Reviews by Canadaci
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255192
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is one of the best D/S stories I've have read.  I truly love this Edward as well.



Author's Response:

Thank you...I'm glad you like my story,,lml

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You go girl, work Edward.  LOL

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Dinning room, lol

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was a mouth full.  I love it.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

You know, I love the Em.  He is so real!!!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Tanya is just being herself.  Edward told her off good in front of Bella.  Aro is swave as well.  The scene with the sixty feet rope WOW.  I think this is a great story and I still like Em even though I am so Team Edward.  I actually like Rose for a change as well.  Alice normally takes the stage with Bella, but it seems as though Rose is kicking it.  Maybe due to the abuse aspect of this story.  Anyway its all good.  Thanks for the great entertainment.



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the great comments you are making on the story. I'm glad you like it. I wanted to make Aro out to be the way I first understood him in New Moon. Like Bella decribed him as a chastising grandfather. Caring but stern. I based him on my uncle, who I love very much...They do use 60 feet of rope and it is WOW... 

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Make the girls sing, YMCA.  The boys to sing, You Light Up My Life (Carpenters).  LOL

Bell dealt with his A*s in that pool.  Love it!



Author's Response:

lol on your songs...I would have made the men sing "You Lost That Lov'n Feeling'..you will see what the girls sing on monday...

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

I stood in front of Edward’s door waiting for him to answer. The eleven o’clock appointment with Mr. Tanner gave me an extra hour. The door opened to a confused Edward

 

“Isabella?” I couldn’t help myself he was so handsome standing there and I was so gitty that I threw my arms around his neck and practically jumped in his arms, kissing his surprised lips.

 

            It only took him a second to respond as he held me closer to him. When he pulled away he had a smirk on his face.

 

 “What was that for?” I kissed him again “Thank you for the roses, they are beautiful”

 

           

“Is that all it takes to get you to jump me?” I giggled “Oh, I don’t need a reason to jump you”

 

            I was going to kiss him again, but a loud throat clearing from our left caught my attention. Edward patted my bottom, setting me down. When I looked over his shoulder I saw four sets of curious eyes watching me, and a woman on her knees looking at the floor. Oh my god, I can’t believe I just threw myself at him in front of his company, of course my face heated up with my embarrassment causing Edward to chuckle.

 

 “Come on I’ll introduce you” he said as his arm wrapped around my waist guiding me into the room.

 

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

WOW, this was an intensed chapter, but good. I guess we will see more as you bring out the unfolding points of interest.

Author's Response:

I'm working on it, I am moving slow with the story, building their relationship along with the intrigue...it's not a wam-bam-thank-you-mam kind of story it's more like an erupting volcano, spudering and spewing until it explodes ....Thanks for reading and I'm glad you like my story....lmlx8

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Excellent chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you...I have a teaser for you....

 

“You know what I think?” He raised his eyebrows “No I don’t but I would love to know love to hear it”

 

“I think you are wrong …“ Edward raised his eyebrows in disbelief, but I went on to explain before he could interrupt my train of thought. “ …about us needing to go to the club more often just to let people see us. I think we should go as you have already planned but not any extra times just to appease your adoring public.” Edward got that perplexed look on his face again.

 

“Think about it. All anyone really knows is that I showed up one night with Aro’s card. You yourself were kind of intrigued about how I knew him.” Edward nodded

 

“Your right I was, Aro doesn’t give them out.” I went on with my theory, while Edward’s hands moved down to rub my bottom.

 

“Then the next thing anyone knows is that sometime within the next week, you and I got together and then when they see us I’m sporting your collar around my neck. Now in order to justify why that happened they come up with all sorts of circumstances that would explain it. Which is alright but then like an arrogant child who is looking for attention from their daddy, they start spouting it to others, knowing it’s going to get back to you”

 

“Is that the psychologist talking? Because let me get this straight. They…” he pointed to my computer “… are the arrogant child and I am the daddy, and they are doing this to get a rise out of me?” I nodded.

 

“And it’s working”

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

WOW, you painted a picture that I would never dream anyone could ever survive.  I know there are people out there that are capable of doing those types of things, but what type of mind would a person have to have to actually do it?  Futhermore who could live after that.  I would imagine it was hard for you to wite this chapter. 

This Bella has to be a hell of a person to suvive this let alone trying to help others.  Maybe people should know the things that can and do happen to in this world.  That they are not alone and that they too can get through something like this noing that they are not the only individuals experiencing that same type of horrible abuse.

Edward in this story is a strong and compassionate person and my hats off to him.  James on the other still needs some type of punishment for his attacks.  If he gets away with this, then what is to say he won't do this again to someone else.  He needs to feel some remorse for what he has done.  The public and as well as Bella need closure.  A divorce is not closesure or punishiment.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Bella has been through hell...thanks for the comments

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

OMG, that was so heart felt on Edwards part.  He had to do what he had to do!!!  I am so sorry for Bella.  I know her heart was in the right place.  But like he said she put others at risk.  I hope she can recover from this as well as he!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I still feel that he did the right thing.  I'm not sure about her sleeping with him though.  Maybe he should have made her sleep in his room on a matt just so she would know that he was still concern about her metal health as well.



Author's Response:

He made a mistake by letting her alone, and he was very sorry for that ...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a  teaser for you...lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

She finally asked quesitons.



Author's Response:

Finally!!!...lol...Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml

 

Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.

 

“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.

 

“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.

 

“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.

 

“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183823
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

I love this story.  Orginal.  I've been reading quite a few originals lately.  This is one of the best.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One

Nice.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Hammering Out a Plan

OMG, Em is fu*king priceless.  Got to love him.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

One thing Martha need to know is that she can't do for Edward what Bella can.  LOL

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating

Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie...(Part 1)

Eddie is bringing it on!  Love this story.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

Jacob and Renee are dumber and dumber!  Carmen needs to retire.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)

That old ass hag better take her ass back to Spain!!!  I can't believe that Bella let that cobb web make her cry.  Edward I'm am proud of you even though you were a douche'.  Bella need to lock down on his.....

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)

That little skank has a lot of nerve.  She left before that child had a name.  Now what court in this world would allow that piece of trash to grace that little girl’s presence?  His mother should have told him when that first card came.  She foster Jessica’s bad behavior or her craziness which ever. 

Yes, Carmen with her old, ancient, and decrepit ass self-need to go back to hell where she belongs.  How dare she think that her cob web behind was appealing to Edward over someone like Bella, DELUSIONAL. 

My man Edward, what can I say!  He stepped to the plate on both incidents.  He put Carmen in check with not even a thought as well as Demetri.   Yes, I feel bad for him, but hay he’s a man now man up LOL.  As for Esme, I love her dear sole, but mama has to understand that that was a decision that wasn’t her to make by keeping that very important info from Edward.  I hope she understands that now.

This story again is very good and entertaining.  Thx

Summary:

Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.    

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14810
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 May 2011
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: In The End : VictoriaPOV

Oh that was a grand POV.  I truly loved it!

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87558
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I started reading this at 3:00am, it is one of the best Mafia stories I have ever read.  I know when B, goes home and see Jacob there will be hell to pay.  I am so looking forward to that.  I am so a Team Edward fan.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment sweets. Glad you're loving this. =) lol

Jacob and Bella's meeting is one you will not expect. :)

Anyway, see you next update. =)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

You are so wrong with the cliffee.  Pleas update soon!!!!!



Author's Response:

So sorry about the cliffy. I'll try to make it up to you next chapter. ;)

Thanks and see you next update! =)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This was very intense.  Edward is going to blow a load if he don't calm down!



Author's Response:

LOL!

Anyway, thanks for this bb! Appreciate it much! =)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

WOW, drama.



Author's Response:

Thanks bb! =)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Excellent chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks sweets! =)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I know of two movies that used tracking devices one was Left Behind and the other was a movie called BRAZIL.  A TV show called Kyle XY also used that technology. BTW I truly enjoy this story.



Author's Response:

Somebody said that there were several shows that featured 'tracking devices', and good you named some....at least I know now. (since I can't seem to remember that particular show where I saw it.)

Glad to know you're enjoying this story. Thanks! =)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

WOW, that was truly a heavy chapter.  I am speechless!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol! Thank you. Happy New year! =)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Man, its amazing that she is not raw. LOL  That would be a good raw so it seems.



Author's Response:

lol! yes, a very good thing that she isn't. *winks*

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

WOW, that was hard to read!



Author's Response:

was the 'wow' good or bad? lol.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Wonderful chapter!  You go Mase.



Author's Response:

Thanks. =D

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Bella thats what happens when you play with the big dogs!  LOL



Author's Response:

She won't be doing anything like that anytime soon, that's for sure. lol

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Man, they got  a lot going on!



Author's Response:

yes, they do. ;) Thanks.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

WOW, look out Black worst scum then the Swans & Cullen's just because he's a coward!



Author's Response:

lol. Yeah he is. 

Thanks. ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 dominated

 Thank you to Mekek18 for the great banner

Entry for the Twi-Girl Revolutions "Under Her Thumb" Challenge. Follow Edward as he auditions and becomes the sub of a strict Domme. Will it just be a professional relationship or will it become more? BDSM. Mature.ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39360 Read Count: 19800
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 11 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar

This story has a different twist.  Interesting.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Shedevil, lol

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

WOW, scary.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Enlisting of a Rose

I love it.  You go Rose.  I like this Rose, she is a whip.

Summary:

Bella, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett are back for the sequel to My Boys. What will the future hold for our favorite three couples? AH & NC-17 for language and lemons. E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/Es, Ch/R.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97755 Read Count: 58330
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Sad by nice!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

WOW, i could not visual having a baby on a sub or train.  Amazing!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews:)

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40320
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: photos

love the house!



Author's Response:

That's a nice house I know. I have more of the house if you would like to see them. Let me know I can e-mail you the rest...lml

Summary:

Banner by: TwiliteAddict

This is a two-shot from a parallel universe to my story "Forbidden Desire" I wrote for the Fics for Nashville fundraiser. Bella is an untried pleasure slave given to Edward on his 18th birthday by his insistent father.

Greek Togaward and Slave-girl Bella. AH, NC-17 for nudity, slavery (adult themes) and light citrusy feel.  My typical oddly In-Character OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4065 Read Count: 1668
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part I

WOW, I can't imagine what Bella's story is.  However, she seems to be dealing well with the purchase of her freedom.  Maybe because Edward treated her like a human being and gave her choices.  I would love to see this story written out.  It seems that it has so much potential.  Thx

Relative Humidity by kimmrz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Bella Swan runs a public relations firm. She reconnects with her college room mate Alice who has also through the years tried, without success, to push her two favorite people into a dating relationship. Little does Bella know that soon fate will intervene. Bella is soon to find out that "relative humidity" has a whole new meaning.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165318 Read Count: 19378
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 02 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends

I truely love this story so far.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoy it. Thank you for reading.

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238945
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Hum!  father Cheney is lethal.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

O.M.G, that was an awesome chapter. It was so much to take in. I had to read it all day. Love it so much !!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.

Thanks again, your comment made my day!! =)

XxoO

Jells

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

No Cliffee's please.  LOL



Author's Response:

LOL. Awww why not? I love them. They're fun. LOL j/k

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

~jells

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

HOT!!!!

ZIZZELING!!!!!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm happy you liked! It was a crazy chapter. lol

Thanks again,

~Jells

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am on pins and needles.  I love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! =) So glad that you still like.

I should be able to post this week sometime.

Thanks again,

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Eddie is going to rip him a new one!



Author's Response:

Hi *waves*

*grins* I think he will

I'll have ch 19 posted today or tomorrow at the latest. I have to self edit, my beta's life is crazy atm.So 'll post when im done.

Thank you,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I am so addicted to this story, please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I'm happy that you're still enjoying it.

 

I'll have a mini update asap.

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

 

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Mocked by Faith by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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For Alexia Cross and Justin McNear, things are not what they seem.  Both were born and raised in hidden, gated communities.  A place where time virtually stands still and marriages are arranged by parents before a child’s 18th birthday.

Alexia is destined to be her community’s first spinster.  In a last ditch effort, a husband is found.  The only complication?  He has no idea he has been betrothed. Will his history of dating outsiders help or hinder his relationship with his future wife?

Justin McNear searched outside his church for the woman of his dreams. Returning home after failing, he knows he needs to rectify his life and his faith. Can a woman he’s never met make him whole again?

Will this couple end up mocked by their own faith?  Follow Alexia and Justin through the trials and tribulations of finding, falling, and surviving each other's love. It’s never easy saying “I do” to someone you don’t.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2359 Read Count: 1129
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Alexia Cross’ crossroads.

I like what I've read so far!  I am a sucker for romance.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

I hope he is a good boy for her.  She seems so unhappy.  Maybe this is what the doctor ordered.  LOL

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

OMG, he doesn't know yet!!!!  I hope they don't hurt her feelings anymore then what she has dealt with.  This is getting even better then I hoped.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

This was so great to get this JPOV.  I am so happy to have all the blanks filled in.  This is going to a fabulist story.

Oh how sweet.  A little misunderstanding.  Hurry, please update, LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews! I am so glad you are enjoying my first original story and since you asked so nicely I am granting your wish for a chapter. It will take a few minutes to get it loaded but if you put it in your favorites you will know when it is there. Next chapter after today maybe at the end of this week, at the latest next weekend. Thank you for giving it a shot!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

Simply beautiful.  Put together nicely.  As always I can't wait to read the next chapter.

PS, I have been reading other writings of yours and am very pleased.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

Beautiful, simply beautiful!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

WOW, thats news to me.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

You would be surprised what I was told when I started trying for children. I think I heard every superstistion out there. But who kinows there are alot out there.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

His caveman stunt was cute.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

That was so sweet for them all to take care of he like that.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad you are enjoying this story. Updates will comence once the contest closes. The voting is already under way, if you think it is worthy, please vote for it on the home page. Don't worry this story will be finished one way or the other. Happy reading!

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology

I know what Esme did was wrong, but as a sub when E asked her to come out, she almost attacked her.  She should have approached E the wright way, but didn't.  So as a play punishment he should put her on the St Andrews cross and act as if he is going to punish her but have fun with it.  She clearly is submissive and would not do anything wrong.  This gives him a chance of going through the motions off discipline without really punishing her.  LOL

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

I love this spin on the story.  The first I've read where E is a Vamp/Dom.  Great story so far.



Author's Response:

Thank You! I am so glad you like it!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

Interesting, I thought he was turned when he was 17 and it was over 90 years after that when he met Bella.  That would explain why Bella is just getting out of high school with maybe a year of sub training.


I was surprised that he Cullen’s split over him being with Bella.  Maybe Esme had issue because of her past as well as Rose.  Why didn't Alice see this coming?  She knew about in telling B to go shopping or maybe now that B is the picture she saw coming.


I think she may have omitted things from her application not that she was lying.  She seems to be evasive.  I can't under why she was living in her car unless she just finished her sub training and had to move on.  She did say she has been looking for a DOM for a while.  Maybe Jacob trained her as a sub and that's where Leah and the Res come into play.  I also wonder what it was that Esme could remember reading something about Chief Swan's daughter.  Maybe she disappeared for that year doing her Sub training and was hiding out on the Res.  Medical records hum?????


I'm glad E has so much control keeping his thirst under control and am especially glad he can read her mind.  She seems to second guest herself so much. I was waiting for her to confirm his pull to her. 


I can't imagine what happened to her depending on when she arrived to Charlie's house! 


I think this is a fu*k awesome story and can't wait to see YOUR HEA.  Don't end the story to fast though.  It’s hard to get good interesting stories so spread this one out to 100000.... Words.  LOL



Author's Response:

No worries I have no intention of finishing it quickly. they have so much to learn about each other. And many of your suspisions are close but you will see in the next chapter.  I have just a paragraph left then, its off to be beta'd. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

That was crue to make us wait (cliffee).  LOL  Pleas hurry, I almost can't wait.



Author's Response:

LOL okay, i'll pass the word along to my beta. She already has the next chapter, and chapter 5 will hopefully be done tonight. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

This Bella is so sweet and precious.  I hope he take care of her.  She needs insurance and a car.  LOL



Author's Response:

Definately! He'll learn soon enough that she will need to have a few things rectified in her life and he will be more than happy to take care of them. Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom

Excellent



Author's Response:

Thenak you!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!

Sam/Emily, hum!!!!



Author's Response:

Unfortunately no, but it was great guess. the hints were very suttle. Thank you so much for reviewing me your guess. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served

Esme is a piece of work in this story. 

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer

Bella is so sweet.  Pure!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas

I hope he finds that if they are stocking her, he will know if they are coming back.

Its said that she has had such a a tragic life. 

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up

Little Bella is not to be messed with.  What you say!!!!!  LOL

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The wooing begins

As always you have my vote!!!

Summary:

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Banner by: edwards_girl_1918... Author & Co-Author of some great Fics... check ´em out!!!

4yrs After leaving Forks Bella is ready to face the past. Faithful to her true love she sacrificed her happiness for his future. Now she s returning to Seatle in hopes to soon practice law. He`s moved on sort of, but can Edward forgive Bella´ s secret or is it to late for their ´Happily Ever After´ rated for languge and very lemony lemons!!!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44252 Read Count: 6166
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2010 Updated: 23 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

This story is awesome! 

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Other Brother

WOW, interesting.

Summary:

Edward and Bella have been stepsiblings since they were ten, but how long has Edward felt something different for his Sort-of Sister? EPOV of fanfiction MY Other Brother


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6658 Read Count: 3855
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It was good to hear Edward's POV.  I'm glad he is thinking about what is right and wrong with thier situation.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 312005
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Armpits & Coffee Stains

Sounds good so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you like it.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Drunk Ironing & Snark

I am truely enjoying this story.  Bella is too funny!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I enjoy writing it also.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

Gota love that Emmett!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes you do...to survive this story, you must love Emmett.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Grits & Vitamin R

Em's priceless!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!  THanks!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mercer Island & Minibars

That was almost to hard to read.  I am glad they are talking now.  Wow, they used the "L" word!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Glad you like it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135063
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Emmett is a awesome in this story.  He stepped to the plate.



Author's Response:

Yes, he has:) Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

It doesn't matter if it seems too soon.  They said that that have always loved each other at least she admits since the day she was taken.  She said he was her one sustaining force keeping her will alive.   I think given the situation not knowing when you might not see each other again, telling the person how you feel is the right thing to do.  Like what has happen tomorrow isn't promised.

This is one of the most original B&E stories I read.  Its hard to read but I love it!  It deals with real situations and a topic that isn't touched as much.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

WOW!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So heart breaking, I have never read anything like this.  I am a big wuss, I cried through the last two chapters.



Author's Response:

You are not a wuss, my dear, I sobbed like an infant while writing them.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Awesome Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

OMG, that was horrible of him.  Please let this child heal.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Deep!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

WOW, there will have to be a lot of healing.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

WOW



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Edward is my kind of guy.  Perfect!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Amazing story.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Saint Bella!!!!!!  Thants all I'm sayin.



Author's Response:

I know, right. She's nicer than me.

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Canadaci Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

WOW

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Nice story so far.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

THE NERVE OF THEM.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Hum, picking out fabric without an engagement!!!!  Omen you thing?

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

OMG!!!!!