Reviews by troberts
A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

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REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167604
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Love the intervention and his girls wanting it done.  OMG poor Bella leaving a dick head going to get on with her life and get hit with your dad and stepmom are dead cant imagin the pain that would cause.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Love Mrs. Weber get on with your life  I think anyone that truly loves someone would want that person to be happy affter they were gone.  Edward doesnt like Rose very much does he???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I think he will hire her on the spot once she says she wants the job

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Sounds like a wonderful dress.  I cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Leaving together I like When is he going to find out how she really is???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

That was excelent  now on for the anst and self lothing  I cant wait till she goes for job interview.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I think alot of us have been in that situation not a good place to be but to leave Edward unthinkable

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Why did he hang up on poor Alice I know but he shouldnt have.  I cant wait for the interviews.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

She didnt lie OH what is Edward going to do

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Love the bet go mom and dad Cullen

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

So glad she remember what they did and liked it alot LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Finely moving in yah!! this is going to get good. HOT STEAMY

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

That is so fun love the banter back and forth between all of them and love Edwards check list.  Face it Edward you are sunk and in love.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

He needs some conseling to let go.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Love Alice she is such a sceemer always something up her seleve.  I am glad Bella talked about there time together at least he know she didnt regret it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Her night in shining armor loved it Royce a royal pain in the ass.  What a dream wow

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Please dont stay away love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Good thing she came back the man is a basket case.  Kiss yes

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

It is about time wondered how long before the girls found out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

ride em Bella. LOL   So Alice had the party so they could tell that they were together.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I love you but what the fuck cant they catch a break I know wouldnt be much of a story with out the bullshit.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

OMG i was wondering about the dizzy thing but what else.  Edward doesnt know yet????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

No please tell me she is not going to move out because she think Edward does not want to marry her or have any more kids.  Just say NO.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

OMG such a great conection and then just riped apart how heart breaking.  Is someone going to tell him about the baby someone has to??????  hurry need happy

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I feel so bad for the kids well I feel bad for all of them OK it has been a month please dont let it go to much longer dont want her big as a house when they see each other again.  I think if I was Emmett I would have to sneek some kind of hint to Edward.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I think the name should be Edward Anthony and weight and length  8lb 7oz and 19in.  I cant beleive he missed the hole preg and now how long will it be before he relizes what Rose said??????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

OMG I was so excited that they were going to meet and then wham my heart was broken again but I will live as long as I know that next chapter is a tell all. I cant wait.  I hope he is able to understand a little why she did it but I dont think he will take it very well.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Holly shit love Sam what a friend.  Esme is cool and Carlisle should be ok but how will Alice handle it I am sure she will be pissed.  Edward pull your head out dont waste more time.  He needs to remember what he said to her about not wanting another baby or wife.  Cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I was hoping Esme would be able to talk some reason into him and call him  out about what he said to her.  you know I am  going to go through with withdrawls till Monday lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

That was a great chapter I am glad she had a break down.  I cant wait for the epi even though I am going to be sad it is over this has been a great story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I cant believe it is amost over Love the wedding.  ? So Emmett and Rose are still out they were not invited to the wedding are they every going to make up?????   Was it Charlie and Sam walked Bella down the isle.?????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

What a wonderful ending so happy he was able to experence the whole birth prosesse.  It took long enough for Emmett and Edward to make up.  I am going to miss reading about Bella and Edwards alone time wink wink lol.  I will be looking forward to what you write next.  Thanks so much for a great story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Loved it I wondered how this all came about and when Lizzy started to come around.  Love Sam his is a great friend

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

A great end to  great story ist is fate a wonderful thing.

Extremities One shot by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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My winning entry in the Auto Erotica Challenge. Awarded 'Best Handling'. 

Bella wanted to be one of the many girls that Edward pleasured in his Volvo. What happens when that car is now hers, and she makes the first move?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4867 Read Count: 921
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Extremities

I liked it are you going to go on with it.



Author's Response:

YES! I plan to. It's just I'm in the middle of my other story 'episode' and that has quite a few chapters to go. I can't be working on two full story lines at once, it would be too much! I promise to let you know when I post Chapter 2!!

 

Luv BBxx 

Summary:

As if starting a new school away from her friends and family isn't enough, she has nuisance and captain of the football team Edward Cullen interested in her. “Hello, I’m Edward Cullen.” She took my hand, shaking it, “I’m not interested.” Bella has better balance, and respect for herself.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 154282 Read Count: 9785
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2010 Updated: 08 Mar 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Perfect catch

what a way to get off on the wrong foot lol Bella is a spitfire

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Hello Goodbye

She is my idol LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Hut!

Wow that was great gaming she kicked his ass she is tough.  If you dont know there name you cant call them girlfriend.  She showed him she did not approve.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: well, this is awkward

So Millie is a bussy girl LOL.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: moving

glad she can see he is not a complete dog

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Cannon Ball

Bella is one confused little girl but she can play with the big boys GO GO GIRL.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Oh....crap

How sweet she is taking care of him but she is going to be beyond pissed when she finds out he did it to himself.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Moron

No Jared stay away.  She is going to be so pissed when she finds out what Edward did.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mrs. X

Edward is loving this leson he said he could look at her forever right so this is nothing.  Loved the little chain letter that was cute and the sitting on the lap.  Loving the funnys

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: special occasion - part 2

very full chapter I loved it Edward punch Jared staking his claim on Bella.  Telling Bella he loved her.  Why is this girl not paying atention?

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: movie night

When is he going to tell her she is his X girl. The tension is very strong.  He needs another lesson in something.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The choice

He had better turn his ass around and get back to Bella NOW.  After every thing he has done to show her he isnt what they say he is not looking good for him

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Edward

He needs his dick slaped going back to Millie.  Bella has to be riped up inside???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Toiling in time - day 1

So everyone knows even Millie???  Does she believe??? cant wait for Bella to get back.  Why doesnt he call her I know no cell phone but there is a phone somewhere.???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Toiling in time - day 2

OK I think he has learned his leason now let the skank go yuk  Bella needs to hurry and get back.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Toiling in time - day 3

That was great loved the messaging.  She has to share a room and with Jared that is interesting. It is a good thing didnt tell him what hotel because he would be on his way there to kick Jareds ass.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: The teddy bear

I am glad Roses bullshit backfired on her I know she wants to protect him but he is a big boy.  She has her man let him have his girl

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: sweet dreams

OMG please tell me she is not going to freak out to bad she feels the same way about him right? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Our doubts are traitors

For some reason I knew she would do this now stop fucking up and get that man

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Twilight

Wow that was a long wonderful chapter so much happened.  I was about to die when I thought she was going to denie him.  The Kiss thank god it happened I almost clapped my hands when she said she loved him about time.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: epilogue

That was a wonderful emotional chapter I cryed there love was so strong.  Thanks for writing it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Extra - Water fight

That was funny I think I would of had to kick him in the balls so I could rub them after LOL

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think it is cute that they are just feeling each other out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good song how is she keepin it together? Need his POV

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That was very sweet and I liked the act like you want me that was not hard for him HARD no pun intended LOL.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OH you are not getting rid of me I am loving it.  Nothing better that a big happy trully happy family.  Love the hug and kiss on the cheek good night. 



Author's Response:

Glad you're here for the rest of the story. I think the progression will go smoothly.

Things between E/B are innocent right now, as it should be. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love the fun banter they have and there determinaion to get it right. During this time has Edward been hooking up with any one?



Author's Response:

No, he's not hooking up with anyone. Rehearsals are keeping him busy.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well he cant be perfect in every thing I guess.  I love that she asked him that word vomit will get you every time. LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I like this chapter there was a lot of forplay for the dance on  the dance floor and off LOL.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I liked that she expressed how she was feeling about how he looked he was perfect at telling her she was wrong.  Did Edward see someone he use to see???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

OMG about time i was getting so frustated for them LOL.  That is a great song. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So what are others thinking about there relationship like Jaz and Alice or his whole family????  I forgot it was on I was reading storys  like plus one and buitiful broken I need to remember and dvr it.



Author's Response:

You'll know soon (enough) what Edward's family thinks. :)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

They are having fun hope all of the publicity will not stop that or will it get her in trouble if they find out that they are getting involved.  I hope not.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I like how she was shocked OH my what is going to happen drama drama

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

that was cute  what is the meeting about?  i wonder how Bella feels not knowing about the meeting.

Diamond Man by SatansDarkAngel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 302]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64202
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting I think it is going to be great.  What year is it.  Love her fistness and so does he.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So happy to see you updated I am enjoying this story very interesting with the Molls and Dolls all the old talk very fun.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OH Jonny is not going to be happy so lets kill him I like that idea LOL.  Poor Bella her dad is sick and then that sick fuck has to come and start demanding her to do things for him.  I like that her dad even said that Edward would be a good choies.  Cant wait for more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward needs to take Jonny out and take care of  Bella and forget the round heel

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Things were going good and now omg poor Rose poor Emmett

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Someone is going to die when Emmett gets ahold of them????  I hope Emmett gets to Rose so she knows he loves her and it was not her fault.  Bella is going to ask for Edwards help???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Johnny wants to kill Edward I thnk this means war.  Poor Emmett wants revenge for Rose.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

After what happened in the dressing room he would not freak out quit so much.  Who ever came in better not hurt her. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Renee is a bitch and should just leave Bella alone.  Where is Edward????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What is Edward going to do now that he knows what Johnny did.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Johnny is going to go crazy er than he already is.  Dont let him kill Michel. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So Bella doesnt know she is rich????  When is she going to find out???  Thanks for not killing Micheal

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OMG did Johnny just shoot Edward????  Please tell me that someone killed that bastard and that Edward will be OK.  So who is Bella's really dad and mom???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Please tell me she is ok.  What the hell is Emmett thinking???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love the words that you put in like Face stretcher all very interesting.  I am confused I thought that the rape made Rose lose the baby she was carring? 



Author's Response:

she did loose the baby which was emmetts. but now shes carrying one of the rapist baby inside her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Poor Rose she needs to kick Emmetts ass.  Wow Edward asked her to marry him .

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

So Bella's mom is with Johnny and trying to help him get her she is a twisted bitch.  Emmett is lucky she still has his balls.  Rose set him straight what are they going to do about the baby????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Alot going on what was Renee doing????   Edward knows they are being watched????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

How very sad someone needs to kill Johnny and Renee just for fun.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That is low to go after them at a wake but they knew they would all be there. Who was the women in the fur???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

What is it with Bella why is she so interesting she is not Renee's daughter???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So Bella's real parents are alive???  Johnny is going to die a painful death dont forget about Renee she should be right beside him.

Summary:

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Banner by rpattz1990

Rockstar Isabella Whitlock seems to have everything but after an altercation with her agent, she realizes she needs to find her music again. So she goes back home and finds exactly what, or who, she needs. The question now is, will she let them in? NC-17 for lemons & language


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91606 Read Count: 117417
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 May 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks,hon :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love kick ass Bella and how sweet is Charlie wants to hear his baby sing.  So do the others already have it figured out who she is???



Author's Response:

Thanks you:) And no, they don't!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OH someone turn a fan on that was hot.



Author's Response:

Thanks, hon:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Is she going to tell them who she is?



Author's Response:

not yet

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Very good when is she going to tell them?



Author's Response:

We have a few more chapter's before the big reveal!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Are they going to ask her to be in there band and then she will have to tell them who she is?????  Love the shock factor she is using

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Are they going to ask her to be in there band and then she will have to tell them who she is?????  Love the shock factor she is using



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I promise she will tell them soon:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

She needs to take him out back fuck his brains out and when he puts them back in she need to tell him the truth about her