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Bio:
Single mom of 3 teenage kids who loves twilight and loves reading fan fiction.
After spending an intimate night together, Edward realizes what a true danger he is to Bella and decides to leave. Depression finally sinks in when she realizes she's pregnant and a certain deadly vampire has come for her; Aro Volturi.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21135 Read Count: 8560
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
i am intirgued. wonder why aro seeks her out.
Author's Response:
you will son find out. Aro wants Bella power and he can't wait to see what powers the twins might have
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
wow he heard the heartbeats. hello bella or mama bella. fast thinker on having them change you
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
so it seems as if they will watch her till she delivers and then change her. wow can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
well that is funny how all the vampires came in. then smelled that sweet blood. love it
Author's Response:
thanks i hpe you keep reading i will post again tonight- mili
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
so are they thinking the kids are humna or vampire or both. but they do not know what to expect. this is tril and error. well dr carmen know what to do to deliver 1/2 and 1/2 kids. hmm can't wait
Author's Response:
the twin will be half human and half vampire with unbelieve powers. you well soon find out that Dr Carmen won't be able to deliever the babies, and Caius can't help to see Bella in so much pain, and that's when Aro steps in. - mili
How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is. Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?
Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Pushing
I am either thinking edward and james had a relationship or they both liked the same gal. not sure
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Signature
he is having an affair. OMG my heart is racing so fast. i am bad i have jumped to conculsions and have already strung him up. he'd better have a good excuse but i doubt it.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Confrontation
OMG i can't believe you left us hanging this way. i am dying. my blood is pumping so fast and my heart is beating a mile a minute. i am more pissed and ready to kill edward than bella.
Author's Response:
So sorry I left you like that but I promise the next chapter isn't far away! I'll hit Edward for you!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Surprises
okay i am fustrated, she kicked him out. she didn;t listen to any of his messages. but after 9 years of their life together if he wasn't happy he needed to say something not cheat on her. she loved him and thought eventually they would get married. what did he expect when she found out and he confirmed that he cheated. so was it male or female. your a/n said edward wasn't gay but it sure seems as if he had slept with a male. i am stumped and can't wait to here what really went down
thanx
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading honey. All of the dirty details are going to come out trust me! :)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
well what a cliff hanger. edward is calling after all this time. what is up. well james you are making me feel uncomfortable. i am thinking he was with edward and now he decided to go for bella. but i guess sooner or later we will really find out what is an was going on. i still think though if she is going to move on she does believe it or not need to talk with edward to get that closure or she will always have that question in the back of her mind. i can't wait to read more, thanx
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Stick with me please. The flood gates are about to open!
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Eyewall
i am so confused. i knew not to trust james from the start but i was giving him the benefit of the doubt. man can she not get a break. really edward didn't completely say he cheated. it seems it was more complicated than just a fuck. so here i am still reading but very confused. i am not 100% that the baby is edwards. I am thinking it is james or tanya was sleeping with someone else. bella needs to be on her own for awhile and figure shit out. she never had closure with edward. she never listen to him to tell her what happened. she shut down and told him to fuck himself and that nothing mattered. she needs to get the facts make a decision and then move on
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Music
i am thrilled that she has finally listen to his messages. i have always thought she will never get closure until she hears him out completely. at least she is trying to deal with it all be she still needs to know all of it. she needs to hear him explain whether she wants to or not. is the baby really his? part of me doesn't think it is. part of me thinks he stayed with tanya trying to think he wanted a ready made family because he is so scared to have it with someone you love. scary, his upbringing screwed him up. can't wait to see what she does next. love it
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Closing A Door
i still think james or someone else is the father of tanya's baby
i can't wait for the conversation between bella and edward coming up long time waiting
leah story how sad almost sounds like bella's with out the dying
love it
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my little story. Here is the James interview. Enjoy!
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Bella became convinced that she's destined for single life after she broke up with her first boyfriend, Edward Cullen, back in high school. Determined to be the President of her parent's company, she's prepared to do anything to have the job. However, what would she do if her parents only want her to do a simple thing; to get married to the son of their friends whose name just happens to be Edward Cullen?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61689 Read Count: 41155
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Reason Five
well now they both lawyered up this is getting good
Author's Response:
Thanks.
jumarxie
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Reason Four
oh bella seems like you have a whole group against you. maybe if you where honest and tell them what he did they would be a little more understanding. can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Reason Three
and the plot thickens. so i take it he never knew she was pregnant. she never spoke to him after what happened i take it. now she is slapped int he face with baby daddy. i wonder did renee know who the baby's daddy was?
Author's Response:
Let's just say... she had her suspicions but she didn't ask Bella who the father was. She just assumed.
jumarxie
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Reason Eight
well i feel for her. i am not sure i believe they slept together but if they did bella is to good for edward and he needs to move on. he doesn't deserve her. he was childish and a pig. ohh he makes me mad
Author's Response:
Don't be too hasty to judge... he might have his reasons.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Reason Seven
man he is a pig. he was caught red handed. how dare he try and defend himself. man oh man she should have never cried tears over him totally not worth it. i screw everyone of his friends to get back at him.ughh i am so mad
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Reason Nine
I so love that she is trying to have fun with him. i don't think i could ever do that to someone's dinner. so proud of bella.
i can't get to twcs at work so i looked you up on fan fiction. i love that you are up to chapter 23 on there and i printed everything out and read it all 109 pages. I so love the story. I am having alot of fun with it. is the fan fiction story the same as her? thanx for writing
Author's Response:
I'm sorry but I can't post anymore chapters in FF since January so that's why I changed sites so I may not be able to post the complete story at FF. And the story is still the same, i only revised some of the typos here at twcs.
jumarxie
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Reason Sixteen
yeah being the new wife i would be fucking pissed that he agreed to let Tanya stay in the house. Poor Selene have to witness everything and her being the innocent victim. man her mom is a piece of work. poor kids don't pick their parents. too bad. she has to just endure her poor mom's bad behavior. i am at least glad selene has edward and bella and bella seems to truly like the girl
love it
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Reason Twenty-four
I am glad she realized her admirer. i love that she is happy and wants to be with him. i am also estatic that selena is still with bella and edward. she deserved to be happy and in a safe and loving home. i am glad so far tanya has left her. she didn't need a kid cramping her style. she is better to leave selena in peace. i can't wait for the baby to get here. these two need a happy ever after.
love it
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Reason Twenty-five
Kennedy and Lincoln
Well my guess is that Tanya has finally snapped and she is the one calling. she couldn't raise her one so I do not know why she would take 2 but hey.
so they had twins. noone saw that one coming. so they have a happy family. ahh i am very happy. james gives me the creeps. maybe he and tanya are secretly working together.
love it
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Reason Twenty-Six
well i am still thinking it is tanya that is upset with bella. she basically has the life she wanted. she has tried all she could to be in bella's place. she is no amtch in the mommie category. so i am loving that selene is so protective over mommie bella. she truly knows who her mommy is and wants noone to upset her. i love that she says she tell daddy if emmett makes bella cry. love it all
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Reason Twenty-seven
watched eclipse and love it and i have scene it twice so far.
wow i had a feeling tanya was behind all this crap but was second guessing james. poor selene she has been through enough with tanya. she needs to just give up already. tanya is a waste and doesn't deserve anything. she got what she got becuase of the person she it. get over it already. you shouldn't of slept with mike. your mistake
i am hoping they come away from the fall with bruises and bumps. that there is something there to break their fall. how will poor selene react to what she has been told. hopefully she will realize he has know all along and has always loved her and will always be there for her. he may not have produced her but he has been her dad from day 1 and will be. love it
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Reason Twenty-eight
i am glad she finally got the answers from tanya. she was just jealous bitch and she deserves jail and more. i hope selene gets to stay with edward and bella. they love her and are truly her parents. tanya never deserved that little girl. i am glad the two of them are fine. love it all
Author's Response:
Thank you for that!
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211600
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
AHHH that went very well. seems maybe esme and di maybe have a chance at a friendship.seems like the prestons are on the up and up and irinia seems harmless. they just want that part of the family back again and victoria screwed that up for them. i so love jack's wit. i sure hope bella leaves jack with the cullens while she goes on her book tour. after all it is his dad. the family is very trust worthy. can't wait. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!
XoXo
Shel
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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark.
She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.
"What's wrong, baby?"
He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.
"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."
She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
wow very intriguing. can't wait to continue
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
ahhhh jack is too cute.
at least bella in her friends where smart on taking pictures, feeding him and cleaning him up and most of all calling charlie
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
ahhh heartbreaking.
so i am gathering tanya was trying to get drugs and needed to get rid of the kid before she got her fix. i am just assuming here. so she had the kid away from edward and his family somehow. i am curious why they would not have reported jack misising. interesting, the plot thickens.
i love the relationship bella and charlie have. bella is so good with jack. tough situation to be in. love it
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
well it seems all is going well. leah a bit of a bitch. so it seems jacob and leah , got riddens, be happy. i am glad bella doesn't care. she needs to move on. but they should of been more open about what they are doing instead of going behind bellas' back. that was rude and wrong. ic na't wait for more
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
wow jacob what an ass. he deserved all he got. i am proud of both girls. leah you did awesome by standing up for bella. you could have let him go with it and not done anything. she stuck by bella in the ned that is what counts. jacob really screwed up, and i like that the boys taught him a lesson. i hope it didn't tamper with billie's and charlie's relationship. sometimes poarents don't have control of there kids. jacob needs help
love it
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
i am excited. i love the way things are going. but man i picked the wrong girl to be mad at, i figured it was tanya edward was with who was jack's mom. so now i would assume either victoria or jessica as the druggie who left a child behind. i am thrilled jack got a wonderful birthday and a mom who loves him with her whole heart. bella will do right by him. she has a book deal which is great. i love it all and look forward to more
Author's Response:
Hiya! Thank you so much for your review! Here is a Teaser for the next chapter of Parachute. A reminder for all of my lovelies, including the newer followers, I usually post a new chapter every Friday.
On Mondays, I send out teasers for reviewers. There is also a completely different snippet from the next chapter post on The Fictionators, as well as the PicTease blog on Mondays as well.
Thanks again for supporting my story! Love and Hugs!
~Shel~
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Bella fastened the clasp of the sterling silver I.D. bracelet over Jack's wrist. He looked up at her with wide, watery eyes as he ran his fingers over the letters that were etched in the metal.
"It has your name, Jackson Swan, our address and my phone number engraved on it. As long as you have it on you, you'll never be lost again."
Jack threw himself into her arms, with tears streaming down his face.
"Thank you," he sobbed. "Thank you for loving me so much!"
"Oh, baby," she sighed, crying along with him. "I never had a choice. You're my son."
The two held each other tightly, while the others in the room gazed at the pair in wonder and love.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
i thought it was nice of phil to give her his business card. renee has some issue but don't put them on bella. she is a good mom and jack is great with her and for her. there is a reason he came into her life. they need each other. and it doesn't stop there. i can't wait for more this story is great. love it
Author's Response:
I honestly haven't quite figured out what to do with Renee at this point. She'll be back late in the story to resolve her relationship with Bella. I'm just not sure how I want it to go yet.
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease.
Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/
Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!
Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel
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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing.
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"
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Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
wow i love that they have their own space and it seems her dreams of writing are sucessful as well as a business owner of a bookstore and dress shop. i love that she is so sucessful. jack is such a well rounded kid and very loved by all. they have been very good for each other. i can't imagine if his parents are found that thye would keep bella away from him due to all the love and stregnth and genorisity she has shown Jack. that would be so hard. loving and caring and adopting a child and then have the parents come forward. it is sad because it seems he was loved by all but his mom. so it would mean his dad never wanted to be without him he was taken. so what do you do. leave the child where he is happy or take him back because you where the parent first. wow, love it all looking forward tot he next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.
I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!
Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!
<3
Shel
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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.
"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."
Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.
"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.
"Will she what?"
"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"
When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.
"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."
Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.
"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.
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Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
man i do not know what i would do. i understand all her fears and why she is doing what she is doing. the cullens at least edward and his parents are all victims in this situation. his child their grandson was taken from them. no less but his stupid ass mother who has a drug problem. i feel their pain it seems as edward basically closed himself off. man to have your child back but not it seems he belongs to someone else.man is this a strange and awkward position they are all in. but they all love jack and hopefully they do right by jack. he is a good kid and deserves to be loved and cared for. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.
I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!
Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!
Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!
I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!
XoXo
Shel
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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.
"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?" Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.
"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."
Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.
"Mom! We're here!"
Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.
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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
OMG i am dying. i was so upset i couldn't get to this site from work cause it is banned. almost killed me. i am so thrilled that she is doing what is best for jack and took him to his family. em's seeing of his nephew was just heartbreaking. man oh man that almost killed imagine edward finding his son after 5 years. wow, what a story. i am glad rose is being so bitchy any more. she is happy bella brought jack to them. i love the way esme is trying to deal with this most unfortunate situation. victoria truly brought this nightmare on this poor family. it is too bad that she was allowed into such a nice family and took advatage. i would hold her parents just as responsible. they all played a part but bella did everything by the book. she went to the police and reported jack. her father is a ploice chief she ahs followed the book. they have to see she did not mean any harm. she started a foundation for other childrena nd still continue to search out his family. what other person would do all that she has done. they would have adopted him and just went on with their lives. jack and bella are both truly blessed in loving each other. no they have found his family and their are just more people to love him. oh i can't wait for you to update. i am dying to see how edward reacts. right now he is a horny teenager but once he sees she has his son the claws and teeth with come out. he will want to strike her even though she is innocent. she is around an easy to lash out at. i hope the family presses charges against victoria and maybe her whole family. the all deserve to go down for what the did to jack. i so love your story. i hope you update soon and put me out of my misery. thank you love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!
<3 Shel
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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
wow what a chapter. i am in love. carlisle is such a good man with a good heart. esme is such a mother. her heart is so big and full of love. she just wants it all to work out. edward is so hurt and confused and he has every right to be. victoria needs thirty lashes for being such a skank. OMG what she has done to jack and this family. sje needs her justice served to her. well bella you have done an outstanding job raising jack. i am hoping all goes well and things can be worked out. i do not know what i would do in this situation. jack is edwards dad but unfortunately jack no longers knows edward or his family. he needs to relearn everyone. wow love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts!
I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!
<3 Shel
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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.
"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
I so love this story. ahh so edward is really esme real brother. but she and carlisle adopted him. so she truly understands what predicament that bella is in. she herself was adopted so she has been thru it on both sides. man this family is so loving and deserves to have jack in their lives. again it wasn't them that screwed up it was mommie dearest. they are being punished and missed out on raising jack because of her.but bella loves him and jack was lucky to have her come in all their lives. i cna't wait ot see what happens next. i really enjoy reading the story. next the whole family gets together and bella's friends come. should be interesting
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!
My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today!
Hope you enjoy the teasers!
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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.
Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father.
"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward.
Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded.
"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
i was so happy to see the update. i like that bella is still keeping her traditions with jack that she did at home. it is good for him to still have some familartiy. she has done such a great job raising such a good boy. the circumstances are strained but there was a reason bella was the one to find jack. it is great that she was able to put her feelings aside and take him to see if this was his family. hope for the best outcome for all. i think edward sees that she means no harm and that she truly was jack's angel. that he understands things might get dicey but for now he will consintrate on the here and now. i so love the story. i love that bella and edward are gettign closer. they both deserve to have happiness in their lives.
ooops jasper seems upset. look out bella. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified!
Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!
XoXo
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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.
"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.
He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."
Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.
"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
Well Jasper sure did make an impression. edward thinks he is her other half. his life has been put on hold for 5 years and now he has his son back and it seems his heart might be willing to let someone in. so many emotions and alot to think about. bella has so much to loose but still listens to her heart. i love that they both seem to be willing to think about letting someone in to love. cna't wait for alice to get here. that ball a fire will wizz thru and havoc may insue. will she be a matchamker. love all the cullens they are a great family. love it all
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.
Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!
XoXo
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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks."
Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.
"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.
"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.
"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
i so love this story
i was thrilled that he introduced them as his family, they seem to be getting closer and she seems as if she is not sure she wants to jump in head first. she has been alone for so long and it has been all about jack. now that papa is on the scene hmmm will things change. can they both get a happy ever out of the situation. it seems they both deserve one that is fer sure
seems edward might have some competition, look out. stake your claim before it is too late
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.
Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!
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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.
"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."
Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.
"What is your problem?"
"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.
"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
love it and I get to the end and my response is OMG, really. what does he want. did she meet him along the way. if he thinks he can buy bella off he doesn't know her. wow i love em and bella's talk. they needed to have it out and i loved that he was honest with her. now things can go forward.
i think they all need and outing. it was perfect fro them. can't wait to find out what marcus wants. i hope he gets shit.
love it all, thanx for writing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!
<3 Shel
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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.
'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'
His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.
The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
Miracles
It seems she is keeping her eyes wide open. I am hoping Marcus is on the up and up and not tricking bella and trying to hurt the cullens once again. i am hoping he truly has nothing to do with his daughter. well i guess we will find out. million dollars is alot and can help alot of families and kids out. she can't say no. i am glad she told edward though
love it always
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!
Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance!
<3 Shel
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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.
"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.
"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.
"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
ahhhhhhhh finally. thank you edward for stepping up to the plate. i think demetri, carlisle and esme all knew edward needed a nudge or a wake up call. you got to love them. at least she knows what she feels and she had a nice time but knew she couldn't lead demetri on. i love that bella went to esme to owrk out their argument. i defentiely wouldn't want esme upset with me. she is to powerful and important to the family to have her be upset with you. i understand what she was doing when she let her know they would check into a hotel. she doesn't want to lose what they just found. i also think they have become close with bella. i am waiting for them to ask about what happen to her. i so love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!
I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.
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Shel
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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.
She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.
Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.
"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
well i hope the meeting goes well with marcus. can't wait.
i love the picnic and that they are getting to know each other. everyone is happy for them and excited to see them both happy. they both deserve to have a chance at happiness.jack is adorable. he is getting comfortable and a little at ease that he is showing or acting out what he truly feels. he doesn't want victoria to be considered his mother. i am glad he is voicing how he feels. love it all
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com
You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!
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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit."
"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.
"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
oh my what a way to end. i am so worried now. i am thinking mommie dearest is going to make an apperance. i sure hope marcus didn't tell his daughter that jack was back. OMG i would die. he doesn't deserve to have her come back into his life as to what she did to it. she basically throw him away, stupid bitch. well i so love the way bella and edward are moving on. thye so deserve to be happy. they said the L word, wooo hooo. way to go guys. i can't believe bella was so bold with edward after his shower you go bella. i am so proud of you. well now i am on pins and needles waiting as to what awaits us at this gala
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com
Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"
Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."
Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."
She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
i had a feeling the bitch would show up. i ma hoping daddy dearest had nothing to do with it. cause if he did he would be severing all ties to his grandson. bella and edward would not be able to trust him. seems all in all the night was going by just fine. seems bella and edward have alot to discuss. i am hoping they are able to come to some sort of an agreement. i know they can work i tout. they need to do what is best for jack. they are two mature adults who will work thru this. tanya and demetri now that is an interesting couple. i so love tanya she has a great personality in this story and she is not out to hurt bella. so victoria i hope you know you have alynch mob after you and i can not believe you would show your face. can't wait till the next chapter. so love it all
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!
The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!
♥ Shel ♥
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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."
Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.
"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
well james and victoria having alot of explaining. seems felix might be in this as well. i am glad marcus didn't tip of his daughter. seems that was james. i can't wait for bella to get the goods on james. they both need to be knocked down a peg. i am glad tahn told bella not to do anything in public that would make her look bad and maybe jeapordize jack. at least bella and jack have an army willing to back them up. love it you go bella fight for your boy and your man. victoria suck on it and die you banshee
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!
I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!
Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.
♥ Shel ♥
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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?"
Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."
"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself.
"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."
Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
well i am glad esme smacked victoria. i can't wait till jenks gets the proof that james is sleeping with victoria and has betrayed edward. i cna't believe edward is not taking bella seriously. women have very good instincts and jack is nto comfortable around them. so i would think for his son's sake he would not involve him. but i guess he needs to learnt he hard way i just hope it doesn't cost him or that someone else he loves gets hurt. great charlie and edward seem to get along. i still love the way this family sticks together. it is also great that edward will have some alone time with his son. i hope he uses it well and protects his son. love it and can't wait to see what happens snext
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?
I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.
"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.
"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.
"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"
Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."
The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.
"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"
"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
hell yeah edward. you have lost so many years already and you know you love bella and you want a life with your son why would you not move. jack is a kid and his firends and everything he knows is in their town. it is smart to relocate to their area versus trying to have a long distance relationship. and i am almost sensing that edward might be a little more accepting james might not be all that after hearing charlie telling him not to discount bella. i am hoping he listen. victoria and james are both very dangerous and edward should listen to himself or his family but not any outsiders. he can not afford to lose bella or jack. wise up edward. you where fooled once don't be fooled again. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!
Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me!
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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.
Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.
"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
ahhh i love that bella and jack are surround by a great new family. i like that she and esme are bonding. i wish bella had a little more faith in edward but jack is her life and she doesn't want to see him hurt so i can understand it. amn jenks needs to get his shit into gear and get us that information
i so love this story and i can't believe edward and jack went to meet bella. that is just too sweet. we all need a special edward in our lives. don't let him go bella he is a keeper
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition!
Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1!
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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!"
Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully. She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.
"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen.
She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store?
Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29
wow i was nervous there for a few minutes. jack can't do that to any of us. shame on him. i know he feels bad though poor thing. i am so glad edward and bella are together. ahhhh his comment about marriage music to my ears. can't wait to see what happens next. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!
Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!
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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.
"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.
"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.
"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."
He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."
Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.
"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."
"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"
"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
i am so happy edward wants to be with bella and jack. esme is such a smart cookie i so love her. she knew edward would want to be near jack and bella. like she said he hasn't be alive for the last what 5 years. now his son has been found and his mom bella is edward's dream he can't let them go. smart man. i am thrilled that he is finally coing to his senses and listening to bella when it comes to james. he is thinking what is best for his new family. i truly and pleased that he is doing that. i want jenks to get bella the dam information on that ass. i love these two together and i am glad they are able to be rewarded with a little happiness. edward can rock all our worlds. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.
Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!
Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.
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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."
"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."
Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.
The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "
What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.
"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.
Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.
"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31
wow i am glad jenks finally got the information. took him long enough. her car is parked next to edwards and she left a note for esme and at least jack is safe with em and rose. someone will know and jenks is telling tanya everything. so i am sure james will get his in the end. he so deserves the wrath of the cullens to come down on him full force.
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)
I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*
Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.
♥ Shel ♥
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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.
"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."
Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.
"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."
"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.
Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32
it almost seems as you gave victoria alittle reprieve trying to help bella and meaning it. she almost made you like her by helping bella and then james kills her, oops. she just got in with the wrong people. i am hoping this does not put a wedge between edward and bella for her second guessing if he could be using bella. they have come such a long way.
love it all
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!
♥ Shel ♥
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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."
She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."
The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"
Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.
"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.
Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34
i am thrilled that em and rose are expecting
i am glad they asked jack if he wanted his closure with victoria. i am sure his grandparents understand him not wanting to be there. it has to hurt but i sure they understand. i do not know how they are going to do it being away from each other. alot going on can't wait for the next chapter. i am sure they will want a library in whatever home they end up in so they can have a repeat of their hot night
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.
The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!
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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"
She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."
Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"
Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"
"That you have a dad now."
"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."
"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"
Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35
ahhhh love the chapter. their getting used too their lives again but are missing edward. i love little daring bella giving her man a dance, go girl. i had a feeling that edward called and asked charlie if he could have bella's hand, ahhhhh. they deserve each other and to be happy. i can just imagine what their child would look like. at least jack is alright with having another one brought in. i have truly loved this story. it has been a hell of a ride. thank you for writing for us
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^
That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:
Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.
"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"
She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"
They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.
"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."
When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.
"Come on, let's get dry."
Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."
His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.
"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.
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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:
I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.
My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36
i am so happy he surprised her for her birthday. i so loved when jack thought she was cheating and then he sees his dad. poor bella like she would do that to edward. she probably got more company than what she normal would but it was all great. i love that he is not going anywhere and they are going to be a family and she said yes. this has been one hell of a story. i have truly looked forward to reading it each week. thank you for writing it for us. so loved it all
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.
"Understood," he chuckled softly.
"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."
Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."
Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.
"Hello?" he asked softly.
"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.
"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.
"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"
"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue
they got their little girl and they are one giant happy family. i love when esme drove off without bella that was a hoot. i felt so bad when jack yelled at his mom and said he wished the baby would die. my heart broke. but he didn't mean it but it still hurt. i am glad when she had ashley that jack was taking on big brother role. this has been a great story and i looked forward to it each week. i am sad to see it go but i look forward to your future writing
Author's Response:
Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!
The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)
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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:
The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.
She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.
"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.
The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.
"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"
"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.
Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family? Adult language/Violence/Lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42792
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Safe
wow what a chapter. so sorry jake did not make it. poor leah. but all in all the agents did one hell of a job protecting these kids and their job is not done yet. poor emmett have both his legs broken. he was such an active kid in sports loved it. i am hoping if he has problems he finds some way to get thru it and not let anything stand in his way. so far these guys have been through hell and back and i wouldn't want them letting this get them down. also hoping rose will be coming for emmett soon. i am sure he would want to see her. seems alice might need a little trip to the couch as well. hopefully dr whitlock will give them a family rate. love it
Author's Response:
the agents have done a great job! we'll learn more about emmett and edward next chapter and all that goes with their recovery. and rose and jasper will make their returns as well. LOL @ the family rate! hilarious! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Darkness
likeing it so far and looking forward to more
Author's Response:
yay! i'm glad you're enjoying it. glad you jumped aboard the WP train. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Traitor
well at least she got everything off of her chest. no secrets. but she is hurt and with good reason. they have had a tough life and thank god they have been there for each other. this is finally a resting place. oh bella please see it for what it is. don't run they want to be there for you guys. you have never been able to trust anyone so this is the first time and it is scary. yeah someone still wants you guys dead. man oh man when will it be over. love it
Author's Response:
you said it perfectly! bella is suffering and overwhelmed with the prospect of a family that actually loves them. she has to learn how to accept that and then she can move on with her healing process. glad you're still loving it!! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Home
so love it. it is nice to see that these guys have a home for once. someone who wants them where they are.i hope they give them all the benefit of the doubt and try not to judge them on how other families have treated them. seems this one might be the one
Author's Response:
bella and emmett have a lot of growing and accepting to do, but they'll get there. thanks again for the review!! ;)
bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.
how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.
nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.
warning: dark edward and sexual abuse
Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why. Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see!
-Love Sinister :D
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: lost, hurt, pain, and acceptance
the only thing that gets me thru reading this is that i am hoping the girls come together and kill them. i am not liking the boys being the ones doing the beating and raping. this is a hard one
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: head start
wow you think she has been thru so much shit. man yeah there mafia and they haven't been treated nicely but man don't they think that if they treated there women right they wouldn't be chasing them so much. i mean bella has what 10 kids with edward. i know it had to be hard on her leaving her kids. man edward you are aprick. i do want bella to take a knife to your throat. especially with the way you treat your kids differently. no supervision those kids are so lost who knows if there is hope for them since bella has left. wow this is one hell of a story
Author's Response:
lmfao ur tlkin like im edward.
lol best review ever
***NOW COMPLETE***
Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life. She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl. After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart. The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief. She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband? Only time will tell. What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them?
AH/OOC. Canon pairings, with twists. NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness. If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Hammering Out a Plan
carlie is too cute. i loved her comment about kissing.
loved that rose and em went and got bella. silly girl letting being carlie teacher get in her way of some serious hot daddy.
so love it
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
wow marta has some explaining to do. i am wondering if she truly means well or has a motive. so loving it
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
i am loving the story so far. i am getting wxcited for them. so far so good.
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings
wow i have read all 38 chapters and have read each of your stories. always impressed and always enjoy what you write. esme passing was rough and carlisle having to deal without her was heartbreaking. edward screwing up once again and the lack of communication since it does take 2 to not paticpate in a marriage these guys. 19 years wow. 2 kids and a great family. man oh man that was a hard pill to swallow. but it seems they have made it through once again and hopefully are able to pull it off till the end. now they are grandparents. it was a hell of a story and i truly enjoyed it. thank you for writing i loved it all
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Commitment and Commitment Issues
i love the proposal. it was perfect. it is the three of them and it was great to involve carlie in it. make her feel part of the relationship, the family. bella and edward had a hell of a night.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain
wow i would say you should be hiding. my goodness heartbreak. i am not sure i agree with how edward handled that. i know your kids should come first but at what cost. i am a single mom of 3 who hasn't dated for 17 years to raise my kids. i almost think at some point thta was a mistake for them. i guess you can go around and around at how a parent should act. the children should come first but i almost think they could of handled this situation differently. i am shocked, wow
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache
wow it will be a long road but they can come back and will. but i have faith that bella will be stronger and edward will bend to her way. looking forward to it love it
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
i am thrilled theya re talking and in counseling all of them.i am almost thinking a little presumptious of edward to ask bella to marry him when they are not even sleeping together yet. wow i need to keep reading to see what happens next
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase
man when edward fucks up he does it big. the hole just swallowed him
i wish he would have listen to bella. well i am glad she left her notes to him i am sure that got through to him much better and faster.
love it
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
i love them changes houses. great idea. perfect for both couples.
i love that em and rose finally got married.
bella said yes and now a wedding is being plannned and the wedding dress has been found. it seems all is going well.
i love the music and how gifted carlie is.
great chapter
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
love the wedding
i am thrilled about the baby. they have come so far, yippe.
beautiful
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to!)
man i loved their talk and I am glad they finally had it. they are meant for each other. i forgot to mention it was totally hawt of bella going down on her man and taking him from behind. it is great that they can expermiment and enjoy their lives and even more so now that she knows it is as husband and wife and on equal terms. love it
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Great Car Caper
wow i am thrilled jack is here but sorry for their loss of more kids. but if orse comes to worse than can always adopt. there are other kids out there that would be luckt to be part of this family. i wonder what em will do when he finds out about his car
Summary: This is an AH story with an older Edward who is a single father of 7 year old twins. Bella is a 24 year old model with a heartbreaking past. She’s given up everything to help those she loves and when she and Edward cross paths in Central Park; will they each have found exactly what they both have been longing for?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Single parents , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 627008 Read Count: 148711
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
seems these guys might have alot in common. they both have reasons for helping out. too bad edward missed seeing bella at the shelter. but like he said he felt her. the cookies she baked he loved not knowing she made them. tanya seems pretty cool.. i like seeing her as a friend instead of a skank going after him. love it
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
ahhh i like how they meet and how their lunch went. she fits in so well. seems there is alot she has missed because of her career. 6 months left and it seems she is free to start living. i hope she does. love it
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
i really enjoy your stories. i am loving this one as well and look forward to more
thank you
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
man renee is a bitch. all comes down to her being jealous of her own daughter. she should realize charlie loves each of them the way he should. my goodness renee get over it
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue
wow i am on pins and needles i think i want to know what happened more than edward. love it
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
oh loving the story. this is a good one. i love your writing.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
ahhhhhh i love the meeting
man lauren what an itch. she deserves to be lonely for the stunt she pulled. i sure hope karma bites her in the but
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
you know i have this feeling that jake is the one taking pictures. maybe he is the one that has wanted her and is upset that edward has caught her eye. maybe he has been secretly waiting for his chance and was going to take it but now edward and the kids screwed up his plans. hmmmm i was hoping she would have told someone about not being comfortable around him. he gives me the hibbie jibbies. bella open your mouth
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
oh i so loved it all
lauren watch your back mama bear is in full mama mode and you are messing with her cubs.
love it
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
okay i would have to say my guess now is jacob. i do not think it is any of the girls. this person is way to smart and knows to much. jacob had access and has brains and talent. he feels betrayed by all of them and especially bella. maybe he feels his father loved bella more than him and he could never measure up. he has a grudge. now finally bella is finding happeiness and not with him he wants it all gone. she doesn't deserve to be happy. getting good. thanx
He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC
For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner
Banner by Mehek18
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
wow not a great first meeting jasper
i am glad bella is staying
god knows if em gets ahold of her again it could be the last time
her days are numbered with him. now that she has run off i'd say he would need to make an example of her.
Author's Response:
Emmett won't give up without a fight...but he has to find her first.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
so jasper is her hea. wow wasn't expecting that
i like that james is helping her. i hope he is on the up and up and not screwing her over. he knew her dad's password so again i am praying he is a good guy and will make em pay and not bella
i sure hope she makes it to texas. she has been through so much
love it
Author's Response:
Next chapter will be in Texas & we meet Jasper.
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
wow i am shocked james is almost giving her a tip on how to get free. i was almost worried he was going to rape her. i was shocked go figure
well bella seems as if you need to a few things in place without emmett knowing cause you do not have any friends you can count on and if you do not get out he will kill you. you can not live this way
Author's Response:
I love doing the unexpected with characters so you can't assume anything with their behavior.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
man to find out that em had edward killed her dad taken care of and to know that he was so pissed she was pregnant yet and or marrying him that he had enough and was going to take her out was just putting goosebumps on my arms. man this emmett is like no other. he truly is despicable. poke holes in all the condoms. man what does he want bella for anyways. he has had to change or is a different person when he is with her. so why. why not embrace the beast and be with the whore rose and let bella go. man this story it is hard not to read but i just do see how she will ever have a hea unless it is death for her and being reunited with edward. at least she wouldn't be with a monster. man when she finds out god be with her
Author's Response:
Bella is an obsession/prize to be won in Emmett's eyes. He saw her and decided he wanted her. If he'd managed to break up her & Edward's relationship in college, he would have quickly lost interest and moved on. The fact that she was unattainable just fueled his obsession.
I promise Bella does get a happy ending, but its going to be a bumpy ride getting there.
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
seems charlotte knows more about emmett and his family than bella does. maybe she feels a kinship nad knows it will all blow up in bella's sooner than later and she will have noone. if bella is smart she will not tell a sole about charlotte that way when she needs to leave emett with her kid she has a way to get out of town that noone will know about.
Author's Response:
glad you liked. :)
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Man I so want rose to work with bella and take these men down. man my heartbroke when she felt her stomach and knew her baby was gone. but i almost would think i would want his moster child and then forever you would have the link to this monster. but then again it was a helpless child and did plan who its parents are. poor bella. well at least you know now your husband is a monster. but you do not know he killed edward and your father and is sleeping around on you honestly. i guess em just wanted something that edward and had and now that he has bella she is no more of a game or prize he doesn't want her anymore. oh my blood is boiling. not used to hating emmett, boy do i. fight bella fight for a life without the monster.
Author's Response:
Bella has been nothing more than a prize to be won to Emmett. He is incapable of love.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
man it kills me what she goes through
but know it is almost all the pieces there for her to put together. em the monster truly is and went after what wasn't his and now he can care less. omg he wants a baby now. what he wants to kill another child. i sure hope bella finds away to get her shot. he doesn't deserve to father any kids. oh em you need help. i really wish she just killed you and it is blame on a business deal gone bad. too bad bella and rose can't get it togehter and both take you out
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
wow jasper I can see why your so harsh but my goodness
i am glad char was able to get ahold of you and bella is staying the one night. my heart was breaking and was in fear if bella was sent away and if all the light and hope in her would be gone. i am hoping bella gets her wits about her and is able to heal and figure out what her next step should be. she still has so far to go
love it
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. It always helps to be able to get inside someone's head to see why they act the way they do. Jasper is protective of his family, but doesn't always think before he acts...typical of most men. lol!
Now to see if Bella will stay for more than one night and give this cowboy a chance to prove he's not an ass.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
i am glad she is safe. thank god charlotte and bella never made their friendship public. it is safe for both of them.
marie is such a sweet women and how sweet for her to hold bella and be there for her. she really needs that right now. i bet emmett is so furious and i hope he is dealt with. cause if he ever finds bella again she is as good as dead just to make an example of her
love it
Author's Response:
We haven't seen the last of Emmett, but it will be a while. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
go jasper go
bella is safe there and i am glad she has the time to heal and process things
love it
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it.
Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135060
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
no i am not surprised. from the begining will and cat where off. something didn't fit. i do not know if it was because they thought it could have been rosie? not sure but i know or i hope we will find out their reasoning. they have lied to their kids and their friends and why. becuase they where afraid of been labeled. because they didn't want people talking about them. hmmm. now they lost their kids and to call them the names they did i would never forgive them. wow what a chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)