Reviews by Dandelion1112
Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 234640
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thank you so much for the new chapter! I love this story! The way your vampires act is very intriguing! I can't wait to read how it will all work out in the end! The suspense is killing me! You are a very gifted author. 

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When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 50105
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2011 Updated: 31 Mar 2020
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Home

Such a beautiful chapter! It reminds me of poetry. Thank you for it! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Countdown

It is hard for Bella and Edward.Yet there is so much hope in this chapter. A d then there is her wonderful statement: nothing has ever been easier than loving you"- thank you so much! - btw: brilliant idea, counting down the days! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Thank you so much for this awesome chapter! You describe Bella and Edward, their feelings, their pain, their desperation and their need for each other in so much depth and so sensitively... Reading thiseaves me stunned and takes my breath away. Thank you! This story is powerful and oh so beautifully written! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much. Your kind words mean a lot. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Bella faces her demons. So strong! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thank you so mu h for this chapter! There is so much heavy stuff going on, yet your writing is so sensitive and beautiful. It is special to see how much more in sync Bella and Edward get, they really become equals, the vampire-human - difference doesn't matter any more. Be is her strength and she is his.

Then the scene with Billy. He was wrong, so very wrong,  it he is suffering as well. He has lost his son, his  best friend and his social standing. And there is the enormous guilt he feels. It crashes him. Even in this pain and desperation you manage it to write of a new beginning. Not cheesy, but subtle and oh so powerful at the same time. I am in awe. Thank you! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thank you so mu h for this chapter! There is so much heavy stuff going on, yet your writing is so sensitive and beautiful. It is special to see how much more in sync Bella and Edward get, they really become equals, the vampire-human - difference doesn't matter any more. Be is her strength and she is his.

Then the scene with Billy. He was wrong, so very wrong,  it he is suffering as well. He has lost his son, his  best friend and his social standing. And there is the enormous guilt he feels. It crashes him. Even in this pain and desperation you manage it to write of a new beginning. Not cheesy, but subtle and oh so powerful at the same time. I am in awe. Thank you! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thank you so mu h for this chapter! There is so much heavy stuff going on, yet your writing is so sensitive and beautiful. It is special to see how much more in sync Bella and Edward get, they really become equals, the vampire-human - difference doesn't matter any more. Be is her strength and she is his.

Then the scene with Billy. He was wrong, so very wrong,  it he is suffering as well. He has lost his son, his  best friend and his social standing. And there is the enormous guilt he feels. It crashes him. Even in this pain and desperation you manage it to write of a new beginning. Not cheesy, but subtle and oh so powerful at the same time. I am in awe. Thank you! 



Author's Response:

Many thanks for taking the time to leave me such kind and thoughtful reviews. It truly means a lot. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I love the depth I. Which you describe the characters! There are so many layers, so much more than in S. M. s characters. It is breathtaking and oh-so- fascinating. This story has grown so much and it has become very dear to me. Thank you so much for it! (I hope I was able to express my thoughts in correct grammar. While I enjoy read  English texts, I am not used to write or speak English. I am sorry!) 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words! That really means a lot. I feel there's a lot to explore with these characters :)

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I love the way you describe Edward's proposal! So simple, et so powerful! And I love the way their relationship deepens, how they explore each other. It is written wondergully: sensitive,, realistic, appreciative. Thank you! 



Author's Response:

There's often a lot to be said for the subtle approach :)

Thank you very much for such lovely compliments! 

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77121
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

The call between Bella and Mic is amazing! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Edward finds Bella's letters and her lock. I got goosebumps reading it! But why has Edward to be so stubborn and complicated? His letter will break her heart! I really hope he will just tell her goodbye in it and will not write that he doesn't love her. Stupid vampire! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Edward's letter to Bella is wonderful! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh oh, Bella has had a rough day and Charlie knows about vampires. Fascinating! I'm curious about the talk he and Tanya will have and about what happened at school. Is it too much for Bella to get to know another Edward?

Thank you so much for this story! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yes! Edward arrives just in time! They meet, i. e. Edward meets Bella, she "meets" kind of an angel of him at least that's what she thinks. But she is happy for the first time since his death. And Edward: He will talk to Carlisle soon and will hopefully embrace the fact that his mate already knows him and loves him. Thank you for this revealing chapter! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yes! Edward arrives just in time! They meet, i. e. Edward meets Bella, she "meets" kind of an angel of him at least that's what she thinks. But she is happy for the first time since his death. And Edward: He will talk to Carlisle soon and will hopefully embrace the fact that his mate already knows him and loves him. Thank you for this revealing chapter! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bella is devastated. Renee and Phil are worried and helpless. Edward is dead. Bella's world has come to an end. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am speechless. You did a mating in our research! It is horrendous to read, it makes me sad, leaves me deeply touched and feeling helpless.

I'm afraid Edward got infected and will die soon. What about Bella? The letters will suddenly stop and she will fear the worst. Will she talk to Mic and get her to know the truth about Edward's death? It will turn her world upside down  She will lose her love and her only friend. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This chapter is like waiting fo the hammer to fall. I wish they could continue their penpal friendship yet Edward and his mother are going to fall ill soon. It's cruel! And what about Bella? Will it devastate her? 

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Date: 05 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh dear! Disaster is on the way! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow! ! Thank you so much! The way the story enfolds is breathtaking.

I'm intrigued by your idea of Bella's and Charlie's different perception of members of the pack due to their mates being vampires (I just guess and hope Bella will meet Vampire Edward soon and there will be a bond between them).

Your description of Edward seeing Bella's pictures for the first time is fantastic! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Another great chapter! I loved it, thank you! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

A chapter which moves fast forward - due to the many letters written. Edward and Bella deepen their relationship. I'm looking forward to the pictures they will exchange! Now Bella's going to Forks. Will she meet Vampire Edward. Will he remember her? So many questions... Thank you again for this amazing story! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow! Just wow! The way You describe first beach is so strong and poetic! And:Edward and Bella suffer both great deal. Finally Edward sees that Bella is his, belongs to him. I hope they will meet soon. But I wonder: how will they get to know that Edward is Bella's Edward? Will there be another fatherly conversation between Carlisle and Edward? How will Edward reveal himself to Bella? Or will he be afraid that she won't be able to love a monster because that's the way he sees himself? I hope they will both stop to suffer soon! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I was afraid I would not read about Carlisle soon, yet here he is and helps Edward to sort things out. I guess their relationship will become more and more important to Edward now that his father is gone. It's great to see that Elizabeth opens up a little. Edward shares a tight bond with his mother. Thank you for this chapter! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow! Edward discovers the depth of his feelings for Bella and asks for a lock of her hair. So romantic!... The dream is a little bit of foreshadowing, I guess? They will meet but in other circumstances, he as a vampire she still human? Let's wait and see! Thank you so much for your amazing story and your fantastic way of writing! I enjoy it so, so much!!! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ugh! I think I need the baseball - for - dummies - book as well. I must confess, I don't know anything about the game. As a German I've never seen one. But I know for sure that it's much more complicated than soccer (that's the German pastime).

Nevertheless, though I don't u der stand the game at all, I really enjoyed the chapter. Thank you! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow! Edward stands up for himself, his mother and the memory of his father and puts his uncle in his place. I like how you describe the subtle ways in which his family supports him. And the secret of the desk gets revealed to others. Is that the reason Mic knew so much about the letters that were written on the desk and told Bella about it? Is it why he told Bella the desk belonged always to her in a way? Were Edward's strange experiences with his desk passed in the family from one generation to the next as family legends?

Thank you so much for another fabulous chapter! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow! Edward pours his heart out to Bella! 

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Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward starts writing to Edward again! She sees that her decision was well meant yet turned out to be a cruel one for Edward because he had nothing to say in it. And miraculously her letter is there when Edward needs to hear from her so badly. I grieve with him. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Bella is suffering extremely and Edward cannot remember anything... He only has some kind of feeling of Bella's importance. Let's hope they will meet soon!

Thank you for another intense chapter! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella makes a hard decision and leaves Edward alone. I hope she will reconsider. 

Edward's father gets ill and is probably going to die soon. Will Edward and his mother get infected as well soon or later? I hope, Bella and Edward will get in touch again before he gets ill himself. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow!!! I can't stop reading! I'm intrigued by the growing bond between Edward and Bella, their getting to know each other and their time. And then there is the conversation between Carlisle and Edward. Carlisle cares deeply for him and appears as a father figure. Edward is very happy he has someone he can talk to. Even if It is in riddles  this way he can clear his thoughts. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Another very interesting chapter. I didn't know anything about the treatment of shell shock - thank you for your research! Carlisle and Edward share a bond, it's fascinating to read about! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Aaah, we are introduced to the mystery of the desk - that's fantastic! Bella and Edward are both questioning their sanity but decide they are much to curios to stop writing letters. I find Your idea very intriguing : both persons get a glimpse into a world about 100 years before or after them. And they get to form a friendship.

I'm curious how it will all work out! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

We get to know Bella, the desk, Michael Masen and Bella's family. Great! I like the way Bella responds to the letter, it's sassy and yet thoughtful. How will Edward get to read her answering letter? Does he "stalk" the desk as a vampire? I'm curious! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

We get to know Bella, the desk, Michael Maßen and Belka's family. Great! I like the way Bella responds to the letter, it's sassy and yet thoughtful. How will Edward get to read her answering letter? Does he "stalk" the desk as a vampire? I'm curious! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you for this chapter! Your style of writing is very intense: you characterize the person's thoroughly and with many facets. To me as a reader it's like really getting to know a person. That's great. Your detailed research is another bonus. It makes everything more real. And:this family portraied here thinks and acts like persons did in the beginning of the 20. century. That's great! You even refer to the German soldiers as "Fritz"! As being a German myself (that's the reason for the many mistakes when I'm writing something in English) and having a profound knowledge of both world wars that appreciate it very much. Thank you for your brilliant work! 

Changes in Life by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

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Bella Swan didn't have the easiest childhood.  She and her brother were raised by their parents' best friends after their deaths.  Two things remained true in Bella's life as she grew. The first beign her best friend Edward.  The second her love for Jacob.  After she finds out Jacob cheated on her, she goes to live with Edward and his wife.  What she didn't expect to happen happened, she fell in love with her older boss.  Things are great for a while, but will they last?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118326 Read Count: 14318
[Report This] Published: 10 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you so much for this story! It isn't finished, but still it's a great one! I love the way you describe your characters. It:s not a walk in the sunshine, it's realistic. Feelings and attitudes don't change quickly or easily, especially when you've been hurt deeply. And hurt are most of your characters. But in the long run, they don't give up. They work on their relationships and try it again and again - steps back included. Charlotte is a real teenager, angry scared and hurt. It takes a lot to cope with her... for Bella, Carlisle, Peter and the readers just as it takes a lot to endure and love every other teenager who lashes out.

Congratulations to this story! Even not-finished it is a jewel! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you so much for this story! It isn't finished, but still it's a great one! I love the way you describe your characters. It:s not a walk in the sunshine, it's realistic. Feelings and attitudes don't change quickly or easily, especially when you've been hurt deeply. And hurt are most of your characters. But in the long run, they don't give up. They work on their relationships and try it again and again - steps back included. Charlotte is a real teenager, angry scared and hurt. It takes a lot to cope with her... for Bella, Carlisle, Peter and the readers just as it takes a lot to endure and love every other teenager who lashes out.

Congratulations to this story! Even not-finished it is a jewel! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 278514
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow! It's a long time since You finished this story but I just found it. I just can't stop reading! Thank you so much for it and especially this chapter! There is so much love in it!

On These Icy Waters by kyla713 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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April, 1912. This journey home could change Bella's entire future. She no longer wished to be the decoration on her husband's arm. One fateful voyage could lead to the happiness she always wanted, or be the end of everything.

*Previously posted on fanfiction.net and twilighted.net


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14311 Read Count: 2257
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2013 Updated: 04 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 1: On These Icy Waters

Great story, thank you! 

Summary:

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Banner by CloRodeffer

Photographer Bella Swan loves everything about living in Hawaii. The beach, the surf, the warmth. Everything but the two weeks when Professional Beach Volleyball takes over. Now, she's been cast with the joy of capturing every moment with her camera. Only, a tall, auburn haired player isn't making it easy for her to stay professional. Cannon Couples. UA and MA


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71484 Read Count: 32244
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2016 Updated: 02 Oct 2022
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thank you for not abandoning this story Edward and Bella find themselves in the middle of such a mess! There is her illness, their feelings for each other, the complicated family_ background both of them have... Iamvery curious how it will all turn out. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 09 May 2022 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I am glad that you're back! This chapter is amazing and definitely worth the wait! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

A journey of vampire and human mates finding one another throughout time. Spanning from the 1800s to the 2000s. Of love, death and drama that follows into making a family for Carlisle. Canon couples. (Read Inside for the important message)

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme, Edward/None, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108916 Read Count: 948
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2016 Updated: 23 Dec 2016
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Charleston, South Carolina 1801

I just came across this story and I love it! Annlisse is a great character and I'm intrigued by Carlisle's point of view. Thank you so much! 

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Date: 12 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Little Rock, AR(1943), Biloxi, MS (1911)

Great chapter! You characterize Jasper so well! And Alice!! It's astonishing! 

Summary:

How does a chance encounter in a cemetary turn into love? Some angst, but ends happily. WARNING: There is reference to domestic abuse partway through and a car wreck. Procede with caution if you are sensitive to these subjects. 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89721 Read Count: 3151
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2017 Updated: 28 Mar 2017
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Date: 17 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

"I enjoy this story so much! 

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Date: 16 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Thank you, it gets more and more realistic each time. I love the way they are working on their relationship! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Yes! A new beginning! Great chapter! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

The last two chapters have been very intense. But they were real. Bella and Edward have to overcome their last marriages. There are still 8sdues lingering. They don't live in fairy land. I appreciate, that you make it real. At the same time my heart breaks for them. But that shows how good your writing is, I assume. Thank you! 

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Date: 13 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I enjoy this story so much, thank you! 

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Date: 13 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I love the Cullen family and it's dynamics! Great chapter, thank you! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I just read the prologue and I am intrigued! Thank you for posting and sharing!

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Wow! A perfect date! Thank you! 

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Bella is a single mom of two boys trying to make ends meet. Edward is a successful business man. Can he help her? Will she let him?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54251 Read Count: 69698
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2017 Updated: 23 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 12 May 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thank you so much for this story! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 12 May 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I absolutely love this story, I'm feeling with all of the characters and I am very happy about the love they found! It's great that You mentioned therapy. I think they need some outside counseling to get through everything that has happened to them and to move on and to build adequate relationships to Charlie, Sue and the boys' sisters. Yet this story more and more becomes a fairy tale. I knoe that most of fanfiction stories are kind of fairy tales for adults yet I appreciate it when they are as realistic as possible. But now: Edward and Bella manage everything and are never stressed out. Who would put a move the day after their best friends ' wedding while having two kids and two very demanding jobs? How did Leah get the address of Bella's apartment when even Charlie hasn't got it? And why doesn't she have any friends she can trust so that she turns to Bella? I appreciate that she does but I find it hard to understand.

I love your work and I'm happy you post it here so we can read Your thoughts, stories and dream  aboutwhat their lives could be. Sorry for my criticism. t



Author's Response:

I love that you have questions, and no one in their right mind would but most of the items were already moved it was more last minute items and movers were coming to get them. 

Leah knew where she lived becuase of public record. Bella will never have a decent relastionship with Charlie, she would become closer to Leah than anyone. She would go to Leah because Jake drove all her friends away leaving her alone and she hoped that Bella would understand. At that moment in time Leah was lost and Bella was the closest to her. 

I never put the stressed out situations in the story, there are alot of them its only natural. I am working on the sequel to this story where I show the stress and what real life is like. 

Thank you so much for reading and leaving reviews! I love reading them. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 12 May 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Go for gold, Lucian! He is so smart and so protective of ective of his family. He puts Kate in his place without any effort! Great! 

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Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Finally Charlie tells his story. I understand Bella's reaction. She must be do angry. It will take a lot to forgive him - if she will ever be able to do it. But she is strong and Charlie is weak Perhaps she will be able to do what he could not do and reach out to him. 

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Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yes!!! They are together again!!! 

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Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Edward lied by not telling Bella the whole story about the building and it bites him in the ass (even though I think she should have figured it out from the beginning). Bella is deeply conflicted. But she trusts him still. I hope they will find Lucian soon and nothing has happened to him! 

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Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I loved this chapter! Thank you!!! 

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Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Jake is a real low life. I wonder if he's still clean or carries his share of STDs. At least Charlie has changed... But why did he never try to contact Bella and apologize to her and her children? Aren't they important to him?

Edward is great, both boys want him as dad! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Damon is great! Way to go, kid!!! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love the way Edward acts! To Bella, he is already her confident and partner, even if she doesn't verbalize it. And Edward thinks of Bella the same way, he even talks with Lucien about his feelings for her. That talk was wonderful! Thank you! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow! The meeting-the - parents isn't awkward at all, but then there are Sue and Leah. What a mess! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edward and Bella already act as a couple without even realizing it. I love it!

I can understand that Bella is hesitant to press charges against Jake. She always wanted him to come back. Now she has to face the harsh reality about him and has to decide whether she wants to break every connection to him once and for all by getting back to him. He deserves it, that's not the question. Yet it's a tough decision for her. 

Thank you for this chapter! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thank you for this chapter! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am happy for Bella and the new apartment! But I don't get her. She is smart so she has to know that an apartment that big in a building with a doorman situated in an upscale area must cost much more than 500 $ rent monthly. Why doesn't she ask Edward about his motivations? I don't distrust him, but I can't understand why she trusts him so completely and why she is so naive. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love the way Bella got Irina the internship! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love the way Edward and Emmett are with Lucien and Damon! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Is it Jake's handwriting? Did he bring over the papers? Did he go into the apartment and took Bella's money? I hope not! Thanks for the practice! I love the way Edward, Emmett and Jasper work with children of their quarter! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Has there ever been a decent man in Bella's life? As far as we know Seth is the only one. Poor Bella! At least she has Tanya, Irina and her boys. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thanks for Edward's point of view. He isn't such a douche... And yeah, he is definitely interested in Bella. But I don't think she is one to trust easily and her boys dislike Edward already. That's gonna be tough for him. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great beginning! Edward seems to be a real douche, but the tip is very generous. Let's hope there is Moore to him than his mockery! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 12 May 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you for your thoughts and your great work. I feel honored. Please keep going! 

Summary:

Skin Deep Banner

Some secrets will damage your reputation.  Others will ruin your social life.  But then there are secrets that will change the way the world looks at you, now and forever.  What would Edward be willing to do to keep such a secret?  And who will pay the price?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3367 Read Count: 31048
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2017 Updated: 09 Mar 2020
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2019 Title: Skin Deep

Thank you for this story! It's powerful and very well written. Your knowledge about epilepsy runs deep. The way you describe Edward's fear and Edward and Bella's growing relationship is so detailed and realistic. I can't stop reading! I have been working with children and teenagers with epilepsy for many years. I remember well how scared I was when I witnessed a tonic-clinic seizure for the first time. It's massive for the people with epilepsy and it's a lot to take in for their families and friends. That's Bella's situation right now. And she handles it so well. I hope she will encourage Edward to open up more and to start to trust people (and to make him break up with his so called friends). 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2019 Title: Skin Deep

Emmett gets to know a caring girlfriend for the first time and is more than astonished. And Edward wants to fit in not caring about the prize. I an understand him but it's so bad and he hurts himself so much. I like the steps he is going in order to change. Love changes. Oh, I liked their time together and how they start to get to know their bodies. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2019 Title: Skin Deep

Great chapter! You characterize Edward and Bella as hormonal teenagers so well. Edward has so mu h to deal with and is so scared. He still has his focus completely on his limitations. I hope this will change throughout the story. Thank you for writing and sharing! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2019 Title: Skin Deep

Bella is awesome! 

Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 79254
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 ~ Passion

Thank you! They are great for each other. But I fear that Aro will strike soon. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 ~ Texas Sizzle

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I like the way Edward's and Bella's relationship develops and I am very glad for Carmen. - So, Aro survived. It was expected but I don't have to like it. Aro gives me the creeps. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three ~ Faith For The Future

Thank you so much! I am looking forward to the sequel! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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On an ordinary Friday in an ordinary town an ordinary boy meets an extraordinary girl. 

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Third place in the 2017 Twi Fic Fandom Awards Undiscovered Gem Category!!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152022 Read Count: 4541
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2018 Updated: 21 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Impressive chapter! You show us Edward's feelings and thoughts so well and so detailed. I think he will drive to Grace, at least that's what I hope. There he will get real answers, not just hatred and excuses. Billy, Jake and the others are so fixed in their point of view and their hatred, they are not able to see that there are always exceptions from the rule.

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow!!! Just wow!!! It's awesome!!! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Another chapter I enjoyed immensely!!! Thank you! Edward finds more and more things that don't fit for an 17-years-old teenager. I am sure he's going to find out soon more about Gray. She gave him names and places: her friends, her former school... I guess he's going to search the internet an then there will be some serious questions. And there is the time capsule... Will he take a look at it? - I like the way you are creating suspense here, you are such a talented writer!

Then Tanya. Usually in fanfiction she is characterized as a bitch. You don't do that and I appreciate it a lot. I like the way she cares for Charlie. In your story Tanya is a sensitive, caring and loving individual, protective of her family but open minded. That's wonderful. I wish her and Charlie a happy ending but I don't think it will happen. Charlie's grudges are deeply ingrained. That and his confusion, pain, fury and sorrow about the shooting and the relationship between Gray and Edward makes things very difficult.

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank you fo this chapter! Charlie is struggling - you describe it very intense, it's awesome! Edward and Grace get much needed time alone.

You are an extremely gifted author! 

 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I can't stop reading! You write detailed, complex and captivating! Now every one needs time to heal and sort things out. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am fascinated, intrigued! I can't stop reading! One great chapter after another. You are an astonishing writer! I enjoyed the way Edward and Gray are getting closer! And the talk Gray hS with Charlie. Thank you so much! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank you a lot for this chapter! Carlisle and Tanya talk to Charlie  - he is still clueless, gets perhaps a little less hostile? We will see! You show us how much the members of the Cullen family and their cousins care for Gray, that's wonderful! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Another great chapter! Charly is struggling... and he loves his son dearly. I hope he will get an open mind, but I'm not sure if it's just wishful thinking. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thank you for this chapter! Introvert Edward is none to gossip and Gray gathers the courage to speak to him. I esp. like the way you describe the musings and actions going on in the Cullen family! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Another great chapter! I like the way you have researched Forks and its surroundings! And I like the kiss! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yeah! Gray realizes her bond with Edward! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter! An absolutely unexpected encounter between Gray, the wolves and James and Victoria. The fight took my breath away.

 Let's see how the wolves will react to GRAY now that the fight is over  

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I just came across this story and I really like it! You have created something unique here! Gray is fascinated by Edward, curious about him and cares deeply about him already. Yes, she enters his room, but she appears less as a stalker than Edward in the books. I also like the way you describe the relationship between Jasper and Gray and what we get to know about the thoughts and intentions of each member of the Cullen family. Thank you so much for this story! I'm looking forward to the next chapters! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I just came across this story and I really like it! You have created something unique here! Gray is fascinated by Edward, curious about him and cares deeply about him already. Yes, she enters his room, but she appears less as a stalker than Edward in the books. I also like the way you describe the relationship between Jasper and Gray and what we get to know about the thoughts and intentions of each member of the Cullen family. Thank you so much for this story! I'm looking forward to the next chapters! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I just came across this story and I really like it! You have created something unique here! Gray is fascinated by Edward, curious about him and cares deeply about him already. Yes, she enters his room, but she appears less as a stalker than Edward in the books. I also like the way you describe the relationship between Jasper and Gray and what we get to know about the thoughts and intentions of each member of the Cullen family. Thank you so much for this story! I'm looking forward to the next chapters! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow! Gray saves Edward, risks being seen in the sun and provides much needed first aid. I really hope Charlie gets the hint. And by the way: I loved the conversation Carlisle and Gray had and his way of warning her to jump to conclusions. 

Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 37467
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter!