you have an imagination!!!!

This is truly dark!!!

She is learning.  I hope she don't get pregnant when she have s*x with Aro.  I hope its after her and Edward get married. 

Speechless!!!

Excellent.  Look forward for the sequel.

Nice eventful chapter and great story.

OMG, I haven't cried so much in a long time.  Esme and Edward are the example of what admitteance is all about.  Niff, Niff!!!!

Finally he gets it!!!!!!

OK, I've read a few more of these chapters.  It is hard reading this.  That man is clueless.  Someone need to punish his ass!!!

OMG, EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful story.  I look foward to reading other stories you have written.

This was by far one of the best chapters.  I am so glad they caught James.  I hope he rot in hell!  WTG Eddie, catch a crock.  Great engagement setup too!

First of all I love your chapters.  Second I feel good  for you that your readers are beating you up for more.  Third my hats off to you with your busy scheduled.  Fourth I like the chapters sizes as they are (not that my opinion counts) and lastly when you release another chapter is ok by me. LOL!!  That being said when are you going to release another chapters, this story is awesome.

As always the story is wonderful.  I think Edward is very protective and it seems that there is something on the horizon!!!!  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Now my mind has been going back to who works at that hospital. LOL 

This is so good.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love it.  Bella is so, so innocent that it is un-imaginely sweet!

This is so good.  I can't wait to see how Charlie handles the TALK!!!!!

I just started reading this story today.  I must say that I have never read anything like this in my entire life.  I had so many mixed feelings reading from chapter to chapter;

1)  I am a true Team Edward fan and I have strict feelings on how his life should be.  With that being said, I just stepped outside the box and went with this.  I never read a story where he and Alice were lovers let alone married.  The Lemons was hard for me to read with them.  It just didn't seem real.  I have read a story or two with him and Rose, but those never amounted out to anything.

2)  For Bella to contemplate a relationship of this type is so foreign to me.  I just can't imagine this.  I guess as you progress in this story time will tell. 

I'm not saying that I don't like the story and I know you didn't ask me to read it, its just that I'm taken back on this whole concept.  I knew that they had a community of these types of groups just by what happened in Texas.  I guess because I am such a Twilight fan and using these charaters, it just made this a reality to me that they are out there.  So I say to you that for once in all my reading Fan Fic you have really caught my eye.  I will be looking forward to the seeing how the ending of this will play out and I do hope there is a HEA for all involved.  Thank you for your entertainment and the time you put into writing this story!

very cute!

Wonderful!

OMG, WOW.  What can I say.  This was hard to read and I know it had to be hard to write.  I guess we have nuts out there that does this kind of thing in real life.  Great job!

The meadow and new bedroom description is to die for!!!  Love it, can't wait for the wedding and ????? blood test

It seems that she is so fragil and it is almost sad that she still has to endure the prospect of not being able to enjoy her wedding and honeymoon.  That poor child has gone through so much!  At lease let her have a good experencie being human one last time.  The story is awesome!!!!

VERY GOOD!

Wonderful, thank you!

Excellent, he is still not getting it, or just in denial.  Finally we are getting somewhere.  Time will tell!

This was a wonderfully well thoughout store.  I loved the fact that it encompassed all the books with the most unique quailities story lines.  You capture the best of the best in all books and gave a very good revision of the incidents.

I especally liked that Jacob wasn't a bother.  Mainly because I don't like his chareter any way.  So this was refereshing to read.  Charlie that was priceless as well as Larent.  I loved the way Bella carried the baby and the no senses issues.  Great work around.  All in all this was excited to read and I look forward for to reading the rest of your publishings.

This is probably one of the most interesting twist I've read.  I like it when it's unpredictible.  Amazing job, please hurry.  I am hanging on a limb now.  Thx

WOW, exciting to read.

B is such a stupid girl.  She act initially like she knew how to take care of herself, so she said.  What the Fu*t happened?  Not my J!!!!

WOW, deep.

Your body is not your own in this game. LOL

F is just as sick as D, dumb!

WOW!!!!!  Has a bit of a temper 'you think'.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

OMG, you have done an amazing job writing this chapter.  My mind is in awe with the details.  They are so real, I'm not sure what you mean about only writing 5000 words.  You have truly outdone yourself.  This story should have been published.  Sorry, SM but this is way better than the books!!!!

OMG, I've read this complete publishing within three days. This was better than any book I've have ever read.  As much as I like Twilight, this had a spin with much reality, imagination and education.  It doesn't get any better!!!!

I can't get enough of this story.  Bella is a hot one.  Edward better be able to start trusting her with info.  A DOM has to stick by his own rules like respect in both life styles.

OH WOW, no not a Cliffie.  This chapter was one of the best.  Jasper know his stiff, the cool calming sexy man.  That James and Jake need Edward to wear their A*S' out.  Need new chapter soooonnnnn!!!!

This was a full chapter of vision.  It detailed so many aspects of their past and present lives.  As always a well written chapter. 

This is such a well written story.  The entertainment of this story is beyond any expectations I've ever had.  All the characters have such unique qualities which makes for good reading.  I'm am so not looking forward to Jacob though.  My heart is racing to see what he will do.  Hurry with the next chapter.  I do love the long chapters though!!!!

The was an excellent and informative chapter.  Great story too!

Where do I begin?  I have read over a thousand versions of Twilight fanfic and I must say this is the best story of them all.  I was on edge so much that I would read, then stop, read, then stop.  My body was all tied up trying to get through this chapter.  It takes a lot for me to get stirred up and you have achieved that with this chapter.  You truly out did yourself on this.

Bella is my sheroe!

Wouuu!!!  I can't imagine how you wrote this chapter.  This was so Intense, detailed, and heartfelt, all of which explains Bella and Charlie's non-existing relationship. There were so many triggers in this explanation for me which to Bella’s defense was better than my experience.  However, I am glad you wrote this and I hope that others would at least read this if they haven’t sought out counseling.  Great chapter.

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I have to say that I expected something horrible from your AN.  However, I think you did an amazing job with this chapter.  I really don't see what the fuss was about.  The girls did wrong, they hid something that could have potentially did harm to Alice.  Bella has to grow up and stop letting people play on her compassion.  She knew it was wrong or else it would not have had to be kept a secret.  Edward had every right to be hurt and angry.  However, he knows what Bella is about and he was more concern with his feelings that Bella's.  As her DOM he broke his rule of responsibility by not doing the same thing to Bella.  I guess a tic for tac.  First and foremost her allegiance is to her mate.  Second her allegiance should have been to keep Alice safe bottom line.  I was very disappointed in Esme as well.  I think she went overboard with her comments.  Seems like the only with common since is Carlise. 

cute

this chapter is to cute.

This Edward is coming full circle.  I truly love him fighting with himself in his head.  I think it is Fu*k awesome.  As well as Bella being so in responsive to him now. 

This chapter was so good.  I love your description of the transformation and the flashbacks.

I just finished this entire publishing and it is by far one of the best versions I've read.  Keep it comming.  Thx

This story just gets better and better!

Author's Response:

Thank you