Penname: kayozm [Contact] Real name: Kirsten
Member Since: 22 May 2020
Membership status: Member
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I am brand new to Stars Library, but just adding something here to see what it looks like.


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Reviews by kayozm
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Heartfortwilight Productions

 

Wolf-Shifter and Earth Witch, Bella Swan, moves with her father to Forks, Washington to join the "Midnight Sun" Wolf Pack. After almost 21 years of living in hiding in the human world, Bella struggles to find her place amongst the Pack. There is so much she doesn't know or understand. Will she ever find her place when so many are against her? And why does she have such a strong connection to the pack's Beta, Edward? Will they both learn to follow their instincts, or will they simply be too stubborn?

 

Thank you Heartfortwilight Productions for this beautiful banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Mate Series
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105198 Read Count: 26679
[Report This] Published: 07 Oct 2019 Updated: 16 Jan 2020
Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 20: A Broken Friendship

You sure do a good job creating tension!!

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 21: A Council Meeting

Well, I hope that Edward was lying to Carlilse, when he said he would make her leave. what will happen now? Aside from more excruiating pain for both of them, that is!

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 7: An Enemy or an Ally?

Hey, your pics don't show up on my mobile devices - I just remembered I meant to come back and look at them - I like your Aro pic. 

do you know if there's a reason they don't work on my phone or ipad? is there something I need to do? 

(I don't even know if you can reply to reviews on this site... so much to learn, LOL)

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 17: A Girls' Night Out

So... once Leah turns 21 and sees Paul, are there going to be fireworks?

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Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 18: A Visit to The Den

Wow, sexy Riley! (the pic, rather than the character!)

Reviewer: kayozm Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 22: An Imprint

Okay, you know I am going straight on to the next book. (even though I should be working!!) How is this going to play out with the pack? With the coven?

I really want to see Bella put some of those arrogant wolves into their places, using her combined wolf-witch power! 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 11: A New Job

Hmm, what's going on with Edward then? 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 17: A Girls' Night Out

What Rose - and Edward - have failed to realise, is that having a smaller wolf doesn't make her week. Not when she's combining witch and wolf! 

What I wan to know is, how did Charlie's wolf feel about Renée. And did they leave before they were 21?

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 8: An Unexplainable Moment

Grr, and here it seemed like Bella would be the one to fight the bond! Stupid Edward!

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Date: 14 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 9: A Time to Grieve

You made me cry!

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Date: 14 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 4: A Bonfire

Well, I certainly hope it was Edward, being what he should be for once! 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 7: An Enemy or an Ally?

I like disobedient Edward, and his wolf! 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 28 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: A New Home

Oh, nice that this is all finished and I get to read with out waiting! I have only just discovered (properly) this site. Hoping there's lots on here that I haven't found before on FF.net. Looking forward to reading more of this. very interesting beginning.

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 28 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: A New Home

Oh, nice that this is all finished and I get to read with out waiting! I have only just discovered (properly) this site. Hoping there's lots on here that I haven't found before on FF.net. Looking forward to reading more of this. very interesting beginning.

Summary:

Banner

 

Edward and Bella are coming to terms with their surprising imprint, but there is a lot to be resolved. Will their new relationship manage to weather the storm as both new and old challenges are thrown their way? Book 2 of Mate Series. Read Book 1: My Stubborn Mate before reading this book. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 169738 Read Count: 32162
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2020 Updated: 05 Feb 2021
Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: My New Mate

Sweet! What's the cabin and why is it well stocked?

I love that Aro helped her/them, and was willing to leave the coven for her, by the way, i meant to say that last time. I couldn't quite decide how much I trusted him, but I think that cemented it. 

I still want to know what happened between Charlie and Renee, whether he imprinted on her (I'm assuming not, or surely there wouldn't have been the level of objections?), whether he still has an imprint out there?

And who is Sue, by the way? And how did Carlie die?

So many mysteries! 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 2: My Turn

Very nice! I was afraid they wouldn't get their time of seclusion. Or worse still that you would skip over it and start this second book a bit ahead. 

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Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 5: My Mate's Past and Future

So I'm curious. Who's the beta of this generation? Jacob?

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 7: My Last Day

It's weird now, I don't know exactly when you published this chapter (does it tell me somewhere? I'll have to check), but clearly I'm getting closer to the present. We're working from home too, although in Australia things are all opening up again. The kids are back at school now, and we don't have much focus keft here, for the moment anyway. 

I hope you're safe over there. 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 12: My Aunt and Uncle

Dun dun dun! What will the pack say about that?! They will

bith make each other stronger, through their bond, but many, perhaps most of the pack will be suspicious of such power bony welcoming. 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 14: My Video

So the only other person we know of who hates the pack is Marcus - is he still alive, I can't actually remember? Edward senior obviously has an axe to grind but I can't imagine him taking it out that way....

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 17: My Wolf

Oh oh,Jessica is in for it now!

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Date: 16 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Marking My Territory

Hot! 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 21: My Reluctant Heart

Oh, I'm so, so sad I've come to the end of whats published! As you can probably tell, I'm enjoying this immensely. 

I didn't exactly take in when your last update was posted, but I'm thinking it was last week? So maybe this week or next week you will be on summer holidays.  I hope that's restful. I know my kids teachers were very glad to get back to school after I guess not quite two months of online learning. (Here in Australia most schools went back a few weeks ago.)

thanks for sharing your genius with us. I'll be very much looking forward to more!

 

My Sun by kridafanfic Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Leah Swan, member of a powerful wolf-shifter family, is struggling with the loss of two family members. Who will she turn to for comfort when all she wants to do is run away as fast as she can? Separate story from My Stubborn Mate Alternative Universe.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Paul/Leah
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56556 Read Count: 2300
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2020 Updated: 07 Jan 2021
Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 3: That Time I Had to Step In

I wondered just how Edward knew where he went wrong.

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 3: That Time I Had to Step In

Or is suppose really, that he went wrong. He didn't seem to have a clue the night before.  

Summary:

Bella unearths a long buried truth that sends her halfway across the world to reclaim her heart. New moon alternate ending.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7879 Read Count: 3512
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2020 Updated: 24 Jun 2020
Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 28 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Truth

I like it. Nice beginning. very evocative. 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Remember

Goodness, it's just occurr d to me this is a current story, not a finished one, and I'm burning through the chapters so fast, I'll be at the end of them in a minute and not have left a review. It's... intense, isn't quite the word. Compelling I guess. Compelling me to keep reading!

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Everything

Oh, it is finished! 

Land yes, it is a fitting ending I think, and yes, definitely packed a punch into a few words!

Summary:

R&R

 

Bella arrives in Forks, 20 years after the Cullens leave, for Charlie's funeral. The mansion is up for sale at long last and she gets roped into being part of the cleaning crew by Charlie's estate agent widow, Amanda. How is it she finds what no one else ever saw or heard?

 

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40458 Read Count: 4959
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2020 Updated: 22 Aug 2020
Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Hiding In Plain Sight

Wow. I couldn't resist the description, had to try reading. I see you are sticking to evil Alice and Edward, but with a totally different back story, I think I can embrace that a little more easily. :)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

most of my stuff has one of them as evil lol,

I love to mess about with them xx

Alexis

Reviewer: kayozm Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Found At Last

I like it.

i hate it when characters make comments like that: you're a rare thing you know, a woman who (whatever it might be). Like the only way to appreciate someone is to put down the rest of their sex/species. 

But aside from that, I like it. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I didn't see it that way at all, in his world he's met way more bitches than nice girls so it was a fair comment.

I'm glad you like it otherwise xx

Alexis