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Bio:
Single mom of 3 teenage kids who loves twilight and loves reading fan fiction.
Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.
Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...
Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?
Or are they both to stubborn?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108993
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
so I was going to ask what carlisle did but i see in your notes that is so hot.
I can't wait to read the next chapter and see if they meet up yet
love it
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
i love edwards locket
he is so good with babies. i am sure carlisle will see bella again
love it
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
how cute
now it seems bella has mom and dads approval
oh I am so excited for the date
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D And the date is coming ;)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
sorry about edwards nightmares, wonder what that is all about.
I so loved there first date. They have alot in common
I can't wait to see what they do on their next date
love it
Author's Response:
Dont worry, it will all be revealed soon ;)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I can't wait for the fairy she will be giving to wendy. i am also looking forward to what she decides on car's gift. their relationship is moving along
i think they are both a little scared of getting hurt
love it
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
only 2 dates and now he is already thinking of calling things off because he is afraid. ahhh edward dumward get your head out of your ass.aghhh he is frustrating me. can't wait to see what he decides
love it
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I am so glad bella got wendy her fairy. i also love that she got car his special gift. she is good for the kids na dloves them and wants the best for them. esme taking lily so bella could go and claim her man. back off jessica. how cute is that edward carrying around lily and loving it. waht an adorable family, i have goosebumps. i bet she is going to love waking up in his tshirt in the morning. agh i think i would die.
I really am enjoying this story, thank you
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
they had a hell of a night.I love to see edward loving the kids such a good daddy. i love the interaction with all of them together
love it
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
wow, i am surprised they where able to enjoy each other and really enjoy each other without any kids.
they are hot, it was a great first time. love the interaction between the 2. i loved him laughing at her when she takes his size in. love it all
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
well i hope you enjoy your daughters b-day and enjoy new moon
i love the chapter. wow to find out your boyfriend has 50 million thats a shocker. but doesn't phase bella she isn't in it for the money. I sure hope she finds a new job maybe something she really wants to do that will pay the bills. hot hot sex, more hot hot sex
love it all
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
ahh they are taking the plunge. i am glad they had fun coming to the idea as to move in instead of fighting and walking away
love it all, thanx
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin
I hope all goes well for you. Breakups are tuff.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19
I love how they have come together. I also love how willing each has taken to the others kids which is great. it is not always like that, I know. The baby's room for liliy ahhh that was sweet. poor bella and having or getting a job. she will or she will publish her book. something she really wants to do.
i also really loved that she left all the furniture for the nursey for the gal who got her home plus the spa day. how sweet especially since she lost her husband and she is newly pregnant. that was too sweet
love it
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue
Well I am pleased they got married and had a family together. they where already a family but those two together make beautiful babies. of course there kids are ssucessful.
love it, thnax
Author's Response:
Yes they do ;) Thanks for sticking with this story
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin
i loved etched and would love to see it added to. that would be awesome.
as always appreciate your writing
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin
I am looking forward to the sequel, squealllllllllllllllll
thank you for writing
Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61052
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
OMG
Let me tell you I so hate edward. I am not sure if that is what you where trying for but man I would hope she finds some to love her and the baby if she is able to have it without problems. man i dont see how edward deserves to be in their lives
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Well I hope you get her a new love interest because fuctard does not deserve her. If he was my son I would have slapped him. How dare he say the shit he did. Man my blood is boiling I am so pissed. He has the nerve and I agre after 6 years he is already with someone else. I like to cut his dick off and shove it down his throat or up his ass not sure which
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
he is a big douche bag. man him and jessica deserve each other. wouldn't that be funny if he got her pregnant. men
love it,go bella and that great punch of yours
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
I love fan fiction so I will have to check you out. I think i read more than i do anything else
man jasper is hot. to bad it is not a jasper and bella story. he seems like a nice guy and knows a good thing when he ses it. I love the confrontation between edward and bella in the bar. he so deserved to get it. she did a hell of a job serving justice to him. I lvoe what jasper said to fucktard. he gave him a chance and told him he would regret it. I so love this story
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
Man I am glad she told fuctard where to go. I still say he doesn't deserve to be part of their lives. he fucked up.
**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**
Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.
A dark journey of love, power and death.
All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD
Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.
A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Have You Seen My Innocence?
Jacob truly is a pig. the stuff he did to bella
I am original from fan fiction and have truly enjoyed your writing. I can't wait till you are att he point of where you left of there. I am patient and am invested in this story. Momma esme is one messed up woman in your later chapters.
love it all
thank you
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play
I love this story
I love edward as himself and I love him as the Demon
Jacob deserved everything he got. he was such a sick bastard. What all he did to bella and her family he deserved more. ahhh
love it
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: My List
I truly love your writing. I have read this story on fan fiction and I am waiting for this site to catch up with fan fiction. I believe they where on vacation to China and carlisle was not happy and esme ratted out edward and bella to aro. bitch
can't wait to get where I was . I really love your work, thank you
love it
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You
hey there stranger. it is good to have the monster back. i have missed my men. i love edward and the monster just as much as bella. but she gets to have him in her bed. i am just a little jealous.
i love the bet they have going on. part of my wants bella to win. i want to see if edward/monster have what it takes to try and pull off normal. i so love bella. she is so down to earth and she loves him uncontionally. she doesn't care which edward he is he is hers, that is all that matters. i love that he wnats to give her part of her life. he wants to try marriage to make her happy. once again she doesn't want him to do anything he really doesn't want to. she is so caring about what he wants. she doesn't want to change him or make him something he is not. i think that is why they work so well because really she is far from being normal. i also think that if it came down to it she would fit tooth and nail for her man for what they have. i think the aro and the boys believe she will be a push over. she might be a first when it comes to her dad but then i am hoping that little spitfire rears its ugly head. i also love that she has no pretenses as to what his world is and what his family is. she knows pretty much that once carlisle knows them to be engaged he will want her head. i believe the monster and edward know that as well. i also believe that for once he wants something and he will fight to keep her. she is not something he is willing to lose because of his father. try carlisle try and take bella from him and i can't wait for the monster to come after you and don't think he won't. i love it. i am up to date and moving on, yeah. let the good times roll. love it and you
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
I like the picture.
wow, alot going on. so i see you are telling us this is the calm before the storm chapter. i love that edward was still able to have the demon do his job and still be there with bella. it is good that he feels comfortable that the two lives can coexist with bella in his life. i love it. he was so able to pull it off and it was great.
alice got her wish to do there wedding. i am not looking forward to carlisle being told that they are getting married. i fear for her. it will not turn out good i fear. but i am hoping she still takes him with a grain of salt. she is so good at really not paying attention to him but at the same time she is well aware of what and how he feels.
oh i wish edward would listen to his gut instinct and follow it. he is letting himself know something doesn't seem right and he needs to listen. man oh man my mind is spinning thinking they are going to try and kill him or that they will make there move and get bella out of the house to come for charlie and she will be taken while edward is not there to protect her. esme and carlisle could care less so the volturi would have plenty of time to put there action into place. so i am thinking is riley working with the volturi. he is getting edward to come to him for help using them as an excuse so they will leave riley alone. if that is the case riley should know better than to make a deal with the devil. oh the hairs are standing up on my arms, i am liek edward i am not getting a good vibe from this. look out the shit is about to hit the fan. i have my boots on. thanx as always
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places
Man Aro is one screwed up man seriously. I am surprised he didn't kill all his girls since they are worthless. I am glad they are not doing a scan to see what bella is having. oh so many mistakes on those. God be with her. So much this chapter. poor charlie. i have no idea how he is still alive is beyond me. he must have some tolerance or a need to see if he makes out alive to be with his daughter. but i have to say if i where them i would say my death was immediate. Thank god for Kate. i am glad she made friends with bella. i thought it was aro that was in the doorway but it was tanya and she snitch on her sister. man that family is a bunch or back stabbers. thank god kate wants to be different. i am hoping when this is all done she is still alive and the clan gets her out and gives her a better life. she so deserves it. she was dealt a shitty hand. man to have your bones broken cause you where nice to someone and didn't say something. Then she still goes out of her way and calls esme to tell her about the baby. esme you are a bitch. thank god edward decided to play one last time before he ended his life. brought mama bear back tot he cub back to reality. yes it was you that was the monster no edward. he is what you the parents made him. Thank god she said she knew where bella was being kept. will he get there in time. what will happen to esme. will they have a relationship. will the family come together or is the family dynamic to far gone for anything to repair it. or will bella and the baby bring new life and new hope a miracle to this fractured family. love it
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells
well the demon is back in full force.
well esme you are still alive and i am baffled. now the whole family is aware of the compromise you made. i am glad in the end they are still willing to back edward up even though he has been such an ass. i am surprised though that edward is still thinking bella might be against him. he would have to know since his mom sold her out that she would have made it that bella had to choose her father and not contact with edward. i don't know why he doesn't see it. he is hurt and angry. i do not know why esme did not mention the fact that she was pregnant. that he would be a father. why did she leave that part out. i would think it would motivate them all more to make sure they hurried and got her out. especially carlisle. he hates bella but if he thought he was going to be a grandpa and have an heir for the clan he would be more urgent in his help. well esme letters explained alot. it seems and i hope that she goes to truly try and help bella and her grandchild than making things worse. i can't wait to see what happens. if charlie was able to make it thru all the torture. if bella is still able to carry her child from all the stress. i am hoping kate is still trying to help her. oh on pins and needles. can't wait, love it
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions
OMG not sure what to say. he is a fucking asshole
i am so ughhh well i can now see that carlisle loved his family. you could always see he loved esme and alice but until now i did not see him caring for edward. i ams urprised alec, tanya and demetri/felix got away. they should have been killed.
man edward you need to wedge your head from your ass. i can see where you are coming from but then again you where willing to marry bella and give that a try. i am just shocked. if i where bella i would tell edward i loved him wish him the best in his life and with the clan and take charlie and go somewhere where noone would ever find me or here from me again. get some money and put your self in a fucken bomb shelter and tell edward to fuck himself. keep your dad and your child safe from all those fuckers.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose
Wow I am at work and printed it. I so loved it. Edward sure does have alot he is dealing with. he wants his family safe. he doesn't know if he can accept his son or bella. can he ever trust her again. what will he do with a family. will he train his son the way his dad trained him. i love that edward and carlisle talked. i can almost see carlisle getting old and thinking this way of living is almost done for him. he wants to enjoy his grandson. he wish he did things different. wow edward and the demon are probaly spinning out of control. seth run edward is coming for you. i truly loved it. i am hoping bella can forgive edward and maybe there is hope for the three of them. always worth the wait
2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST
COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.
AH/B&E/Download available
REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167642
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
I am confused. unless bella is moving her stuff into his room I am scared she is going back to charlie's cause she is afraid at how edward will take her pregnancy. but he loves her and told her and they just sext. oh i am a little scared. I cna't wait for the next chapter.
soooooooooooo love it
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
I will have faith in you. I am disappointed in bella. she knew he was a father and a widower. Of course he would have baggage. he said he loved her. yeah he also said he would never marry or have kids but sometimes people change there minds. it seems she was playing with fire and she got burned. she hurt 5 people and didn't think to consult one of the main people, shame on her. I am surprised em went along with this shit. how can you keep a child from your brother his flesh and blood. that is so wrong.
again i am relying on you. can't wait for the next chapter, loved it
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
man they are all hurting. i guess people sometimes don't see how there actions or reactions to something effect everyone around them. Because she didn't talk thing s thru with him we are in this predictament. i would like to think if she told him she would be able tot ell if he was truly happy or if he felt trapped. because I knew you can tell the difference. the girls just break my heart. like losing a mommy all over again. i love the way alice ripped her a new one. em is just being a friend. love him. ia m glad rose told her how it is and she is just trying to hold on to what is around her. ughh i believe alot of people will br frustrated. can't wait for the next chapter, love it
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
I am a little puzzled by the end of the chapter. Why would edwards family be concerned about a baby they knew nothing about nor do they know who the mother is. i am just a little curious. I would be wondering why rose needed to leave. who is she friends with that em is the doctor that they would both need to leave for.
man they ahve been through alot. i thought edward had trying calling but didn't get through. vs bella is saying no messages from him. man they are both stuck and need to be the bigger person and call. i cna see both sides. i be pissed at rose and em. I would follow them. he knows they are talking to her. if she meet that much to him you would think edward would follow them or have someone. i know i would. love it
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
made me relive having my kids. got to love bella and her gang of co-horts. Sam is great in this when he leaves her in the delivery oom because she pooped. LOL well they almost came face to face. i wonder how edward will be. will he be mad, hurt, estatic. i can't wait. they are both still hurting over how things tuned out. love it
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
How funny for some reason at work they blocked TWCS. So I saw your update and was all Pissie I could not get to till I got home. I was all excited that you post on fan fiction as well as TWCS. So I was able to go to fan fiction and retrieve the chapter. Thank god. Love your story.
So I am glad she came to the conclusion that she missed him and loved him. Thank god for Sam. We are back in town and loving it. I am glad Sam was doing his on research. I can’t wait to see if anything becomes of Mr. Banner and Sam. He deserves to be happy.
Well hand to Esme she is a smart cookie. I am surprised she didn’t try and go through Em to get to Bella. I wonder how long knowing what she did would she have let Bella alone if she didn’t come forward the way she did, finally. Well they are grandparents again and loving it. I bet Em and Rose feel bad for keeping the secret. The way Edward is handling the news I would bet Em is in for an ear full. I am surprised but then I am not surprised that he asked Bella to leave with his son. He is full of such hot air saying he was happy she was back. And then saying he did want to get married and have more kids. He is the one that said it to her and she got scared. He has to be mad at himself for causing the problem in the first place I hope. She shouldn’t have gone without talking it over with him but I don’t blame her. He had lost one love to birthing kids she didn’t want to be a responsibility out of pity for him. I am pissed at him for turning her away. He didn’t even hold his son. If I was his mother I would rip him a new one. I can’t wait for the girls to learn they have a brother. They will be so torn of wanting the new life and wanting to love Bella but not wanting to be hurt again. They all have a lot to get thru and I sure hope they are able to before someone says something that can not be forgiven. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Love it, thank you
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
i read this on fan fiction and left a review. i have truly enjoyed this story and am hoping edward is able to get passed his hurt and anger and make up with his brother. i am also hoping edward decides he truly does love bella and she was acting and feeling from what he said about not wanting to marry or have any kids. she was trying to protect herself and the child she was carrying. they have alot to work through but hopefully they truly talk and see where it goes. love it
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
ahhhhh everyone is happy. i so love sam going after edward. how cute and he wants to be adopted by the hunk of meat as well. love it.
i am glad the girls all are in for the family and bella adopting them. part of me is thinking bella is once again pregnant. the wedding was beautiful. i am glad they got there happily ever after.
love all of it
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
these guys are great. i first thought she was with edward had me fooled. but hey edward got to enjoy her twice. once watching her and then once in participation. it is great after 5 years they still have time together and love each other. love it
i love sibohan take on it, its great
Thank you to MEHEK18 for the wonderful banner.
Pastor Swan visits a man on death row only to find more than she bargained for. **Tissue warning**
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2818 Read Count: 319
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Incomplete
how sad
Author's Response:
Yes, all my major angst leaks into one shots.
Thanks for reading.
My entry for the Twilight Gift Exchange. Emmett places a very interesting bet on Bella, who is a newborn vampire. What will the stakes be?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2908 Read Count: 238
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Bet
that was cute
i am surprised she did the bet but she was always a good sport
loved it
Author's Response:
Bella always liked the idea of beating Emmett, this is just another version of that. LOL
Thanks for reading.
Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.
banner was made by Wickedlovely731
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64202
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
so edward has beens hot and bella got soe money from her dad
but johnny knows charlie wasn't her old man and i am curious as to who her old man was
hmmm seems like he had money and power
Thanks to Twihard Fics for the banner.
Edward Cullen is a man of routine. When a homeless girl knocks that routine off track, Edward discovers there is more to life.
Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14418 Read Count: 1992
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Peanut Butter Sandwich Man
that was so cute. i loved it. at first i by pass it not thinking anything of it. i absolutely loved the story. she went through alot and ended up with a happy ever after. it would be cute to maybe see what happens after. or what happened to alice and why she is on the streets as well.
love your work
thanx
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed.
This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.
On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.
At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?
Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!
This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!
Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40836
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Flashbacks
very hot
surprised not everyone in the room wasn't having sex besides just kissing each other
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Soap cleans all
I like the story but sometimes I get a little side track with the timeline. when i read it, it seems they have meet in then back to current time and it says they are gettig ready to be together.
Author's Response:
They have met, only it was five years ago and they only met briefly. The story is about Bella's BDSM life and how they eventually get together. I don't know if you've read the story all at once, but it'll probably make more sense if you do.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Edward's morning
It was very interesting to get more background on edward. I can't wait to see him imerse himself intot he bdsm world
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Mistress Tanya
I found this chapter very interesting. I really didn't read any interaction between aro and edward. yeah he held edwards cock but that was it. otherwise it seemed as if edward got off with the female subs. I guess I expected edward and aro to be together.
Tanya is a hoot. tough bitch. i have never heard of the wrestle now that was a new and different approach.
Finally Bella and edward meet up yeah. I can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The job and harsh introductions at the club
i can't beleive he had that much pride that he took all that she gave. it was until 2 big massive bruts where going to fuck him that he finally said red. i can't believe he put up with her shit. man seth must really like tanya to tolerate the shit she pulls. what a chapter
thanx for writing
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush
wow tanya bitch. i cna't believe she just didn't let him go. man to treat someone with such little respect is just cruel. i can't believe seth wants to be with someone so cruel. i am surprised edward did. if thye know what she is capable of and has little respect for their safety how can you play knowing your domme is suppose to have your intrest at heart. but I guess if it is all pain then of course she wouldn't care and he should of taken the dbl penteration knowing that is what he signed up for and that is what she is capable of. she knew his hard limits and still she pushed him. i always thought the domme where not suppose to go for the hard limits. but i am going with your judgement and this is your story and I am having fun with it. can't wait to see what happens next. love it
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Reasons
sorry for your loss.
well thank you for writing. it was great to have cpov and very eye awakening. my goodness esme brings a story with her. how sad she has to endure tanya. i guess like father like daughter. she was just like daddy. poor esme. i am glad she found carlisle. it was truly sad how she used her power as a dom to break her sub only because she didn't want ot lose face. what a bitch. man i hope sooner or later she does get hers. if ever karma needs to strike someone i would believe it is her. i can't believe seth went back to her. man he must have a death wish. if she can do that torture to one sub then she is doing it to all. wow love it
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Under the canopy
well i bet edward likes this side but i know he will reveal in all sides of bella. he needed to be taken care of and she did that. i know she won't be all nice and tender but she will know what he wants and needs and will let him get the most out of them. she will not be like tanya. noone should be like tanya . that is the wrong way to be a dom and even tanya knows that but doesn't care. i think edward will get the most because bella was taught what and how to treat someone. i am looking forward to the upcoming chapters and their playroom scenes. thanx
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Sushi
OMG i so loved that chapter. edward is no fool. he knew tanya wanted to get rid of him and yes she did. he is better off without her. i am hoping karma is a bitch and it rears its ugly head. watch out tanya. bella is so good for edward. it seems they feed off of each other so well. the electricity. bella craves and lives to be a dom and she is a good one. tanya is a poor excuse for one. i wonder what excuse carlisle will give bella for what tanya did and maybe why there are no repurcusions. hmmm i so love this chapter hot and hotter. i want me an edward with a huge cock he knows how to use. love it
Bella Swan is given one night to experience being a Domme. But having Edward Cullen as her sub might be more than she can handle.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5443 Read Count: 1131
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
i think you did real good at you bdsm story
i love the girls owning a tattoo shop. and edward being a virgin when it comes to tattoos how hot. bella got the time of her life.
loved it i would defentiely read it if it became a story
thanx
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support!
Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best?
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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: The Next Move
look forward to see what happens since the conversation between alice and edward
she knows of bella but so does rose. hmmm edward what are your plans
i can't wait for more
thank you
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 12: The Blank Canvas
i am glad things are out in the open for bella
she now knows who her mom is
she has the scholarship because she earned it
edward knows about her. rosalie is nice and knows all
loving it, thank you
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Pragmatic Gentleman
look forward to more
thank you
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 11: The Crossed Paths
well edward got his information he needs to get back home
i am glad bella went on her own terms. her mom is a witch and i ma thrilled she got away
caleb needs to get far away from her as well
look forward to the meeting
Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction. Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love?
This story was made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.
**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story. Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
I am shocked
I thought he would have fought harder for his dream. I guess her dreams where more important
Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom. Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants. Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom. Can she get him? - Maybe!
My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
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Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123470
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Be My Master
I am so glad he got ride of the skank. she never deserve to have him. sick to get pregnant to keep someone. he was such a good father he stayed. Shame on you tanya. I so love all the research bella did. she really did her homework. it is great he also read and did his homework as she asked. he was living a dead end life. now he is happy and enjoying his life and having the best sex ever. love it, hot and wet
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The First Six Months
i so love it. bella is such a good person. she knows what she wants and they have fun. she knows how to please him and knows what she wants as well. they communicate, all about communication. love it
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Christmas Break
a play party how fun. i cna't wait. these guys are so hot and so much fun. learning and enjoying everyhting. tanya you are such a skand and a stupid one at that. love it all
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Second Six Months
smart man edward. tanya stupid
man bella and edward so hot. everyone needs an edward. are you selling him and how much. i think you would make a killing. i cna't wait to see what happens next. love it
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The Second Year - First Six Months
i so love this story. my goodness you keep us on our toes. wow their sex lives is outrageous. i bet everyone wished they got down and dirty and had as many orgasms ans they two do. love it
I think one of my favorites is bella meeting them all in the diner and putting tanya in her place. and poor seth like a fish out of water, tanya basically thru him out there and then wanted to kept being called mrs. cullen. man if i where seth i'd be pissed she was suppose to be with him not mr cullen. edward wasn't jealous. and yeah when she does find out abouth the two of them she will be seething. love it
poor emily what happened to her. i am so glad she has bella and rose and that she trust bella and believe's she will be there to help her. i am glad charlie did as bella asked and got things taken care and spared emily as being the snitch. she did the right thing. I really love it thanx
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Christmas Break - The Second Year
man tanya keeps screwing up. i would love to know what her involvement was with that guy and where the hell was she. you do not leave your kids tucked in and go out. that is just wrong. i am glad edward got temporary custody so far. i love that emily knows to call bella when she needs help. she is smart and knows who to turn to. bella is smart by being ther for the kids. it will work out. i cna't wait for the next chapter.
love it all
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
wow this chapter is a powerful one.
i was sad to hear all the feeling s the kids had bottled up and shared witht he doctor. i love the talk charlie had with edward. he is just a concerned father looking out for the happiness in his daughter. edward understands. how funny the master how to tell her to stay put. tanya is such a waste of a human space. man being with all those underaged boys when she had a man and a good family at home that she wasted. she doesn't deserve them and i am glad the judge saw that right away. i also loved the lemon at the end. all those emotions she was able to share with edward and show him how she felt. hot, hot, and steamy hot. love it all
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Third Year - The First Six Months
man what a chapter. i am disappointed in alice and rose. it is too bad that can't be there for bella. she has always been a friend through thick and thin and this is how they show there appreciation. man i am glad she told them to leave. i love the kids reaction over bella. the opera was great. i love bella's comments but it is too bad she went against edward and got punished. poor big eddie was neglected there for awhile. tanya you are a skank and you proved even more by being disrespectful to seth's mom. man seth grow some balls and get a better girlfriend. i so love it all
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for reading
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Christmas Break - The Third Year
so i am wondering who was in her place. i love the relationship bella has with the kids. her and bella have a great and honest relationship. i am sorry bella had to be put through the talk from esme. edward and the kids are the happiest than they have ever been. that should count for something. i guess i am just disappointed. i know being a parent you want what is best for your kids but can't she see that bella is good for the family.
ican't see what happens next. love it
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Third Year the Second Six Months
so much happened in this chapter. so it seems the cat is out of the bag bella and edward are together. man the girls i can not figure out why they choose not to back up their friend. shame on them. esme what is your deal. the kids and edward are happier than they have ever been. i am glad that ev said what he did about grandma not caring for bella. she needs to know they see it and they love her. man she screwed up. i love that charlie stood up for his daughter and edward warned her not to make him choose. especially because their relationship is not just of boyfriend and girlfriend it is don/sub. i think they have a stronger relationship than most people. they do not lie and they ahve no secrets and what ever happens between them is whatt hey want. they have had to fight to get where they are and be damned if someone is going to come between them. she picked the wrong battle. edward and bella will preveil. i hope she comes to her senses. if not i hope carlisle continues to try and have a relationship with his son and his grandchildren. i am thrilled that bella graduated and at the top and early. she worked hard and deserves it all. i am worried as to who sent the flowers? who wants to do harm to her. i guess we will be finding out soon. i love it all, thanx for writing
Author's Response:
Because of how they started their relationship and the potential for stupid misunderstandings they both insisted on total honesty from the beginning. They both recognized that even if they heard something painful it would be the only way to work through things and have their relationship survive.
Thanks for reading
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months
ahhhh alot of turmoil. bella can kick ass. i am so proud of our laura croft. she will go to the end. i am thrilled she taught tanya a lesson. she is a mama bear and i am glad those kids know they are loved. they have 2 great parents that love them. man in the office was hot. way to go bella and keep your man by your side. i know he won't ever stray. you keep him on his toes. to bad mama esme has warmed up to you yet. she needs to come to peace that you are part of this family. i love carlisle and charlie they are great dads and role models. oh i love this story. they communicate their relationship is strong they have strong family values and loyal friends. i hope bella is right about rose and alice. but it is their loss that they are losing this time with bella. it is too bad being so jealous. i so love the story
i am thrilled their going to chicago. glad he took the job and thrilled she got a job where she wanted one. love it
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
i just have to say i so love their house they ended up buying. the master bedroom is to die for. i love the day room as well. beautiful so love it. they made a good choice. the rlationship they have is so solid it is noce to see. the party before they left was awesome. the dance sounded so cool and love that she did that for him. they both pushed their limits and it paid off for them both. poor esme she is so missing out on the family dynamic. but i am thrilled that carlisle is still choosing to be part of the family and still also try and work on his marriage with esme. i love it when bella stands up to other women. she is strong and they are very faithfully to each other. it is almost like bring it on. i so love it all. can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you i Loved that house too and you made good observations - thanks for reading!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
wow what a chapter. the playroom scenes where out of this world. what fun these two have. but it comes with a lot of love and trust and honesty and alot of passion for each other.
i love the relationship bella has with the kids. she is very honest with emily and has alot of respect for her and it shows.
esme what on earth are we going to do with you. man i want to know what was in the pkg. i am not sure i would have the power not to know what is inside the pkg. bella you have such will power. i am so proud that edward backs her up no matter what.
i am thrilled that charlie and sue got married. they deserve to be happy. man does he love his daughter. i am glad he is watching out for her and her family. and dug and has what his daughter needs for esme to back off. and whatever he found sure to piss off mis esme. charlie what do you know.
man i love this story. baby soon maybe. seems like they are ready for an addition to their lives.
Author's Response:
Charlie and Bella have a very unique relationship based on trust and respect and that is what Bella is doing with the kids. He dug up what he could and is leaving it to Bella if she uses it or not. By telling Bella it would shut Esme up he is warning Bella that she may not want to know if she wants any type of good relationship with Esme.
Thanks for reading
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
wow what a story. she did have 40 years. so who is she. does esme know who she is? man carlisle got to love him. he knows more about his son than esme does. she needs to stop worrying about herself and try and make amends. she needs to see the family she could loose. she needs to suck it up and tell them the truth and see where the chips fall. she has brought this on herself unfortunately as carlisle said if she come out with this along time ago she would have been forgiven no questions asked. we all make mistakes. but she went passed that line.
love it
Author's Response:
While Carlisle understand her need to protect her secret when she did so at Edward's expense is when she crossed a line with him she may never be able to get back. Right now things with them are very up in the air. she could end up with no one.
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
wow esme and carlisle have alot to work thru. it is too bad like edward says that she didn't have faith and trust in her family to share her secret with htem. trouble about secrets they usually come out. i so love bella and how the honesty is great in their marriage. she doesn't hide things from edward it is great.the angry sex was hot. i am so thrilled they are expecting. not one or two but three. yipee i am over the moon. i love bella almost being due and stripping her husband while he sleeps so she can fuck him. that is too great i can't wait i so love it
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
omg i so love this story. wow esme you so need to deal with your life. man when you crash and you will i feel for your family. but i hope you do it fast before you lose anymore time with your grandkids.
i so love how protected bella is over edward. i love when she tells the women to back off and like better women have tried and failed. there will always be a bella and edward. noone can come between these two. their marriage is based on honesty and man the sex they have as a couple and master and sub they are indestructible. noone will ruin what they have.
3 babies are here. got to love edward to be prepared for having the roads plowed. love him. 2 girls and a boy and thank god bella is okay. it all went well. i am assuming they are done having kids since they now have 6. 3 babies they are very blessed. they will be great parents together. edward ahs always been a great dad but with bella they are a team. i so love charlie and sue. they are so supportable and bella needs that. her dad will always be there for her and that is great. she will and is a great mom cause her dad was loving and great with her. love it all
Author's Response:
Yes they are done having kids. I am glad you like the story - thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months
esme shouldn't surprise us by her actions. it is cool how well the babies fit into the family and how well the family adapts to the new threesome. i am surprised that carlisle is still with esme. but hey they do have a life time together. i am hoping that with all her therapy she does get better. this family deserves to be happy. they have alot of changes to look forward to and charlie and sue are reaping the rewards and esme is being left out cause she can't be good. it is nice to see that rose and bella may have a change at a grownup relationship. seems they may have alot in common. i guess time will tell with them. it must be thrilling to get back int he club and playroom for them. it is a part of their relationship. it is great that the kids feel and know they can go to bella for support and for certain topics they might not be comfortable with their dad. i love the dynamics of this family. tanya and her parents are missing out. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading. Very good observations and the reason for the coming time jump is to show how some of those work out!!
Beth
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Ten Years Later
i so love this story. i can't believe the 3 kids are 1o now and we are at a wedding. emily is expecting a married, love it. seems as if the kids all did well for themselves. the are unique in their own way and where raised with love by bella and edward. they where blessed. at least esme and bella have made a small closure in the gap. it still seems as if bella gives and esme takes. doesn't seem that she has grown all that much. but it seems she has lost alot. oh where to start with rose and emmett. don't know and can't get into it even with the party. didn't take em for a pain slut, wow. bella what a way to keep your man hot and horny for you showing up at his work. got to love their marriage. not bad for a 51 year still keeping his 34 year old wife happy very very happy. so love this story it is been alot of fun. thanx for writing. looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you - I have really enjoyed writing this Bella and Edward - they compliment each other in many ways - thanks for reading - Beth
“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?
They said I was going home but where was home now?
OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse Bella x Edward
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 33003
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Okay so I just started this story today. It is very interesting and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
love it
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
OMG love the story.
i am glad allistair is gone. I like the fact that charlie knows about the wolves and th ecold ones. that was great the way thta played out. I love he told him that one of his kind did this to bella and one of his kind will be fixing her.
love it can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Poor Bree. I wish there was something they could have done for her. her home life was worse than what she left.
I know Stella will be fine. I just hope she doesn't try to have sex with Eleazar. i know Carmen would not like that.
bella is very lucky with edward. i understand she knows he is her master but she doesn't know that she is his mate. do the girls realize what a mate means in their world? I love it
Author's Response:
i ran out of families to place her with but alteast i gave her someone to watch over her...dont worry stella knows that carmen and eleazar are mates and she does know what they are. bella doesn't since she never saw what stella and alistair were doing and she doesn't remember her parents very well so right know she doesn't know what it is to be mated but that comes up next chapter...lets see how edward explains that one!
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Man she has alot of re-training to do. you would think she would be okay with the girls but man does she listen to her master. poor alice so tramatized over her walmart expierence. i love the ice cream. something bella is excited about, love it. Should be interesting to see what happens when she is brought back tot he farm, or when she gets a new bed with linen. alot of first to look forward with her. Love the story
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
man they have along way to go.
i thought for a minute that jacob had imprinted on bella. uhoh i thought he imprinted on bella. thank god it was stella.she needs someone to love her. they all got dealt an incredible hand. they all have a heavy task in front of them. poor bella you have to be very careful with the actions and words. it seems as if she is still a child re-learning everythign from scratch. love it
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Man that is alot. I am glad bella seems to be getting more answers. it is good for her. stella seems to be getting on with her life. she seems to be happy with her master and the girls. i hope things get worked out between stella and jacob. i am looking forward to the next chapter
love it
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
So it seems James is still alive and he is the one that is with Bree. I wish the best for her. It was sweet that Charlie was checking up on her. He has a big heart. Well It seems that Jacob just might have a chance with Stella. seems she is quite wise and knows more about how to inter react and to what is going on. bella give edward a shot. but bella is learing so much. she has to be like a kid in so many ways relearning. be patient edward
love it
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
So I feel bad that Bella and Stella are not back to where there were. They where so close they where everything to each other and now Bella feels threaten by Stella taking Edward from her. I ma very pleased that Jake and Stella are together and that they both feel that they belong together. That is cool. Yeah Esme had a talk with Bella about the family dynamics. She needed that. I am surprised Edward didn’t. I love Esme grabbing Edward by the ear and pulling him into the office for the talk. That was great. Well abck att he farm the house sounds amazing. I am glad it seems she will be okay with it. I love her trying on the shoes and such. Like a kid in the candy store, how cute. Walking in on her naked look out Edward. She already knew how she felt. She could feel her feelings for him, hot. They will be so good together. When the time comes it will be out of this world. The have both waited for so long it deserves to be perfect. I can’t wait for the talk with Esme and Alice on sex. Now that will be a funny chapter. Love the story, thanx
Author's Response:
Have no fears Stella and Bella will find their way back to each others freindship, espescially when they come back from Alaska...just a little hint. Thank you so much for reading it!
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
well it seems they have quite the fight ahead of them
When Jasper and Edward find themselves out of luck in adopting a child, Jasper decides it is time to try a new route. What sacrifices will this couple make to become parents? Can Bella make their dream come true? Written for the FGB auction. JxE and eventually JxExB
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper, Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29005 Read Count: 22176
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Phone Calls to Remember
OMG twins, yeah. So will the boys keep both. silly question had to ask. or will bella get one and the boys get one. but then that would break up the twins and I hear they need to be together. maybe they will all live together. I can't wait to see what happens next. love it
Author's Response:
sorry- I don't answer plot questions. You have to be patient. :)
As a mom of 2 y/o twins, I can promise that the pregnancy, delivery, and newborn days (or should that be 'daze', given the sleep deprivation?) will be realistic.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing
What happens when Edward allows a bit more before the wedding? Call it a practice run... Call it desire... I call it Lustful Temptations.
Originally written for the Fun With Your Clothes On Contest.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2929 Read Count: 1397
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
how cute. all over a bet. love there bets they crack me up
Author's Response:
Thanks for enjoying! I really loved writing this.
"I'm in a trailer park. But I'm not scared. The virgin always lives..." What happens when Bella is in a shady trailer park and is being followed? Who comes to her rescue? What will happen afterwards? My entry for the Texts from Last Night contest. E&B-M
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6785 Read Count: 896
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
ahhh, the story has a great start. too bad edwards parents won't support his dream to become a doctor how sad. I am glad edward stood up for himself and didn't marry victoria and didn't go to law school. It will mean more to him that he is fighting to go to school and do what he wants.
love it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for enjoying it lol.
Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
wow i printedt his out and have finished all 20 chapters. what a story. man they both have tear jerking stoires. just pulls at your heart strings.i am glad edward helped bella and never gave up on himself and ended up not leaving her like he wanted. they are good for each other. they each bring a different dynamic to their realtionship. i am glad he knows she doesn't pity him and is proud of him. i was thinking that alice was raped and that was why the knew so much of the work that the dr cope did.mike is a good guy in this story which is great. he has been a great friend and boss to edward. i so love the cullens but whio wouldn't.i love how supportive they are and what they are doing for both bella and edward. hey if worse comes to worse edward can always go work for edward. this has been a difficult but wonderful story to read. i can't wait for charlie and edward to come face to face. love it all and look forward tot he next chapter. thanx for writing
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
man that was a rough chapter. i can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
man so much shit to go thru. it is sad how easy it is to be on the street. i wish there was more help for people and families and kids.
can't wait to see what the story is behind these guys
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand
well slowly but surely things are coming out.
she seems to be getting a little more comfortable with edward
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence
man bella what are you running from and where did you get 500 and how did you know not to keep it in your purse. i hope james and the other boys get what is coming to them
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies
well i am thinking it is a family member that has hurt her and made her run.but i am curious if she has anyone else she can turn to but is to proud to ask. living on the streets is so rough for them. i am glad they have a change of clothes and a roof over there head for a little while
love it
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become
man jake is messed up as well. i am dying to know there stories and what brought them together
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Drown Out
wow what a way to end a day. man oh man edward. they both need help. but hey that is wishful thinking. edward needs to forgive himself for his mom's death. it wasn't his fault. they have alot to get through and deak with that is fer sure. i sure hope they do it before someone is really injured. edward i hope you see that you can rely on people and not everone is your enemy. i know you want to be there for bella but it seems you guys need others help to make it through all of this. i hope you see it and try.
love it
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Runaway
wow they have been thru so much. i like jasper in this. jenks comes off to harsh. i hope he softens a bit and they both do a good job on the case.
i ma glad bella stuck up for edward. i am thrilled that charlie came around and apoligized to edward for his behavior and hope he gives edward a chance and maybe bella will see if she can salvage her relationship with her dad. looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
i love the date
they deserved a little happiness without having to worry about anything
i love that edward is going to let carlisle teach him how to drive
loved it
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
well it seems things are coming along. i am glad jake is getting the help he needs and that charlie is helping out. love it