Reviews by Alotalittle
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I for one am extremely grateful that a talented writer like yourself shares your  stories with us, and yet still manages to work two jobs!  With 3 kids!  Sometimes alone!  So no complaints from me, update at your own pace and know there are readers out there who just jump for joy when they get to read more Caveward & Bella.  So thank you for everything, enjoying the story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315702
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

Ewwww, 'purple-headed womb broom', that's so creatively and fantastically disgusting, as is the prospect of Jacob smexing... but always glad to learn a new expression that I can gross out my friends with.  Preferably in public. Loved the new chappie - what an interesting turn to the story. Edward has really grown a pair, what a mensch.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Tale of the Broken Hearted

Love this story, and if I haven't mentioned it before, I love the banner that goes with this story, it's just the right pictures exactly.  At any rate, glad the Vegas mystery has been unraveled, but still a few questions to go!  I swear I held my breath through Edward's ENTIRE story!  Thought it was going to be much worse.   Really enjoying this story, it's just great.  It would be nice to see Bella happy for a change, hope these two snuggle up some before someone tries to kill her again, that poor girl could use some hubby fun times...

You Belong to Me by IrishLove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 150]
Summary:

Living in the small town of Forks, Bella Swan has a normal life, boyfriend, and best friend. Everything starts to change when people mysteriously disappear. What is happening to them? Why does she have the feeling that someone is watching her? AU/OOC Dark Cullens.

 

You Belong to Me

 

You Belong to Me 2

Banners made by MarianneNorthmanCullen


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70150 Read Count: 37860
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Explaining

This story is tons of fun... hate the cliffie though -- I'm dying to know what's going to happen next!  I like how it alternates between funny and passionate with a dash of horror.  The scary stuff always has tinges of humor, part of which is supplied by Bella's internal monologue which is hilarious at times.  Love how she's fleeing for her life but turns googly-eyed when Edward shows up.  They're a great pair, love the 2 of them together (it's the best part).  Great story, thanks!



Author's Response:

Wow...thank you for the review! You summed up my story quite nicely.

You know how in books, authors place quotes at the beginning of it, to show the readers what people are saying about their stories? Yup...this would be mine.

Thanks again for the review! Oh, and if you like Bella's inner ramblings and such, you might like my one shot for the to kill a Cullen contest. Bella's ramblings are at a all time high lol

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995715
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Really enjoying this story, thanks for the new chappie.  The description of B's apartment cracked me up, I've lived in lots of places like that, oh wait, I still kinda do.  Being a dom somehow suits Edward's personality to a T, can hardly wait for her 'punishment'.  That girl deserves some right spankage ;-)



Author's Response:

thanks for that, I think that Bella is not so keen for the weekend as we are...

Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Is there anything hotter than Edward uttering 'Mine!' while in flagrante with Bella?  Hmmm, it's like watching RP do his 10-second strut across the school parking lot in New Moon.  Totally tasty.  Really enjoying the story, tons of fun, thanks!

Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I was so moved by Jasper's tender understanding of Bella that it made me cry, the good kind of cry.  I understand her shame, literally.  Wish people were as nice as the Cullen family, sigh.  I've never been so fond of this group as in this story, all of them.  Poor Edward, something is really yanking his emotional chain on some deep-seated level, those two are well matched in their insecurity.  Great story, love it.  I vote Papa and Mrs C getting their kink on!

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167582
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Great story but I can't believe what a total b*tch Bella is... runs off, never tells the father she's having a child with him, then is 'oh I was out finding myself'.  She's so selfish and cruel.  What a position to put him in with her big reveal, total emotional blackmail.  She doesn't deserve her friends or Edward. 

Entity by birobird93 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Three friends. Three guys. In the same body. Blood-thirsty murderers, prowling the streets of Chicago, one at a time. "Evil prowls the shadows in this city at night Miss Swan. You will be wise to avoid it...not ask to see it again.” Edward's quest to find the perfect victim. One-shot. Darkward/Mentalward/Sexual content and extreme violence.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crackfic
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8840 Read Count: 543
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a great. f*cking. o/s.  Violent, but tons of fun.  Totally did not expect that ending at all right up until she said 'Marie'.  Great writing.

Summary:

Edward knew he loved Bella from the first day of pre-k.  Bella's loved everything pink and carnation since Edward gave her one for her birthday.  Remeber a simpler time when your biggest worry was getting your favorite crayon and our booboo's could be kissed away with the promise that it would be better before we got married.  Originally an entry for the Crayola Contest.  My crayon, Carnation Pink. 

Warning: this story is rated K for cavity causing sweetness!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 897 Read Count: 9004
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 05 May 2010
Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just happened upon this little gem while poking about randomly, looking for something to lift my sorry spirits.  Edward's so freaking cute in this!!  You just want to grab him by his little 4-year old pants and squeeze the ever lovin' beejesus outta him.  And Carlisle and Esme, sigh, what nice parents.  Hope you do continue this one day, you've established such a tight bond between them I'd hate to see it go to waste!  Great little chappie, thanks!



Author's Response:

it will be continued, but I'm taking it to a darkr place...I'm showing what that bond can withstand and how we change from childhood into the people we become.  Thanks for finding this and taking the time to read and review and the continuation will be called "Wilted Carnation" when it is posted!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

m2te

After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

"Bella Cullen, wanton sex goddess with a very bad man between her thighs," is from Bridget Jones' Diary!  Yay, finally got one I think... 

Summary:

When a controlling, pregnant pixie tells you to do something, you better damn well do it. This is how Bella finds herself driving over to Alice's old apartment to pick up a random shoebox that Alice decided she just couldn't live without. The only issue Bella has is that Alice's brother, Edward, just moved in to the apartment. The same Edward that Bella has been in love with since she was 13. The same Edward she drunkenly kissed at the Christmas party 3 weeks ago and has been avoiding ever since....yeah, this should be fun.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4055 Read Count: 1384
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2010 Updated: 16 May 2010
Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Well, that was unexpected

Nice story -- that was totally unexpected that Edward had been writing notes to Alice as well.  Totally caught me off guard, very cool.  I found this on twitter... good thing they put updates there for TWC so we can find new stories and authors.  Loved the story, thanks so much!



Author's Response:

I had no idea they put updates on twitter, so thanks for letting me know! Thank you for the review :)

Exclusively by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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WINNER - TEXTS FROM LAST NIGHT CONTEST - hosted on Fanfiction.net

 

Edward was a sexual predator. The bars and clubs of Manhattan were his hunting ground. Would he let the ultimate prize slip through his fingers?


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22733 Read Count: 2971
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 31 May 2011
Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Exclusively Edward's POV

Hmmmm... I've gone back & forth between the 2 chapters and I can't decide, both POVs are equally good.  Edward is deliciously animalistic and surprisingly perceptive, and I love Bella's erotic fascination with his hands.  She's insecure but not so much as to be totally retarded -- at least she had the guts to go for what she wanted.  Legs and hands, they're both good!



Author's Response:

It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)

http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617

Luv BBxx