Reviews by TropicoOfCancer
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625275
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: TropicoOfCancer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

This was amazing. Thank you so much :) 

I'm so glad Edward changed so much. He's such a sweetheart to Bella now. I must say I'm completely terrified of Carlisle, though. Please, don't let him abuse Bella, don't let him hurt her. She's been so hurt. :(

 

 

Reviewer: TropicoOfCancer Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

OMG, is it Carlisle?

 

Poor Bella...she deserves to be happy, although is constantly suffering. :(

 

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

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Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

God...can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm SO glad Carlisle is dead.

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Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

WOW...I can't wait to read the epilogue. :)

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TropicoOfCancer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter. I can't wait for more Bella and Edward interaction. Jacob is super sweet but I hope she stays with Edward. :) 

 

Excited to read the next chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752906
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TropicoOfCancer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Getting Reacquainted

Beautiful :) I'm glad Tanya is not a bitch in this. I'm kinda tired that the poor girl is always a bad person in stories. 

 

They're waiting 'til Friday..hmm...can't wait to see what the hell is Edward planning to do to make it perfect. :)

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Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed

Another wonderful chapter...

 

I loved it, it was so hot and sexy near the end. 

 

About Elizabeth...yeah, I kind of understand her reasons but Edward shouldn't forgive her so soon. I think she has to prove him that she loves and cares for him.

 

Loved the little comment about children and how Edward seemed to love the idea. :) He really loved Bella...how sweet.

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Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Empowering and Contentment

They're so adorable together. What a love! I agree with Bella, I think it's a bit too soon for her to move in to Edward's apartment. I mean, I want them to live together, but I can't help but be a little afraid of how they're gonna take it. Hmm, I dunno.. but yeah...

 

Great chapter, btw! As always..


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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time

The love-making was so, so, SO perfect! :)

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

Great chapter. Loved Edward as James Dean..yummy!!

 

 

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears

OMG...I can't believe the prologue is close. I'm scared of what's going to happen...

 

Esme really is his mom and Edward knows that. I hate that he is sad, but I'm so glad he has Bella to comfort him. These two are too adorable and sweet. :)

 

Wonderful chapter!

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Underneath It All

Oh God, the prologue is next. A twin brother...wow, that was unexpected. 

 

"Get a good night's sleep though...you are definitely going to need it!" - Carlisle couldn't be more right...

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss

Oh God... :( so sad. 

Bella handled the situation so well...she's such a strong woman. And Edward...God, he can't die!!

This was a wonderful chapter, so amazingly written...thank you!

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Focus Fluctuations

Wow, this was sad but one of the best chapters. It is written with such deep, intense emotion. Seriously, I loved it.

I especially loved to read the flashback when Edward told Bella about his birthmark and the way his heart responded to what she was telling him. 

 

 

Reviewer: TropicoOfCancer Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: For The Love of Esme

It was interesting, this POV. Now I understand her better. She's so caring, kind and just...GOOD. Not that I already didn't know that, but now it's even clearer. 

I can't wait for Edward to wake up. I hope he remember what both Bella and Esme said to him during his coma. 

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Warmth In the Darkness

Yay! He woke up!! :)

Great chapter. And that nurse...what a fucking bitch!

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Reaching Into the Darkness

I'm so sad that Bella is going through that. It's normal after what she handled with the sick bastard that was Triger, though. I'm sure Edward's gonna help her in everything she needs. :)

That little moment in the end of the chapter between Edward and Carlisle was great. He certainly deserves to be called 'Dad'. 

Awesome chapter!

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Disturbed

Yeah, it is going to take a while for Bella to be completely well. But I loved the idea of her going to the gym throw some punches to the Big Bag. I think it was a great way for her to free herself from all the anger.

 

Anyway, loved B & E moments, of course. They're too sweet and adorable. :)