Reviews by Vivipoo
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Love it!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64187
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is probably by far my most fave story of all that I've read.  Update soon please. :)

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Thank you!  I feel like I've been waiting forever on an update on this story.  I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Awesome!  This is one of the first fanfics that I have ever read and probably one of my most favorites.  Patiently waiting for it to be updated totally paid off because the ending was fantastic.  Hoping for an epilogue?  Hehehehe, but it was such a great read of the journey that Bella and Edward took to get them where they are at now.  I will probably re-read this story from time to time because it's so entertaining.  I love it.  Thank you!

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons

Aaaaaccckkkkk!!!  I just started reading this story today and now I have to wait!!  Fantastic story.  I love it!



Author's Response:

Wow! You read it all today? That's impressive! Lol!

So glad you're enjoying it so far - thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Of Wishes and Watches

I am feeling so antsy about how this story is going to turn out.  I just absolutely cannot wait to see how the story ends and this is one story that I seriously always await for updates.  I might have to go back and review the previous chapters but does Bella usually have vivid dreams like that?  I guess what I really want to know is if she really went back in time.  Hehehe...  So I actually just got back from Chicago yesterday and of course we did a city and neighborhood tour and it was so cool to be able to actually see these places mentioned in the story.  It was our first time there and although the trip was a bit tainted (my car happened to break down when we were about to start our 12 hour journey home to Washington D.C.) it was still a great experience.  And after paying an exorbitant amount of money to get my car fixed, I'm glad to be home.  Love this story.  Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Bella has had a few vivid dreams... some were sex dreams about Edward... others were kind of precursors to Alice's arrival. What this one means we'll just have to wait and see.

How fun that you got to go to Chicago. After writing about it, I'd love to see the city in person. :-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

Yay!  So glad for the update.  I am sooooo curious as to how the rest of this story is going to turn out.  I honestly don't know what to expect!  Like is Bella ever going to get back to the present time or is she going to be in that era forever!  I love this story.  Thanks for the update!  Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Well, all of your questions will be answered eventually. :-) So glad you're enjoying it so far. Thanks for reading!



Author's Response:

Well, all of your questions will be answered eventually. :-) So glad you're enjoying it so far. Thanks for reading!

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

OMG, I've been reading this for the past couple of days and I have to admit that no story that I've read so far has had me on the edge of my seat the way that this one did.  My heart was palpitating while I read this chapter.  Fabulous job on this story so far.

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

BTW, about that one certain review, FORGET ABOUT IT.  This is YOUR story and this is what YOU wanted to write about.  For what it's worth, you've done an amazing job on this fan fic.  I'm sure that almost all of us gets what's happening.  You weren't writing this story to win awards or anything, you wrote this story because it's a story that you saw in your head and in your heart and it's a story that you wanted to share.  Yes reviews are great, my sister wrote fan fics too and got upset about some reviews, but don't let a negative review or two stop you from writing. YOU are the writer and it's YOUR story and I can understand that you're putting yourself out there but it's who you are.  And let's face it, people are haters, people are jealous but don't let those people stop you from what you love to do.  I always find that constructive criticism works best to help people improve.  Obviously, those people never got the encouragement that they needed.

Again, great job on the story.  Keep it up.  Can't wait to see how this wraps up.  High-5!

Summary:

Bella got dragged out to a bar one night. Subsequently drinking, she decided to let her old persona float away, and took opportunities that she normally wouldn't have. It was one of the best nights of her life.

Smut, dirty, plain and simple.

AU-AH, OOC, rated NC-17 for language and adult sexual situations.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8035 Read Count: 802
[Report This] Published: 06 May 2010 Updated: 06 May 2010
Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lose Yourself - One Shot

That was great! I wonder how that would have turned out in the long run?  Maybe you can do a follow up?  Hehehehe



Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Hmm, we can only ponder what would have happened next, yes? I might pick this up sometime soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The World at Large

I want to go camping in La Push, too!!  This was a great chapter.  OMG, I actually gasped out loud when Bella said she loved Edward.  I hope that they get to meet up with the Cullens.  I hope this will be a HEA?  Please, please, please?  Hehehehehe



Author's Response:

I don't mind going to La Push but I'm not in love with the whole camping idea. I'm not really a dirt and bugs type of girl! LOL 

I hope you like the next chapter :)

Katie 

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Shelter

My heart feels a little better after reading this.  I feel so glad that at least there was always someone looking for Bella even if she didn't know it and I'm glad that Edward is giving this a chance.  He needs someone to look after him, too, even though he's been on his own for such a long time.  Love it.



Author's Response:

You're right, even though it's hard for him, Edward does need people's help as well. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour

This is great.  I'm so impatient though, but I really look forward to every update.  I guess there is this part of me where I just want Bella and Edward to be happy and completely worryfree and just letting go of both their pasts and moving forward together.  I hope for an HEA. Yes please?



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! I know, they do deserve to be happy, it's about time! lol

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter! 

Katie 

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

I like it.  Please keep udating and often.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it!

I will keep updating twice a week so next time will be on Sunday! :)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown

Totally love this story and I when I read the borrowed diaglogue from Supernatural, I knew it right away since I'm a huge Supernatural fan.  Love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'm a huge fan as well, so I will use it as much as I possibly can ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by

LOL, I love Supernatural and I also love the quote from "10 Things I Hate About You" hehehehe...  Update soon!

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

Grrrrr!! Love it! Totally love it.  Now stop the c-block and get on with it (soon)!  LOL thanks!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much! :)

I will get chapter 13 up as soon as I possibly can, I promise!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you

I <3 the new banner!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll be sure to pass that on to the maker! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

OMG!!  SO wrong for leaving it like that hahahaha...  But it's great.  Question, how long has it been since Bella last took her BC?  At least two weeks worth right?  Just wondering.  Either way, loving this story :)



Author's Response:

Sorry? (A) The update is just a few hours away! ;)

I would answer your question if I knew what BC was, or what it's standing for, but I'm sorry, I don't. I've tried to look it up, but all I can find is that it stands for 'Before Christ' and I'm smart enough to know that's not what you meant.

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Summary: Past Featured Story

dwa

Bella becomes Edward's personal assistant. He is the chief-editor of EMC, the best fashion magazine, run by a man. And what secret does Edward have? Will Bella's past come to bite her? The movie, The Devil Wears Prada inspired this one. AH. AU.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185532 Read Count: 42717
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Lizzy's birthday

When Edward was asking Bella if it was a bet, it reminded me of that one part in the movie "She's All That" hehehehe... I like this story.  I don't know why Bella is all emotional all the time, though.  LOL, I hope she gets pregnant anyways.



Author's Response:

That's how Bella is... The pregnancy will come later

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Happy times over the years

That was great.  A very great story.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I hope you stick around for the outtakes and my new story

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Outtake 6

Thank you!  This story was awesome!

41 And Counting by AmoreBella88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bella's been on forty-one failed first dates within the last three months. She's given up on finding her "one". Her forty-second date is on Valentine's Day. Will this one turn out to be the one that changes her mind?

 

AH, Bx?, OOC, rated NC-17 for language and adult sexual situations.


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2209 Read Count: 115
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Notes

I like it! Update soon please!



Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I'm working on an update ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Fracture by KatieJane4815 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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What are the chances of meeting your soulmate? What if you meet them at the age of 4? Edward and Bella have known each other since kindergarten. A fateful late night call opens their eyes to potentials they never thought of. AU, B/E, A/J, R/Em. Lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62958 Read Count: 27936
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: We all Learn to Make Mistakes

Love cool Charlie!