Reviews by Canadaci
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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet~

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Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I've read similiar stories like this, but this is by far the best version.  please keep this updated.  You are so talented.  Thx

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh this was so goodddddd!

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Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Its good when you really can't figure out the ending, LOL

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I have voted and will continue to vote.  I love this story.

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Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Awh, the real test now.

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

One of the best descriptions ever.  Great chapter.

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Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Oh, that was hard to read.  Sniff, Sniff!!

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Speechless!  Awesome.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Excellent story!

Summary:

Edward and Bella are both divorced. Seeing and flirting with each other everyday while dropping their kids off at school finally results into a wonderful night together. Language/Lemons Please read & review. The one shot that inspired A Long Way to Go.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13883 Read Count: 723
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Little Flirting Goes A Long Way

A great beginning to a tragic ending.  This was a wonderful story.  You did well even better then most experienced writers.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the awesome review! It means more than I can say. If you enjoyed the one shot, maybe you will like the full story. It's a work in progress called A Long Way To Go. Check it out!
Thank you again!
:) freakybella

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

WONDERFUL! EXCELLENT! STORY!!!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Please let Tanya be decent in this story.  I can't handle a bad Tanya hurting Adam.  LOL

Summary: Past Featured Story

When they move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlise's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness. Will he be able to resist? AU/EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80415 Read Count: 18444
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

If Bella can't be around humans for health reasons but she can be around Vampires, why didn't that ask her to come live with them?  He family is not helping then she should be with the people she trust.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

NO Big Cliffie, I love it.  Can't wait for next chapter.

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Lovely,  I hope she cut him a little slack.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I think she should be told that she can die regardless of the means.  This will put the ball back in her court since she thinks Edward should have let her die.  If she doesn't want to die, then she needs to move on!!!  Cut Edward some slack, he has always wanted to do the right thing.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Sweet!

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Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This was a sweet story!

Summary:

Bella thinks she has her life figured out. She has the best father and brother but all too soon her life comes shattering down around her. Will Edward be able to help her? E/B, Em/R, J/A AH & NC-17 for lemons.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156928 Read Count: 120030
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

OMG, this was so intense.  I had a hard time reading this.  It just seem so real.  I am curious to see how this will end.  Please make it go away.  They need so happiness!!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you. I want it to seem real.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Like always, excellent.  At least she is following through on her promise to keep fighting.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I can't picture being in her situation.  So I'm not going to comment on that.  I will say that I love your writing and look forward to the rest of the chapters.



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Now that was sweet, Sr. Prom!!!!!

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Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Man, this was so hard to read!  I can't imagine being in those situations.  I would hope that the real unsong hero's are able to get some consolation in a real support group and have supportive family members and friends.  This is good food for thought.  Thx



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I so loved the letters between Bella and the 13 year old.  It was good to see that senerio.

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Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I think you captured it very well.  Way to go!!!!!

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Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

It was nice to hear it frm Emm's POV.  Thx



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Simply amazing!  I loved the condoms, it was a cute touch.  Leave Carlise alone.  He had to have a good sense of humor for an old guy. LOL

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

omg, this was such a tear jerker. I truly love this story. Like C, I had a cousin who went through the same thing. I am greatful for this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40841
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: New games at the club

I must say, this is the first I've every read where C have been DOM, B a DOM, E a SUB I guess a some point.  I truly love this story.  Well done~~

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Soap cleans all

I will be patient for the meeting.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Master Aro

Aro was good to Edward.  I can't imagine Tonya not being a nut.  We will see!!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Mistress Tanya

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: On the floor

Excellent, Excellent you did a great job.  Let the games begin.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The job and harsh introductions at the club

This is one of the best stories I've read on this subject.  With that being said I have to say that first of all that was a great injustice done to E.  C and T both crossed some serious trust rules.  If T wanted to be with S, she should have been honest and told E.  Secondly C should not have gone along with that plan as well.  He as a DOM and well regarded in the BDSM world and should have not agreed and told T to be truthful to him.  E is a good SUB as well as loyal and prideful of course.  Yes he should have safe word.  However, she was his DOMMES and had a duty to him knowing he wouldn't go down without a fight, probably because he thought he would disappoint her (you think!).   He truly did not deserve that harsh treatment.  Lastly, that was a very hard chapter to read.  I truly hope from this point on it gets better.  You ask for reviews and now you have it!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, it means a lot to me!

And yes, my characters aren't the most likable out there, but that's the way I've choosen to write them. Of course Tanya shouldn't act like she does, Carlisle should interfere, and Edward should stand up for himself, but they are only human and make mistakes like all of us.

And it will get easier from now on, don't worry.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you took the time to do it.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

BETTER!!!



Author's Response:

;-)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Reasons

C is a WUSS!!!  He would danger other lives because he's hiding his and Ms E'. secret lift style.  Get over it and do the right thing.  T yes, yours will come one way or the other.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Awakening

OMG, this was so touching.  He is a champ through it all.  I would forget I am a sub and find that winch and kit her A*S.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Under the canopy

That was just what the DOM ordered for Edward.  He is so sweet in this story.

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Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Sushi

Outstanding, great chapter.  Please update soon!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

Great protective interaction between both.

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Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Pragmatic Gentleman

I like this story. I tried to view the album, but is taking me to your logon and asking for your password.



Author's Response:

I moved all my pictures to my blog: http://minariveratwific.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

Excellent!

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189020
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!  So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

priceless!



Author's Response:

:) Thank you!  So glad you liked their meeting!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is by far one of the best stories I've read.



Author's Response:

Wow, I'm flattered! Thank you!  I really like all these characters so much :)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Truly a great story.



Author's Response:

It's a happy one.  Whenever they have issues, they're going to actually talk like people instead of run like ficsters :) hehe I love those stories too but sometimes I want to throttle people and tell them to just listen!  So here, they will!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Game On

I love it!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hee, this was a fun chapter.  I love the boys teasing one another :)

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Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Second Down

LOL, Eagles.



Author's Response:

It'll be strange to see them without McNabb and Westbrook this year.  Don't know how to wrap my head around that!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Flag On The Play

Ok, great story, but move it along, LOL.  We need E&B to get a relationship going before Bella freak out!!!!!! I truely love this story.



Author's Response:

Haha they're moving along very nicely I think.  I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 First Down

Sweet!



Author's Response:

Glad you think so :)

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Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact

interesting!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hehe thank you, I had fun with it :)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion

Wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

Aww thanks, I had a lot of fun with it :)  They're so cute!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Huddle Up

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you :) I had fun with it!

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100554
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Physical

C is to die for.  It dosen't get any better.  That man makes me want to jump his BOD real bad, LOL



Author's Response:

Me too! Yum... Can you believe how he was checking her out! lol

Thanks for reviewing ;)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Blackdog

G is a f**king Di*K, I know she has the video. 

Edward is a real man.  He is doing a great job with Bella.  He deserves an Oscar for his perrmance in taking care of her needs with the exception of the one slip up.   

I love this Bella, the best one ever and I have read many of these stories on both TWCS and FanFic.

Alice suprises me much!  She seem to be low keyed in this story.

Rose, what can I say Rose!  She seems to be coming around.  However, she has some low self esteem issues that is different in this story.

Emmett finally is striking back.  Way to go Emmett!

Jasper is my main man.  You can never go wrong with his cool and peace giving personality.  He too is a real manly man.

Mr. & Mrs. C., are what I would like to be when I'm their age.  Kool and sexy.

Last but not least Tanya!  Still brainless!!!!!!

All in all you have written the best story I've read on these sites.  My hats' off to you!



Author's Response:

Yay! I can't even begin to tell you how much your words mean to me. This is the first story I have ever written and I am still learning but your words are so encouraging! OK...

Yes, Gianna is a dick...it would be very scary if she does have the video :-0

Edward has really been trying. I can definitley say that he really loves her

Bella is cool and sexy and she doesn't have the same issues she has in the book but she is also only twenty to Edward's thirty five...I wonder if that will ever be an issue?

Alice is much more subdued in this story, it annoys me when she is bossy and bouncy

I think alot of people forget what a bitch Rosalie is in the books...she is jealous because she was never able to capture Edward's attention and she practically gets him killed! She doesn't even start to come around until the middle of Eclipse and doesn't really accept Bella till Breaking Dawn...so we'll see how this goes.

Emmett is a natural flirt and I think he doesn't know where the line is sometimes and is a bit lacking in compassion...

Jasper has been cool so far, but he was also initally weary of Bella in the books so we'll see what happens here (not that anyone else is really cannon besides Rosalie).

Mr & Mrs C are pretty fantastic...I hope she gets her grandbabies

Tanya has been so easily dismissed...as a matter of fact, Bella never really saw her as a threat.

Thank you again for reviewing...I look forward to hearing more of your theories as the story progresses!

Laila

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters

WOW, a mess.

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Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: With Or Without You

The old lover thing was fu*k awesome.  I'm glad E stud his ground.  And the M turns out to be a cheating jerk.  I love the grands and the conversation gramps had with E.  He needed that.  Can't wait until the next chapter.  Good writing as always.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy

Excellent chapter.  One of the best.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

Wonderful!



Author's Response:

Thank-you!

Summary:

Bella Swan is starting a new job with the FBI. Not only does she have to prove to the boys that she belongs but she has to face the demons from her past before they find her. NC-17 for language and lemons B/E, R/Em, A/J, Es/C

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga, to read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95413 Read Count: 135502
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Excellent story.  A must to read.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106345
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

WOW, this story was hard to read.  They have a lot of issues to deal with.  I'm not sure what the answers are.  But then again, I'm not writting this story. LOL

All-in-all this is a great story.  Such a different version of the ones I've been reading.  You are a out-of-the-box thinker.  Can't wait to see whats in the next chapter.  Thx

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

lier, lier, pants on fire!!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

WOW

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Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Is it post depression?  She is having a hard time.  Great story.

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Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This chapter was amazing.  Can't wait until the next one comes out.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I truly enjoyed reading your story.  I will continue to read your material.  Thanks for the entertainment.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123471
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Christmas Break - The Second Year

This has been a roller coaster ride.  Those poor kids!!!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Be My Master

WOW, why don't we get right down to it.  You didn't cut any slack on this one.  Great writing.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The First Six Months

Again, how old is B and what was E's age. LOL

She is way ahead of her time.  Girl is amazing~



Author's Response:

They get together in June.  After a few weeks Edward turns 36 and in Sept. Bella turns 19.  Bella has been raised by Charlie and has been exposed to a lot through his work and she is very observant and smart.

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The Second Year - First Six Months

Priceless!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Second Year - The Second Six Months

That was the most inspiring chapter that I have ever read.  Even if it is fiction it is real on some level or what any one would want to hear.  Those words were to die for!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Third Year - The First Six Months

OMG, this was so good.  Rose and Alice suprised the heck out of me.  Get over it SKANKS.  Bella do your thing, oh I forget you are with or without Big Eddie. LOL!  Tonya HO! HO! get a life.  Ruff Ruff Sue, Charlie, and Edward.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Christmas Break - The Third Year

WOW, this was very entertaining.  This story just gets better and better.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Third Year the Second Six Months

OMG, fu*king amazing, I love this story.  From the playparty to the graduation, so much detail.  This is the first role I've read where Esme was such a bit*h of a mother.  I love it!  I love that fact that E is standing his ground.  Now let the juices flow since the that the cat is out the bag.  Let the EC games begin.  Work them E!!!!!!

Hurry next chapter pleaseeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

PS.  The secret admire will no doubt be part of this as well!



Author's Response:

GLad you liked it and thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

So, So, Sooo, good!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

Excellent!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Christmas Break The Fifth Year

This is by far my favorite chapter.  Bella has a tongue like a two edged sword.  She gave Tanya and Esme a good lashing.  WTG Bella!  I throughly enjoyed the lines you used in this chapter.  I must say my mother-in-law would be speechless with those lines.  LOL

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76150
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good so far!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

of course you know this chapter is priceless.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Tonya is a true nut case!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh this is so good.  I am truly enjoying this.  B is making E sweat and I am enjoying that!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Obviously Bella don’t understand his lifestyle.   Why would he even bring her there knowing what he was into?  I would have left long before that.  However, he does have a thing for her and she knew it.  He should have at least told her something.  Hell I would have felt the same way.  With all that being said she knew he had some kind of fetish for her.  Why the hell would he keep tipping her and following her.  She’s not that stupid.  Hum rich man and lovely home or broken down shack, let me see which is better?!!!!  I do like this story though.  Thx

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

OMG, that was crazy!!!

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 33003
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW, this is very interesting.  I am looking forward to reading on!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Reilly or James?

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Alice and Walmart it doesn't get any better. 

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OMG, so many girls/ladies.  He was a sick SOB.



Author's Response:

Thank you for All the reviews to this story. I am currently working on the next chapter and hope to get it up next week. Alistair always creeped me out in the book, it seemed fitting! Thank you again!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Your stories are to be commended.  They are so original and good.  I contiune to look forward to reading them.  Thanks for the excellent entertainment.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great so many twists to this story.  Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Its on now!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I can't wait for the fight, I hope the kick Jane's (you know what)!!!!!



Author's Response:

I think you are going to love the twist coming. Thank you for reading and reviewing it!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Yes, this was worth the wait.  I love that two being changed at the same time with all POVs.  Excellent chapter.  BTW good luck on your book.  I will be on of the first to purchase it when it comes out.



Author's Response:

I cannot Thank you enough for being one of my fans! I have read all your reviews and look forward to seeing more from you. I will make sure to announce the date as it gets closer to my release date. I hope you have a Wonderful Holiday season! Nails233

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

m2te

After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297715
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by

I love this story, its is so orginal and I am waiting for the HEA.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

Great chapter!  I truely loved Eclipse.  The did a great job with the fighting scene.  I truely love your descriptive writing.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Leaving on a jet plane

I'm so proud of B saying she loved E even if he didn't hear it.  Niff, Niff!!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

I am truly into this story.  I am so glad B finally talked to someone.  I am also amazed that she is still hung up on the v card.  Give it to him already!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

She will give it to him sooner than you know! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you

Thisis a great story,  I love that she finally told him that she loved him.  I think they will be great together.  He seems to be caring and will do right by her when he take her.  I hope so anyway.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

And Edward couldn't be anymore right for Bella! :)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Date

you are wrong? LOL



Author's Response:

I don't know what you mean, but I hope I'm not ;)

xx
Gelix