Reviews by maxennce
Summary:

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Edward is an Incubus, Obsessed with an impending war with the Volturi Coven.  Although he is powerful, he isn't powerful enough to take over their reign by himself. He cultivates a plan secretly using women around the world a to carry his seed, breeding hybrid warriors, that will train and aid him in his quest to over-throw Volterra. The time is comming near to take the vampire community by storm, yet the one thing he can not continue with-out, is a male heir. He will stop at nothing to find a vessel strong enough to bear his son, Unfortunately for Bella.....she just may be the one....

Warning! Contains: Very graffic content.  Sex, Violence, Murder, Blood and Guts,Somnophilia,Biastophilia,Extreme Darkward and other characters, Morbidness.

If you have some sort of hero complex and can't deal with the above issues, don't read this, keep it moving, find another fic.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23561 Read Count: 15645
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 25 Dec 2011
Reviewer: maxennce Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Christmas was four months ago..... what happened to the inspiration???? Its looking somewhat morbid but I like it... keep it up chickie

Cheers

max



Author's Response:

I'm comming. My story living amongst hell has a big update once i'm donw with that them I'll be able to update this one. 

Immediate Action by TigerBoo2U Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 281]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Immediate Action Banner

 

Bella Swan, Senior Intelligence Analyst with the CIA has uncovered a plot to blow up the capitol, but there's a traitor in CIA HQ and they have their eyes on her. In order to protect the country she loves, she has to risk losing everything.

AH/Some OOC behaviour. Heartfail Warning. Character Death.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131170 Read Count: 36690
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2011 Updated: 19 Oct 2011
Reviewer: maxennce Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter16 - 26th June 2010 - Island of Spetses - Greece

First things first, amazing story.  It's nearly 0100 and I am still awake reading your story.  Just a few little tid bits that may help you in the future, a Lat and Long reading only has the degrees, minutes and seconds, like a clock.  So 10 38.64S 105 86.04E is all the numbers you need.  And when your purposely sinking a boat, its called scuttling.  But the info you have so far is amazing.  Really loving the research you;ve put into the reality of they're situaiton.  Keep up the great work, moving onto the next chapter now :-)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. :) I can see exactly what you're saying on the Long and Lat, but when I wrote this story I'd based this part on some research into radar and sonar I'd been doing and the GPS tends to get a bit more exacting on military grade equipment, so used the reading from a simulator I'd been playing with. :) As for the scuttling, yep I can see you're point there too, but the intention isn't to scuttle the submarine, more so to use it as a diversion so that they can escape in one piece, hence the comments on pressurisation of the main cabin and the use of the wet entry. Obviously if I was totally evil, I could've made the seals on the wet entry hatch between those two afformentioned areas of the sub fail and... BOOM. However if I did that, it sort of kills the story dead and there wouldn't be much left of the sub to scuttle. Instead I chose to flood the ballast which would give them the chance to get out before it hits the surface and they can make a reasonably unseen get away.  I hope you enjoy the rest! :o)

Summary:

Made by: Falling Star

 

After Bella’s first day at Forks High, Edward fled to Alaska. What if, when he got back, the rest of the family were less than inclined to help him get the girl? Just how far will some go to make sure Bella ended up with who she was meant to? Most importantly, what happens when the one she’s meant for finds out? Twi-rewrite. AU, NC, Crossover, rated for future gore, adult situations and naughty language. Part 1 of 3


Categories: Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Klaus
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Design Trilogy
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12926 Read Count: 24129
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2015 Updated: 27 Feb 2015
Reviewer: maxennce Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Interesting, looking forward to what he does next and just how that spitfire reacts

Bring Me to Death by Alley Cat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story


Circa Buffy S04E11, Angel S01E10, and goes AU from there. Buffy puts on a brave front as everyone around her abandoned her. Betrayed by her friends, she tries to figure out what The Initiative is doing in Sunnydale, and what is she going to do about them? Angel fights to stay away, but when Buffy's life is put in danger, he rushes over to Sunnydale to take care of business. B/A all the way.


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Bring Me to Death


Categories: Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angel(us)/Buffy
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174711 Read Count: 6618
[Report This] Published: 09 Jan 2016 Updated: 27 Sep 2019
Reviewer: maxennce Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh really!!! This is the first BtVS fic I've read in years!!!! I so loved these characters and you've brought them back to life in a very charismatic way. I'm loving what youve done with the Scooby gang. Just really looking forward to seeing how and when Buff and Angelus start reeking havoc on the initiative!!!! Please bring us a new update soon.

Reviewer: maxennce Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh really!!! This is the first BtVS fic I've read in years!!!! I so loved these characters and you've brought them back to life in a very charismatic way. I'm loving what youve done with the Scooby gang. Just really looking forward to seeing how and when Buff and Angelus start reeking havoc on the initiative!!!! Please bring us a new update soon.

Reviewer: maxennce Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

What a chapter!!!! What a couple of chapters!!! Only those two could convince a initative member to go rouge because he sees the humanity in them and the inhumanity in what they're doing. Now for them to escape is a completely different matter. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes, the relationship and comraderie that's been developed between Angel, Angelus and Buffy is pretty incredible and has proven itself over and over

Summary:

OOTD

 

Edward Cullen is a fallen angel, living among humans. He’s dark, snarky, tattooed and a total badass. However, he still has his wings and angelic powers because the ‘powers that be’ believe that he is capable of redemption, despite being cast out of heaven. His exile was due to the fact that he was interacting with an unknown evil that tempted him over sixty years ago. Because of his mistake, he’s resigned to live out his immortal existence as a bitter angel, caught in limbo.

 

Isabella Swan, a human, is in the wrong place at the wrong time. In her innocence, she manages to worm her way into his heart, bringing him back into the light and out of the darkness.

Banner by Clo Rodeffer

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Gelesen, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108687 Read Count: 68116
[Report This] Published: 03 Dec 2016 Updated: 23 Sep 2017
Reviewer: maxennce Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Holy crap. Where do u go from here, so much damage and so little trust to be able to get help, and even the help that's been offered is taken with an expectation of it being retracted or reneged sooner rather than later. Keep up the great work, looking forward to seeing what u come up with next

Summary:

soots

 

Bella Swan is living a shadow of a life. On the run from a bloodthirsty nomad craving revenge, she begins to see vampires differently, through the eyes of their prey. After a chance encounter with Hawkeye, her world collides with the shadowy world of SHIELD. She’s faced with a difficult choice, keep the vampire secret or step out of the shadows with Clint to help SHIELD fight Loki.


Categories: Crossover, Avengers, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Clint
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 82447 Read Count: 5374
[Report This] Published: 19 Jan 2017 Updated: 15 Apr 2021
Reviewer: maxennce Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: When Good Men Do Nothing

this story is awesome. Really cool to see a completely different take on e bella character and to experience what she'd do in this particular situation. You've done a great job and I and I'm sure hundreds of other people are the same in waiting impatiently for your next update. Cheers, Max 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!

I think I actually got a little tired of how Bella's often portrayed. It's like she's either subservient or a complete 180 of how she was in the books. I like the idea of Bella being stronger but still retaining the sweetness and the protective instincts she's known for. I didn't want her to be canon Bella, but I also didn't want the changes in her to be completely unrealistic. Her behavior now seems like it's natural, like it's a real possibility given how much time has passed and what's she's been through, so I'm glad you like her.

Thanks again!

---TBVA