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Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Best Part:

 

He slipped the ring onto my finger telling me how it was his mother's. My heart swelled with love and pride. He wanted me to have something of his Mama's and the tears began to fall again.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked that line...I added it just before I updated. I forgot to mention the ring and that is what I came up with. Happy New Year

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Best Parts:

As I look upon his beautiful face I felt melancholy for a moment. I just realized that Alice and Jasper will be married at the weeks end and Edward and I are not. That thought depressed me. I internally berated myself for thinking like that. Now is not the time to feel jealous or sad.

I looked at Edward again and his eyebrows are knitted in concern.

Shoot, my face betrayed my inner thoughts. I smiled warmly at him trying to show him that all was well.

He gave me a small smile and stood up.





I had to admit that even though I am ecstatic for Alice I am a bit upset that all of this talk about weddings has soured my mood, as jealousy over the fact that Jasper and Alice get to start their new life together in a few short days I will still be just Edwards fiancé and not his wife.



“I had the same thoughts this afternoon. Jasper was talking about their plans and dreams and the whole time I was thinking how I wished it was us instead.”

Bella’s eyes widened with surprise.

“Really?” she gasped.

“Yes, really. I was green with jealousy. I have dreamt of our lives together so many times since I have met you and all I could think about was how that should be us too. So please don’t fret about feeling like this.” I pulled her face towards mine, placing a gentle kiss on her lips.





“Let’s see if Alice and Jasper would like to have a double wedding.”



“Edward, let’s do it…let’s get married this weekend.”

Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! I have missed your reviews..Thank you for leaving them for me

Firsts by midnightlove87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 210]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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 Bella and Edward have been best friends forever and they've shared a lot of firsts. Now Bella wants to share one last one together. AU/slightly OOC Cannon pairings B/E And rated M for language and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331144 Read Count: 104700
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

For educated individuals, Bella and Edward are both very stupid.

I hope he is going to tell her the truth for her birthday.

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 487]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Best Parts:

 

“Well, just in case, you should get another restraining order against him for this state. Your father can take care of that.”

“You’re probably right. Although, I highly doubt he would seek me out.”

 

 

When I was in the coffee aisle at the store, I grabbed an extra box of filters. I really don’t know what possessed me to do it, but…after I put my groceries away, I tiptoed into the hall and placed the extra box next to my neighbor’s door.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! That last line-the idea hit as I was writing it. ? I'm happy to hear you liked it.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Prologue

Good for Bella not taking his BS!!



Author's Response:

I agree! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Best Part:

 

“Alice, because I am already here, I will stay and help. Because I do genuinely like you and want to be friends with you, I will stay. However, because I do want to be friends, you need to either come clean with whatever bullshit you’re trying to pull, or Stop. Manipulating. Me.” Bella’s face was contorted into a scowl.

“Well, I guess she told her,” I muttered to myself. Note to self: don’t piss Bella off.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Best Parts:

Jasper missed the pass I threw and it went into the crowd. My eyes fell on Bella, who had picked up the ball. Jasper held his hands out for it and she just smirked at him. She then cocked her arm back and threw the ball back to me. I had to jump to catch it. Fuck me. I looked at her in astonishment and she just waved at me. I’ve never seen a girl throw a ball like that.  

I watched Bella walk to the picnic tables where she met up with Tanya. I could tell by Tanya’s face that it wasn’t going to be pretty. I started to go over when Emmett stopped me. We stood and listened as best we could from where we were. I didn’t hear everything, but it was clear that Bella was handling Tanya just fine on her own. It was plain to see that some kind of disagreement was taking place, but Bella had the upper hand. She left Tanya standing there gaping and pissed as a wet hen. That shit was hot. I’d never seen anyone put Tanya in her place so easily. Bella’s eyes were blazing and fuck if that didn’t turn me on. If I was a different person, I might’ve dragged her out to my mother’s garden shed to show her just how much.

“Holy shit,” Emmett whispered as we watched Bella walk away.

“Yeah,” I breathed.

 

Alice had put a jacket on, asking Bella if she had brought one. She had her arms around herself, trying to warm up. I snatched up my sweatshirt and offered it to her. She was surprised by the gesture and thanked me, putting it on. Now, I’ve never been one to like it when a girl wore my clothes. In fact, when Lauren did it, it pissed me off. So, imagine my surprise at the reaction I had seeing Bella in my sweatshirt.

 

I’d had enough of this bitch.

“Look, I don’t know who the hell you think you are, but you need to back the fuck off. If Edward was interested in me, I assure you that I would be more than enough for him. Unlike you and your fake tits and your nasty looking dyed hair, which by the way I saw him react to you, is not his type, either!” I grabbed a bottle of water and waked away leaving her mouth hanging open.

   

“No, that’s okay. I think I’ll try to find his home. Thanks. Goodnight.”

I got into my apartment and found an old blanket for the puppy. There was some left over cooked ground beef in the fridge. I put it in a bowl and got another with water and gave it to him.

I took a picture of him and made up a flyer. ’Did you lose me?’ it said below his picture. I printed up a few to tack up tomorrow before I left for Forks.

 



Author's Response:

The football scene is one of my favorites. I like the verbal smackdown of tanya as well! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Best Parts:

 

I woke up to a warm body lying next to me. The little guy jumped up to sleep with me sometime during the night.

 

“Hey, you. What are you doing?” I said, holding him up to see his face. He licked me.

I placed him on the floor and got up to look for damage. I was pleasantly surprised to find nothing amiss. No messes, nothing chewed.

“Good Boy!” I told him, scratching his head. Now that I got a good look at him, he looked like a Boxer. I put a pair of sleep pants on and the sweatshirt I had worn the night before. Just because it was right there. And still smelled delicious. I then took the pup outside.

I was nervous about it, not having a leash. I hoped he didn’t run off. As it was, he did his business and walked right back to me.

“Huh. Alright then, come on.” he followed me to the elevator and then down the hall to my apartment.

I showered and dressed quickly, thinking that I’d better stop somewhere and buy a few things since I was going to take care of him until his owners claimed him. I found another blanket for my car and we left. Along the way I posted a few of the flyers.

I stopped at a superstore, posting another flyer before buying some food, a bowl, a collar and a leash. I gave him some food right away, figuring he’d be hungry and we took off for Forks.

 

“Bella, if no one claims that dog, you should keep him. Single woman, living alone. Having a dog around would be good. Just train him up a bit and you’d be all set,” my dad suggested.

“I may just do that, Dad.” I smiled warmly at my father.

 

 

I told her about the dog, which seemed to excite her. She said that I should bring him, assuring me that no one would mind.

 

It was starting to rain again. “Can you find me an old towel? Or just some paper towel? I don’t want to let him inside all wet.”

I found an old towel for her and held the dog while she wiped him down. We joined the rest of my family for another game.




Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying this story. Thank you!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

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“Yes, pretty good. Um, thanks for watching the dog. Why do you have him, anyway?”

“I heard him whining so I just brought him over with me,” he said matter-of-factly.

“Oh. I’m sorry he bothered you.”

“He didn’t bother me. He’s just a pup and was lonely.” Edward moved closer to rub the dog’s head, “Weren’t you boy?” He moved his attention to me. “I just had him out a little while ago, so he should be good for a while. Here’s your key.” he reached into his pocket producing my key.

 

I held the dog towards him. “Did you bring food over for him?”

“Yeah, I grabbed his food bowl and got him some water. It’s in the kitchen.” He thumbed over his shoulder towards the room.

 

I knocked and opened the door just peeking in. I opened the door and walked in, taking in the sight before me.

Edward was on the floor playing with the puppy. It was licking him, and wriggling around. I laughed and Edward’s head popped up.

“Hey,” he said, looking a little embarrassed.

“No problem, Cullen. Your secret is safe with me.” I told him.

 

“It’s complicated.” I said shaking my head slightly. I looked up at him.

He looked me in the eyes and said, “I think I can keep up.” I was lost for a moment in his gaze.

“If I tell you, you tell me?” I wasn’t spilling my guts unless I got something back. He nodded.

“Full version or abbreviated?” I asked him.

“What the hell, might as well get it all over with at once, don’t you think?” He asked.

 

 

“No Edward. It sounds to me like she was fully aware of what she was getting into. Granted, she may not have been cut out for that kind of life, but that is on her. Not you.” Bella looked angry. “Didn’t she have any friends? Family? Hell, she could have gotten a dog.” Bella picked up the pup as she said this.

 

“Do you have anymore? I can go out tomorrow and put a few more up.” I offered.

“You wouldn’t mind? That would be great. I can print a few more up. How many do you want?” Bella was practically glowing. It didn’t take much to make her happy.

 

I went to the drawer in the kitchen that should hold the take out menus. At least, it used to. I haven’t opened the drawer since I’ve been home. Nope, not there. I started checking all the others. The bitch actually took those? She probably would’ve taken the ice cube trays if the fridge didn’t already make ice.

“What are you looking for?” I didn’t hear Bella come back in.

“The menu for the Chinese delivery place a few blocks away. Apparently Lauren needed it in California.” Fucking bitch.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I enjoy seeing what you think are the 'best parts'!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Best Parts:

 

Do you mind if Jake comes over?” He furrowed his brows and looked disappointed.

“Jake? Jake who?” he asked angrily.

“Oh, that’s right.” He didn’t know that I was keeping the dog and had named him. “Jake is what I named my dog,” I explained.

Edward laughed and looked relieved. “Of course. Bring him over.”

 

“Uh, no. I will not wake you up just so you can slave over a hot stove. Unless it’s Thanksgiving or Christmas,” he added with a chuckle.

 

“Alice?” Bella asked. Apparently she didn’t know that my darling sister had quite the appetite, especially when it comes to pizza.

“Yeah, she’s kind of like a hummingbird. They expel so much energy, they have to eat a lot to replenish themselves.” We both were still laughing when the elevator opened on our floor.



Author's Response:

Yeah, the thing with Jake? I thought it was kind of funny. Thanks!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Best Part:

 

I laughed and Jake decided that it was play time.

He jumped on my back and started barking. He jumped off and licked both of us until we sat up. I got the feeling he was trying to distract me.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate your reviews!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Best Parts:

Jake and I had become tolerant of each other. He was friendly enough, but I had a sneaking suspicion that he was the culprit of my recently missing boxers. I already knew he stole and hid my shoes. He was growing fast and was going to be huge. He’ll make a good guard dog. That thought made me feel a little better about leaving Bella.

I held the tiny box in the palm of my hand and presented it to her. Bella picked it up and opened it. She looked at the key and then me, waiting for an explanation, I suppose.

“It’s to my apartment. I want you to have it. And before you say anything, I would have given it to you whether I was leaving or not.”

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you like my story!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Best Part:

 

“Hi Jasper. How’s Jake?” I asked. I couldn’t wait to get home and see that dog. After I heard what he had done to Mike, I figured I owed him a steak or something.

 

“He’s doing just fine. He likes our backyard.” Jasper and Alice had a fenced in back yard, so he got to run around without his leash on.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Best Parts:

 

Jake pranced back and forth between us all looking for a handout. Seeing I still owed him a steak, I gave him a few pieces of spaghetti.

“You know, I am not surprised to find you here. But, woman to woman? You are making yourself look pathetic. How long have you been throwing yourself at Edward? Has he, even once, showed any interest in you at all?” She looked shocked. “Guess what? HE IS NOT INTERESTED. So, from here on out, I expect you to leave my boyfriend ALONE.” I turned and took Edward’s hand and went to join the party, leaving Tanya looking bewildered.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked it,  Thanks for leaving a review, too!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

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“Say what you came to say then get the fuck out. DO NOT disrespect her again or you’ll be dealing with me. You‘ll be lucky if I don‘t kick your ass anyway,” Edward warned. I watched as James actually paled from Edward’s words.

 

“Well James, I neither want or need your apology, so I won‘t be accepting it. I have already moved on from you. You didn‘t do anything that Edward couldn‘t fix. I wish you nothing but the best but, after today? I‘ll never think of you again” He and Edward both looked at me in surprise. “Goodbye.” I opened the door and watched him walk out.

 

 Bella also gave in to a combined bachelor/bachelorette party. It was more like a dinner party with gag gifts and lingerie. It was fun, though. We weren’t going to be spending our last single night apart, either. Nothing with us had been conventional, so why start now?

 

“Jake! Let’s go get married, buddy.” I had to put my foot down about Jake being in the wedding. Alice wanted to tie the rings to a ribbon and hang them around his neck. I don’t think so.

 

Our house will always have a stash of Ring Pops. Hidden, of course.

 



Author's Response:

LOL! thanks so much! I really appreciate you sticking around for the whole thing!! My PC crashed last night with my Epi on it, so I have to rewrite it. It should be out next week.

Summary:

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Life in Spoons Valley continues as a new generation deals with changes in their small western town.  Dr. Edward Cullen, returning after years of absence while attending medical school, believes that life back in his hometown will be boring after life in the city.  Little does he know that even though the way of things in the west are slow to change, some things remain exciting, wild, and untamed. 

This story is a continuation of my other story Lonesome Hearts.  Please read that story first.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12783 Read Count: 9739
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 02 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting start.  I hope Edward isn't hostile with Bella.  There are enough stories where a grown man acts like a five year old....

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

When you say violence, what does that mean exactly?



Author's Response:

I meant more along the lines of violence like you see in Lonesome Hearts: shoot outs, fights, that kind of thing.  There will be no wife beating or domestic violence type senerios going on in this story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59013
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight

Absolutely Fantastic chapter!

 

I hope that James dies!!



Author's Response:

This means alot coming from you... i do wish James death also,, see you next chapter:)

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence

Bella was stupid not to press charges or go to the hospital for medical treatment....



Author's Response:

i can see how one would feel that way... bella blames herself cause she disobeyed her parents and went somewhere and did things they woudlnt approve of. while in clear mind hindsight is 20/20 but with someone whose been hurt this way... the only thing they are thinking of is safety... ty for ur review i so appreciate it

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul

Why on eath didn't tell her parents the truth?! 

I would understand if she was just entering her teens but at her age that doesn't make sense.  She is supposed to be smart enough to get into Dartmouth but doesn't have the sense to obtain the morning after pill?

 

Hopefully, Jake will tell Charlie the truth....



Author's Response:

shes blaming herself cause she went somewhere she shouldnt have... women who have been raped often blames themselves and believe they could have done things diffrent. Its false for her to believe that cause no woman deserves that. no matter the situation... she shut herself off so any logical thinking abt diseases and plan B hasnt crossed her mind.... the truth wont come from bella but she will touch on it... basically

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace

Good for Rose!!

Author's Response:

i agree, im loving rose

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect

I am glad that the truth will finally come out. Way to go Jake!!!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Poison Pen

I hope that Renee dies a cruel painful death.  Before that, I hope Charlie kicks Renee out on the street like the trash that she is. She shouldn't be welcome in their home.

Bella should have Renee charged with harrassment and endangering her life and the life of her unborn child. 



Author's Response:

i agree completely.. ty for your review

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss

I hope other victims of James come to light.....

 

Best Parts:

 

It had always been my experience that if a man could rape once, he was very likely to repeat. It was a gut feeling whether its be a cops or dad intuition that he has done this before

 

"You're wrong, because of you Cullen House has suspended outside contact with her, and in order for me to talk to her I had to call the answering service and be connected with her Doctor, who tells me upon reading your lovely letter went into a stress induced panic attack and had to be sedated. You have put her life and the life of my grandbaby in jeopardy and I simply cant allow you to do this again. I know you wont change and you wont stop if I simply asked you to"

She didn't say anything , just stomped up the stairs

I composed myself and sent a text to mark to head over here

I saw him pull up in the cruiser and tried to calm myself. I never thought in a million years I would have to arrest my wife, but she was wrong and committed a crime and I wouldn't ignore this..

Renee came down stairs and inquired on why Mark was here. I sat back in my chair as mark started rattling off a list of charges that included

Obstruction of justice, Harassment via USP mail and witness intimation

And since she blew a 1.2 on the breathalyzer and DUI was going to be added

I watched her handcuffed and she started to cry for me and I couldn't find it in my heart to give a shit



Author's Response:

love love that those were your fave parts.... you never miss a thing... other victims..hmm, it will play out soon

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Life goes on

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He handed me a leather bound journal with the words Il tuo cuore è la mia nuova casa written on the bottom in beautiful hand written calligraphy . I looked up at him and he was looking at bit apprehensive

“ Are you going to tell me what this says in Italian”

“ I’ll tell you when you’re ready to hear it”

 

 

“ The only new thing is that I have filed for divorce from Renee, so to answer your question, I will be coming alone”

 

“ Plans always change Isabella”



Author's Response:

Thankyou so much, glad u had parts you liked:) those are my fave as well

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Karma's present

Oh Good James is dead!

Probably one of his past rape victims!!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The ties that bind

Best Parts:

He said a condition like this was hereditary then he asked if anyone on my side had heart problems. I said no and realized that this had to come from James's side. That fucker affected her even from the grave

 

I grabbed Edward hands and put them in mine. The tears had already started to flow uncontrollably. I put his hands on my belly

" Edward Cullen, would you do me the great honor in being her father?"

She must of loved that idea, since she took this opportunity to kick me for the first time and in the palm of his left hand.

Edward looked up from his hands in amazement, He's eyes glistening in unshed tears

" I would love nothing more then to be her Daddy"



Author's Response:

AWW thankyou, those parts were my favorite also

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings

I think Bella needs a new therapist.

Tanya needs to back off.

Hopefully Renee returns in a body bag after suffering a cruel and painful death....



Author's Response:

I agree, I dont ever forsee any malice with Claire, but it will be a conflict now with tanya.. the Tanya thing wont last long and Renee always  brings destruction

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bad Company

The judge just needs to see the letter that Renee wrote to Bella and to learn that James raped Bella....Then he'll laugh his ass off and throw them both in Jail for wasting the courts time.

Raspists families don't get rights.

With Renee's criminal behaviour she won't get any either.

 

Hopefully, Bella will file restraining orders against these horrible women.

 



Author's Response:

ur so right... Edward came prepared... promise:)

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie

Best Part:

it feels like home when I am around you, You are my home, remember that journal I gave you?”

“ yes”

The translation on the cover says “ Your heart is my new home”



Author's Response:

thankyou so much:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

crr

 

What do you do when the Mob is after you? Run.

After accidentally witnessing a New York Mob hit, Bella Swan and her brother Emmett are on the run. Due to a lucky pull from a bucket, they land in Montana at the Cullens' animal rescue facility. Will they find more than just refuge with the Cullens?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54397 Read Count: 35770
[Report This] Published: 15 Dec 2010 Updated: 16 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: New York City

Interesting start!



Author's Response:

I needed a little drama to kick it off! lol Thanks!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: More Confessions

I am so glad that Bella finally told Edward the truth.



Author's Response:

I think she was at a point where she had to. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean

Best Part:

“I don’t know what to say. This is really above and beyond hospitality.” Emmett said.

 

“Well, that’s what families do.” Dad glanced at me as he said this.

 

“But we’re not family, you’ve only known us for a few days.” Emmett argued.

 

“Sometimes that’s all it takes, Emmett.” Dad said standing up.



Author's Response:

Aww, that's sweet. Thanks for R/R!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Making the Rounds

Best Parts:

 

“A little early for a house call, isn’t it Doc?” Emmett looked pissed.

 

“Uh…well…Bella asked me…” was all I got out before he stopped me.

 

“Dude, I’m fucking with you,” he was laughing hysterically. “What my sister does isn’t any of my business. His face turned serious. “Unless you fuck up. Then it will be.”

 

“Jake, I’m pretty sure that Bella is perfectly content staying with us.” I looked at her for confirmation. She nodded emphatically. “Furthermore,” I winked at Bella, “I thought I told you that she is my girlfriend.”

 

I moved so that I was directly in front of Jacob, inches away from his face. “Back. The Fuck. Off. I don’t want to have this conversation with you again,” I warned quietly.

 

“Yeah, no problem. I got it, Cullen,” he sighed, looking past me at Bella.

 

“Great!” I said happily, clapping him on the shoulder. “See you around Jake.”



Author's Response:

This amuses me, you showing me what you consider the 'best parts'. Thanks, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Finally

Best Part:

 

Bella shook off his hand and took a step closer to him, looking pissed as hell.

 

“First of all, Edward has nothing to feel threatened about. He is MINE just like I am HIS. And second, I wouldn’t dance with you if you were the last man on earth!” Bella yelled at him.



Author's Response:

That line isn't even mine! My Buddah suggested it, almost verbatim! But thanks!!

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: They Found Us

Best Parts:

 

“You are a sorry excuse for a man, Jacob. I ought to shoot you myself! Instead, I’ll just put you out of my fucking misery.” I pulled my arm back and hit him as hard as I could. He fell like a 12 year old girl. “Fucking asshole,” I muttered.

 

 

“What in the hell are you doing here?” Bella yelled. This ought to be good…

 

“He is the one that BROUGHT those fuckers here. Apparently they scared him into it!” I informed her.

 

Bella turned five shades of red and stormed over to Jake. She slapped him hard across the face and kicked him in the balls. He doubled over and fell, cupping his junk and groaning.

 

I scooped up Bella and kissed her long and hard. Watching her put that fucking douche in his place was really fucking hot.

 

   

“Hey. What about Jacob?” Alice asked. Everyone looked at each other and we all busted out laughing. We left his sorry ass at the cabin.

 

“Fuck him. He can find his own way home,” I said, thoroughly disgusted.


 

Author's Response:

So, you liked Jake getting his ass kicked?? Awesome. :) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Finding Home

Wonderful story!!!

 

Best Parts:

Bella fit into our lives perfectly. She had made and put into action suggestions that helped our facility grow. We were able to expand with all the donations pouring in. Her ideas about the pre-adoption forms turned out to be genius.

 

Jake moved away just before Bella and I were married. After the town found out about him bringing the mob guys right to Bella, he was essentially ostracized. Because of his arrogance, he tried to ignore all the whispers and looks. It got to him after a while and last I heard, he moved to New Mexico.

 

Bella gave birth to a beautiful baby boy a year and a half after we were married. Best birthday present ever. He was the perfect combination of us both. Charlie had brown hair and green eyes and his facial features were a mix of us both.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It really makes my day that so many have liked this story. Have a great day :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

GupCL

Edward's always gotten what he wanted, from a baby sister to the career of his dreams. When Alice invites him to a holiday dinner, it brings him face to face with the last thing he'll ever want. Written for the SFFR Christmas Compilation.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5844 Read Count: 3351
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Merry Christmas!

 

Best Parts:

“You have to love me, Eddie, I was your Christmas Wish, no returns, exchanges, or refunds.”  

“Shh.  You’ll come home with me, or I’ll stay here with you.  You aren’t spending Christmas alone.”

Bella pulled away and looked at Edward.  “No, you can’t stay here.  It’s Alice’s 21st birthday, she’s so excited to go out drinking with you.  I’ll be fine here.”

“No you’re coming home with me, let me handle this.”  Soon Edward was on the phone with the airline paying ridiculous fees to have his one first class ticket tomorrow turned into two coach tickets on a red eye leaving at midnight. 

 

Edward paused before hugging her a little tighter.  “Thank you for inviting me down for Thanksgiving, every year I find another reason that you are the best Christmas present I ever received, and this year is by far the biggest reason.”

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JavaMasta

Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives.  But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl.  Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family.  Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124870
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2014
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Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Charlie drowned her dog!? Billy knows and does nothing. 

 

I hope the Cullens kill them in the most painful way possible!



Author's Response:

Hi, and thanks for your sweet review! Charlie gets his in the end, I promise, but it's going to take a while.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting start.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

The Black's are pathetic! THey know the abuse is happening and doing nothing. The Cullen's should snap Charlie's neck. Problem solved. I certainly hope this doesn't drag out. Stories about abuse always seem to be drawn out for too long.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! If you didn't like Jake in this little snippet, you're really not gonna like him the next time he shows up!

I will warn you that this is, indeed, a very long story.  Up to 200k words and not finished yet.  Just warning you in case it isn't your cuppa tea.  I won't be offended if you stop reading; I do it all the time.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I really hope she never goes back to Charlie and that he is dealt with properly.

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella start fighting back...
Now that there are people willing to help her, she better not got back to Charlie.

I am disapointed that you allowed a dog to be killed in your story.

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2673627
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Wrapped Around my Finger

So Funny!

Best Part:

"Anywhere...I want to go?" She stepped away from me again.

I didn't like the way she said that but I nodded my head yes anyway.

She squealed, clapping her hands while she jumped up and down. "This is fantastic!" She bit down on her lip, scrunched her nose, and proceeded to do the running man. "Ugh. Ugh. Ugh!" She grunted out.

I laughed at my silly, beautiful wife and wondered what the fuck was going on in that head of hers. "Where are we going?" I asked, hoping she'd calm down.

"WE ARE GOING TO THE WIZARDING WORLD OF HARRY POTTER!" She shrieked out. "YEAH BUDDY!" She frowned. "Caius is dead—but fuck him we're going to UNIVERSAL STUDIOS! WOOT-WOOT!" She ran from me.

I walked to follow her, and saw her grab her cell from her purse. "Who are you calling?" I asked.

"Esme..." she looked to her phone.

I grinned at her. "Did you do all that just to get a vacation out of me?"

She shrugged. "Yeah, you're so damn easy—you know what I mean."

"No, I don't." I laughed.

She blew out a breath. "Lexi is gorgeous, and I have no idea why you're with me and not her...but you are with me...you're mine, and...I don't fucking know. Yeah, it pisses me off that she's around. But whatever. What can I do?" She squealed again. "Let's drop it."

I nodded.

"-and you go lay down." She nudged me. "You need your energy for Potter-world. I'll handle everything. I just need to call Esme to see if she'll watch Brutus."

I frowned. "Yeah...I'll go watch television," I felt around my sinuses. "Can you make me some soup?"

She jut her lip out. "Of course I can. Go lay on the couch and I'll bring it in...my poor baby." She buried her head in my chest while I smiled into her hair. She's fucking easy as hell too.








I also love that Edward already suspects Alec!!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Antipasto

Best Part:

"I also—" I dug into my panties. "Here," I handed him the coke.

He pulled the waist band of my yoga pants away from me. "What else you got in there?" He looked down.

"Edward!" I smacked his hand away.

"No, seriously—" he laughed. "I married a fucking magician. How'd you do that?"

"Stop," I laughed too.

"Alright, so what's the story with this?" He looked to the bag.

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Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Quick Like A Cat

Best Part:

I bit my lip, looking down to my feet. "Get rid of her." I blurted.

He looked around himself. "That's hardly a reason to clip someone, but if it'll make you happy—"

"Oh God!" I shouted. "No! I meant just fire her. Make it so she's not around Carlisle. He's lazy. It's not like he'll seek her out or anything." I nestled into him. "What the hell is wrong with you?"

"You said "Get rid of her". What was I supposed to think?"

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Boxed In

Best Chapter ever!

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Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Every Dog Has Its Day

Best Parts:

I shook my head and grabbed some cash from my pocket. "You did good." I counted out five hundred dollars and placed it on his desk. "I wish I had more cash...uh..." I pulled my hair and turned back to Bella. She was crying now but she always cries, so she was okay.

"Mr. Cullen...that is highly unnecessary." He slapped the money into my hand.

I nodded. "You like television? Do you have a flat screen?...give me your address...delivered to your door...Shit. You're lucky I ain't a fanuk—I'd kiss that bald head of yours." I smiled as I stared at him. "Oh...fuck it." I grabbed his head and kissed it.


Dr. Smith laughed. "During the first trimester hormonal havoc is at an all time high. An increased—insatiable libido is also a symptom, yes." He nodded.

I raised an eyebrow at him.

"But being married to such a handsome young man—" he rushed out.

I winked at him, feeling giddy. "It was that smooch, wasn't it?"

"Um..." He slightly shook his head.

"Edward," Bella chastised.


"If you'll follow me into an exam room," he gestured out.

I nodded and stood up, then I picked Bella up bridal style. "Put me down."

"No. Get used to it...Doc, after you." I jerked my chin out and we followed him—while he laughed—into another room.

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Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 33: SunSational Day

Best parts:

He groaned and hugged me—but not too tight. Damn I miss those hugs. "I love you…and I love you too." He bent low and looked back up to me. "Let me see him."

I giggled and lifted my shirt so Edward could kiss my stomach. "You're too cute."

He stood up. "So I've been told." He kissed me once more, and then I watched him walk out of the room.

I sighed watching him go. He really is very cute and sexy. The man still kills me.





"What are they doing?" Carlisle whispered.

"Nothing," I whispered.

"What are we looking at?" Edward asked.

I looked behind me to see that we were all looking out the window, even Laurent.

"Oh…" Edward said. "What's so…anyway…" He began to talk to his friend again, while Carlisle and I continued to look.

Then I gasped when I saw Aro lean into Christina. "He's leaning—get the bat." I pushed Carlisle. "Hurry!" I was seething. "I'mma get that motherfucker!"

"What—get who? Bella?" Edward turned me to face him.

"Here," Carlisle laughed and handed me the bat.

I smiled, and then frowned when Edward grabbed it. "Bella…" Edward palmed my cheek with his freehand. "Snap out of it," he said 'cause he knows how I get. "Christ…" He turned back to his friend. "I feel like…I'm married to Lucy. You know from that old show?"

Laurent laughed. "I Love Lucy?"

Edward nodded and stared back to me.

I shrugged and looked everywhere but to him. I'm crazy. So, what? Fuck. He's stuck with me now…





"Hit me."

"What?" I stared up at Edward like he was crazy, but most of all I wondered why he didn't answer my question.

"Let go of the aggression…let it go…hit me. Us guys do it all the time. Once you hit me—FUCK!" he shouted after I hopped up and punched him in the face.

I felt so much better, but cried anyway. "I just hit you…" I panicked. "What's wrong with me?" I sobbed and needed to sit down.

"I'm fine…" Edward held his jaw. "You're fine…I thought you'd hit my arm or something." He grinned down at me. "My baby's momma packs the heat." He bent low to kiss my hand.

I sobbed harder, and thought I was losing my mind.

"Why are you crying?" Edward hugged me. "Don't cry…you'll make me cry…"

I giggled through my tears.

He sighed and rubbed my back. "My Bebella…please calm down…"

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 34: This is it

Best Part:

"Come on, Shortcake…I'll take you and Lau for ice cream first," Aro laughed.

"Ice cream?" Lauren asked. "What am I, five?"

Aro turned to glare at her.

I grinned and looked down to Bella who was rubbing her stomach. "I could go for a little chocolate."

"With sprinkles?" I winked.

She nodded. "Fuck, yeah…with sprinkles." She looked up to me. "We should all go."

"Yeah, like a double date." Lauren leaned into Aro, who rolled his eyes.

"Um..." I looked down to Bella.

"Please?" She grinned and batted her eyelashes.

"OH!" Aro shouted. "Not the face."

"What face?" Lauren asked.

I took hold of Bella's chin and showed Lauren. "This one." I turned her back to me and kissed her lips.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

Best Parts:

I blew out a breath as tears filled my eyes, but then… "Why is Fat Tony here?" I whispered.

"What?" Edward screamed and he continued to scream while I almost shit my pants. I was scared now, and yet Edward didn't sound like he was driving at all. I noticed that—amongst all the other bullshit—he didn't sound like he was in a car at all.

"Where are you?" I whispered. "He said you were in an accident."

"I'm so glad you're smart—most people would have dropped everything and ran into the car with him. I'm guessing that was his plan." Edward chuckled bitterly.


Time sped up after I fired two quick shots in his face. He collapsed back with a hard thump and I advanced toward him. With hate in my heart and fire in my hands, I shot him once more—at close range—in his head, only to scream when his blood splattered me.

He was dead. He lay lifeless before me, and my job had been done.

That was when I froze. I didn't know what to do, and stared down at the puddle that developed before me. There was so much blood—

I ran into the bathroom and kneeled in front of the toilet. Bile burned my throat, and I continued to dry heave, all while the house phone rang and rang.

It was Edward, no doubt.

On my hands and knees, I crawled to the phone on Edward's nightstand. "It's done," I whispered.

There was silence on the other end.

"Did you hear me?"

"I—I can't fucking believe—Christ, are you okay?" He was sobbing now and he didn't try to hide it this time.

I nodded and tried to ignore Tony's foot. I could see it in my peripheral, but refused to turn my back fully away from him.

"Bella…clean yourself up and go," Edward whispered. "Just go…grab the dog and go."

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Checks and Balances

Best Parts:

I placed a forkful into my mouth and chewed. Then I placed the fork down while I tried to swallow. "Why does this taste funny?" I asked.
"They're gluten-free. They're supposed to be better for you or something." He went to the coffee pot. "Lau bought them."

"Ah…" Since they weren't that bad, I started to eat again.



"Is your order on the screen correct?"

I glanced at it. "Yes."

"Please hold for your total."

"What?" I asked. "Fuck this." I drove up to the window and paid for my shit. It's supposed to be fast food, not twenty questions. And what's the deal with checking to see if my order was correct? Bitch forgot my damn fries any-fucking-way.





I reached over her and pushed the button. "You can just—"

My sweet, beautiful wife's face morphed into one of a demon. I took my arm back and didn't recognize the person before me. "What did you do?" She screeched. "I like pulling it. I get the full effect—you!" Then when the machine started speaking in a broad's voice and dinged a bit, she turned back into Bella. "Oh…you must be good luck…Ten bucks. Woot-woot!" She pulled me next to her. "Hit it again, baby!" She pinched my ass, and I played along.



"Marcus…he's dead."

"Fuck!" I nearly shouted. "I just—I just spoke to him last night. Was it his heart?" I smiled. "He was supposed to cut down on all that shit…I can't believe…" I pretended like I was in shock.





"You did it," she whispered. "That was the plan…it would have been fucked up…he-he-he…" She became excited, like she was solving a mystery. "He sent Tony to come clip me. Marcus had beef with you, and the only way to hurt you would be to hurt me. He would have made me disappear, like I left you. And then, when you were sad and lonely…he would have done something." She tapped her chin and looked up to the ceiling.

My response was to laugh. "That's quite a story…but it's not true. Aro saw—"

She gasped. "Aro…what about Aro?"

I looked down. "He was shot in the shoulder…his arm. He was coming out of the car to defend Marcus."

She dug her nails into my biceps and started to hyperventilate.

"Don't do this," I said. "You're getting upset for no reason. Bella, he's fine…he'll be home tomorrow. They're keeping him overnight, but trust me, Aro's had worse."

She started to hit me repeatedly, and those small tiny fists actually hurt. I think it was because of the water. They felt like sharp slaps. "You shot your friend!" She scolded through a whisper. "How could you? I know it was you!" She continued to hit me.

I let her do it until she slipped. She lost her footing, and I was quick to catch her. "Are you finished?"

She gritted her teeth—bared her teeth, like she was going to bite me.

"Relax." I kissed her teeth. "Calm the fuck down, animal." I squeezed her butt cheeks and held her close.

"Everything you said is a great theory, but it's simply not true." I kissed her nose this time.

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Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Baby Blues

Best Parts:

"I have Oreos in the kitchen…Edward said you've been on an Oreo kick."

I stuck my tongue out. "Until I ate a whole package because no one was around and threw them all up. I can't…I'm into Goldfish crackers this week." I bit my lip. Now I really wanted a cheesy goldfish. "Fuck," I whispered.

Now I'll be aching to get out of here, just so I can have some. Once it enters my mind, it becomes an obsession until I satisfy my craving.

"We have Ritz crackers…and some provolone?"

"That'll work….but not right now, thanks." At least I can have those if it becomes too much. I will overcome this, dammit.





The next day, I finally got my show, and it was one I hated to see.

Before they lowered Marcus into the ground, Didyme threw herself onto the coffin. It was the saddest thing I had ever seen, and caused a few thousand tears to spill from my eyes. I cried all afternoon and lied. I said it was because of Marcus, but it really wasn't.

Edward is now in Marcus's shoes. It made me think about too much morbidity. I thought about my own death and, more importantly, Edward's.





She cupped her cheek. "I can't believe you hit me."

"You're lucky I'm pregnant or else I'd force you into the shower." I snorted. "Dude, seriously." My eyes trailed down her body.

She scooted away from me. "Remind me…if I'm ever about to jump out a window, not to call you."



"I know you aren't going to get better overnight. You need to talk to someone, who has the—patience of a saint." I chuckled. "I just want you to take the first step. We love you—we all love you, even Hanna. I know she misses you. She spent more than nine months with you. Maybe that's why she cries. She misses her momma." I jutted my lower lip out.

"You think so?" she whispered.

I nodded. "Esme, you're such a good mom. I saw you at that hospital. You're a natural, and once you have her in your arms, it'll all come back. You two must have a bond. When she was crying just now…I couldn't hear it, and yet you did."



I looked down to Hanna. "You're fine, right? Beautiful little munchkin…" I tickled under her chin. "Hanna banana, lives in Montana, but wants to move to Al-a-bama," I sang. "She drinks Tropicana, and settled on Louis-i-ana," I giggled.
"Oh God…please…stop," Jacob said.

I made eye contact with him. "Hanna banana is Americana—Italiana, likes to sit in the ca-ban-a." I did a little shimmy. When I looked to Esme, she wore a wide smile.

"Wow…you just came up with all those words that rhymed with Hanna…like that?" Carlisle snapped his fingers.

I shrugged.





I waved an arm to get Jacob's attention, and when that didn't work, I quietly backed out of the dining room to grab my purse.

I sent him a text message.

Peek-a-boo, I see you—Bella





"Listen, and listen good." Edward seethed, squaring his shoulders and standing to his full height. "Respect…respect comes from admiration or fear. One way or another, you will respect me. I promise you that…even if you finally realize it when you take your last breath. Now get the fuck out of my house." Edward pointed to the door. "Go cry to my father." He turned and locked eyes with the son. "And you—" He grasped his chin. "Maybe you should go cry to your mother." He turned his face to Petey.

And then he let go, like nothing had happened. He walked behind his desk and straightened out his jacket.

Those men…their faces paled. I believe they got the hint, because God help them if they didn't.



I hid again, as Caius walked out of the office. When he was a few paces away, he turned back to me.
I gulped and placed my finger over my mouth.

Caius quietly laughed and continued on his way out. He's another cool one. Caius is a really nice guy, but he turns from nice to creepy in no time flat. I think he enjoys all that cleaning and killing. That day—when that thing happened with Tony and I came back to the house—Caius gave me hug. He was proud of me and said he couldn't have done it better himself. Then he went on to analyze the bullet wounds I inflicted. He also explained where else I could have shot him…for maximum damage.



"Bella? You can come in now," Edward said.

I bit my lip as I poked my head in. "Hi." I waved, like an ass. "How long have you known I was standing here?" I walked into the room.

Edward smirked at me and patted his thigh. "Since I saw you creep to the other side of the door."

I didn't reply and sat on his lap.

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Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Skip's Day Off

Best Parts:

"We'd like to know the sex first…is he, uh..." I pointed. Unless I squinted, I myself could only make out the outline of our child.
The nurse nodded. "Yup…We're getting flashed, all right," she laughed. "You guys ready?"

I nodded while I grasped Bella's hand tightly.

"Wait!" Bella shouted. "What if…Edward," she said and looked to me. "How many surprises do we really have in life? We should wait."

I kissed her temple. "I'll buy you something during the week—it'll be a surprise." I looked to the nurse. "Tell us."

"Mom?" Bernadette asked.

Bella grinned at me and nodded her head. "Tell us," she said.

Bernadette paused the wand and with her free hand pointed to the screen. "You see that—that little thing right here? Those are the genitals—I see a penis."

"YES! I fucking KNEW it!" I screamed and jumped up high. "I told you!" I punched the air. "Whoo! I am the FUCKING man!" I walked with a swagger and felt so happy. Then I turned back to Bella. She was crying her eyes out, a sobbing mess. "You did good." I wrapped my arms around her. "I love you."

"I—I—we're having a boy," Bella said.

The nurse and I both nodded; meanwhile, I bet if we were having a girl, we'd have the same reaction. Maybe I wouldn't be so happy about being correct, though.

There was a knock on the door. Dr. Smith poked his head in. "It's a boy!" I shouted.

Dr. Smith laughed. "I figured—with all that screaming." He walked in to take over for Bernadette. "Yes," he said. "A boy…congratulations…no kisses." He waved a finger at me.

I widened my arms. "Come on…you love it."

"Edward, stop." Bella chastised.





I massaged her shoulder. "You are not. I'm sorry if you thought we were doing that, but…we weren't," I said. "I'm sorry." I felt it best to just apologize. She looked genuinely upset; meanwhile, I didn't remember ganging up with the doctor. I would never intentionally do that. My gang consists of Bella and me…and now our son.

"You forgive me?" I puckered my lips and stopped an inch away from hers.

She gave me a quick peck and grinned through her tears. "Yeah," she sighed.



I personally found it a little disrespectful for my father's whore—excuse me—new bride, to name their kid after my mother.



Aro sighed. "Fine…MC cook tonight?"

I chuckled. "Are you hungry?"

"Well, I wouldn't invite myself. I would expect my dear friend and his wife to extend me an invitation."

"Listen to you…'extend'…No, like I said, she doesn't feel good. I'll probably order pizza. Did you want pizza?" I asked.

"Sounds good. I'll be there soon."

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Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Parts of life

Best Parts:

She also gave me a coupon book.

Since Bella isn't "always" in the mood anymore, I received ten "blow job" coupons that I can use whenever I want. She made them out of red construction paper—nothing fancy—and those were the best gifts I have ever gotten.





Then I called Aro while I stared at my lonely coupon.

"You on your way?" I asked.

"Yes." He didn't sound too happy.

"I need you to stop at the drug store—or a paper store. I need red construction paper." I smiled. Surely, I can make some counterfeit "blow job" coupons.

"What?"

"Red paper—like the shit from elementary school. Paper hearts—shit like that," I said.

"You got it."

I nodded and ended the call.







Once we entered my office, I showed Carlisle the coupon. He has always been a master at forgery. When I was a kid and Nanny needed to sign something for me, Carlisle always did it. Nanny was strict as hell, and Carlisle always saved me from a beat down.

"Remember all those truancy cards you used to sign?" I asked.

Carlisle nodded and placed the coupon down.

"You think you can make a few more of those?" I pulled out a black Sharpie and the scissors. "Aro should be here soon with the paper."

"I can try," Carlisle laughed. "Can't you go a day without breaking a law? Don't you think it's…"

"What?" I rocked back in my chair.

"Nothing…You're just so serious about it," he laughed some more. "You want me to make fake blow job coupons?"

I nodded with a straight face. "What's the problem?"

He sighed. "There isn't one."

"Good," I said.




"How are you receiving it?" he whispered.

I shrugged. "Hedwig the Owl is going to deliver it. What the fuck do you care?" I laughed.





"You think you can make these? The bubbly lettering and all?" I pushed the coupon toward him.

He nodded. "Yeah." He grinned. "This is kind of adorable. Bella is—" Carlisle sounded a little wistful so I had to stop him. If he blurted out some lovey-dovey shit, I'd pop a cap in his fucking knee.

"Get that look off your face," I said.

"Ed…" He frowned.

"Stop," I said. "Just stop while you're ahead, bro."

He nodded. "Did you look around? She probably has a stack of this paper somewhere."

I shook my head no. "Bella might know those are fakes—she'll look and see if paper is missing, but she'd never think I'd go out and buy more."

He nodded. "Right…'Cause only a sick fuck would go so far for a blow job."

"Hey," I said. "It's not like I'm letting someone else suck my dick. Bella needs a coupon; I'm happy to make more."



"Get crackin'." I tossed the paper over to Carlisle.



He opened his mouth to respond, and then there was a knock on the door. I jumped. "Hide that." I hissed in a whisper. Carlisle was quick to sit on the paper, throwing the scissors and marker under the chair.



"Bella, why don't you go start on dinner?" I asked. "It's already close to seven—"

"Fuck you…order pizza, and if you show me a coupon…I swear to Christ!" She shook her fist.

I tried not to laugh. "Bella," I said in a soothing tone.

She huffed and dropped her shoulders. "I'm making chicken…





"My parents are still married. I grew up in a loving home—had a normal childhood, and I grew up to be a glorified hit man. What the fuck is my kid going to grow up to be?" He stood up.

I shrugged.

"You don't think about it?" Aro looked to me. "I can see it now…a little Edward and a little Aro…setting things on fire and trying to steal shit."

I threw my head back and laughed. "Relax."

"Next thing you know, they're out there earning bones or something—nuh uh—this is fucked. I can't have a kid!" He ran his hand through his hair. "We'll raise little serial killers and Hanna—Oh hell. She'll be swinging from a pole at Eclipse—"

I winced when Carlisle hopped up to punch Aro in the face. "What the fuck, bro?" Carlisle shouted.

I laughed out loud again. "You guys are great." I shook my head. "I swear…better than…than a fucking Broadway play…not that I've ever been to one." I shrugged and continued to laugh.



"I should whip out a coupon."

"Didn't you use your last one yesterday?" she asked.

I didn't reply and bit her earlobe.



I did the politician thing. I went around to each table with Bella and thanked the women for coming.



The three of us walked straight into the VIP area, where my supposed shower was. That too was decorated in blue. There were a few "It's a boy" signs, and everyone was ready to greet me with a hug and an envelope.



"We all go back a long way, so don't mistake our kindness for weakness." I took hold of the back of his head. "Just 'cause you won't get iced for whacking the kid, don't think you won't for being out of line. Understand? You speak to Aro just as you'd speak to me."



Even if her grandson won't be a purebred Italian—can you believe that? Like we're talking mutts and pedigrees over here." He shook his head.



"Thank you," I said and lightly touched Jacob's cheek with my knuckle.

Thank you for the shoes, looking out for Bella, and painting my fucking ceiling, I thought.

"You did good, kid," I whispered to Jacob, before Jasper pulled the trigger.



I practically ran up to the VIP area to snatch up the envelopes where I had left them. No outsiders were allowed in the lounge, and no one in their right mind would rip me off.



"We have to do the same as all the other gifts."

It's sick, but so like a sneaky fuck, a fed, to sneak a wire into a baby gift. Everything we have received so far has been nearly dissected. It's far-fetched, but not impossible. I am their number one target. They're gunning for me.



"Of course," Bella giggled. "That's why I told Nanny to have them deliver the stuff to her house." She's always keeping me on my toes with the element of surprise. She's getting it—this thing.



I grasped Bella's hand. "Are you too tired for…?" I reached into my pocket for that coupon. "A BJ in the limo?" I held it up and smiled while I tried to iron out the creases with my fingers. "It's wrinkled, but still good." I went to hand it to her.

She pushed my hand away. "Tomorrow?"

I continued to grin as I placed it back in my pocket. At least she didn't notice it was a fake or remember that I used my last one yesterday.

Summary:

 

 

 

Isabella and Edward Cullen have been married a little over four years, and been together as a couple since they were seventeen.

When Bella stumbles across some devastating evidence of Edward's infidelity on the night she is to announce her pregnancy hearts are broken,will the couple be able to move on and repair?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60066 Read Count: 30231
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Bella!!!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella is handling this very maturely. Although it would have been funny if she forwarded all of the emails to All of Edward's Friend, Family and Co-workers....Maybe Tanya can do that...

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Alice is my Hero!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Carlisle and Esme are amazing in-laws!!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bella's sleep talking is heartbreaking...

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

They beat him up so badly that he ended up in the hospital yet no assault charges were made!?

It is disturbing how stories in fanfiction are lacking in the accountability department. 

 



Author's Response:

Remember, Jake is like a son to Charlie, Charlie is the chief of police, Edward was uncontious and the man who cheated on his daughter and broke her heart...   And there is more still to the story. :)

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Poem-

Charlie is still the Chief of Police and the law was broken in front of his house.  If he cannot do his job, he needs to be replaced.



Author's Response:

Its a story lol Edward feels he deserved it, so he isnt pressing charges.

Summary:

Banner by: the amazing and talented  ivoryhairbela... you rock!

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Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past.  Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty.  She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist.  After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter.  Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?

 

Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?

Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza!  A million and one thank you´s!!

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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS.  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32318
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, that was some first chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you´ll hang in there with me and complete the journey!  


Krazi

xoxo

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mli

After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I love that he showed her "her Tatoo".

Author's Response:

Yeah? It was kind of sweet, huh? Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Alice is a twit for playing games.

Good for Rose!

Author's Response:

Alice isn't really playing games, she just thought it would be a nice surprise. She doesn't have any idea of the real history between E & B. But thank you-love to hear your thoughts!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Poor Bella.

I really don't like Alice in this story.

Author's Response:

Aww, you don't? Hopefully she redeems herself for you-but thank you! I love to hear any thoughts you have! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Really special first time for people who have loved each other for years....

 



Author's Response:

I sense some sarcasm....but it's all good. I love all the reviews and appreciate you leaving your thoughts! Thank you!!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Bella had better appreciate that someone in her life cares enough about her to speak up when she is unwilling to............



Author's Response:

You are going to be tough on me, aren't you?? That's great, actually. I can't wait to hear what you think about some of the upcoming chapters. Thank you!!

 

Summary:

bannar

BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 74927
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Mr and Mrs Newton need to be charged with obstruction or justice or hindering a police investigation.

Mike needs to be charged with harrassment.

Maybe there is a way for Bella to go after them in civil court for damages....That would be very interesting!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm glad that Bella stood up to Alice about the waxing.

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Coercing

I hope that Edward sees that Bella has been injured and he finds out that her parents are responsible.


I think it would be very fitting for Bella to have her parents banished from court and stripped of all of their wealth and titles.

It is the least they deserve for all the abuse that they inflicted on her.

Stress isn't good for pregnancy...

Author's Response:

King Edward will learn that it is Bella's parents responsible for her injuries. They will receive their comeuppance, but I would like to state that in the Tudor era what occurred within this chapter would not have been considered abuse, rather it would have been seen as correcting unruly behaviour for a lady to exhibit. However all this will not become known until a later chapter.

Thank you for reviewing. The next chapter will be up sometime today.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Apologising

Why the hell doesn't Bella have her parents killed? They are guilty of treason for their treatment of the Queen afterall?

These characters are all just vile even for the time period.

I'll give this story one more chapter before I decide to leave it or not....I don't deal well with cruelty and abuse. This was supposed to be a romance and it is reading more like Horror.

Author's Response:

Bella is not a strong person. She has been belittled all her life which has affected her inner strength and self esteem. She is also extremely careful and cautious about who she trusts with the secrets she hides. I understand that there are people who do not like my style of writing romance. I prefer to have the characters face many trials before love and romance can be discovered and brought to life. I hope the next chapter will give you some of the romance you are looking for, but I will warn you that there is still a little more angst to come.

Thanks for reviewing and I hope you do manage to stick with the story.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

ws

Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533482
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Voices Carry Part Two

I hope Esme finally dies......

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Wag the Dog

Freaking fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around

I absolutely love the interaction between Edward and his children. It is highly entertaining. I prefer his POV just for that.

Bella's POV isn't 1/3 as interesting to read.

Best Part:


Sonny dropped the pack and swallowed. "This older boy…he was…" He gave a wary glance to Aro. "He-he was playing with Katie—the motorcycle game. But…like, they were smiling, and he wasn't really playing. She was on the motorcycle and when he sat down behind her…I…I flew at him." He shrugged.

"What?" I quirked a brow.

"He touched her." His voice rose. "I didn't like that shit."

"Calm down," I said.

He puffed out a breath. "Hanna said he goes to her school. His name is Landon or something like that. He's older, a ninth grader."

I grinned. "So…why did you hit this kid again?"

"Because he touched her—Katie, and I didn't like it." He pointed to himself. "I'd kill that asshole if I could—"

Aro cut him off by slapping a twenty into his palm. "You did good."

Honestly, I thought so too, but I couldn't say that. "You know fighting is wrong—"

"What would you do if someone touched Mom—like her hips?"

I shrugged. "She's my wife—belongs to me. Katie belongs to Aro." I jerked a thumb.

"I love her!" Sonny all but screamed, and Aro took his money back.

"You're too young to know what love is," Aro muttered.

Sonny stood up, making his chair hit the wall. "Whatever…I didn't like it, and it just happened. Now Katie hates me…so be happy about that!" He stormed out of the kitchen.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Misery Loves Company

Best Parts:

 

"Watch it!" Edward hissed. "That's my wife—this is our house, and maybe Bella's too polite to put you in your place, but I'm not." My husband came to my rescue. "Do not disrespect my wife in our home. . . Apologize." He pointed her in my direction.

I shook my head no, always having so much respect for Nanny. She didn't say what she did for no reason. Nanny always speaks the truth whether it hurts your feelings or not.

"Don't you dare—" Nanny started.

"Don't you fucking dare," Edward said. "Go get dressed. I'll have someone drive you back to the home."

 

"Did everyone try my lasagna…Aro?" Nanny asked and gave a pointed look to Esme, like they were in competition for Aro's affection though their culinary skills.

"Oh shit," Edward breathed, "check them out." He squeezed my thigh, seeing exactly what I saw.

"No one cares if I like the food…" Ed Sr. said.

The husband and I were trying not to laugh

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Blondie

I hope Carlisle ends Esme.  She has been obnoxious since the beginning.

 

I would love to see an outtake of Edward finding Sonny's chest of valueables...

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Best Part:

 

"He touched my stuff?" He banged his fists down on his thighs. "I can't believe—"

"Honey," I massaged his shoulder, "if you're worried about what he found under your bed . . ." I let that hang there, cringing at the conversation I had with my husband earlier in the week. Along with six hundred dollars cash, Sonny had a slingshot, a bottle of wine—which hadn't been opened—a decent-sized pocketknife, and a picture of a pair of small tits—it was a Polaroid, and my bet is that they're Katie's breasts. Edward said he wanted to poke his eyes out with a spoon after he saw it.

"Your little treasure chest?" I couldn't hold it in and found myself giggling. "Daddy found it days ago." Overall, Edward thought it was hilarious, too—having that "boys will be boys" attitude.

 

 

 

 

 

I would love to see an EPOV outtake on this....pretty please

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 23: The Twilight Zone

So funny:

 

 

 "I had no idea what to do."

I nodded. "So . . . once he learns what sex is, he's going to think it's cool to do it while the broad sleeps?"

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two

Best Parts:


His eyes widened and he quickly closed the door. "Please leave—I'm calling the cops!"

"Whoa." I banged on the door. "There's no need for that—"

"You Derek Meloni . . . Junior?" Aro asked.

"Fuck you!"

"Oh!" I shouted. "We're looking for senior—Derek Sr.?" I asked.

 

"What the hell is going on?" Another male inquired. His voice was gruff, more mature, and I thought it might be the father.

"Nothing, Pop—honest," Junior said as Senior opened the door.

"Did'ju borrow money?" Senior bopped Junior on the head. "How much does he owe? My son, the low-down dirty gambler—"


 

"No, shit—I knew you looked familiar . . . you run New York." Junior pushed his father out of the way. "It's an honor, sir." He grabbed my hand.

"Get inside!" Senior pushed him back into the house.

I chuckled, finding the kid funny.

 





"My kids are full-blooded," I whispered under my breath. It never meant anything to me. All the worries about my children getting involved in my business never truly mattered. They couldn't, since some rules just can't be broken. Now, if they wanted to, Damion and Sonny could join the organization, get their buttons one day.



Then he turned to me. "Things work out and our families get close," he waved a finger, "don't lend my son any money."

I laughed again. "I'll remember that."

"I'm serious . . . he's Irish, mostly Italian, and all balls. He thinks he's a tough guy and tries to hang around his uncle every chance he has. He's a good kid, just a little stunad. He doesn't think." He pointed to his temple. "And you, he'll idolize you, try to get as close as he can."

"Huh?" I mused.

"I've been doing my best to keep him away from all that garbage."

"Yeah." I nodded.


 

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Beach Blanket Bingo Part One

I love that Bella recognizes Katie's sweetness.

 

I love Edward's point about the next older guy might not say, No.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Aro's Daycare

Sonny is such a mini Edward.  So Priceless.

 

Damion and his love of naked wrestling is so precious.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Trick or Treat Part One

I hope to see more about Sonny and Katie.....

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

Best Part:

Suddenly, Edward pulled me into his side. "Check it out." He pointed, wearing a smile.

When I looked up, I saw my son and Katie kissing on the roof. They were too far away for us to see if tongues were involved, but it was an intense lip lock. They were glued together for several long minutes, until they broke away to wipe their mouths and smile in the opposite direction.

"My kid's got balls." Edward squeezed me.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Love and Happiness

They should just kill her already....

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Thanksgiving

Edward was an ass towards Alex.  Him laughing at her was beyond low.  For him to believe the Mauro and his family bad mouthing Alex?!  Mauro beats women.  His credibility should be shot because of that. 

 

If Edward doesn't apologize sincerely to Alex then I think she should just avoid him in the future and not go to his home.  She should only agree to see Bella when she is away from Edward.  That's make things very clear.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Craft of the Father

Poor Sonny.  He was so brave to shield Kylie.  Mauro has to have had some part in this.  I hope that Bella gets to tear him apart and Lloyd too.

 

Best Part:

 

He patted my back. "Don't think about shit right now—worry about Sonny. I don't even know what to tell Katie . . . her little boyfriend."

He made me grin while I fought to keep myself from crying. "Sonny was going to show up with flowers . . ."

"Stop." My buddy looked seconds away from losing it as well. "I know he'll be all right . . .

 

 

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

Best Part:

 

"Go watch TV with Sonny." I pointed down the hall.

"Edward!" Bella stomped her foot.

I didn't say a word until Alex left the kitchen. Then I advanced toward my wife. "If she wants to act like a kid, I'll treat her like one."

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

Best Parts:

 

I snuck downstairs to see what the kids were doing. I heard them before I even walked into the room.

They were all laughing while the movie played. Sonny was sitting in a chair, holding Katie's hand as they whispered, these huge smirks on their faces.

I held my heart and stared, but Dame caught me.

"Dinner ready, Mommy?" He jumped in front of me.

I held his cheek. "Almost."

"We weren't doing anything," Sonny said.

I widened my eyes. "Never said you were . . . you sound guilty, though."

He tried and failed miserably at not smiling back at me.



"Just tell her, or better yet have Edward do it," Rosalie urged. "He has that—no nonsense way of speaking. She'll comply out of fear."

The coward I am did consider it.

"Eddie is so not scary anymore," Alice laughed.

"Wanna make a bet?" Rose fanned her face, the wine making her flushed. "He keeps all his guys in line. Renee'll shake in her boots."


"No. You did—you did it all! You cheated on your husband, and I had to suffer for it! Instead of owning what you did, instead of being a woman, you cowered—you had him punish me for your mistakes!" I ranted.

"You little—"

"Mom, come on." Emmett tried to usher her away.

"You had to stick your nose in where it didn't belong!" She kept going, getting closer, and I blocked her from my husband, pushing her hand and that finger away from him.

"Get your finger out of his face!" I shouted. "You don't get to talk to him like that, you hear me?"

"Bella." Edward stepped forward, placing me behind himself. It seemed we both wanted to defend each other. "Renee, I think you need to take that walk. We all need to relax. Derek—"

"Don't tell me what to do. You're not the boss of me!" And she pushed Edward, planted her hands on his chest and just pushed. My husband didn't move. He stood there like a wall, making sure I couldn't get to her.



"I just want to talk to her. Emmett will be there, Derek too."

Edward looked around us. "What can't you say in front of me?"

"Nothing—God." I was exasperated again. "Come if you want." I'd hated to admit that I only wanted to go out there so that I could maybe smack her mouth, hurt her in some way, and Edward would never let me.


"Carlisle forged some paperwork . . . DJ is the newest witness against Luke."

"What?" I was confused.

"C got it from one of his Fed buddies—some fuck on the take." Edward looked around us. "He's in WitSec."

"Witness protection." I had a short chuckle. "That's original. Why not just say he ran off with some chick?"

"Because . . . a man like Derek needs evidence. Carlisle fudged the 302 report, placing all of DJ's info on it. It worked. He sure as hell won't be bothering Luke anymore, nor would Derek bring it to his attention." Edward rushed out, his lips touching my ear.

"What about his brother?"

Edward leaned away. "I said I couldn't help him with that one, that I didn't know, but that he should leave it alone. Trust me; he understood. He's also grateful I won't give Luke the info about DJ."

"Is he . . . okay?" I shrugged, keeping an eye on Lauren.

He rolled his eyes. "Do you really care?"

I didn't reply to that.

"He'll rest easier believing his son isn't dead—that his son is doing the right thing. Regardless of anything, in Derek's eyes, DJ got himself out of trouble—out of debt and out of New Jersey. He didn't appreciate being practically strip-searched in my office, but . . . I had to make sure he wasn't wired for sound. Understand?"

I nodded. "I do . . . you did what you had to, what you knew would work." I grasped his hand to place a kiss on his knuckles, while I willed what was left of my frustration to leave.

"Get outta the car," Edward shouted, pulling away from me. "Lemme do it!"

"I got it!" Lauren hollered back, her tire hitting the curb.

"You get one more try, Mallory." My husband held up a finger, smirking.

Lauren giggled, making eyes, like they were flirting or some shit.

That bothered me, but…

My mind just kept wandering back to my mother, and I needed an outlet. I needed another glass of wine, some laughs, to go back in and spend time with my loved ones.

When that dumbass finally parked her car, I felt a bit easier.


"You look good—"

She was still talking to him, and she said the wrong thing at the wrong time. It was just too much.

In hindsight, what she said truly wasn't bad, but that bitch had it coming.

All those years I had to watch her flirt with my husband, compliment him . . .

All those years she'd sworn she'd kick my ass . . .

Fried calamari flew everywhere after I punched her in the jaw. She grabbed ahold of my hair, and I tackled her to the ground in our foyer.

"Bitch!" She slapped at my face.

"Skank!" I punched her once more, and then reached for her neck to squeeze. "Fucking whore—look at him again! I fucking dare you!"

"Holy fuck!" I heard Edward shout, and then I was lifted off of her.

"Schifosa!" I gave her an Italian salute, moving my hand below my chin.

"What has gotten into you?" Edward squeezed my arm so hard.

"Oww." I panted, and, needless to say, that really calmed me.

Once again, I had an audience for my atrocious behavior. Aro was helping Lauren off the floor, and it looked like everyone else didn't know what to make of it.

Lauren was crying…

"I thought you could beat my ass?" I widened my arms, welcoming her.

"Cut it out," Edward spat.

I folded my arms across my chest and shut my mouth.

"She all right?" he asked Aro.

Aro was trying not to laugh. "Yeah, she'll live."

"You're crazy!" Lauren shouted at me.

"So, what?" I just couldn't give a fuck anymore; however, I was very happy no children were around to see that.

"That was wicked." Jasper gave me a high-five and so did his wife.

"Bitch had it coming," Alice commented.

I nodded, agreeing with her.

"We're coming to Sunday dinners more often," Jasper laughed.

 

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

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I was in Manhattan and could actually hear Bella's claws come out in Brooklyn.

"Mommy said the C word!" Damion shouted. "Sonny! Mommy said the C word!" He sounded excited. I bet that nut was dancing around.

"I thought you were dating Lisa?"

"We, uh, uh—" Aro was stuck.

"Exclusivity clause. Exclusivity," Carlisle sang under his breath.

"We never spoke about being exclusive." Aro gave Carlisle a high-five. "We've only gone on a few dates—"


Carlisle chuckled, doing the Sign of the Cross. "In nomine patri et fili et spiritu sancte." He stuck his fingers in his scotch, and then splashed Aro with it.


Don't you dare be mad at her either. When you date and sleep with children, they're bound to do childish things. I have pork chops in the oven—"


"Their bromance is endearing," Caius pursed his lips at them.

"And tomorrow they'll hate each other." I shook my head at them, while I waited for Aro and my brother to start making out.

"I don't like the way you said that." Carlisle frowned.

I smiled. "I'll be on my best behavior." I held up the bird. "Skip's honor."



"You let that little brat talk to you like that?"

"She's your kid. Put her in her place and smack her in the mouth." I nodded.

. "Embrace your power, and teach those kids some fu— manners!" I shouted.

Since I'd been giving out some stellar relationship advice lately, I thought I might be able to help him.

They're back together, didn't you know?

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

I would love to read more from Sonny;s POV. He's priceless.

I hope that Katie is having his baby!!!


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What Raul doesn't know won't hurt him.

However, Katie and I have had lengthy discussions. I have no idea if the baby is mine, yet Katie swears it's Raul's. She got pregnant so fast after we'd stopped fooling around. I always used a rubber, but…

And I still consider Katie to be my best friend. She knows me possibly better than anyone else. She also knows that—whether we do it behind Raul's back or not—when that baby is born, we'll get a paternity test. If it's my kid, I want my fucking kid, and having Katie back . . . that'd be a welcome added bonus.

I'd truly have it all . . .

There'd be no way she could stay married to Raul. He's a decent guy, but he'll never love her as much as I do. He'll never be able to provide for her the way I could, and there's no fucking way he'll raise my child.

I see the fear in Katie's eyes, although she knows it'll work out. It always does, but it'll be this huge bomb to drop on both our families.

I'll never forgive myself for letting her go, so easily, and without a fight.




"He fucking cried?" I associate males crying over women with love. I figure the day a broad makes me cry is the day I fall in love . . . and Katie was so guilty of that back in the day, when things were always so serious and I thought I'd die without her.

Those were good times.


I nodded, keeping an eye on my brother and her hand. For all I know, he and Bianca have an imaginary love affair going, and he'll try to fight me for hooking up with her later.


Dad caught up with her fast and whispered something in her ear.

"She what?" Mom screamed, and I guess Dad caught them leaving too.

"Oh, Bebella . . . this is fantastic." Dad rubbed his hands together.

"You planned that?" Damion asked him.

"Did you?" I seconded.

"Mind your business . . . and smoking will kill you." He grabbed Mom and ushered her back inside.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Wow, Kylie should have been smarter about Heather but some teens really have no common sense although they think they are so mature and know everything.  Poor Gio!

 

Hopefully, Carli and Heather get whats they deserve for hurting Kylie.

 

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

I look forward to Edward proposing to Bella.

 

I wonder if anyone suspects that Katie's baby could be Sonny's?

 

 

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We lounged around the living room, talking casually, as Sonny and that broad fought out on the lawn.

"You think she'll smack him?" Carlisle asked.

We were all openly staring out the bay window at them.

"I don't know," I said.

"I'll kick her ass if she does—touch my baby." Bella went to leave my lap.

"Easy, Tyson." I held her in place.

Damion snorted. "He screwed Nunzio's daughter at the restaurant. He took Lori, and then . . . "

I chuckled, as did Aro and Carlisle.

"That's not funny," Bella said, looking around to us all. "God . . . my son is a whore. It's your fault!" She threw a pillow at my brother.

"That's not my fault," he protested.

"Watch your tone." I pointed at him, drink in hand.



We all shared a laugh, and then we all shouted, "Oh!" again, witnessing Lori smack Sonny's cheek. She hit him so hard, we almost heard it in the house.

"That bitch!" Bella shrieked.

"Ma, relax—for real," Damion told her. "He gets smacked by different women daily—he can take it."


"So—" Carlisle started. "You've learned how to be a doctor on paper, and now you're being taught in the field?"

"Yes," Dame said.

"Uh, son?" I chuckled. "You could have just said that . . . Who understood that last bit more than that other shit?"

When all of us raised our hands, Damion cracked a smile. "Sorry."

"Don't be." I smiled right back. "Thank you for sharing with us."



I've partied with Sonny before. We've gone drink for drink, shared a joint, and maybe we've hit the yak together too. He's more of a peer now, a friend—if I dare say—and we just get along really well. We're one and the same.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

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"Get the fuck in here!" My father shook me by my shoulder. "Do you know how old that girl is?"

I nodded, straightening my jacket.

"She's a fucking baby. What the fuck is wrong with you?"

I shrugged.

"You stink." He made a face, like he'd never stumbled into the house drunk before. "Take that girl home—keep your dick in your pants, and then you come right back. I mean it. I'll count the minutes."

"Ohhh, count the minutes." I waved my hands in mock horror, while I laughed my ass off. "Even if I wanted to fuck her, I couldn't get in trouble. She's legal—"

"I don't give a fuck. Your mother buys cookies from her every year. We know her parents—"

"What?" I shook my head. "Are you serious right now?" I laughed at him, public enemy number one posing as an upstanding member of the community.

He narrowed his eyes. "Do I look like I'm joking?"

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

The scene between Edward and Kylie was so sad....

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

I am glad to see the story continue.  Your characters have a way of making you love them even when they aren't being so loveable.

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31184
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

Prediction:

It would be interesting to see him wait 6 months like in New Moon.

Bella in the meantime is pregnant and finally serves him with termanation of parental rights documents because she has given up hope.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward leases out his late aunt's house for extra cash. "Property Management for Dummies" should've prepared him for this. AH, ExB will update every other day.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63833 Read Count: 117811
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 11 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

How can Bella not know that Renee gave Phil all of their money? Hopefully Renee gets sent to prison for all of the scams that she has pulled and then Bella can be free of her.

Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 64

What happened to Phil and the money? Will he get arrested for swindling Renee? The money was Bella's too....

Summary: Past Featured Story

heart

Bella was a teacher at San Bernardino High. What started as a class project slowly becomes something more. Edward is fighting in Afghanistan when he receives a letter that will change his life. What happens when love blooms through letters?

This story has over 800 reviews on FanFiction.net!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39298 Read Count: 47010
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 23 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Humble Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella should have kicked her mother out for pulling that stunt.