Reviews by Gemini73
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

ohhhhhhhh shit! I did not see that coming! Great job!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

WTF!!!!! Why is he saying that shit!!! OMG

Please Remember Me by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

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The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into.  NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.

This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.

 Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;

http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme  copyrightbabylou23@2010.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

 

Pets: Bebe by Maren Smith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 172]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade.  But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.

Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters.  She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life.  She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves.  And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

OKay this is going to be long But, good ....smiles   Anyway I just found you when I found out that Across the universe was pulled because of copying your story that is published. For that I am sorry that someone did that to your work but I must say I really enjoyed the story and I now have bought a copy of both the books! I cannot wait to read them!!! I have just read the frist seven chapters of this story and DAMN GIRL YOU ARE SOOOOO GOOD I LOVE IT and will keep reading!!! Do you have more books out I have Bachs view and Pani view do you have more and are they along the same lines? Well I guess I have rattled on long enough  Great job!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment!  I write under Denise Hall, Darla Phelps and Maren Smith.  If you are looking for ageplay, all of Darla Phelps covers that genre.  If you are looking for 'captive' stories, I only wrote one other: Judgment by Denise Hall.  The first of the series more so than the second, but there is a bdsm theme there.  If you want the 'captive' feel without the bdsm or spanking, I've got one in the works but it's a good year before it comes out and I'll have to find a new alias for it.

I'm thrilled you're enjoying this story enough to purchase the first two.  I appreciate your support!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

I run to see if you have up dated everyday! I love your work and cannot wait to read more! I cannot wait to see what is going to happen. I think his uncle is going to kill him!!! ...lol I hope that the wild pack ends up ok I feel so sorry for them! Maybe Bebe could help them out.....he he he sorrry I just had to  put that out there and babys in the plans?  Love it and cannot wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!  Fortunately, you won't have to wait long.  I'm finishing the revisions now, so the next chapter should go up on Thursday.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129742
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

OMG scream likes a fan girl I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I want to see how far he will go at school and who is going to get him to stop if he is that out of control!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL. Thank you =)

I'm working on the next chapter.

Thanks for reading and commenting

~Jells

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Gauntlet Pt 2

I f**king loved it!!!! Thhe pissing part was OMG to funny. I would have hit him with something lol PLEASE UPDATE SOON I NEED MY FIX!!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late reply =(

Thank you SofaKing much!!!

LMAO! I was giggling the entire time writing that pissing scene lmao. Me too, he would've gotten a slap or something from me lol

I'm working on the next chapter. It won't be too much longer.

~Jells

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

WOW just WOW can I have Lulkis Damn he is fine ! Also if Bella and Edward are up next chapter then that could not have been her right.....right? LOL I am so mixed up Loving it though!Great job!



Author's Response:

Bella doesn't really have to be alive to be in next chapter !! *snickers* Thank you for reviewing!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Love it!!!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

OH SHIT, TROUBLE IS ON IT WAY!!!!! Love it so so so much.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OMG screams!!!! NOOOOOOOO  I must tell you that my heart is going to explode from beating so fast!  I really love your story it is one of the best GREAT JOB!!! Also congrats on the home !!!!! Moving always sucks but when it is to your own home it makes it sooooooo worth it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  I'm already halfway done the next chapter so I promise it won't take me as long to update!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

WOW all I can say IS WOW I love it!!! very well written and great ideas!!! I love it but i also would love to slap cheatward hard!!! smiles



Author's Response:

Yay, thank you!!  If it helps I can have Bella, eventually, slap him for you? ;)

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OMG I love this story !!! You are doing a awesome job love it!!! I am waiting to see how this is all going to back fire on Edward..... Is Tanya going to end up preganat? That would be kind of hard for him to say no was not me... but I hope that does not happen though. THAT WOULD SUCK POOR BELLA!!!! I cannot wait for more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59013
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy

OH CRAP ......He would not hurt her right.......but he did kill his own son though........CRAP DOUBLE CRAP!!!!! HELP!!!!!!   Edward needs to get his head out of his ass!!  I love the story and cannot wait for more, this one is close to my heart!



Author's Response: thankyou so much for reading and reviewing:) i wont make you wait to long for ch 20..

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143215
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I love your story hard core!!! Keep it up and I cannot wait to see what is going to happen next!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421236
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

OMG he did not! Well damn she is never going to get it...lol

 

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Humm I want to know what kind of shit that can happen if I was to party naked with Edward........smiles I LIKE THAT THOUGHT FARTS AND ALL I WILL TAKE HIM!!!!

But who is Red and WHy the hell is Tyler have his thing flappin in the wind? 

Great story and I thank you for going ahead a posting!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Thank God the AIR is now clear ....lol but who is Red?

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

OH my GOD it is like Larry the cable guy I love him! LOL Great job and I hope that you are feeling better today!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

was that from him or her......oh shit cock blocking......words I need the words

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

MOTHER F****R DAMN IT MANN!!!!!!! Love the story though but shot your KILLING ME!!!!     Cock Blocked again

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

lol love it!!!!!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Jaw Drops ........ OH SHIT!!!!! Poor Edward Damn I want to cry now!!!!!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Hellllllll yaaaa!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

HOLY COCK BLOCKED AGAIN BAT MAN!!!! (crying hangs head) at least we are naked now!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Yaaaaaa baby!!! LOVE IT!!!!  I really like the mirror factor also! Great job!!!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

OMG doing a happy dance naked around the camp fire!!!!! Love it girl give us the baby batter! 

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

OMG I think I may have just pissed my self laughing so hard........ Shakes head WOW 

Love the story great job!!!!!

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

ROFL I can picture this !!!! OMG LOVE IT bb great job!

 

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I think I am sick.....ugh lol

 

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

IN HER HAIR......OMG!!! ROFL