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Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514753
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: James DAY 14
UMMM, fuck no. He was just in her ASS and expected her to "clean him up" with her mouth???? Nastiest shit I've read yet.
Love your story, by the way.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
I freakin LOVED your story. LOVED, LOVED, LOVED it!!! Emmett & Rose were perfect and hysterical. Would have loved more of them, as well as Jasper. Carlisle was great, but could have been sexier, a few times he just came across as a nasty old man...I missed his tenderness. Boy, you girls really took James to the dark side, huh?? LoL You were GREAT getting into his disturbed mind and totally fuck-tastic in his destruction!!! OMGosh...I was looking forward to Rose & Em getting their hands back on him, but sending him off to Aro was ..... I can't find a word .... total fuckery. What a way to go. Thank you for this story. I'm going to look for more stuff by you girls cuz I likey how your brains work. LoL
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
I would REALLY love to have Edwards POV on the last chapter. It kind of feels like an abrupt end. How is he dealing with therapy, Bella in college, opening night at the new school, coming home to find Bella submissive near the door??? All the way thru you kept us in everyone's head. I'd really like to see the ending from EPOV. Also....
Did they ever find where the GPS chip was located in Victoria?
And, I thought it was odd that everyone kept apologizing to Bella for "all you went thru" but no one said "I'm sorry for WHAT I DID to you". Rose was riding her face, Carlisle repeatedly threatened and finally did take her in the ass....
What ever happened with Angela & Ben?
Maybe also opening night of the new school from Carlisles POV?
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A
Wow. I finished the whole story and then came back to this chapter.... It's no wonder she can't have a friendship with Carlisle now. He was terrible to her. It really is OOC for him. He new she was new to this and in his own words "practically virginal", yet he was rough and had no compassion. He fingered her ass with no lube, he was harsh with his words and his actions...
At least everyone else (Emmett, Jasper, Rose, Alice), brought her pleasure in her humiliation, Carlisle just brought fear and in the words of the great & fucktacular Fifty Shades...there is no room for fear in the playroom or bedroom....
I love Carlisle's character in the TwiSaga, so it is hard to see him be so un-loving towards Bella. I understand he is the HeadMaster and has a rep to protect, but he could be leader and Master and still teach compassion. I think his character learned a lot from watching E & B thru the to way mirror. E wasn't as harsh aas Carlisle would have liked, but he was able to be Dominating and loving at the same time.
(("Fifty Shades" belongs to Snowqueens Icedragon and her masterpiece "Master of the Universe over on Twilighted.net))
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love
Okay, Renee's death made me cry... on page one! This is going to be a ride, isn't it? LoL. Here we go.....
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
I'm scared of hating Charlie. I L-O-V-E-D Charlie Swan in the TwiSaga and in the FanFic Universe. I am afraid of seeing him portrayed badly....
And what hppened with Renee's provisions with the lawyer and guardianship? Who notified Charlie anyway? I see other readers have asked and since you haven't responded, I take that to mean it will be answered in another chapter??
Author's Response:
This is answered later in the story from someone else's pov...
Please be prepared the story is about to get really graphic but I promise it doesn't stay that way after ch 10. If you feel the need to skip this part shoot me an email and I'll send you the summary. Hope to still see you on the other side. :)
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29
I sobbed thru the whole garden scene... very creative writing on your part.
I wonder what would happen if all three sons and their wives and Esme stood up to Carlisle and said "enough". What could he do, really? An what is his crap about him being able to bring punishment to the sons wives??? Outrageous!!
Thanks for a great story.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue
What a fantastic story. I LOVED it and couldn't put it away. For outtake ideas, I'd like to know if there is any story behind:1) Bella's essay written in the Bullets POV... did Edward ever find out, read it, what her teacher thought? 2) What Esme did with Carlisles ashes? 3) What Bella ever did with her Phoenix home? 4) A future shot at any children they had and the type of parents they were? 5) Did Bella ever end up becoming an author and if so what did she write and would she ever write about her story?
I cried at the idea of the "Renesme House". Loved it!!
THANK YOU FOR SUCH A GREAT READ.
Author's Response:
I do have plans for an outtake on what Esme did with the ashes. The essay is actually an idea my daughter had for a college essay - I think she actually ended up writing something else to turn in but I couldn't get over the idea. It was just too good to forget. I may do a future o/t of their future.
Right now I'm working on an original work and working on the rewrite for TPW to publish later this year.
Bella and Emmett are in a normal everyday realtionship with normal problems. Emmett's cousin, Edward, moves back to town. What happens when Edward and Bella meet? Will they be naughty or nice? Read on to find out! AH,AU,OOC, Lemons!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82358 Read Count: 21250
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: My Little Secret
So what are all the Letters in their IM for? BGP? EMGD?
Author's Response:
Ummm, BGP=Bella Good Pussy; EMD=Edward Mr. Good Dick <-------I feel dirty just saying it. Lol
Bella is a fractured girl with a life-threatening eating disorder. Her whole life changes when she meets Edward Masen. Warning- child abuse and dark themes.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99625 Read Count: 42033
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Trying to be Normal
Strep throat of the vagina!! LoL, hahahhahaha. Loved it!
Author's Response:
Yes, I love me some metaphors!
I just want you to know I love all my readers that review so very much! XOXO!
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
um, there haas been NO dialogue regarding birth control and they have gone at it unprotected...
i HATED that he told her to suck it up and quit being a cry baby while operating as her Dom...it was their FIRST session! ... and then he tells her they dont humiliate each other... but then calls her a "dirty little slut"...
I dont get that at all.
Love the story tho and am anxious to get a look at Dominant Jasper... I haven't seen that anywhere yet.
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I wonder what Bella is going to say when she finds out he "needed a place to stay" and all along he owned a 8 bedroom villa!!!
Great job on the D/s, in my humble opinion.... I'm loving it so far.
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I seriously hope they dont get punished while they are drunk.....
This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.
On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.
At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?
Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!
This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!
Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40831
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Initiation
I like Carlisle as a Master....yummy. I look forward to seeing new chapters post.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Flashbacks
Wow.... very different from other D/s fics I've read... Keep em coming! (literally).
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chocolate coloured fantasy
Love it! You write the cocky bastard well. LoL
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: New games at the club
Trying to comment at leat every other chapter....sorry. I just keep saying "I love it".
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Master Aro
FYI.. I would like an out-take of Aro + Edwards trainings and punishments..... Just an idea. I like your story just as it is.
Oh, and at the end of paragraph 7ish there is a note from your Beta to you in parenthesis that didnt get removed....just fyi
Author's Response:
I was actually thinking about the very same thing last night, an outtake with Aro and Edward, so maybe it will happen, who knows?
Thanks for pointing out the error, I'll get to it right away!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Under the canopy
Awww. So glad she took care of him properly. Personally, I was hoping she would bath him before the massage, as that is what he always does for her in every bdsm fic and he certainly could use the pampering since Tanya never gave him any love. Oh well, maybe in the morning?? Can't wait til they talk...
Bella was a shell after Edward left her. She hated men. She was disgusted by them. She wanted revenge. What better way to get revenge than to use them? The plan works well…until Edward comes back. Bella’s POV.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68969
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Jacob
she told Jacob she never fucked a guy twice in a row...but Cameron (?the selfish bastard?) wanted to go a third time before she told him she had things to do and he had to leave...
Author's Response:
Yeah, Bella was a bit of a liar to get what she wanted.
Thanks for r & r! Hope you continue to enjoy. :)
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254882
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Still loving it!! You are a great story teller. I am enjoying every word. Thank you for sharing it.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, here is this weeks teaser...
Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.
“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”
Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”
“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.” I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention.
Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”
I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”
Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”
“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”
“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”
“Well I don’t know about carefree…”
Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Wow. I began this thinking to myself, "well, there are over 50 chapters and she updates regularly... so if i start now, maybe it will be near completion by the time i get through 50 chapters....right?" HA! I killed it in about a week, maybe 10 days and now what? I have to live week to week waiting on updates...I could kick myself! LoL This is why i only read completed stories. I dont have the patience for this, lol. Whatever you do, please, please, please, dont abandon us and leave it hanging. I hate that. Your story is awesome, intruiging and suspensful. I LOVE it. Best i have read in a while. It is hard to believe this is your firsst FF. Your research and information are wonderful and educational. The amount of time and attention you put into your story are very apperent to the reader. THANK YOU for sharing it.
-xoxo-
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and I hate when writers abandon a story, I will finish this and will post weekly (at the very least ) I had wanted to go back to twice a week psotings but have just been swamped with r/l and havn't been able to spend as much time writing ....anyway Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have this weeks teaser for you....llml
Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.
“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting.
“W..Why? You said I could keep it”
Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”
“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.
“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”
Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”
My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”
“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”
Thank you to Mekek18 for the great banner
Entry for the Twi-Girl Revolutions "Under Her Thumb" Challenge. Follow Edward as he auditions and becomes the sub of a strict Domme. Will it just be a professional relationship or will it become more? BDSM. Mature.ExB
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39360 Read Count: 19761
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
MORE! MORE! MORE!
FANTASTIC!!!
These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: 1000th review OT
all through the beginning i kept wondering where & when this happened in relation to chapter 33, but of course i was seeing B & E in my head.... very nice twist. But poor Rosalie.....so sad. beautiful writing on your part though. i'm loving your story.
i never read stories that are not complete yet, but i read where you said that that is one of your pet peeve's and you would not do that to your readers...i sincerely hope not, because this really is a great story and i am totally sucked into it. dont leave me hanging...please!
Also, i love your versions of Bella (her humor) and Edward as a dom/bf. and Bellas silver dress with the puckered ass seam....totally hot and perfect for the club. Your picks are great.