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France 1830
After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
You are truly doing a great job. I am glad I can read this story with ease. Great story BTW.
Bella and Edward have been best friends forever and they've shared a lot of firsts. Now Bella wants to share one last one together. AU/slightly OOC Cannon pairings B/E And rated M for language and lemons!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331144 Read Count: 104701
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I think you did an amazing job. Of course there is love between the both of them and you just shook it up a bit. You didn't go overboard with the Ry thing. Just enough to give E a wake up call. He woke up. LOL
The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into. NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.
This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.
Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;
http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com
Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.
I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme copyrightbabylou23@2010.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Please Remember Me
you have my vote!
Author's Response:
thank you, that means a lot :-)
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment
Continue for EPOV. If you tell BPOV then we will know before E. The mystery is the best part. I just found this and I am truly enjoying it.
Author's Response:
thank you for reviewing, I am writing a chapter from bpov and discuss it with my beta, I'm glad your like the mystery part.
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Hum! I hope soon!!!!!
Author's Response:
:-)
Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.
This story is about how the strength that family love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.
check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com
Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.
I do not own twilight but I do own Speak copyrightbabylou23@2010.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27210
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
O.M.G., can't be James!
Author's Response:
lips are sealed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
WOW, that was some story.
Author's Response:
thank you :-)
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
I love this story. It is so heart warming.
Author's Response:
i'm glad you are enjoying it
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
I just found this story and it is very good so far! This is different than anything I have read. I love it.
Author's Response:
thank you, that means a lot
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Its said that Leah is going through this, but it seems that Edward will be the one to help her. I hope that she starts to talking soon so she can get real help.
Author's Response:
me too, thank you
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Wonderful story!
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 part 2
A good show of faith on Edwards' part.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I do love how confident he is as a father and how much faith and trust he has for his son :-)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9
WOW, a lot going on in this chapter. Sweet Edward, kiss her already!
Author's Response:
LOL, Thank you for reviewing
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10
That was perfect. I'm glad she is making him go slow with the relationship. I'm Anthony is talking to E abut Leah talking. She needs help the sweet child. I love the pictures of both kids. They are truly adorable.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm happy to enjoy these characters. ;-)
Teaser will be sent in PM, enjoy
One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35495
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh sweet, I love so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
WOW, way to go Eddie, go after your girl even if she can kill you. LOL
Author's Response:
He's ballsy:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I really like this story. It is so original. I like the CH & B sibling part. I like that the pairing is still or at least it appear to be the same. However, its a different story line. Well done.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Excellent!
Author's Response: Thanks:)
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
lol, I couldn't figure out what it was. Wolfs, to funny.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Way to go Eddie. LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Damn!
Author's Response: Thanks:)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Way to go Eddie. Claim your women!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
WOW, Wolfees. LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Poor Bella don't know what love is! That is so sad, but Edward will teach her. Hopefully before she kill him. LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Good for you Mr. C. Make them honor the treaty.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
WOW, OMG the battle is on!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Banner moved to chapter 1 to comply with Google Ad-Sense requirements
Edward has been avoiding sexual contact with his wife for six weeks. What happens when she lays it all on the line? After Edward and Bella reconnect she finds out she is pregnant what happens during her pregnancy?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25980 Read Count: 22357
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 42 Weeks
WOW, nice size baby. Great chapter!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 12 Weeks
I like this little story. It is so sweet.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 18 Weeks
That was interesting, helping Es have her dream.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 24 Weeks
That is very unselfish and sweet.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the chap. I personally think surrogacy is one of the greatest gifts one woman can offer another.
Thanks for the review
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 30 Weeks
Great chapter. You have my vote!
One of my entries for the Pretty Porn Contest
Edward has been moody and has been finding solace in his piano. Bella wishes he would find solace in her. AH, AU, Romance
Banners moved to chapter 1 due to content
Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2299 Read Count: 1844
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I imagine it would be hard to lost a patient. This was a good story.
Facing certain death for defending Bella’s honor, Jasper finds himself depending on Bella making the ultimate sacrifice; her complete surrender to the dark and dangerous Edward. But is the price too high? Will she succumb to Edward's persuasive calling?
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Historical, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9579 Read Count: 8935
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389629
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1
Great chapter as always. You have my vote!
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...
I have am not a particular animal lover. However, after reading this I think I am sold on a Mojo of my own. Or at least E's name of Cujo. LOL
I truly love this story. I need the fun part of this chapter!
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
Great reveal awesome, sub time masterful, and bath time with Mama Esme mothering. All-in-all this is a great story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
Good filler!
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...
Excellent as always!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
WHOA, descriptive and informative chapter. Leah is a piece of work and Jacob is just toxic to the bone. Sue is so in denial that she may need some counseling with the way she views of her daughter. She hasn't figured out that she can't go back and grow a crazy adult or someone pretending to be a grown up. Charlie is cool though, I like his persona. He's in reality and act as such. However he should get in touch with his military self and kick Jacobs a*s! Like you said Seth is a awesome kid and its sad that he is caught in this cross fire of a mess. I hope Bella continue to stay in touch with him. He is so insecure now and he really is easy to love. He has lost a lot in his little time in the world. Ok, now for Bella, she did do a kick a*s defense for herself and of course you know she has to be hurting. But thankfully everyone else after her gets to get sloppy seconds, third and so on with Jacob. She has to know that life is about to get so much better with her new lifestyle. Like she said you can't bet against Alice......
Author's Response:
Ha ha! I couldn´t agree more, Bella´s on to bigger and better things, if you know what I mean! Lol! You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing! The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming! For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter! Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
She has his nose wide open, I love it!!!!!!! This is going to be good. He still talks about "her", oh what a relief it will be!
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee! So here´s to TGIF! Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers! Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!
Laterzzzz:)
Krazi and Mojo
xoxo
www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...
Oh, I love it. This was great to get BPOV on the cell and texting. Good chapter!
Author's Response:
Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
Out Freaking standing!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
I am late for work this morning reading this chapter. I couldn't put my laptop down. Oh this chapter was amazing. Finally they know. Please update soonnn!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Ground covered!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...
Always a great chapter! I am glad they've told off Leah and Jacob. Poor little Seth going through all of that! I'm glad that they have finally defined their relationship as well.
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2
Tanya is a nut case. Hot weekend. Love Em!
You never think you would wake up and your life will be taken, throwing you in a world you never knew existed. Bella sees life through the black market only to be sold as a virgin beauty. Please no one under 18!!! Rape, suicide, love and angst Rated MA
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Alright just so y'all know before you read this. This story is completely off the wall! Left field, I'm talking way out there! There is no HEA in this story. I cried like a baby writing the last 6 pages. So just before warned!
Ari
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14962 Read Count: 1417
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Coming My Love
Such a Romeo and Juliette story but better. I was shocked, never have I read a B&E story like this. This is a first!
Bella is Domme who is in search of the right sub. After several profiles are searched she interviews two. Go through the interview with her, and see how her test weekend with her potential new submissive works out. Is he the right one? BDSM themes, Hard core Lemons. AH, very adult themes if under the legal age to vote please move on to another story. The top banner was made by the fantastic and awesome: Christagbanners ... You can see her wonderful work by checking her out at christagbanners (dot) blogspot (dot) com. The Black and Red banner, below is my First place award for Fans Vote in the Dommella's Dungeon Contest. Thank you to all my loyal readers.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127084 Read Count: 48041
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
I love this Edward in a weird sort of way. He seems to be so sincere in all that he does with her.
Author's Response:
That is exactly how I see him too.....Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: His Scene
Great chapter and I love this story.
Author's Response:
I am really excited to see that you like this so much.......Thank you for reading and reviewing....
Kasi~
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
Oh know it was getting soooo, soooo good. Cliffee ickee.
Author's Response: the next chapter I promise you will like....Thank you so much for reading and reviewing....reviews mean A LOT to me! thanks! Kasi~
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
That was freaking fantastic! I just love this E&B! You have made this story so OOC but in such a classy way. Truly amazing!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for such kind words abotu the way I am writign these characters. This story is a struggle for me because I do not know the first thign about BDSM. So thank you so much for all the kind words. They do mean EVERYTHING TO ME. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I have sent you your teaser via the contact button on your twcs profile. If you do not receive the teaser let me know and I will get it to you right away.
Kasi~
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
GREAT CHAPTER AND YOU HAVE MY VOTES!
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much Canadaci~
You have mail via the contact button. Let me knwo if you do not get it.
Kasi~
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Hump Day
This story is wonderful as always. Sorry to see Aunt Bell leave and welcome EMENSLY.
Author's Response:
the new BETA is Cullen Confection.....Aunt Bell and Cullen Confection both helped with chapter 5....thank you for reading adn reviewing.....Aunt Bell is not going far.....She is taking my other story My Sisters 3 and she is totally re-vamping it from the orignail version un-beta'd and we are hoping to get it posted on sites like twilighted where it is hard to get a fiction posted. Also I am goign to be posting all my stories on the new site fan fiction addiction as well. So Aunt Bell is not goign far...and I love her work. She is wonderful and great, as I said in the post of this chapter.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
Awesome chapter. I love the chemistry!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chpater. I am enjoying yet struggling writing this story so your kind words come at a great tiem when I needed the encouragement to continue. Thank you so much. The promised teaser for chapter 7 (even though it will post as chapter 8 according to twcs anyway) is being sent to you via the contact button on your twcs profile. If you do not get it by later today contact me at gmail using my screen name, teamalltwilight and I will get it to you then, but check your junk mail sometimes it goes there.
Kasi~
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: A/N
You have my votes!
Author's Response:
aww thank you that means a lot to me! there are some other really great stories nominated out there too. Lots of good stuff to choose from.
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
WOW, the plot just thickens!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes it did and it will get more angsty though so be prepared for it. I promise a happy ending though. I sent oyu the teaser the same as I always do. See ya soon with an update.
Kasi~
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
She is losing it!
Author's Response:
Yes I agree that she is loosing it.....It is sad but true....the next chapter will help shed some light into the world of B&E.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 12 Preview………………..
My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire. I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night. I can not believe I did something so stupid. I need to fix this, and make this right.
Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater. It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over. Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better. Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet. I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.
Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table. The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen. I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven. Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal. Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night. I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
I especially loved the last para in this chapter. Awesome story!
Author's Response:
The last paragraph was my Beta's favorite in the story as well.....Thank you! I guess I have something worth being nominated for in the best quote field in an awards thing now huh? LOL ... Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! Sorry for the lag in gettign the reply in a timely manner.
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 13 Preview………………..
I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of weren't we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter
Oh I think this was my favorite chapter. It was so worth the wait!
Author's Response:
Thanks Canadaci~ I am grateful for the ongoing support from you, I am glad that you like this story so much.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 14 Preview………………..
“Come in, I need to grab a couple of things. Your mom left me a message on the machine reminding me of dinner tomorrow night at your parent’s house. Do you want me to join you?”
“Of course, I want you to be there. I think you should spend the night with me and all day tomorrow and than tomorrow night we will go together to dinner.”
Bella smiled at me, almost shyly. This is a whole new side of her that I have never seen before. Bella is such a beautiful woman; she has the body of a twenty year old. Bella is smart, witty, and completely gorgeous, she is a triple threat. I smile back at her and take her hand I pull her into a hug.
“Bella, I am so glad and honored that you want to spend time with me. Thank you, my love,” I whisper in her ear.
With a sigh into my neck she threads her fingers into my hair and places an open mouthed kiss on my neck below my ear.
“Oh…baby, I cannot wait until you are screaming my name,” I tell her.
Threading my fingers of my right hand into her hair, I move her head so that our mouths connect. After several minutes of kisses so hot, we are close to combustion, we break apart with ragged breath.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
WOW, HOT, and SIZZLING!
Author's Response:
I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: A Peaceful Return, To Where We Belong
Man that guy is a nut case for sure!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. Things with ‘A Sub Search,’ are coming to a close. I would rather end this story, than drag it out and make it bad. I know the SEX SCENES, and LEMONS are hot, but I wanted this story, to also having a meaningful message. During the research parts of writing this story, I have found a truly deep appreciation for the BDSM lifestyle. Not that I could ever practice in the lifestyle, I just personally can see why people choose to. There are so many aspects of this lifestyle that most people, me included did not before realize. The amount of trust, loyalty, care, and compassion that go into the actions between and Dom/Domme and their sub is one of the most solid things I have ever tried to explain. I am still not sure that I have done a great job showing the side of a BDSM relationship, I wanted to show, but I am in no way ashamed of the way that I portrayed it either. Things can happen, but the truth is most participants in the lifestyle are not romantically linked. That is one of the biggest reason’s I wanted Bella and Edward to have the drama of trying to have it all. I know many of you hated Bella, and for a while…I did too. I struggled trying to write parts of this story, for lack of personal knowledge and because I personally felt animosity toward Bella at points in the story. There will be one more regular chapter, and then there will be a epilogue. Thank you for remaining a loyal reader, and again thank you so MUCH for your reviews of my story. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 17 pre-view.
I have been comfortable throughout the day, but I have been in Edward’s arms, most of the time. After arriving at the hospital, Edward was immediately through the door. So many people have come to the hospital today. Esme, and Carlisle, both were here. Edward begged me to allow his father to look over my medical chart, I of course agreed. Carlisle, having privileges at Saint Lukes, demanded that I have a full CT scan. He told me it was to ease his own piece of mind, as well as Edward’s. Carlisle even checked and rechecked where the stiches were; to be sure they were up to par. Edward has all, but refused to leave my side. He only did, when I asked him to once, and when they refused to allow him in the room during the CT scan. Of course the first time he was okay, because I was going to be with Esme. The second time he allowed it, because I would be under Carlisle’s supervision.
Esme surprised me the most. She has always been so easy going and nice. Today I saw what most people consider the momma bear factor, or I have heard the term wolverine as well. Esme was bossing around the staff, like she was in charge. She demanded that one of the nurses be removed from my care, because she was clearly inept, and to busy trying to get Edward’s attention. It was almost amusing to watch and hear her. I still can feel the warmth that passed through me, when I heard Esme tell the nurse. ‘You clearly are more interested in trying to flirt with my son, than take care of my daughter. Take your trampy ass out of this room. I want your supervisor, now!’ Needless to say, that nurse never came back into my room. I have never felt so loved in all my adult life.
Life in Spoons Valley continues as a new generation deals with changes in their small western town. Dr. Edward Cullen, returning after years of absence while attending medical school, believes that life back in his hometown will be boring after life in the city. Little does he know that even though the way of things in the west are slow to change, some things remain exciting, wild, and untamed.
This story is a continuation of my other story Lonesome Hearts. Please read that story first.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12783 Read Count: 9739
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I didn't know this was a sequel. I have to go back and read the first edition.
Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59013
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Karma's present
OMG, I imagine Charlie will be their prime suspect. Oh sweet justice James don't RIP. LOL
Author's Response:
Thankyou for your review:)
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 full circle
Wonderful story and a blessed outcome!
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Common Thread
This story is different then what I have read. It deals with real life situations. Great job!
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight
Your hard work paid off. Excellent chapter!
Author's Response:
ty for reading working on chapter 7 now.. hope to have it up soon
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
I turly like this Edward. He is such a kind person. I hope they make it with the age and the fact that she has to go away to school.
Author's Response:
i believe in HEA... eventually
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
OMG, does Charlie know that Renee sent that awful letter? That women is a beast that didn't deserve ovaries. I can't believe she could be that selfish.
Author's Response:
Charlie doesnt know as of right now thank you so much
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Jail is not good enough for Renee. You did well, we understand this is only FANFIC.
Author's Response:
Thankyou for the review
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Life goes on
Have a happy and wonderful birthday Kayla. I truley love this story. I have an aunt who is one month younger then I am and she was a teen mom. My cousin is the light of my life and I am so glad that you are writing this story. I get to enjoy two birds with one stone. It feels good that you are doing so many different versions of these pregancies as well as writing about my favorite couple.
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much for your review and i look forward to your reviews
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box
Don't let Renee set her back, please! E&C wants that baby and I am starting to want him too! LOL James is dead so they don't have to worry about that. Let Esme and Edward keep the little guy while Bella is at school. Charlie will visit I bet and stay in her life or he may even retire. Anyway am so into this story. I look online for updates all the time. I have to get ready for work now. I know this is sad.
Author's Response:
I believe in HEA and it will all work out in the end.. thankyou for the review
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The ties that bind
I love this Edward. He's the best!
Author's Response:
thankyou, hes pretty special... daddyward is awesome
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
Awesome!!!!
Author's Response:
thankyou
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Strength
I truly loved the silverware analogy. I loved the Proverb script. I also loved the way E talked to Ms. Newton. Great job!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much, always a faithful reviewer:) hope these two can have some happiness for awhile
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Wonderful!
Re-write Of Not So Average.
Isabella Swans' Life at home is no fairytale. She struggles with her weight, depression and family. Eager to get away from her verbally abusive mother and start afresh, Isabella journeys to her first year of college, where she experiences hardships, friendships and Greeks. After seeing her first Greek step-show and eyeing the most popular guy on campus Edward Cullen for the first time, the burn inside her to belong boils to the surface, but there is one obsticle in her way. Rosalie Hale...
Warning: This fic contains: Hazing, Bulimia, Sex,teasing, child abuse, Negligance, suicidal thoughts,OOC, and angst.
All actions that occur in this story are purely fictional.
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13368 Read Count: 3341
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Somewhere I'm Placed
I thought this was an eventful chapter. I'm up on this type of thing, but it was good to me.
When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm. Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
This stories potential is amazing. I am looking forward to see how you merge these two lives together.
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Excellent, I hope it all goes well with them. They truly deserve it.
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Very emotional, but a great chapter.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
This is one of the best stories that I've read. Nice and homsome.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Awe so sweet. I am sad its coming to an end.
New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!
In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?
AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55730
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Well you know what they say, "hell has no fury like a women scone". Tanya is going to have Bella for Breakfast, Lunch, and Dinner. I hope Edward can keep her safe.
Author's Response:
I'm not sure anyone will be safe once the tyrade starts. and it is coming. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! the fun has just begun. Nails233
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Hum, this is a twist with James and Vicky. LOL
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oh no, not Maxine too! Poor Edward.
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
James and Tanya, what a waste of air. I hate them both, I hope that shoot their eyes out.
thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com
Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223966
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
WOW, that caught me by surprise. Didn't see that one coming. I know she was stand offish, but I don't blame her. She is young and he still have those daddy issues. I hope he is going to keep his word.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
O.M.G., I am speechless!!!!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
This is an amazing story. Bella trying to out smart E. Hum spankings and sassing.
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
WOW this story is fu*k awesome! OMG, its hard to wait for updates.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Oh this was such a emotional chapter, but good!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Well you finished my next comment! CLIFFE Hum!!!! Please post soooonnn!