and he was only doing his job. Even so, I think he was enjoying some of it.

Thank You for the hugs. **hugs** back for you. Thank You for taking the time to review for me. :)

-Diane

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Loved the story.  Great job!    Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks Kat and Take Care, Diane. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: What He Said

You're killing me here.  I want her to work things out with Edward because I just have a hard time accepting James as the sweetheart that he is portraying.  At the same time Edward needs to suffer for cheating on her, but something tells me that Tanya either seduced or manipulated him.  I hope the baby belongs to James not Edward!!!

Can't wait to see what happens next.   Great job.    Kat

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading.  Chapter 12 is my fav so far. Hope you like it!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Eyewall

Great chapter.  Poor Bella.  Is Edward really the father of the baby?  Was it a one time thing before Bella found out or was it a full blown affair?

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Dance

I loved the story.  You did a great job with it.  Good luck with the Hidden Star Awards. 

Kat

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64701
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

What a wonderful start to a story.  I can't wait to see where you take things.

Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you Kat. I hope you stick with it.  More chapters will be  posted soon.  Please let me know what you think!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Edward Meets Julian

Yum...jealous Edward.   Kat



Author's Response:

Jealousward is yummy, I agree. Thanks for reading and reviewing Kat.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Incapacitate...Don't Decapitate

Too funny...so embarrassing.  Great job.     Kat



Author's Response:

I'm glad you found it funny! Thanks!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Consenting Adults

Bella is 'a freak in bed?'  OMG   I love it.  You are doing such a great job with this story.   I can't wait to read more.  

**hugs**  Kat

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Kat. I think you will be seeing more of Emmett in the future..

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good

Open mouth...insert foot.  lol      Kat



Author's Response: That should have been the chapter title...lol

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Since When Does Bella Use the F Word?

Edward kinky?  This I have to see (or read about)

**giggles**   Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11-Damn AT&T To Hell

Edward getting his kink on....LMAO     Kat



Author's Response:

E might just have a naughty side...

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Double Dating with Vampires

Carlise's advice was hysterical.  It must be a trip to live with the Cullens.   Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

Operation Edward Eats Pussy--Finally   LMAO      Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?

That was hysterical!  I love it.    kat



Author's Response: Kat: I'm glad you thought it was funny! Thanks for r and r!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36-Goodbye Orlando

Great chapter.  Keep them coming (no pun intended...well maybe...) lol  

Kat



Author's Response:

I love puns!  Next chappie should be up in a few days.  Almost finished.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37-And It All Comes Tumbling Down

Poor Edward.              Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38-Hanging On

I love how you are not making things easy for Edward.  As much as I feel sorry for Edward right now, he needs to feel some pain about his past decisions.  Great job.                Kat



Author's Response:

Consequences, consequences...Thanks Kat!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40-Thank You Alice

Great make-up lemon and what a sweet date.   Kat



Author's Response:

Kat: Thanks so much.  That Edward is a sweetie!!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41-Safe Car Sex

I hope Bella doesn't have to play nurse maid much longer - I need more Edward and Bella time together  **giggles and folds hands in prayer**

Kat

 

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42-Something is Up With Bella

I loved this chapter.  I giggled all the way through it.              kat



Author's Response:

Giggling is what I was hoping for...thx for reviewing

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44-Not Again

That dinner was a complete diaster.  I liked the Rosalie part - I could really picture her waving money around trying to buy the baby.   lol   Kat



Author's Response: There's a funny pic of Rosalie waving money on pg 70 or 71 of the forum. Check it out! Thx for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45-Aftermath

I hate to see this story drawing to an end.  I have really enjoyed the adventure.  I'll be looking for the remaining chapters and any new projects that you start.

Kat

 



Author's Response:

Thank you Kat. I do appreciate all of your encouraging words.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Cullen's have just moved to Forks, there first day of school is boring as many. Until Bella Swan a strange girl who seems to avoid the people at Forks high, she is what as known as a freak. But how could she know of what the Cullen's are?

Smut in later chapters

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38083 Read Count: 42574
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2010
Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

That was a great chapter.     kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start.  Lots of potential with this storyline.  I can't wait to see where you are going to take things.

Just a suggestion - but you could probably use a beta to help you polish the story.   

Kat