Reviews by kmac17
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514751
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

New reader!!! Just spent all day reading this and I am so loving it. can't wait for the next chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Realizations and Regrets

new reader!!! just finished catching up. love this story. post soon please

Summary:

banner

 

Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

OH MAN poor Bella.....

I just found this story yesterday and Im completely in love with. Post again soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

so glad she woke up...post again soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

my heart is breaking for them...post again soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

oh no i was looking forward to new york post again soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great chapter..love jake :)

post again soon plesae

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

So glad Bellas doing better and wants to adopt...YAY!!!!!!!! Post again soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

What a great way to end it...Sad its over loved it.

 

 

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

So very sad that its ended :(

You did an amazing job I loved it from start to finish Glad they got a very happpy ending

Kelly

Summary:

Bella Swan is starting a new job with the FBI. Not only does she have to prove to the boys that she belongs but she has to face the demons from her past before they find her. NC-17 for language and lemons B/E, R/Em, A/J, Es/C

 

b


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga, to read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95413 Read Count: 135417
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

wow great update post again soon :)



Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

WhAT??? Charlie is crazy pressing charges is not going to help win his daughters forgiveness...pure crazyiness. I like it :)



Author's Response:

Thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123434
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

oh no mommys not happy...can't wait to see what happens next post soon please

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76139
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

New reader!!! Love it so far, hope thats Edward at the door. Post soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

oh no....can't wait for more post soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

totally did not see tanya hitting on bella...can't wait to see how they spend the next day. post soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

uhhh i hope she didn't leave!! post soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

glad your back and Im hoping it doesn't take as long again as I really want to no edwards reaction to bella leaving in the middle of the night

Post soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

glad your back :)

I love how Bella ruined the car. post soon

We're Married by dolphin62598 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wm

 

1st Place Winner!! Til Death Do Us Part O/S Contest Entry:A drunken night lands four friends in Vegas with the purpose of getting married. Best friends getting to share their day with each other, but their spur of the moment nuptials don’t turn out as planned.AU/AH/OOC/ExB

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7101 Read Count: 2055
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2010 Updated: 08 Jun 2010
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: We're Married

Awsome story I really liked it.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing!! I'm glad you liked it!

Summary:

Sequel to Here We Go Again. Bella, Edward, Carlisle, and the others are all back for a new case with the FBI. Will this be the case that breaks them all for good? AH, NC-17 for launguage, lemons, and violence.

BANNER


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95951 Read Count: 79441
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2010
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

wow just like that he popped thequestion... loved it post again soon please



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

ohhh undercover work...in a strip club no less, Edwards not gonna like that. Post again soon please:)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

so sad...glad there getting married though. Post again soon please



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

so many changes so quick...post again soon please



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

ohhh underground...sounds interestin. Post again soon



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

ohhh who could it be....post soon please



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

owww leaving me hanging...not nice. post soon pleaes



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

oh Bellas so strong, hopefully Edward will get to her soon. Post again soon please



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

brought tears to my eyes...post soon please



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Working on the next chapter right now:)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

wow can't believe she quit,

Post soon please



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183781
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)

Just read the whole thing. I love this story!! Please post again soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time

Wow what a week they had lol... glad they worked it out. Post again soon please :)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?

i love it.....stupid cope and jessica...post soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

oh  my...my heart is breaking.... I hoping your gonna be posting very soon....edward needs to fix ths...please please post soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...

so glad Edward was able to fix everything :)

Hopefully the hearing goes well...post soon pleaes

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

what just happened??????? I don't like it one bit please post soon please!!!

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Amazing story with a beautiful ending....i loved it from start to finish :)

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

stories/12615/images/MyBannerMaker_Banner.jpg

Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

yes!!!!!!!loved it...post soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

really like it...post soon please :)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh my....what just happened???? please post soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

oh things are getting so interesting...Im hoping Edward doesn't hurt Mike.

Post again soon plesase

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

oh wow its getting intense I can't wait for edwards reaction to bellas flashbacks

loved it

post soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

post again soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

wow crazy chapter i dont no how bellas onna get away from him. post again soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

poor bella.........post  again soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

she got away good,...post again soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

i almost feel badfor him. post again soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

oh wow what a chapter...post soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

im glad its matt watching her. post again soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I really like matt..........post soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

wow...its a good thing shes a swimmer...im hoping somehow ford made it. Post again soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I love it....post again soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I like that matt and bella are getting closer...post again soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

oh wow i cant believe edward did that...post soon please

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

im rreally liking matt,,,post soon

Summary:

parental

 He was my forbidden fruit. A man so close, almost too close, yet so far out of reach. He loved me, took care of me, but did not crave me the same way I did him. I wanted everything, yet had nothing. But things were going to change. I could feel it. Mature


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19236 Read Count: 15389
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Worth It?

Im really likikng it...post soon please

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

My Other Brother animated banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Im glad Emmetts coming around. Post again soon please

Summary:

wlahc

Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Black Angel

i wish they would have kissed

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Driving Lessons

I love the names for the snails very funny....love the story post again soon :)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Happy fucking birthday

I love them together!!!!!1 post again soon please



Author's Response:

Yeah, me too! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Sunburned

Loved it....can't wait to see how the rest of the vacation goes. post soon plesae

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Back to reality

2 weeks really??? so not far...

Finally they admit there feelings!!!!!!! Loved it

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Rumors vs Truth

I loved every minute of it there so cute together....post soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Camping

i loved the lap dance...post soon

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 487]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

stories/38123/images/Kristen-Stewart-GQ8-1[1].jpg

Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

what a great way to end it... loved it :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Happy you liked it.  :}

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

edward needs to come home

post soon



Author's Response:

Patience, dear. lol! Thank you for R/R! I'll post again on Tuesday!

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

so glad bellas ok.......post soon



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Posting Thursday. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

b

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

NEW READER!!!!!!!!!! OMG I just found this story today and its amazing....I laughed, I cried got angry and now to leave me hanging like this....not nice

This has become my favourite story and I am counting the minutes till you post again...so please post soon

thanks Kelly



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I definitely have the next chapter in the works.  I'm pausing on it for a little bit, though, to make sure I write it correctly.  I was a little surprised at how many readers hated Bella after this chapter.  I don't plan to change my plot or characters based off of what some people think, but I do want to make sure I'm portraying them the right way.  I'm a little protective of my characters since I love them so much haha

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh I can't believe you left it there....Im dying here. Even though Edward deserves to suffer my heart still breaks for him. Please please post soon

PS congrats on the new home :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I promise that as soon as I get done responding to reviews tonight, I'm starting to write Chapter 22.  It'll be Bella's POV and she's always so much easier to write. :)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh break my heart...I knew this was coming but I dont think I was quite parpared enough...So very sad for her...can't wait to see how edward tries to fix this.

Please please dont keep  me waiting too long post soon please



Author's Response:

Don't worry - I'm already halfway done Chapter 20 - hopefully I'll have it up by the weekend :)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I was so happy to see you posted today but then again I was so scared to read it. I didn't want to hear the breakup. The song you chose was completely perfect and it broke my heart. You had me in tears the whole way through this chapter. I figured in the end it would all work out so Im happy you made that clear I can;t wait to see how edward is gonna win bellas forgiveness. Please post again soon....

Kelly



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  I think after this chapter I needed to make it absolutely clear that there would be a HEA.  It's gonna take a lot for Bella to forgive Edward - and quite frankly for Edward to forgive himself too. 

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

oh my god.....please please Im begging you don't make me wait 2 weeks....I know clearly Edward will be fine....but I need to an update.....



Author's Response:

I'm trying bb!  I've already started writing the next chapter and my beta has the James POV which will get added into it so hopefully it won't take more than a week!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Renees a bitch...glad Bellas leaving..Possive edward so hot

Post again soon

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

oh no!!!!!!!