Reviews by coryoplayer
Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Edward's Clan

Greenaway

Cory is officially on the scared list now!!!!!

Please solve ASAP!!!!!! I'm begging you!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Sorry Cory! lol. I'm nearly finished the next chapter now, just hold onto the fact that I promised a happy ending. LOL. Thanks for reviewing totally awesome.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make

Greenaway

The beginning was sooooo full of love for each other!!!!

But so not a nice ending. (Cory pouts in the corner)

Still looking forward to see how you play out this story!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

LOL Sorry Cory. Thanks for the review. The next chapter is up now, sorry it took me so long to respond to this. :-)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

Greenaway

It's about time Esme did the right thing in this story!!!!!

Go get Bella Edward!!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

Greenaway

Operation rescue Bella under way!!!! Love it!!!!

This is going to be sooooooooo good and I will try my darndest to wait a couple of weeks but, truthfully it's going to be tough to do.

As for Esme, I believe in you and your muse to do what's best for her and her family. So if Esme is rescued or killed in the story. Either way is ok by this reader.

So looking forward to seeing the notice of the next chapter update in my e-mail in the next few weeks!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

Greenaway

That chapter was so long that I had to sign in again to make this comment. I couldn't miss a single word and hardly took a breath during the whole thing!!!!

WTF is up with Edward though???? Seems strange to me but, I'm sure you're going to resolve this problem.

FAB-U-LOUS chapter!!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay

Greenaway

What are you doing to your readers??????? How could Edward leave after seeing that little boy growing inside of Bella????

You're killilng me here!!!!!!! But I trust you and your muse!!!!!

FABULOUS chapter!!!!! (two thumbs up)

Cory



Author's Response:

I'm sorry Cory!!!! LOL. He left because of that boy. He is trying to save his child in his eyes. LOL, there will be happiness soon. I promise. thanks for the ever consistent and encouraging reviews. You rock.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose

Green

That was damn good!!! Edward seems to be waking from his stupor. I hope.

More when it's ready please!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose

Green

I love the long chapters but, I also hate the long chapters. Because I can never finish them fast enough before TWCS signs me out. (hee, hee)

Well it's good to see Edward has made his return and wants to take care of his son!!!! Lots of healing done in this chapter!!!! Very anxious to see how this plays out in the final chapters!!!!

Fabulous chapter!!!!

Post more when it's ready please!!!!!!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

Greeenaway

Glad to have you back with your amazing story!!!!

But after this chapter, you have me scared now!!!

I'm just going to hope that the wedding & wedding night go ahead without any hitches!!!!

I'm sending you best wishes for a great Christmas and a fun New Years!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Authors note

Greenaway

So glad that you popped in to let us know what was going on!! (Yup)

But more glad that your muse has returned and that you & your muse are going to finish this amazing story.

I don't write. But I can imagine your body needing a breather to recharge!!! It happens to everyone!!!

Ready for that chapter when you are!!!!

Cory

Summary:

NCB

Miss Lillie runs a male escort service called Naked Cullen Boys, Incorporated. Come watch as they make every girl's dream come true!; AU/AH; Nominated for a Bellie award for Best Multi-Chapter Smut!

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/OC, Emmett/OC, Jacob/OC, Jasper/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33425 Read Count: 6543
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Feb 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Tammy, Jasper and Edward

Me likey!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Lea, Emmett and Jasper

Me likey, likey!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Jill, Emmett and Edward

Me likey, likey, likey!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Juliet, Jasper and Edward

Me likey x4!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Cella, Jasper and Edward

Thud!!!!

I'm down after that chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Angie, Carlisle and James

Lucky girl!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Miss Lillie and her NCB boys

Speechless right about now!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Tasha, Fats, Carlisle and Jasper

Oye vey!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Kiara and Jasper

Another oye vey but with tears this time!!!!

Beautiful chapter!!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Wedding

Great short story by all of you!!!!!!

So glad I found it!!!!

Cory

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

FriendsinLove

Banner by IllicitWriter

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Strength in Numbers

A.G.W.

Another keeper for a story!!!!!

Update when you're ready to please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Working on updates for TFYM and HBtY.  But will be back to this soon enough!  Thanks for all the love~

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Center of Attention

A.G.W.

Thanks for the update and looking forward to more!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thanks Cory, I always love reviews from you!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Confidence Found

A.G.W.

Well worth the wait, always!!!!!

Can't wait for Bella to get home now!!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

I know the trip will be interesting...and thanks for understanding!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Going "Home"

A.G.W.

That was perfect!!! Loved how they spent New Years sober!!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Bella may never drink again after her year, but that was a very hard lemon to write! thanks for the love!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Standing on the Edge

AGW

Glad to see everyone's supporting Bella!!!!

Let's get this trial going so Bella & Edward can move forward with their lives!!!

As always, worth the wait!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Lest Terror Be Forgotten

A.G.W.

That was extremely intense!!!!

So looking forward to more!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Terror Comes Home

A.G.W.

Way to go jury!!!!! Definitely the right verdict!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: A Sense of Normalcy

A.G.W.

That's what I call a date!!! Humina, humina, humina!!!!

Off to the next chapter!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

your reviews crack me up! I'm happy you liked the date ;)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Spreading of Wings

A.G.W.

Quite the surprise there at the end!!!!

So glad that they had a great getaway!!!!

Off to read the next chapter!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

The vacation was fun to write and a realistic vacation for 2 college students without a huge amount of money to spend...and yes, mama is always a surprise.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: All Bad Years Must Come to an End

A.G.W.

James got exactly what he deserved!!!!!

Great chapter and off to read the next one!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

jake or james?  And yes, justice was definitely served

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue: A Sentimental Mood

A.G.W.

Great insight into their futures!!!! (two thumbs up)

Cory



Author's Response:

thanks for all the support of this story, it means so much to me!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue 2: A Little Piece of Happily Ever After

A.G.W.

Fantabulous story girl!!!!!

Thanks for sharing with me!!!!

Cory

Summary:

Outtakes from Lustful Awakings. Find out what happened behind the closed doors between Peter, Charlotte, Charlie, and Renee,or William, Catherine, Carlisle, and Esme. Might even be some Emmett, Rose, Garrett, and Kate. Rated NC-17 for graphic lemons, slash, and language.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26618 Read Count: 27933
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 09 Sep 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

B.B.

I love the outtakes!!!!

Hope your muse has more in store for us readers!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Oh, They do ;)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

B.B.

I can't believe I missed a chapter!!!!

In the gym for a hot workout!!!! (two thumbs up!!!)

Off to read the next chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

B.B.

Way to go Seth!!!!! I knew you could take it!!!!

Now they're betting on Bella's baby. I wonder if Seth wins this one????

That was hot, hot, hot!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you, dear:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

B.B.

Humina, humina, humina!!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

lmao:)

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Robicorn

Found your story and I'm loving it!!!!

Looking forward to more when it's ready!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Robicorn

Why do I have a sneaky feeling that something is about to go wrong for Bella and the baby???? (Gulp)

I'm hoping for some good things for the three, soon to be four, of them soon!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Robicorn

Now that was a humdinger of a chapter!!!!

Bella should feel bad for lying and putting herself and their baby in danger since she knew how bad her condition was. But Edward could have been more understanding since Bella is so young. So I'm glad that Edward went back and talked it out with Bella!!!!

Let's hope the two of them can just go forward from here!!!

More when it's ready please!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Robiconr

Bella's going to have one humdinger of a headache in the morning.

But what was up with Jasper feeding her all the drinks???

More when you can please!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Robicorn

Great chapter. I'm glad they are working out the tough spots together!!!!

More when you can please!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Robicorn

Fabulous ending to a great story!!!!  A true family/love story with Bella falling asleep at the end!!

Looking forward to the two new stories!!!!

Cory

Summary:

Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17

Banner by rpattz1990

memory


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 159056
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

B.B.

Fabulous story you've got going here. So glad that I'm all caught up now!!!!

Love how you're mixing a story with the hotness of the sex!!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

B.B.

I would have kicked Jessica's arse out of that office pronto!!!! I'm glad you made Bella a little bit more understanding!!!!

Jasper is a hoot!!! "No fucking in the kitchen!!!" (hee, hee) He just wants to be the first one to do it in the kitchen!!!!

Loved the chapter!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

In real life, I would have too but for the sake of the story...I did not:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

B.B.

Now that's a great Christmas present!!! Her memory!!!!

Well done!!!! (two thumbs up!!!!)

More please!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

B.B.

Ok the tears are flowing from this reader right now!!!!

More please!!!! When it's ready that is!!!!

Now I'm going to blow my nose (hee, hee)

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you, Cory:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

B.B.

Tears are flowing after that chapter!!!

Things are going well for everyone. So why do I have a funny feeling that something bad is going to happen???

I hope you and your muse prove me wrong!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thanks:) I still have a few surprises up my sleeps for this gang:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

B.B.

Bella has to talk to someone or else she will spontaniously combust!!!!! I thnk you should send Edward in with concern but, your muse will tell you what's the right thing to do and the right time as well!!!!

Loving the story!!!! More when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

B.B.

That was a tough ending to read BB. You can't let Bella blame herself!!!

I trust you to fix this teeny problem!!!!

Thanks for the quick update also!!! I hope your muse doesn't stall out on us readers!!!! That wouldn't be good!!!!

Great chapter!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon. I have 39 chapters of this story written already:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

B.B.

Wonderful chpter!!! Loved that Alice & Bella stood up for each other!!!!

More when you can please!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

B.B.

Now I'm a bit scared. I hope this goes well for Bella and group!!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

B.B.

That was a well written chapter!!! (two thumbs up) Absolutely loved it!!!!

You've left me wondering how many times a situation plays out like this one in the real world!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

B.B.

Caught up on the two chapters. WOW!!!!!

You go Bella!!!!

Loved the chapters as you can tell!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

B.B.

I sure hope this is the last of the troubles for Bella!!!!! They need peace. A baby is coming soon!!!!

Great chapter as always!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

B.B.

Oh good!!! (Cory lets out a big sigh) Some happiness is coming!!!!

So loving this story!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

lol, Thanks:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

B.B.

Now I wasn't expecting that twist!!! You surprised me B.B.!!! Job well done!!!

Looking forward to more!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

B.B.

Oh god, what's up with Rose???? I feel a wee bit of angst coming!!!! (Cory prays that it's not too bad on the angst scale!!!!)

Great chapter!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

It's not horrible....or is it???? :p

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

B.B.

All I got right now is tears!!!! Wonderful chapter!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

B.B.

Just caught up on all the chapters I'm behind on.(5 read this morning) Real life is killing me right now.

I love this story you've got going here!!!! Looking forward to more when you post!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

B.B.

Just finished 4 chapters!!!

Loved that Bella stood up for herself but, not happy that her hip got hurt in the process.

Shocker about Edward wanting to stay home with Whitley!!! You got me on that one!!!

Looking forward to more when you post!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

B.B.

Loved the bet they all  had going on!!!!!

Well done ont that part of the story B.B.!!!! I love surprises like that one!!!!

Now what is Tanya screaming about????

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

B.B

You know what I love about your story. It's that you're making everyone loveable have someone to love them. Now Seth will, I think!!!!

I love this story!!!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

B.B.

Oh god yes!!!!!! Let the games begin in the next chapter!!!!

Can you tell I'm excited!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Are you by any chance excited???lol, Thanks:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

B.B.

That chapter was a keeper!!!!

A great mix of smut and love!!!!! (two thumbs up!!!!)

More when it's ready please!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

B.B.

Loved it!!!!! Loved how they all had troubles and almost picked up the phone!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

B.B.

Not Rose's baby!!!! Oh god, everythings got to be ok!!!!! (Cory starts pacing the room)

But, I'm liking the new guy!!!!

Update when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

B.B.

Thanks god!!!! The baby is ok!!!! (Cory stops pacing now)

That was a stressful chapter!!!! I need a drink!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

I need a frink too!! I was stressed just writing it!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

B.B.

Cute conversation in the stuck elevator!!!! I think Embry got an earful there!!!! (hee, hee)

More when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

B.B.

Happiness. I f**king love it!!!! (two thumbs up!!!)

More when it's ready please!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

B.B.

That was fun!!!! Great party!!!!

Can't wait to read what the guys did!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

B.B.

Humina, humina!!!!

Loved it!!!! (two thumbs up)

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

B.B.

Beautiful wedding!!!!

Man a lot of peoples were having a wedding night that night!!! (hee, hee)

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

B.B.

Another little girl!!!! Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

B.B.

Glad your back and I agree sometimes real life just stinks!!!!

Great chapter!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

B.B.

I couldn't help but feel bad for both Rose & Bella. They both want to have babies and both of them have had troubles having these babies. So because of that, no problems for the babies please!!!!

Roses baby is coming!!!!I'll boil water!!!! (hee, hee)

I'm not even going to venture a guess. I'll just wait an be surprised!!!!

More when you can please!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

B.B.

I love the wager of Seth & Tanya's bet!!!! That's a good one!!!! (ha, ha)

They had a boy!!!! (tears, tears)

Poor Bella. Those hormones are really getting the best of her right now.

Loved the chapter!!!!

Cory

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I enjoyed it too!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

B.B.

Can't wait for the Seth & Tanya outtake!!!!! I'm sure it will be hot, hot, hot!!

So Bella is next. Is there going to be any kind of bets for that birth?? (hee, hee)

Looking forward to more!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

lol, you never know! Thanks,hon :)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

B.B.

Wonderful chapter!!! Glad that Bella is enjoying the time off her legs like she should be!!!!

As for posting chapters. When they're up, they're up!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon;)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

B.B.

I'm surprised that Bella is taking this "situation" she's in so well. Kudos to you and your muse for writing Bella so strong!!!!

Loved that Edward & Alice got caught!!!! Too funny!!!!

Looking forward, as always, to the next chapter!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

B.B.

Poor Bella. She's really feeling like everything is coming down on her right now!!!

So happy that there's going to be a surprise baby shower for her. It can only help her!!!

Looking forward to more!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

B.B.

I'll go boil water!!! (hee, hee)   Another baby!!!!

I think Bella might go a tad bit nutso with out her work. Maybe she can still do some paper work from her bed????

Great chapter!!!!

Cory

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

B.B.

All these babies being born. Such happiness!!!! Love it!!!!

Bella is such a trooper. That baby better be next in line!!! I thik Bella needs that baby in order to move forward!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

B.B.

No guesses on the name right now. I'll keep thinking though!!!!

I loved the chapter. Full of nothing but happiness. And happiness is always nice. I know angst comes in the story too but, it's great to have a whole chapter dedicated to happiness once in a while!!!!

Also glad that you spent some quality mommy/daughter time. Even if was to nap!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

B.B.

Such a love filled chapter!!!!!  I like these types of chapters!!!!

Bring on the baby!!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

B.B.

Pass the tissues please!!!! Sniffle, sniffle.

Great chapter!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Heres your tissue. Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

B.B.

Fabulous chapter!!!!

Looking forward to the final chapter and the new story!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

B.B.

Fabulous ending!!!!

Can't wait for the new story!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

An Angel in Hell by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 71]
Summary:

Bella is the newest nurse working at the MASH 8076 during the Korean War.  While there she meets Cpt. Edward Masen, who sees in her an angel in the hell they are living through.  Will they find a way to be together in a place where life can change in an interest.  Entry for the 2010 Age of Edward Contest.

 

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Another amazing banner made for me by Rosalynn.

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Beautiful banner made as part of the AoE Banner Contest by Becksishere.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96660 Read Count: 16329
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2013
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: An Angel in Hell

Simply wonderful!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thanks for the love on this one!  And please head over to ffn to vote if you want at the end of the month!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91317
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

B.B.

Oh god!!!! (Thud - that's me falling!!!)

Bella needs a body guard STAT!!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

*scrambles over to pick you up* Are you ok? DId you hurt yourself? No? Good. :)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2011 Title: Endless Awakenings

B.B.

I'm typing my reply with tears rolling down my cheeks.

That was beyond beautiful!!! I really hope this was a turning point for Bella!!! Every one of your characters deserves to be happy in this story!!!! (YUP)

Thank you soooooooooooo much for the Christmas present in giving your readers this chapter!!!!

Merry Christmas & Happy New Year to you as well!!!!!

Congrats on finishing your manuscript!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

B.B.

You got me. I didn't for one second think you would go there and you did. WOAH!!!!

OMG what is Bella going to do now?????

Thud!! (That's me falling to the floor from shock!!)

So ready for more when you are BB!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

what can I say, I like to keep everyone guessing, lol!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 May 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

BB

Tough chapter to get through. But I'm firmly believing that this is the start of Bella being more strong like she always has been and always will be!!!!

Thanks for remembering us readers. It's always great to get a chapter no matter how long inbetween!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

B.B.

That was a tough one to get through. WOAH!!!!

But the two of them are in a place that I really believe will help them now.

More soon please!!!!!!!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

B.B.

Sooooo looking forward to this story!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

B.B.

Now that's what I call a busy day for Edward!!!!

Great chapter!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

B.B.

Well now, James is back. And wanting a new building. Interesting!!!!

Great chapter!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

B.B.

What's up with the teacher??? Solve this stat please!!!!

I think Bella took her punishment extremely well!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Yes, she did! Next chapter is a little somthing I call "Mrs. White gets bitched slapped."

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

B.B.

Way to go Cullen parents!!!!!! And I'm really liking princiapal Phil!!!

Looking forward to more when it's ready!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

B.B.

Loved it!!!!!!

Why am I glad the Edward is going to help Bella on James' project??? I just don't like that James and feel something bad MIGHT happen.

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

B.B.

Kind of mean to let Edward leave with out some fun but, I'm sure you'll make up for that!!!!

Jasper was just letting out his inner animal with Bella. Loved it!!!!

As for the extra chapter with Seth/Tanya/Angela & Ben. I'll read it!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)