You don't need to defend yourself for this story or the content of this story. It's obvious your a pretty intelligent person to be able to create such an imaginative story and talented as well to be able to express content like this while not having the story coming across in a smutty manner but rather a tragic and intense drama. I can't wait to see what Edward is like with Bella.  For some reason I put off reading this for awhile-well I missed out because I love the story.

I loved that. You really know how to write a lemon-that was totally hot and erotic. Some so called lemons come across as just unrealistic and stupid but yours certainly was not. I 'm loving the premise of this story.

OMG! He is my absolute fantasy man. Oh and as good as the first lemon was the second was even better!

I so love that your not planning on turning Edward into a wus. So many stories start out with a badass Edward who turns into choirboy after a few chapters!

I'm not sure you got my last review-my computer keeps screwing-up. I officially crowned you the queen of lemons after I could form a complete thought that is. I loved this chpater to. The drama is great. You really are an excellent writer.

I guess I'm lucky since I found this story late therefore I'm catching up on the story and not having to wait for updates at this time but even if I was waiting it would be worth the wait. Your a really talented writer and I being a mother myself and working full-time can't imagine how you find the time to bring a story to life like this but however you do it I'm just grateful that you do!

Whats the name of your other story? I'm fairly new to this site and keep having problems with what should be simple things like adding a story or author to a favorites list. Of course I've tried to add this story to my favorites list but don't know if it made it or not! I'm really embarressed to be so challenged when it comes to technology! My e-mail is dugan_r@yahoo.com.

WOW! I really didn't see that coming but I love it. You just never fail to impress me with your obvious gift for writing.

I originally started reading this story on the fanfiction site and absolutely loved it. I was so glad to find it again on this site. It remains an absolutely totally unique story with the most delicious sadistic humor I've ever read! You are simply an amazing talent.

I started reading this story once before and so glad I found it again. I love it from EBOV. Its dark and humourous.

That was awesome- intense, erotic, and scary. The ending really floored me. Loved it!

I can't wait to read more! I'm a sucker for historical romance(Yeah I'm a dork!) so was thrilled to find this story and even after the first chapter I'm loving it.

I hope you can update soon. I can't wait for more but I'm of course at your mercy! I absolutely love a dark and dominant Edward and Jasper and I already love your character of Bella.  I have tried to put this story on my favorite list but I'm new to the site and not sure if I'm doing it right!

Please don't let lack of reviews discourage you. I love this story! It's unique and erotic-not a carbon copy of other stories and there are so many carbon copies out there. I love the time period your using. This is an extremely well-written story.

Just keeps gettign better and better.

I'm sorry I didn't review after I read the first chapter but I was absolutely awed by this story and just couldn't stop reading. I love Maya Banks and Lori Leigh and think they are great  writers of erotic stories with an actual storyline but they have nothing on you! I loved both points of view and I think the mark of a really good writer when you can write in two different perspectives enhancing an understanding of the storyline and bringing an increased depth to the emotions involved in the story.  Honestly one of the best stories I've read in a long time.